reading the WATTPAD FANFICTION I wrote when I was 12 because I embrace cringe

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  • Опубликовано: 12 сен 2024

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  • @Faline_San
    @Faline_San  Год назад +17773

    Rate my acting abilities out of 10 🙏 (the abs are very real)
    Edit: for people who are new here I don’t care what pronouns others use for me, go wild, play spin the wheel with it or something it’s funny to imagine 😭😭

  • @portablehell
    @portablehell Год назад +12297

    THE FACT THAT HE TOOK THE TIME TO ACT OUT THE STORIES 😭😭😭

    • @Faline_San
      @Faline_San  Год назад +3584

      It took way too long 😭😭😭

    • @camilagrijalva4109
      @camilagrijalva4109 Год назад +462

      . Like fal would ever NOT use an opportunity to make a buffoon out out themselves 😹 I mean it’s FAL. He’s just made this way

    • @mohanthegay4398
      @mohanthegay4398 Год назад +126

      we appreciate his dedication to the fine craft that is wattpad

    • @RamJacobSlays
      @RamJacobSlays Год назад +116

      Did i miss smthng, why is it a ‘he’😭😭😭😭?

    • @blueandtrue3027
      @blueandtrue3027 Год назад +230

      @@RamJacobSlays fal uses he/they pronouns

  • @Kishan-sy4wf
    @Kishan-sy4wf Год назад +4116

    “The bushes have evolved” she should seriously consider becoming a director with those lines, or an actor! 👏💀

    • @supakku
      @supakku Год назад +96

      HELPPP THE WAY SHE SAYS "BOOSHES"

    • @angelameifernandez
      @angelameifernandez Год назад +21

      Went straight out of a Pokémon game

    • @EggieAnimates
      @EggieAnimates Год назад +62

      “MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED!”
      This has two possible outcomes:
      1. She asked god for a sign she’d finally escape the fanfic
      2. This is a whole new level of interspecies friendships

    • @willowwilliams498
      @willowwilliams498 Год назад +2

      his pronouns are he/him.

    • @faeromation
      @faeromation Год назад +17

      @@willowwilliams498all pronouns but prefers he/him

  • @atnernt5196
    @atnernt5196 Год назад +12717

    >Gets Bachelor’s Degree in Pyschology
    >Gets job as a barista.
    >Gets job as a fashion designer at the same time
    >Doesn’t get a job as a psychologist
    >Turns 17
    >Refuses to Elaborate
    Faline, Truly a master of story telling.

    • @OHOHOHOOHOHOOOHOOHOHO
      @OHOHOHOOHOHOOOHOOHOHO Год назад +57

      991 likes and 0 comments let me fix that

    • @ghostie3456
      @ghostie3456 Год назад +226

      wow. poetic. gorgeous. masterpiece. art. fine art.

    • @Re4l_cha0s
      @Re4l_cha0s Год назад +26

      @@OHOHOHOOHOHOOOHOOHOHO I love people like you 😭

    • @fungustoe
      @fungustoe Год назад +111

      "i major in psychology"
      gets every single job except psychologist

    • @BassGal92
      @BassGal92 Год назад +20

      @@fungustoe My sister-in-law got her degree in psychology. She doesn't work in the field because she didn't know that you need at least a Master's degree in psychology in order to work in a field like that. You need a Doctorate to even be called a psychologist.

  • @user-mn8ns3fh5b
    @user-mn8ns3fh5b Год назад +3813

    I came here for cringe, got some genuine comedy. This is some quality writing for a 12 year old.

    • @FoxgloveXS
      @FoxgloveXS 9 месяцев назад

      No it ain't I'm twelve and if I was writing that I would kill myself ☠️

    • @aarasko
      @aarasko 5 месяцев назад +21

      Hear hear!

    • @CookiePlaysOfficial
      @CookiePlaysOfficial 5 месяцев назад +38

      Very true, when I was a 12 year old, my writing was shit- 😭

    • @Anonymouuuse
      @Anonymouuuse 5 месяцев назад +5

      @@CookiePlaysOfficial SAME

    • @MerizyanGurungVlogs
      @MerizyanGurungVlogs 4 месяца назад +5

      @@CookiePlaysOfficialas a 14 year old, when I was 12 and 7, I had the best handwriting 😭

  • @lovelykoushi
    @lovelykoushi Год назад +9982

    12 year old faline after writing a better story than 90% of wattpad writers today

    • @prayinq
      @prayinq Год назад +67

      😭

    • @PearllDoubleL
      @PearllDoubleL Год назад +116

      Why is this true

    • @Nasoko-q7d
      @Nasoko-q7d Год назад +80

      No like actually...

