How to Hook a Reader with Your Screenplay - The First 10 Pages Explained

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  • Опубликовано: 6 янв 2025

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  • @StudioBinder
    @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +38

    Chapters:
    00:00 - Introduction to Starting your Screenplay
    00:31 - The Importance of the First 10 Pages Explained
    01:19 - Tone
    03:52 - Character
    06:42 - Setting
    08:50 - Theme
    11:39 - Stakes
    13:45 - Deep Dive: Sideways
    17:56 - Takeaways

    • @DDumbrille
      @DDumbrille 7 месяцев назад

      It's worth noting that the stakes aren't necessary in the first 10, but they can be very helpful....

  • @joaquinhernandez6940
    @joaquinhernandez6940 10 месяцев назад +181

    Congratulations on making it to 500 videos StudioBinder!

  • @wagsweekly_com
    @wagsweekly_com 16 дней назад +2

    RUclips is a school, Studiobinder is a favorite teacher.

  • @elormmichaels5602
    @elormmichaels5602 10 месяцев назад +61

    I learn a lot from u guys to shoot all my movies , from storyboard till the entire movie is out . THANKS

  • @jessebbedwell
    @jessebbedwell 10 месяцев назад +34

    This is why independently financed films are going to be so important. Over 100 years of cinema and we still have barely even begun to scratch the surface of its potential.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +2

      💯

    • @NathanMcMasters
      @NathanMcMasters 3 месяца назад +2

      I think RUclips is going to open up this idea so much more, even the platform opens up more creative potential

  • @amiiae
    @amiiae 10 месяцев назад +31

    Again, thank you so much for these helpful videos. As a young teenager that dreams to become an actor or a director, these videos could never be more helpful. Thank you so much, please continue to make these videos!

  • @AScreenwritersJourney
    @AScreenwritersJourney 10 месяцев назад +15

    Thank you for including Sorry To Bother You - more people need to hear about this gem!

  • @rayancedrichaddad1197
    @rayancedrichaddad1197 10 месяцев назад +38

    A Complete Audiovisual encyclopedia about the Art of Screenwriting. Like for the Art of an Opening Scene, to Hook the Audiences, Everything should happen in the First 10 Pages. Thousand Thanks StudioBinder for this Inspiring video.💯💯💯

  • @y_fam_goeglyd
    @y_fam_goeglyd 10 месяцев назад +9

    Thank you! You help so much with my writing. I've learned more from you than my final year creative writing course at uni. Seeing what you mean really helps me to take things in, and I am not even writing for the screen!

  • @bubediscuss
    @bubediscuss 10 месяцев назад +22

    Sideways is one of the funniest films ever put to screen. Paul Giamatti's Merlot meldowns are to be preserved forever.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +2

      🔥😂

    • @Leprutz
      @Leprutz 10 месяцев назад +2

      Great film indeed.

  • @MuhammadAfiqBinZahrilFikri
    @MuhammadAfiqBinZahrilFikri 3 месяца назад +1

    Thank you Studio Binder. I finally understand how to craft compelling Act 1 after watching this and your other videos. Keep making videos like this!!

  • @dameanvil
    @dameanvil 10 месяцев назад +4

    00:00 🚀 Introduction: Writers grab attention with thrilling action, complex characters, and gripping plots in the first 10 pages.
    0:32 📜 Importance of First 10 Pages: First 10 pages are crucial as they establish key story elements like tone, characters, setting, theme, and stakes.
    1:20 🎭 Tone: Opening pages set the tone and genre of the film, priming the audience for what's to come.
    3:52 🧑‍🤝‍🧑 Character: First 10 pages introduce primary characters, showcasing their essential qualities and motivations.
    6:43 🏞 Setting: Setting is established early to give readers a sense of time and place, influencing the narrative.
    8:50 🎭 Theme: First 10 pages often hint at the larger ideas and themes the movie will explore.
    11:40 ⚖ Stakes: Stakes are introduced to answer the question: Why does any of this matter?
    13:46 🔍 Deep Dive - "Sideways": Examines how the opening pages of the script establish characters, setting, tone, themes, and stakes.
    17:57 💡 Takeaways: First 10 pages are crucial for establishing key story elements and getting the audience on board for the rest of the film.

