How to Hook a Reader with Your Screenplay - The First 10 Pages Explained
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- Опубликовано: 22 май 2024
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Chapters:
00:00 - Introduction to Starting your Screenplay
00:31 - The Importance of the First 10 Pages Explained
01:19 - Tone
03:52 - Character
06:42 - Setting
08:50 - Theme
11:39 - Stakes
13:45 - Deep Dive: Sideways
17:56 - Takeaways
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THE FIRST TEN PAGES
There are a lot of screenplays out there waiting to be made, so getting a potential producer or financier to read your script is a big accomplishment. But getting them to finish your script is a whole other animal.
Scripts that get noticed are typically scripts that have strong openings, openings which tell a reader why they should keep reading. Within the first 10 pages, a screenplay should already have delivered a lot of information. In this video, we look at some of the strongest opening ten pages from famous screenplays, and see what they can teach us about writing a great hook.
HOW TO WRITE A SCRIPT’S OPENING
When screenwriting, it is important to know your tone. Are you writing a comedy? If so, what kind of comedy? A satire? Black comedy? Dramedy? Once you’ve answered this question, make sure you infuse your opening with that tone. Think of some of the best comedies out there. Nearly all of them establish their humor right off the bat, and certainly within the first ten pages. The same goes for other genres. A horror will typically have a scare right up front.
Of course, it’s also a good idea to introduce your primary characters in the first ten pages of a script. There are more exceptions to this rule than with tone setting, but by and large, screenplays will establish important character within their opening pages. This is more than just having a character appear. It is also showing the reader who this character is- how they act, think, and inhabit their setting.
HOW TO START A MOVIE SCRIPT
Speaking of setting, most great screenplay opening pages will establish a sense of place. If it’s a sci-fi, a screenwriter may introduce us to the rules of the alien world. If it’s a grounded drama, the screenwriter might note details in familiar settings that feel both real and telling.
Some first ten pages will also set up themes that will be investigated in the rest of a script. If one theme is the value of community, the first ten pages might have a character deliberately eschewing his comrades and going it alone.
In this vein, setting the stakes is also crucial. What will happen if a character doesn’t succeed? In Jurassic Park, for example, David Koepp opens on a worker getting eaten by a dinosaur. The stakes are clear: fail, and get eaten.
SCREENWRITING ADVICE
Your first ten pages may not include all of these elements. It may even only incorporate a few of them. But no matter what, the first ten pages of a screenplay should be intriguing. The reader should want to know more. If you don’t accomplish this goal, the stakes are as stark as Jurassic Park’s: your script might get put down.
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Chapters:
00:00 - Introduction to Starting your Screenplay
00:31 - The Importance of the First 10 Pages Explained
01:19 - Tone
03:52 - Character
06:42 - Setting
08:50 - Theme
11:39 - Stakes
13:45 - Deep Dive: Sideways
17:56 - Takeaways
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This is why independently financed films are going to be so important. Over 100 years of cinema and we still have barely even begun to scratch the surface of its potential.
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A Complete Audiovisual encyclopedia about the Art of Screenwriting. Like for the Art of an Opening Scene, to Hook the Audiences, Everything should happen in the First 10 Pages. Thousand Thanks StudioBinder for this Inspiring video.💯💯💯
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Sideways is one of the funniest films ever put to screen. Paul Giamatti's Merlot meldowns are to be preserved forever.
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Thank you! You help so much with my writing. I've learned more from you than my final year creative writing course at uni. Seeing what you mean really helps me to take things in, and I am not even writing for the screen!
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One of my favourite movies is Snatch.
Everything done brilliantly in the first ten pages by Mr. Ritchie.
Great example!
I love From dusk till dawn. It subverts any expectations. The tone, the Stakes, as well as the characters and it's set up change drastically from the middle of the movie, changing it into a completely new genre as well. Great film.
Well worth a watch!
Without a doubt, SW A New Hope has the best opening that I can recall, which is not over the top or promises more than the film delivers.🥰
And an iconic opening shot!