    • @Sansibit
      @Sansibit Год назад +18

      brooo

    • @misterfightclub
      @misterfightclub Год назад +113

      As a wattpad writer this is completely true my stories belong in the trash scratch that they are the entire dumpster

  • @peeology
    @peeology Год назад +3856

    “if burrito runs out, turn into a cannibal” got me crying💀

    • @Faline_San
      @Faline_San  Год назад +938

      12 year old me had some form of humour I’ll give it to her🙏

    • @anaverse0_0
      @anaverse0_0 Год назад +136

      @@Faline_San and the abs were so real that they didn't come off lmaoo

    • @laughing_wheezing
      @laughing_wheezing 10 месяцев назад +26

      *hands you a tissue*

    • @ChocolateBunny-tb9kx
      @ChocolateBunny-tb9kx 5 месяцев назад +13

      @@laughing_wheezing*snatches the tissue and eats it despite being five months*

    • @DogBat
      @DogBat 2 месяца назад +4

      Literally me

  • @Priya44888
    @Priya44888 Год назад +8575

    Faline writing an lgbtq fan fiction when 12, WHAT A KING

  • @harnaazbaweja2411
    @harnaazbaweja2411 Год назад +1380

    BOTH THE CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS OF SHAGUA AND CHRIS BEING AUTISM TRAITS LISTED OUT *UNINTENTIONALLY* (TO THE DOT) IS THE FUNNIEST THING IVE EVER EXPERIENCED I CANT-

    • @not-so-obvious_autism777
      @not-so-obvious_autism777 8 месяцев назад +74

      As someone who’s autistic I agree (I only just now noticed Chris’ goofy gabber behavior when you pointed it out) 😂😂

  • @teriberi
    @teriberi Год назад +29611

    cannot believe faline invented literature when he was 12

    • @katiethewise
      @katiethewise Год назад +2113

      actually he invented it in the womb

    • @Jellyfish111
      @Jellyfish111 Год назад +905

      @@S0m3B0z0OnTheInternet actually he invented it the moment he was fertilized

    • @bubble._.gum2
      @bubble._.gum2 Год назад +496

      Broo faline is "he" not "she"😳😳😳😳 I'm shocked 😳 I didn't knew thatt

    • @thyvee3870
      @thyvee3870 Год назад +1173

      @@bubble._.gum2 fal uses any pronouns but prefers he/him

    • @bubble._.gum2
      @bubble._.gum2 Год назад +386

      @@thyvee3870 ooo okkk thank you for letting me know ❣️🤗

  • @cherival.1207
    @cherival.1207 Год назад +6119

    I swear Lina is the only sane person that has working braincells out of all these characters

    • @SCARAA592
      @SCARAA592 Год назад +222

      Think u meant lina but,yes

    • @cherival.1207
      @cherival.1207 Год назад +84

      @@SCARAA592 yea I just realised and holy Jesus,how the hell did I get that many likes-

    • @SCARAA592
      @SCARAA592 Год назад +14

      @@cherival.1207 idk

    • @hemalchudasama1230
      @hemalchudasama1230 Год назад +6

      @@SCARAA592 yuuuuuuusssssssssus

    • @noahmontesluna
      @noahmontesluna Год назад +2

      Fr

  • @SqualorOpera
    @SqualorOpera Год назад +4976

    What’s weird is that this is actually one of the higher quality creepypasta fanfictions I’ve seen

    • @SqualorOpera
      @SqualorOpera Год назад +255

      13yo me was hanging on by a thread okay don’t judge me

    • @Lazy_.Lavender
      @Lazy_.Lavender Год назад +28

      Wowsers!

    • @not-so-obvious_autism777
      @not-so-obvious_autism777 Год назад +69

      Oh god…
      And that’s probably only cuz Faline was acting it out…

    • @SqualorOpera
      @SqualorOpera Год назад +111

      Nah I mean the fact that at least some of the lines are pretty funny if you squint. I've seen way worse.

    • @PowerSpirit50
      @PowerSpirit50 Год назад +7

      For real

  • @Moth_is_a_soullessbeing
    @Moth_is_a_soullessbeing Год назад +848

    Why do I want to see Faline read the rest of the Creepypasta fanfiction-
    💀

  • @koiifsh
    @koiifsh Год назад +3916

    once again, faline has proved that he's capable of anything- from cooking, to cutting hair, to writing. what can't he do?

    • @miagatwa2457
      @miagatwa2457 Год назад +31

      I thought that they’re a girl, did anything change ?

    • @frosty2847
      @frosty2847 Год назад +15

      he? wasn't it a she?

    • @koiifsh
      @koiifsh Год назад +259

      idk fal has said they like he/him pronouns

    • @miagatwa2457
      @miagatwa2457 Год назад +16

      @@koiifsh oh! Thanks for explaining

    • @honeyhoney6920
      @honeyhoney6920 Год назад +179

      If I remember correctly they use all pronouns but prefer he/him

  • @slimyduck2140
    @slimyduck2140 Год назад +716

    12 years old Faline is a genius comedy writer tbh

  • @kazuhasnakuweed
    @kazuhasnakuweed Год назад +2463

    SO I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE TO HAVE BEEF WITH JUSTIN BIEBER FOR NO REASON AT ALL AT 12 💀

    • @Bianca-iz5wk
      @Bianca-iz5wk Год назад +90

      No you weren't 💀

    • @adorzai
      @adorzai Год назад +145

      i used to print photos of justin bieber and smack him saying “oh oh oh” referring to the song baby..