  • @shiteshkumartiwari4554
    @shiteshkumartiwari4554 10 месяцев назад +11

    I'm watching all your videos for a long time. Lots of love from Nepal

  • @DudeSerious-ng8ii
    @DudeSerious-ng8ii 10 месяцев назад +468

    Any aspiring indian filmmakers here😊

  • @brycecombs2868
    @brycecombs2868 10 месяцев назад +4

    Without a doubt, SW A New Hope has the best opening that I can recall, which is not over the top or promises more than the film delivers.🥰

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      And an iconic opening shot!

  • @Lis-ard
    @Lis-ard 10 месяцев назад +5

    I was hoping to see a video like this from you guys! Great work as always

  • @azizbekurinbaev2
    @azizbekurinbaev2 10 месяцев назад +3

    I love this channel I'm learning so much film making stuff please don't stop upload video such a good channel keep going guys.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      we're not going anywhere :)

  • @metafuel
    @metafuel 10 месяцев назад +4

    Superb work as always.
    I love your content.
    One of my favourite movies is Snatch.
    Everything done brilliantly in the first ten pages by Mr. Ritchie.

  • @Leprutz
    @Leprutz 10 месяцев назад +1

    I love From dusk till dawn. It subverts any expectations. The tone, the Stakes, as well as the characters and it's set up change drastically from the middle of the movie, changing it into a completely new genre as well. Great film.

  • @estherlynnie
    @estherlynnie 10 месяцев назад

    Studio binder is the best! Thank you for all the information you've shared.

  • @RomaFlix
    @RomaFlix 10 месяцев назад +4

    This video is that exactly that i needed today, thanks studiobinder ❤

  • @Naudibranch
    @Naudibranch 5 месяцев назад

    Always love the effort put into these videos. Especially The clip source in the bottom left and music credits in the description. It makes my life soo easy ❤❤

  • @mazaroth7
    @mazaroth7 2 месяца назад

    Thanks for making these videos. They are entertaining and educational. I like how you reference artsy movies and popular movies showing that movies and their study are for everyone.

  • @SelvaPlaRoj
    @SelvaPlaRoj 7 месяцев назад

    On the first five minutes of "The triangle of sadness" I knew it would be a masterpiece of cinema, that is a great example of a perfect opening

  • @theycallhimmav9940
    @theycallhimmav9940 6 месяцев назад +32

    Any aspiring black filmmakers here ?

  • @spinsandneedles
    @spinsandneedles 10 месяцев назад +1

    The examples you've shown were as exciting on paper as on film. A few others: Apocalypse Now, Inglourious Basterds, Dunkirk, The Witch, Donnie Brasco, Star Trek II: The Wrath of Khan, Raiders of the Lost Ark, Silverado, Coraline, Henry V, The French Connection, Rocky III, The Killer, Battle: Los Angeles, Grand Prix title sequence, and of course most James Bond pre-title sequences.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      Great examples!

    • @spinsandneedles
      @spinsandneedles 10 месяцев назад

      @@StudioBinder Thanks. Again those scripts were wonderful that you've shown. I don't know how many pages went into the opening of Once Upon A Time In The West, but there was an opening which certainly hooked viewers in with the various characters, sights, and sounds.

  • @akibtafhim
    @akibtafhim 10 месяцев назад +4

    Addiction to Studiobinder? "I'm lovin' it!"

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      Addiction to that filmmaking life 😮‍💨

  • @Puppetsinmyhead
    @Puppetsinmyhead 10 месяцев назад +4

    Donna axed me as she coming out the house😂. Definitely need to see this movie!