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The first 10 pages can truly make or break a screenplay's chances 🎬
First impressions are critical!
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Loved this. Writing a screenplay now and I was unsure about the opening scene. This video got me thinking about it differently. :)
Also, very good to see American Fiction in this video. It was one of my absolute favorite films last year.
Another great lesson.Thx.
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The examples you've shown were as exciting on paper as on film. A few others: Apocalypse Now, Inglourious Basterds, Dunkirk, The Witch, Donnie Brasco, Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan, Raiders of the Lost Ark, Silverado, Coraline, Henry V, The French Connection, Rocky III, The Killer, Battle: Los Angeles, Grand Prix title sequence, and of course most James Bond pre-title sequences.
Great examples!
@@StudioBinder Thanks. Again those scripts were wonderful that you've shown. I don't know how many pages went into the opening of Once Upon A Time In The West, but there was an opening which certainly hooked viewers in with the various characters, sights, and sounds.
Excellent, as always.
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From a technical standpoint, the film, *"In Bruges"* is a perfect movie. There is not one scene which doesn't propel either story or character development. The writing is sublime, the cinematography is stunning, the acting is pitch perfect. It is the perfect example in showing how something small and seemingly innocuous may seem inconsequential, can have vital importance in a later scene. "Cause and Effect." (SPOILER) For example, when Ken is at a booth paying the entry fee to access the tower, he empties his pockets of small change to be rid of his coins. He comes up short 10 cents only having €4.90 when entry is 5 Euros. The attendant sternly refuses entry to Ken several times regardless that it's only a 10 cent discrepancy. Ken's haggling with the attendant is futile, and is forced to break a fifty. At face value, we could chalk this up as just a small, light-hearted and humourous scene, as not another thought is given to the incident, that is...until the end. Ken, again at the top of the tower, bleeding from a gunshot wound, must warn his friend, Ray that his life is in danger; though Ray is at a cafe in the courtyard at the bottom of the tower. The threat is their former boss who after shooting Ken, is on his way down the tower to kill Ray. Ken knowing he can not walk down the flights of stairs in time to protect his friend he decides to jump from the tower-his suicide alerting Ray to the impending threat. Looking over the balcony, Ken is unable to see below due to a thick fog blanketing the courtyard. Not wanting a pedestrian below to be injured or foil his suicide, Ken pulls a fistful of coins from his pocket, and drops them over the balcony. The tinkling sound of the coins hitting the cobblestones below alerts the pedestrians below to steer clear. Then Ken jumps. Had Ken have been granted entry to the tower the first time, then he would not have had the coins in his pocket which eventually contributed in saving Ray's life. Cause and Effect. The "dum-dum" bullets are another example of how something that seems so frivolous can later be of such consequential magnitude.
In Bruges is a perfect movie to study and to use as a blueprint for writing drama.
Great example!
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This is always the hardest part when I write my scripts.
At least you can get it over with first haha
Same here. Scriptwriting is so stressful
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I think "Lawrence of Arabia" definitly has one of the best opening pages.
One of the best for a reason 👌
Sir thank you for this helpful video.. please make a video on most difficult act 2 part. 'how to write engaging act 2 '
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I'd have loved to see more examples of films where the first 10 pages were known to have helped make the difference between it getting picked up or not. I doubt anyone would have stopped reading a script by Monty Python, at the height of their fame, if the first 10 pages didn't wow them. Same for a Disney film where the script was likely written at the direct request of the studio. Were any of the examples breakthrough projects for young screen writers for example?
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for a great script, there must be a great introduction.
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I struggle so much with writing in general. I get in my head thinking I’m not good and that prevents me from even trying at times. Imposter syndrome, lack of confidence, lack of practice..a lot of things. But I do have stories, I have ideas…but they need a place in a script.
Maybe I cheating a bit, but the screenplays that I personally read is Casablanca, Butch Cassidy and Sundance Kid and The Banshee Of Inshierin has the hook in the first ten pages.
