Wow, this is amazing. I love your art style, and the animation looks so smooth. I may have no idea what the lyrics are, but it sounds very Dazai, so great song choice. [random critique from someone who knows nothing about creating videos ahead, please don’t take it as hate. Some people wouldn’t want to read it, but I will put it here in case you are interested.] I think it feels a little repetitive, but that might just be my low attention span. Loops can make or break this type of video. You have enough differences in the first two loops to make them feel separate, but I feel the last two were missing something. The first thing I can think of is making the last two get progressively more creepy by dulling the colors, adding more prominent shadows, and distorting the music, but I’m sure there are other ways. This is just my personal opinion/ suggestion, the video is still amazing without such changes. I will add it to my favorites playlist.
Tysm! I totally understand what you mean by it being repetitive! I was honestly rushing to get the video out (^^;) I’ll be sure to keep everything you said in mind when making another video! ♡
DAZAIS HAIR OMGG
THIS IS AMAZING!!
UNDERRATED
WHY DID I JUST SEE THIS??? WAAAHHH GORGEOUS!!
This is so good! The drawings are pretty and he animations is great , loved it !
Thank you so much!💞 (๑>◡
Your art style is so cute ✨️✨️
Thank you!
ITS SO PRETTTTYYYY
THIS IS SO ADORABLE 😍😍
Haha, thank you!! ♡ What an honour to get a comment from you (๑>◡
OMG I JUST FOUND IT
Wow, this is amazing. I love your art style, and the animation looks so smooth. I may have no idea what the lyrics are, but it sounds very Dazai, so great song choice.
[random critique from someone who knows nothing about creating videos ahead, please don’t take it as hate. Some people wouldn’t want to read it, but I will put it here in case you are interested.]
I think it feels a little repetitive, but that might just be my low attention span. Loops can make or break this type of video. You have enough differences in the first two loops to make them feel separate, but I feel the last two were missing something. The first thing I can think of is making the last two get progressively more creepy by dulling the colors, adding more prominent shadows, and distorting the music, but I’m sure there are other ways. This is just my personal opinion/ suggestion, the video is still amazing without such changes. I will add it to my favorites playlist.
Tysm! I totally understand what you mean by it being repetitive! I was honestly rushing to get the video out (^^;) I’ll be sure to keep everything you said in mind when making another video! ♡
PEPOYO MENTION ?? (SONG)
YESS, I LOVE PEPOYO >:D