  • @weddingsbysbp
    @weddingsbysbp 8 месяцев назад +1

    I just finished my first movie as director . I learned a lot from studio binder . I will do mention you when I will get my oscars . Thanks 🙏🏻

    • @sonukashyap1367
      @sonukashyap1367 7 месяцев назад

      Which movie you have done

    • @weddingsbysbp
      @weddingsbysbp 7 месяцев назад

      @@sonukashyap1367 jaggo aayi aa . A punjabi feature film , to be released in nov

  • @EirikBull
    @EirikBull 9 месяцев назад

    Loved this. Writing a screenplay now and I was unsure about the opening scene. This video got me thinking about it differently. :)
    Also, very good to see American Fiction in this video. It was one of my absolute favorite films last year.

  • @raulpierri
    @raulpierri 10 месяцев назад +3

    Excellent, as always.

  • @MwayiComfort
    @MwayiComfort 10 месяцев назад +6

    Wow my weekly class ❤

  • @freddyjosereginomontalvo4667
    @freddyjosereginomontalvo4667 10 месяцев назад +3

    I love start my weeks with your videos
    🌍🌟

  • @SuuSinator
    @SuuSinator 10 месяцев назад +4

    Thanks for your videos (and software)!
    I think "Lawrence of Arabia" definitly has one of the best opening pages.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      One of the best for a reason 👌

  • @ChaleyKwameGh
    @ChaleyKwameGh 7 месяцев назад

    Studio binder you are the best, thank to you guys i have a masterpiece in the making 💯

  • @iamPrinceK
    @iamPrinceK 10 месяцев назад +2

    Thanks Studio Binder for this informative video 🫡👏🌟

  • @46s-FilmMaking
    @46s-FilmMaking 10 месяцев назад +3

    The first 10 pages can truly make or break a screenplay's chances 🎬

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      First impressions are critical!

  • @PhantomFilmAustralia
    @PhantomFilmAustralia 10 месяцев назад +1

    From a technical standpoint, the film, *"In Bruges"* is a perfect movie. There is not one scene which doesn't propel either story or character development. The writing is sublime, the cinematography is stunning, the acting is pitch perfect. It is the perfect example in showing how something small and seemingly innocuous may seem inconsequential, can have vital importance in a later scene. "Cause and Effect." (SPOILER) For example, when Ken is at a booth paying the entry fee to access the tower, he empties his pockets of small change to be rid of his coins. He comes up short 10 cents only having €4.90 when entry is 5 Euros. The attendant sternly refuses entry to Ken several times regardless that it's only a 10 cent discrepancy. Ken's haggling with the attendant is futile, and is forced to break a fifty. At face value, we could chalk this up as just a small, light-hearted and humourous scene, as not another thought is given to the incident, that is...until the end. Ken, again at the top of the tower, bleeding from a gunshot wound, must warn his friend, Ray that his life is in danger; though Ray is at a cafe in the courtyard at the bottom of the tower. The threat is their former boss who after shooting Ken, is on his way down the tower to kill Ray. Ken knowing he can not walk down the flights of stairs in time to protect his friend he decides to jump from the tower-his suicide alerting Ray to the impending threat. Looking over the balcony, Ken is unable to see below due to a thick fog blanketing the courtyard. Not wanting a pedestrian below to be injured or foil his suicide, Ken pulls a fistful of coins from his pocket, and drops them over the balcony. The tinkling sound of the coins hitting the cobblestones below alerts the pedestrians below to steer clear. Then Ken jumps. Had Ken have been granted entry to the tower the first time, then he would not have had the coins in his pocket which eventually contributed in saving Ray's life. Cause and Effect. The "dum-dum" bullets are another example of how something that seems so frivolous can later be of such consequential magnitude.
    In Bruges is a perfect movie to study and to use as a blueprint for writing drama.

  • @albertpinto12
    @albertpinto12 10 месяцев назад +4

    Sir thank you for this helpful video.. please make a video on most difficult act 2 part. 'how to write engaging act 2 '

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      Thanks for the suggestion!