    • @masonjar1405
      @masonjar1405 Год назад +145

      me and my friends when we were 9 would scream during recess imagining that justin bieber was stalking us 💀

    • @adorzai
      @adorzai Год назад +57

      @@masonjar1405 stop, that sounds like smth jd do

    • @forgotten_lumis5595
      @forgotten_lumis5595 Год назад +65

      Why is this such a common experience- I'm so confused-

  • @snake-stuff
    @snake-stuff Год назад +396

    'I'm your local barista'
    Faline: yeah
    like 5 minutes later
    'I'm a barista'
    Faline: *FLABBERGASTED*

  • @raizero1330
    @raizero1330 Год назад +3120

    The writing Faline San brings to us through her great usage of pathos,logos, rhetorical choice, diction so on so forth is a testament to her expertise as an avid writer. It truly does show us the difference between the talent of a A+ college student and us meagerly mortals. I love her so much her writing inspires me so much. It is a true inspiration to our generation, she will save us from all garbage writing. The greatest writer of all Faline San

    • @raizero1330
      @raizero1330 Год назад +51

      I really do love your videos though, Faline san, it really does make me happy to know that you hearted my video. I appreciate it alot that it you hearted it, thank you so much. :D

    • @moonxliqht
      @moonxliqht Год назад +49

      don't forget the ethos citing other authors such as the bible to his credibility

    • @ricaboo9304
      @ricaboo9304 Год назад +3

      The likes are almost to 666 please

    • @xueyiyumiko
      @xueyiyumiko Год назад +4

      I just learned those words today, what a great timing

    • @Justarandomwierdo
      @Justarandomwierdo Год назад +2

      Tf

  • @mistywindow16
    @mistywindow16 Год назад +1788

    The absolute balls that Faline has to read his own fanfic for us

    • @linterela
      @linterela Год назад +16

      FALINE IS A GUY!?!??!

    • @catson2518
      @catson2518 Год назад +62

      @@aprilmarieabbygailesalazar854 i don't think that's how you say that. but yes he does go by he/him pronouns.

    • @ElliotSunshine
      @ElliotSunshine Год назад +55

      To everyone here, he goes by any but likes he the most :)

    • @Mooniastar_13
      @Mooniastar_13 Год назад +15

      @@linterelanot necessarily but he does use he/him/she?/her?/they/them pronouns they prefer he/him and I think they/them

    • @linterela
      @linterela Год назад

      @@Mooniastar_13 does faline use she/he/they?

  • @I_always_have_been_Daniel49
    @I_always_have_been_Daniel49 Год назад +3223

    “I dyed my hair beige olive to match my complection, so now I look really BALD”
    I lost it with this. Best line ever 🤣

  • @Salem-135
    @Salem-135 6 месяцев назад +168

    "The bushes have evolved." is by far my fav line of this whole thing lmfao 😭

    • @Simpfication
      @Simpfication 2 месяца назад

      Im using that

    • @heathers.cornnuts
      @heathers.cornnuts Месяц назад

      @@Simpfication THE BUSHES HAVE EVOLVED
      MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ASNWERED

  • @oDerps
    @oDerps Год назад +584

    Faline went through all the cringy phases 💀

    • @floraeuphoria
      @floraeuphoria Год назад +28

      I would like to not be reminded of those times thx

    • @izoto._mangoes
      @izoto._mangoes Год назад +7

      oh no
      i'm afraid of my (past) self

    • @nohintshere
      @nohintshere Год назад +7

      the only one i didn't have was a creepypasta phase

  • @CairoCreations
    @CairoCreations Год назад +1472

    Okay but why is some of her writing actually really witty and charming. If I found them I would read the hell outta these.

    • @k-pop_adractive3401
      @k-pop_adractive3401 Год назад +29

      he goes by he/him ^^^

    • @iranamisatsuki
      @iranamisatsuki Год назад +61

      @@k-pop_adractive3401 don’t they go by he/they/she?

    • @loveetrella
      @loveetrella Год назад +116

      @@k-pop_adractive3401 they go by any prns not just he/him :)

    • @Savey1
      @Savey1 Год назад +83

      Me brain trying to process what pronouns to use reading the reply’s 🤨🤷‍♀️🧌

    • @cece1117
      @cece1117 Год назад +10

      @@ThatOneDoomerNeco no.

  • @patatipatata4990
    @patatipatata4990 Год назад +145

    I couldn't stop cracking up, this fanfiction is comedy gold (even if 50% unintentionally), how does a 12 year old have a better understanding of humor on his "not-like-other-girls" phase than some actual comedians out there

  • @_stasia_
    @_stasia_ Год назад +836

    Not me trying so hard not to laugh at faline’s talented acting and writing/poetry skills 💀
    Edit : they’re poifect

  • @Frog_toaster
    @Frog_toaster Год назад +1001

    The acting was incredible and really enhanced the experience, Faline is a master at his craft truly

    • @crafty_viv2498
      @crafty_viv2498 Год назад +2

      I’m confused, what are falines pronouns?