Those are great examples!
This will definitely help me write my latest script! Nice Work.
Aye, shout out to Power Rangers the Movie at the end. The sky diving scene is burned into my brain since as a kid as being one of the most fun intros to an action movie lol I appreciate the deep cut references in your videos
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So am I correct in thinking 'the first 10 pages' of a script corresponds to the first 10 minutes of a movie/show?
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Can you guys make a separate video series on how to review or analyze movies?
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Please analyse director Jonathan Glazer. Especially his work on ‘Under the Skin’ & ‘the Zone of Interest’.
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Sometimes people don't follow this rule and we watched movies like for example "Elizabethtown" /2005/ or maybe SNOOZETOWN: "It’s fitting that the very first line of Elizabethtown, delivered by Orlando Bloom in voice over, is a line about collosal failure. The actual line is “As somebody once said, there’s a difference between a failure, and a fiasco.”
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@studiobinder Do you have a video that resembles Denis Velleneuve recent comments about letting the visuals tell the story, rather than dialogue heavy conversations/exposition?
Not exactly instead of dialogue, but all of our cinematography/editing videos is about visual storytelling
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Hi StudioBinder! How much screentime does 10 pages mean? Is it an average of like 15 minutes or a percentage relative to any story length?
Would be about 10 minutes. Scripts work at 1 page a minute
@@StudioBinder ok thank you very much! I suppose the inciting incident is not usually included in those first minutes
I like the the intros (first 10 pages) of Kung Fu panda but particularly Kung Fu panda 2.
Am 19 years old and there is this film am working on that's giving me headache but after watching this i know things will be better
Cars has one of the best openings, in my opinion
Hello. I present the hero and the villain of my story in the first page, but over time the story reveals that the character that seemed to be the hero is the villain and the character that seemed to be the villain is the hero. Shoud I reveal this slow burn realization in the log line? Thank you!
Big twists don't need to be mentioned in a logline
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00:00 🚀 Introduction: Writers grab attention with thrilling action, complex characters, and gripping plots in the first 10 pages.
0:32 📜 Importance of First 10 Pages: First 10 pages are crucial as they establish key story elements like tone, characters, setting, theme, and stakes.
1:20 🎭 Tone: Opening pages set the tone and genre of the film, priming the audience for what's to come.
3:52 🧑🤝🧑 Character: First 10 pages introduce primary characters, showcasing their essential qualities and motivations.
6:43 🏞 Setting: Setting is established early to give readers a sense of time and place, influencing the narrative.
8:50 🎭 Theme: First 10 pages often hint at the larger ideas and themes the movie will explore.
11:40 ⚖ Stakes: Stakes are introduced to answer the question: Why does any of this matter?
13:46 🔍 Deep Dive - "Sideways": Examines how the opening pages of the script establish characters, setting, tone, themes, and stakes.
17:57 💡 Takeaways: First 10 pages are crucial for establishing key story elements and getting the audience on board for the rest of the film.
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They have videos about how big directors direct their actors
Getting more deeper in how to direct non-actors/first time actors and how to avoid end result notes
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My favorite hook-me up movie from the start is Enemy at the gate
Blade Runner Opening scene is wonderful
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Scorsese - Goodfellas and The Irishman, Goodfellas in particular
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It would’ve been nice to get more examples of scene description, aside from dialogue.
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I think Boogie Nights had the best opening 10 pages.
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Studios usually get them from agents or commission them
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make one about how to write super hero movies
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Please make a video about Damien Chazelle on Director's playbook....
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Deep red by Dario Argento
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Do something abut Indian filmmaking.that’s gonna be a great opportunity for indian film makers.
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Servant.. scene where he picks up the baby and the babys head hits the bed.
First 2 minutes of this video gripped me into clickbait
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Please, re-do the thumbnail using a different typeface: reads like "First IO pages", which did not make sense to me for about five seconds :)
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