  • @danielbarrero2815
    @danielbarrero2815 10 месяцев назад +3

    Thank you for your videos!

  • @sulmanmuneer8642
    @sulmanmuneer8642 10 месяцев назад +1

    From Pakistan 🇵🇰:- Your channel and theory is too Good 😇

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      Appreciate it :)

    • @sulmanmuneer8642
      @sulmanmuneer8642 10 месяцев назад

      @@StudioBinder From Pakistan 🇵🇰:- I've been watching your channel

  • @itstonycia
    @itstonycia 9 месяцев назад

    I struggle so much with writing in general. I get in my head thinking I’m not good and that prevents me from even trying at times. Imposter syndrome, lack of confidence, lack of practice..a lot of things. But I do have stories, I have ideas…but they need a place in a script.

  • @alpha_berchermuesli5975
    @alpha_berchermuesli5975 7 месяцев назад +9

    i hope Netflix producers were taking notes

    • @Khoviean
      @Khoviean 5 месяцев назад

      I bet they should! 😂

  • @AdityaSingh-sg7gp
    @AdityaSingh-sg7gp 10 месяцев назад +3

    Very Nice Video Sir ❤

  • @okbakhenfer3238
    @okbakhenfer3238 10 месяцев назад +2

    for a great script, there must be a great introduction.

  • @DavidBeaumont
    @DavidBeaumont 10 месяцев назад +3

    I'd have loved to see more examples of films where the first 10 pages were known to have helped make the difference between it getting picked up or not. I doubt anyone would have stopped reading a script by Monty Python, at the height of their fame, if the first 10 pages didn't wow them. Same for a Disney film where the script was likely written at the direct request of the studio. Were any of the examples breakthrough projects for young screen writers for example?

  • @TheJordanLeopold
    @TheJordanLeopold 9 месяцев назад

    Aye, shout out to Power Rangers the Movie at the end. The sky diving scene is burned into my brain since as a kid as being one of the most fun intros to an action movie lol I appreciate the deep cut references in your videos

  • @vicentecampos2893
    @vicentecampos2893 10 месяцев назад

    Another great lesson.Thx.

  • @tylerwhorff7143
    @tylerwhorff7143 10 месяцев назад +1

    Nice video essay 🤝

  • @constancecampbell4610
    @constancecampbell4610 3 месяца назад

    I love the first ten minutes of The Exorcist.

  • @WhiteNight_255
    @WhiteNight_255 10 месяцев назад +1

    you are BACK, so am I

  • @arnavdurani9962
    @arnavdurani9962 10 месяцев назад +2

    loved this

  • @themillenial28
    @themillenial28 10 месяцев назад

    Can you guys make a separate video series on how to review or analyze movies?

  • @GlenCollinsOfficial
    @GlenCollinsOfficial 10 месяцев назад +2

    First!
    Please analyse director Jonathan Glazer. Especially his work on ‘Under the Skin’ & ‘the Zone of Interest’.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      Thanks for the suggestion!

  • @Kennethmarchant9705
    @Kennethmarchant9705 10 месяцев назад +1

    Maybe I cheating a bit, but the screenplays that I personally read is Casablanca, Butch Cassidy and Sundance Kid and The Banshee Of Inshierin has the hook in the first ten pages.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      Those are great examples!

  • @rutaiwanwongsirasawad4040
    @rutaiwanwongsirasawad4040 10 месяцев назад +1

    Love this. Thank you.

  • @mainstay.
    @mainstay. 10 месяцев назад +3

    So am I correct in thinking 'the first 10 pages' of a script corresponds to the first 10 minutes of a movie/show?

  • @brain_respect_and_freedom
    @brain_respect_and_freedom 10 месяцев назад +1

    Sometimes people don't follow this rule and we watched movies like for example "Elizabethtown" /2005/ or maybe SNOOZETOWN: "It’s fitting that the very first line of Elizabethtown, delivered by Orlando Bloom in voice over, is a line about collosal failure. The actual line is “As somebody once said, there’s a difference between a failure, and a fiasco.”