    • @yokune
      @yokune Год назад +7

      @@crafty_viv2498 any but prefers he/him

  • @chuubaccatheworld9075
    @chuubaccatheworld9075 Год назад +1143

    Let’s have a moment of silence for Faline, who has exposed his dark past and possibly scarred himself for our entertainment

    • @naturalspringwater128
      @naturalspringwater128 Год назад +4

      This is a girl.

    • @politecat7782
      @politecat7782 Год назад +49

      @@naturalspringwater128 He uses all pronouns but perfers He/Him

    • @creamkyn
      @creamkyn Год назад +9

      Honestly, I have even worse ones than Fal's fic.. 😭

    • @Kaeyathrei-Kayak-
      @Kaeyathrei-Kayak- Год назад

      @@naturalspringwater128 Science and society left the chat

    • @laylalili9415
      @laylalili9415 Год назад

      ​@@creamkyn Same 😭 I have one called from Hunter to vampire and I swear it's so embarrassing 😭😭

  • @tripzone9119
    @tripzone9119 4 месяца назад +32

    PLEEEEEEEASSE CO TINUE READING THE CREEPYPASTA ONE. NEVER IN MY LIFE HAVE I EVER THOUGHT I WOULD ACTUALLY LIKE ONE OF THESE

  • @l0vell33
    @l0vell33 Год назад +766

    Not even five minutes into the video and I'm already laughing so hard, Faline is too good of a content creator-

    • @certifiedbruhmoment85
      @certifiedbruhmoment85 Год назад +16

      Genuinely the funniest Faline video. Second only to the harassing online haters one.

  • @sharalinn2639
    @sharalinn2639 Год назад +2274

    4:08 I'M CRYING THE WAY HE JUMPED
    _I genuinely don't know whether this is a crackfic or not, young Faline was hilarious ngl 💀_

    • @teddybearsinthebox9318
      @teddybearsinthebox9318 Год назад +98

      ZIM ZALA BIM ZIM ZIM ZALA BIM ZIM ZIM ZOLA BIM ZIM ZEEEEEEEEEEEIEIEIIIIIIIIM

    • @cqiome
      @cqiome Год назад +37

      @@teddybearsinthebox9318 same girl, same.

    • @wakeyqq4229
      @wakeyqq4229 Год назад +22

      @@teddybearsinthebox9318 agreed

    • @gumyfmf3
      @gumyfmf3 Год назад +20

      @@teddybearsinthebox9318 true yes

    • @pxrklvr6957
      @pxrklvr6957 Год назад +17

      @@teddybearsinthebox9318 yep as u do

  • @Clau3734
    @Clau3734 Год назад +625

    We all tried to write a wattpad story when we were in middle school thinking it would become world famous didn't we?
    *cries in 4 languages*

    • @iamreally_bored
      @iamreally_bored Год назад +8

      Yea😭😭😭😭😭

    • @aquaplush7531
      @aquaplush7531 Год назад +33

      I once got over 1k views on a fanfic, so I like to say that I made it to that famous level….
      *sobbing*

    • @lanjinling-wuqian
      @lanjinling-wuqian Год назад +5

      Non, I tried creating a novel star wars type, idiot me couldn't even finish the intro.

    • @socialistrepublicofvietnam1500
      @socialistrepublicofvietnam1500 Год назад +2

      Thankfully, I actually didn't
      I did make fanfiction, I just didn't think I would become world-famous

    • @Ava_CookiDough
      @Ava_CookiDough Год назад +3

      I write wrestling fan fics (bc that’s like the only fandom I actually know lol) and I would say I’m sort of popular in that category lol

  • @Duckie___
    @Duckie___ Год назад +59

    If you take the sentence, “if burrito runs out, turn into a cannibal.” Out of context it is the funniest thing I would have ever heard.

    • @DogBat
      @DogBat 2 месяца назад +1

      Literally me

  • @jo4183
    @jo4183 Год назад +5453

    The fact that 12 year old Faline named his character “idiot” in Chinese makes me 100% happier.
    Also,your new pronoun to me is waffle.
    Edit:Okay but I am not transphobic. I know Faline prefers He/him pronouns and I perfectly respect him for it! If I offended anyone,sorry.
    I just saw the pinned comment and wanted to make a quick joke. Again,i’m sorry.

    • @marsh1159
      @marsh1159 Год назад +198

      Waffle/Waffle

    • @jo4183
      @jo4183 Год назад +56

      @@marsh1159 Yes.

    • @sirthisisawendys811
      @sirthisisawendys811 Год назад +127

      @@marsh1159 Waffle/Pancake

    • @leika_0
      @leika_0 Год назад +66

      Mine for Faline would be walmartbag/walmartbag

    • @Rissba
      @Rissba Год назад +33

      @「•Kae! 일리 ツ 」 pancake/pancake self with very very extremely real abs

  • @dangernoodledee111
    @dangernoodledee111 Год назад +2086

    I came in expecting a bit of cringe, only to find my exact sense of humor. I’d honestly like to read more about the adventures of Lina and Shagwa, as narrated by Shagwa because her neurodivergent swagger is everything to me. There are “not like other girls”, and then there are “ACTUALLY not like other girls” (in an autistic way where you’re not even trying to be quirky, and you just end up seeming unhinged), and Shagwa is the latter. I love her.