  • @volant3
    @volant3 10 месяцев назад +1

    Could you share the aspecto ratio of this video?

  • @Chill_Mode_JD
    @Chill_Mode_JD 10 месяцев назад +1

    Welcome to class 🎥🎓💯

  • @michaelmkd8968
    @michaelmkd8968 10 месяцев назад +1

    Hi StudioBinder! How much screentime does 10 pages mean? Is it an average of like 15 minutes or a percentage relative to any story length?

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +2

      Would be about 10 minutes. Scripts work at 1 page a minute

    • @michaelmkd8968
      @michaelmkd8968 10 месяцев назад

      @@StudioBinder ok thank you very much! I suppose the inciting incident is not usually included in those first minutes

  • @WatipasoMakukula
    @WatipasoMakukula 9 месяцев назад

    I like the the intros (first 10 pages) of Kung Fu panda but particularly Kung Fu panda 2.

  • @ryanhowell4492
    @ryanhowell4492 7 месяцев назад +1

    That inspires me

  • @peterkalyabe7553
    @peterkalyabe7553 7 месяцев назад

    I know I watched this video when it first came out - hot off the press. I am not sure if I commented on it. The thing is, I love this one a little bit more. I hope second or third viewings don't hurt.

  • @smcdonough1427
    @smcdonough1427 9 месяцев назад

    Man, Sound of Metal is so good

  • @fatimagray4604
    @fatimagray4604 10 месяцев назад +1

    Tennessee filmmaker in the house

  • @Rapscallion2871
    @Rapscallion2871 10 месяцев назад +2

    This is always the hardest part when I write my scripts.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      At least you can get it over with first haha

    • @LeeLoate
      @LeeLoate 8 месяцев назад

      Same here. Scriptwriting is so stressful

  • @otroalienpromedio
    @otroalienpromedio 10 месяцев назад

    great video mates

  • @tnxmelater
    @tnxmelater 10 месяцев назад +1

    thank you🎉

  • @veera222
    @veera222 10 месяцев назад

    Again Thank You 🤝

  • @jedgould5531
    @jedgould5531 2 месяца назад

    Any Kubrick film. The way you started this First Ten Pages video with ‘Dawn of Man.’

  • @tylerbailey4279
    @tylerbailey4279 10 месяцев назад +2

    Best ways to pitch a script

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      Thanks for the suggestion!

  • @KillinItWithFire
    @KillinItWithFire 10 месяцев назад

    @studiobinder Do you have a video that resembles Denis Velleneuve recent comments about letting the visuals tell the story, rather than dialogue heavy conversations/exposition?

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      Not exactly instead of dialogue, but all of our cinematography/editing videos is about visual storytelling

  • @vfxyemen00
    @vfxyemen00 9 месяцев назад

    My favorite hook-me up movie from the start is Enemy at the gate

  • @magicinkstudio
    @magicinkstudio 5 месяцев назад

    I have a question. Let's say youre making a series or anime season. Should you establish that in the first episode?

  • @sajalrai7957
    @sajalrai7957 10 месяцев назад

    @studiobinder Can you please update the links for cheat sheets of the shot list series, it'll be really helpful for all of us...

  • @Trendtales-v
    @Trendtales-v 10 месяцев назад

    Am 19 years old and there is this film am working on that's giving me headache but after watching this i know things will be better

  • @bollywoodfightactionreacti9189
    @bollywoodfightactionreacti9189 10 месяцев назад +1

    Nice ❤

  • @eusoumelo
    @eusoumelo 10 месяцев назад +1

    Could you, please, make one of these great videos on fabula and syuzhet?

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      we might!

    • @eusoumelo
      @eusoumelo 10 месяцев назад

      @@StudioBinder I love you guys

  • @TonaA.R.
    @TonaA.R. 8 месяцев назад

    Blade Runner Opening scene is wonderful

  • @Eraserhead1995
    @Eraserhead1995 9 месяцев назад

    Thanks ❤

  • @jimwashere104
    @jimwashere104 9 месяцев назад

    Cars has one of the best openings, in my opinion

  • @kirillbach6298
    @kirillbach6298 10 месяцев назад +1

    Thanks

  • @juandediosreyes8526
    @juandediosreyes8526 10 месяцев назад

    Hello. I present the hero and the villain of my story in the first page, but over time the story reveals that the character that seemed to be the hero is the villain and the character that seemed to be the villain is the hero. Shoud I reveal this slow burn realization in the log line? Thank you!

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад +1

      Big twists don't need to be mentioned in a logline

    • @juandediosreyes8526
      @juandediosreyes8526 10 месяцев назад

      @@StudioBinder Thank you for your answer!!!!!

  • @andrewselbyphotography
    @andrewselbyphotography 7 месяцев назад +1

    Oh no, a 12 year old car! That's just a crazy old car, who would be caught dead driving a 12 year old car?

  • @marcusmezzano
    @marcusmezzano 10 месяцев назад +1

    I feel bad for studiobinder because this narrators voice is the only one I want to hear on a studiobinder video 😬😬

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      It's not going anywhere ;)

  • @johanninoaballe1297
    @johanninoaballe1297 10 месяцев назад

    any video for how to become a production designer

  • @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn
    @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn 10 месяцев назад +4

    can you guys make one more dedicated video on how to direct actors please?

    • @Kimandrea234
      @Kimandrea234 10 месяцев назад +2

      They have videos about how big directors direct their actors

    • @story4films96
      @story4films96 10 месяцев назад +1

      Getting more deeper in how to direct non-actors/first time actors and how to avoid end result notes

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      What about it would you like covered?

    • @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn
      @SuryayanChakraborty-do9sn 10 месяцев назад

      @@StudioBinder actually I m gonna make a debut film so I am a amateur myself and looking for how to teach acting to beginner actors. Btw thanks for replying.

  • @xuhuiyuanxu
    @xuhuiyuanxu 3 месяца назад +1

    setting and stakes are better starters

  • @georgeofhamilton
    @georgeofhamilton 10 месяцев назад

    It would’ve been nice to get more examples of scene description, aside from dialogue.

  • @FilmCritic933
    @FilmCritic933 8 месяцев назад

    Please do an explanation video on Lola Run Lola

  • @PatrickMastersProductions
    @PatrickMastersProductions 10 месяцев назад

    I think Boogie Nights had the best opening 10 pages.

  • @LongShotfilmz
    @LongShotfilmz 10 месяцев назад

    Aspiring Ugandan Filmmaker

  • @stephenwilliams3807
    @stephenwilliams3807 10 месяцев назад +1

    Scorsese - Goodfellas and The Irishman, Goodfellas in particular

  • @yahiyakhan01
    @yahiyakhan01 10 месяцев назад

    Do something abut Indian filmmaking.that’s gonna be a great opportunity for indian film makers.

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      What about Indian filmmaking would you like covered?

    • @yahiyakhan01
      @yahiyakhan01 10 месяцев назад

      @@StudioBinder i am a filmmaker,in indian filmmaking what is the reason people watch our movies and appreciate all over the world.

  • @NucleusMediaMalayalam
    @NucleusMediaMalayalam 10 месяцев назад +1

    Sir please add the subtitle

  • @General_reader
    @General_reader 10 месяцев назад +1

    Where do people purchase screenplay/scripts!?!?!?

    • @StudioBinder
      @StudioBinder  10 месяцев назад

      Studios usually get them from agents or commission them

  • @adibshirazi
    @adibshirazi 10 месяцев назад +1

    👌👌

  • @garnalmaani
    @garnalmaani 10 месяцев назад +1

    500 films 🎉

  • @TEAMSPACE-j8s
    @TEAMSPACE-j8s 2 месяца назад

    Upload a video for pre climax