  • @oatmeallemons9676
    @oatmeallemons9676 Год назад +1051

    12 year old you was actually a very talented writer for their age, a few of the jokes actually made me laugh with that first story. Wish I was that good at writing at that age

  • @PastelHime
    @PastelHime Год назад +126

    15:03 LMAO??? 😭 I DIDN'T EXPECT THAT???

  • @moonlight_dulcet
    @moonlight_dulcet Год назад +971

    i'm actually so interested in Chris and Jason now,, i need to know what happens. do they fall in love? do they hate each other? is it both? now i'm tempted to write my own fanfic about those two
    edit: well it's been revealed that Faline's favourite relationship dynamic is antisocial barista x egotistical jock i guess

    • @yeshica
      @yeshica Год назад +33

      Bro if u actually did make that ff lmk imma read it lol

    • @adorzai
      @adorzai Год назад +23

      don’t be shy when u make the story share it

    • @rikz056
      @rikz056 Год назад +3

      BRO SAME

    • @user-bx6hm5xk1h
      @user-bx6hm5xk1h Год назад +2

      im your 500TH like😍

    • @PastelHime
      @PastelHime Год назад +11

      I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT THEY'RE KINDA INTERESTING ACTUALLY 😭

  • @menhera758
    @menhera758 Год назад +419

    Petition to make faline read the rest of these stories

  • @yachimylove
    @yachimylove Год назад +663

    the amount of will to verbally express your 12 year old fanfic is honestly insane.
    I SPELT AMOUNT WRONG JESUS NO KILL ME IN JERUSALEM IM DONE

    • @concentrateddarkmatter7991
      @concentrateddarkmatter7991 Год назад +28

      JESUS NO KILL ME IN JERUSALEM
      im using this

    • @yusinu6642
      @yusinu6642 Год назад +7

      @@concentrateddarkmatter7991 I know right it’s so good

    • @dakkkksh
      @dakkkksh Год назад +5

      MITSKI

    • @yachimylove
      @yachimylove Год назад +3

      mitsiki teaches you strange things in life. god forbid this is the reason why hell is waiting for me.

    • @ghostytrickster8458
      @ghostytrickster8458 Год назад +1

      I BETTER ACE THAT INTERVIEWWWW

  • @personified3500
    @personified3500 Год назад +247

    “We have food, water and shelter”
    “You mean half a burrito, sweat and an umbrella”😂
    The way you speak and write is something I admire, also your sense of humor❤

  • @sadwasdead5065
    @sadwasdead5065 Год назад +178

    the first story is unironically good. like, i genuinely laughed. you were good writer.
    edit: ok the second one is simply hilarious

  • @hafsahshadow2933
    @hafsahshadow2933 Год назад +304

    Genuinely love how all of us former fanfic writers have said their character loses control but never specified what that meant

  • @P.Jdemonlol
    @P.Jdemonlol Год назад +219

    The fact that Faline has better acting skills than I can do reading a whole entire ass text in front of a camera.

  • @kristi_11
    @kristi_11 Год назад +118

    Faline deserves a grammy award for the significant acting skills. it should be written down in history books.

  • @coledibiase5971
    @coledibiase5971 Год назад +256

    When I was 13, I wrote a story, a whole novel actually, about a crew of asteroid miners who end up getting getting mixed up in a conspiracy to because some of the crew were selling some of the materials they were mining to "Africa."
    I remember being disappointed in the book because I went of track and it was supposed to be about aliens but I somewhere along the way go lost.
    But now at 20 I found the book, read it, and liked it so much I'm writing it again with proper spelling, punctuation and a story that makes sense and I plan to actually publish it to wattpad.
    Turns out most of my preteen and early teenage ideas for books weren't actually too bad, I just wasn't smart enough to write them.

    • @sophiasuper4887
      @sophiasuper4887 Год назад +10

      That sounds awesome! Good luck! 👍🏻

    • @victorhurwitz5559
      @victorhurwitz5559 10 месяцев назад +9

      Go for it man.

    • @not-so-obvious_autism777
      @not-so-obvious_autism777 8 месяцев назад +3

      YO BRO I NEED TO READ THIS

    • @klaou9154
      @klaou9154 8 месяцев назад +8

      You are making me happy😭I'm 16 and I'm writing a story that I have developed in my mind and I was scared that it'd turn out cringy because of my young age...This gave me some reassurance

    • @not-so-obvious_autism777
      @not-so-obvious_autism777 6 месяцев назад +1

      DROP THE NAME PLEASE

  • @Nahhhhh_1002
    @Nahhhhh_1002 Год назад +491

    I loved the Chris and Jason story. Why did I want it to be like a movie help. Just imagine Faline doing a movie about these two 😂 it’s just too wholesome and weird so nice.

    • @skinkshamer
      @skinkshamer Год назад +19

      Fanfiction exists for a reason, chief. You know the drill.

  • @Gemina_
    @Gemina_ Год назад +489

    How does Faline build up the nerve to look at the things she did when she was younger? (Very impressed and concerned at the same time

  • @kemiruisbacklol
    @kemiruisbacklol 5 месяцев назад +13

    They way faline instantly loved lina the second she reads about her 😭🙏

  • @quantumlawyer
    @quantumlawyer Год назад +801

    Petition for Faline to continue writing more fanfictions and stories
    Bro is on Shakespeare level

  • @alyx-221b
    @alyx-221b Год назад +458

    Honestly, Faline is a flawless actor + a literacy genius. This may seem like a joke, but this absolutely made my day, so I think you definitely deserve a bid round of applause, and a pay raise

  • @ilik3fluffycats
    @ilik3fluffycats Год назад +178

    i can’t believe faline created this fine piece of literature at only 12 years old, i hope this piece of art will be read in future literature classes.

  • @katalystkatapatheticalyssa5987
    @katalystkatapatheticalyssa5987 Год назад +89

    Creepypasta fanfic is far less cringey than a lot of other fandoms out there.
    You came out alright.

    • @osamudazaiAHHH
      @osamudazaiAHHH 11 месяцев назад +3

      the bsd ones in the corner crying

    • @Crystals1297
      @Crystals1297 11 месяцев назад +1

      ​@@osamudazaiAHHHHelp-

    • @osamudazaiAHHH
      @osamudazaiAHHH 11 месяцев назад

      @@Crystals1297 OMG-

    • @osamudazaiAHHH
      @osamudazaiAHHH 11 месяцев назад

      @@Crystals1297 another BSD fan oh I didn't expect that LMAOH

    • @Crystals1297
      @Crystals1297 11 месяцев назад

      @@osamudazaiAHHH Bsd fans are rarely found out in the wild lol-

  • @UnKnown-tv1fx
    @UnKnown-tv1fx Год назад +173

    Really your recreation of the fanfics are gold.
    I blame you for this abdominal pain that I got from trying to hold back my laughter so as not to wake up my sister.

    • @zoainaiip
      @zoainaiip Год назад +2

      So do you spoil your little sister with piggybacks rides or….

    • @oliveoil4368
      @oliveoil4368 Год назад +9

      u giving jason's vibes fr

  • @The_BlOb
    @The_BlOb Год назад +310

    Good at cosplaying, acting AND writing? This man is insane!

    • @Riedeltje
      @Riedeltje Год назад +17

      Don't forget about art, he is a multitalented icon

    • @khushalibheemarsetty6021
      @khushalibheemarsetty6021 Год назад

      ....'he' is a girl.

    • @The_BlOb
      @The_BlOb Год назад +1

      @@khushalibheemarsetty6021 pfft okay

    • @user-km5lo2ml5f
      @user-km5lo2ml5f Месяц назад

      @@The_BlObwhat did they say?

    • @The_BlOb
      @The_BlOb Месяц назад

      @@user-km5lo2ml5f No clue, it's been over a year now 😭

  • @coriander1521
    @coriander1521 Год назад +273

    Going through old writing is a whole new level of experience and I’m glad Faline has the absolute power to go through it lol

  • @somerandomguy-3102
    @somerandomguy-3102 Год назад +40

    13:53 ive never seen someone use "hoo haa" to represent that lol

  • @thanushreekundhanshree9966
    @thanushreekundhanshree9966 Год назад +184

    I like the way 12 yr old faline wrote this creative story and 18 year old faline narrating it lol I enjoyed a lot faline is ruling the world right now

  • @WhoTookSpecimen
    @WhoTookSpecimen Год назад +1776

    10:14 faline was so talented as a kid, he wrote sephiroth into his fanfiction

    • @Simply..Lychee.
      @Simply..Lychee. Год назад +38

      Wait-
      Faline is HE?!

    • @Jo-dk9my
      @Jo-dk9my Год назад +68

      Oh no, they just don’t really care what pronouns you use for them :D

    • @acatwithsunglasses2168
      @acatwithsunglasses2168 Год назад +5

      @@Simply..Lychee. yea.... isn't she a girl...??

    • @hamptermanterhunter9903
      @hamptermanterhunter9903 Год назад +20

      @@acatwithsunglasses2168 both

    • @eudaimonixx9909
      @eudaimonixx9909 Год назад

      @@acatwithsunglasses2168 girl/boy can usewhatever pronouns they're most comfortable with

  • @aaz-ng7kq
    @aaz-ng7kq Год назад +776

    how are your writing skills so good at 12,if i wrote this at 12 i wouldn’t be a failure for my parents

    • @aaz-ng7kq
      @aaz-ng7kq Год назад +8

      @EXE motive it's okay dw with practice and with a lot of reading if u want u can become better at it too

    • @idontknowwhatimdoinghere
      @idontknowwhatimdoinghere Год назад +24

      Reading books, articles, magazines, just general literature (that is well written OFC) can help.

    • @solo-juli4339
      @solo-juli4339 Год назад +4

      Actually, its posible. I also have good writing skills, mostly because i spend my free time writing and improving. Writing is as hard as learning any other skill, belive me.

  • @shoenlow1129
    @shoenlow1129 8 месяцев назад +97

    Are we just going to ignore the fact that Faline can do a cartwheel flawlessly?

  • @luniivii
    @luniivii Год назад +550

    "THE BUSHES HAS EVOLVED. MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED." somehow this is funnier than anything ive ever heard im literally dying 😭😭

  • @NotalinaIguess
    @NotalinaIguess Год назад +146

    Thank you Faline for this high quality video. The acting is off the charts 📈

  • @mimuhuye1789
    @mimuhuye1789 Год назад +266

    Faline's acting was so good it made my thighs clap so hard It flew and star's the new euphoria season from the motivation of listening to this masterpiece.

  • @_hihi_0.0
    @_hihi_0.0 Год назад +26

    PLEASE FALINE, make more fanfic videos, I’m so intrigued! I love the little Fal series sm

  • @viishahb
    @viishahb Год назад +197

    i would become friends w/ the 12 year old faline when i was a child. i used to write fanfics based on katy perry songs. dedicatedly. i remember writing a little vignette where 3 besties who all were very sexy and beautiful, lived in california. they often went to beaches with their 'shared' dog, Nasen. (idfk what the name means). however, one of the girls, Linda, fell ill to a disease which could only be cured by an unknown elixir. linda suffered the curse that every guy she dated cheated on her, in the worst ways. i wrote 6 chapters more, where they did adventures and finally found out that the mystery elixir was the another bestie, Sasha's... breast...produce... uh so anyway the 3rd bestie, Nalie, gets really happy and brings one of those red paper cups to the beach, and Linda, well, does that. and is cured, realising that she wants to date Sasha. they all look at the sunset happily. the end. [INSPIRED BY CALIFORNIA GIRLS- KATY PERRY.]

    • @mmaantj
      @mmaantj Год назад +44

      what did i just read

    • @letmetakeajormungandrattha8591
      @letmetakeajormungandrattha8591 Год назад +31

      I'm losing my mind I want to read this firsthand

    • @viishahb
      @viishahb Год назад +41

      @@letmetakeajormungandrattha8591 it happily garnered 1k reads before my mom found out abt my account and i had to delete it

    • @sanviiii888_
      @sanviiii888_ Год назад +10

      W h a t

  • @Cheriobowl
    @Cheriobowl Год назад +1412

    As a twelve year old who writes fanfic this is too relatable

  • @Ombre6092
    @Ombre6092 Год назад +299

    The intro already indicated that this video is gonna be amazing 😌
    Three minutes in and I’m already mesmerized by the acting 🤩
    This is the best thing I’ve ever seen in my whole life. The acting is just too good. Oh and, the abs were just so *chefs kiss*

  • @parttime.loverr
    @parttime.loverr 8 месяцев назад +16

    please make the next one 'finishing the fanfictions i started when i was 12' 😭

  • @itsnlee
    @itsnlee Год назад +197

    Honestly the production value of this adaptation is stellar. There’s costume, set design, character development, humour, immersive world building, solid dialogue and excellent editing that makes it enjoyable for the viewer. The pacing furthermore, is not jarring in the slightest.
    The acting portrays the characters so vividly and it’s clear Faline has a lot of screen presence that makes the whole storytelling very atmospheric to the viewer.

  • @ellas.2744
    @ellas.2744 Год назад +313

    I used to be on wattpad and I have to say this is legitimately better than most of the fics they have there. First off all, your grammar is already ahead of 90% of the fics 😂Doesn't matter what your plot is, as long as you got the grammar down your fic is considered supreme.

    • @Strikeyvall
      @Strikeyvall Год назад +12

      agreed- no one uses grammar on wattpad, everyone just writes like 6 year olds

    • @wrg_101
      @wrg_101 Год назад +8

      ​@@Strikeyvallthe eyesore fanfics where it's all small letters and no punctuation at all

  • @dumpster-ratt
    @dumpster-ratt Год назад +56

    The acting was the best thing I've seen in my life
    You go Shagua 💀

  • @summer5413
    @summer5413 Год назад +55

    4:34 I CHOKED ON MY TEA AND LAUGHED

  • @bertmobile
    @bertmobile Год назад +205

    we need a sequel. i must hear all of shagua/stitches's story. i must know how this ends.

  • @amuuwu
    @amuuwu Год назад +98

    I love how Faline acts the scenes moving like a character from Episode, it really adds to the whole thing

  • @kforkookie909
    @kforkookie909 Год назад +156

    Lets take a moments to appreciate the CARTWHEEL 12:47

  • @not-so-obvious_autism777
    @not-so-obvious_autism777 Год назад +28

    4:45 LMAO WHY DID THIS HAVE ME DYING THE FIRST FEW TIMES I REWINDED IT 😭😭😭 IT’S JUST THE “SWEATING” MOTION FOR ME LMAO😭😭😭😭

  • @durgayini
    @durgayini Год назад +101

    7:00 i like how she trembles like she's possessed

  • @k0cOm0cO
    @k0cOm0cO Год назад +104

    10:55
    "They can't know that I'm Ed sHiRaNn"
    Love your videos btw!
    ❤🧡💛💚💙💜

    • @Mag3.1415
      @Mag3.1415 Год назад

      Sheeran*

    • @Alexthegoober
      @Alexthegoober 11 месяцев назад +3

      @@Mag3.1415that’s part of the joke

  • @chocolateaddictedartist5924
    @chocolateaddictedartist5924 Год назад +64

    This is the most beautiful fanfiction I've ever read. This needs to be taught in universities, it brought me to tears. Wonderful job, Faline San.

  • @digi-demon
    @digi-demon Год назад +46

    Can we talk about how how faline wrote all the chapters of the creepypasta one within minutes of each other?? Like that’s dedication

    • @reyphobic
      @reyphobic 11 месяцев назад +2

      maybe he was just reviewing it after writing idk

    • @victorhurwitz5559
      @victorhurwitz5559 10 месяцев назад +1

      Who knows?

  • @honeybearrr
    @honeybearrr Год назад +114

    Can we have a part 2? This is so hilarious and I can relate so much, it's like seeing a 12 year old me reading all this fanfics and enjoying every moment of it lmaoo

  • @jellybear8799
    @jellybear8799 Год назад +210

    12 year old Faline invented "I'm not like other girls" something we all appreciate

  • @anandikabanduni8419
    @anandikabanduni8419 Год назад +173

    I love that she put so much effort into acting her stories out

  • @ParanormalParty1
    @ParanormalParty1 8 месяцев назад +10

    I physically NEED to see a continuation of the creepypasta story or I will explode.

  • @iqbalbahar3583
    @iqbalbahar3583 Год назад +123

    For all we know Jason could have done the hoo haa with 90 different inanimate objects

  • @suripii5026
    @suripii5026 Год назад +64

    Thank you Faline! You made my day again 😭 My stomach is hurting from laughing 💀✋ The acting is literally 10/10.

  • @cottagebitch
    @cottagebitch Год назад +71

    13:30 S-S-S-Sans? Is that you senpai?/?

  • @shimizohra4689
    @shimizohra4689 5 месяцев назад +6

    "OMGGG KEEP YOUR NACHOS CALM LADYYY 🗣️🔥"

  • @21stcenturyplaguedoctor
    @21stcenturyplaguedoctor Год назад +68

    A lot of this feels like it could genuinely be written as parody. It’s amazing!

  • @hellochildren3780
    @hellochildren3780 Год назад +122

    Faline as a 12 year old writing danfic is iconic. I'm going to compare every single fanfic I read from now on to this masterpiece. Also my name is Chris and I can confirm everything about the fanfiction is true.

  • @sanashi27
    @sanashi27 Год назад +29

    I'm amazed at what this video has. I thought you're just gonna do a dramatic reading (with some added commentary) but you acted them out, too! In "costume"! That's dedication right there. The stories were fun to listen to and reminded me of my own writing around the same age.

  • @willow0.0
    @willow0.0 Год назад +30

    I love the way he said “Stiches” 5:09

  • @user-yx6td3ty1r
    @user-yx6td3ty1r Год назад +178

    Chris’s monologue sounds like a dating profile 💀

  • @cc_trash
    @cc_trash Год назад +248

    I think the funniest part about the first fanfic is you accidentally making Shagua neurodivergent

  • @Mowchii08
    @Mowchii08 Год назад +667

    I love how in the creepy pasta fan fic, Fal turned it from some cringey, edgy story to a literal comedy skit. Love the work 😎
    Edit: 6:54 this entire section made me lose my marbles for a while 💀💀

  • @The_local_gay_raccoon
    @The_local_gay_raccoon 11 месяцев назад +29

    “I shat my pants and wet the bed”
    -Faline 2023

  • @Live_Laugh_Love_Jecka
    @Live_Laugh_Love_Jecka Год назад +790

    Lina is a whole mood here while Shagua is basically having
    a seizure the entire time
    *I live for that kind of story*

    • @Nella_nova
      @Nella_nova Год назад +17

      s a m e

    • @noname8354
      @noname8354 Год назад +8

      I honestly relate to Lina and she's such a fun character

    • @user-fz2gc2nc4g
      @user-fz2gc2nc4g Год назад +1

      i live for this kind of comment

  • @Star_fish877
    @Star_fish877 Год назад +48

    I absolutely need a continuation of the creepypasta one, it’s a very emotional and moving story and your acting was Oscar worthy it brought tears to my eyes 🥲

  • @misterfightclub
    @misterfightclub Год назад +113

    5:28 jump scare warning

  • @Ariel-nd8rp
    @Ariel-nd8rp Месяц назад +2

    I want to comment so much on the video, literally your action makes the story more funny and interesting