Ehh, your voice acting is good and clear, but.... That's about the only good thing here. The story it's self is poorly written, contradictory, and, requiring of an effort in suspension of disbelief, it simply gives no payout for. At it's base level, it neglects a baisic level, in the discussion of ai, it neglects any separation or appreciation for the three distinct concepts, of; intelligence, sentience, and sapience. Intelligence; the ability to abstract information, from large amounts of accumulated data, or, to display data rapidly. Sentience; to be aware of ones " self" , ounces limitations, abilities, and, role in the environment, as well as ones ability to effect the environment, to better achieve ones purposes, then through singular ability alone. Sapience; 4 basic characteristics; predictive modeling of scenarios, through various means, and, to guess at & plan for various outcomes, 2. Mimicry, through immigration or synthetic creation, of living things in ones environment, in order to better understand methods of interacting with it. 3. Extrapolation; the ability to look at past historical accounts, and, create possible outcomes for what could have been done differently, in order to create better outcomes in the future, and 4. Empathy; the ability to understand the motivations, short comings, and special abilities, of those different from ones self. They say that they themselves experimented with ai, to catastrophic effect, then, claim humanity with lack of forethought, in spite of having created fictions and modeling, in order to better prevent catastrophe. They chastise the loss of life in gladiatorial ancient sport, yet, both mock overpopulation decimating the planet, and, empathy to non sapient creatures. If they didn't value creatures radically different from them, they would never have evolved a concept to fly, let alone reach the stars. If they valued the group, they would ensure it's healthiest members, testing them the same way gladiatorial sports did. And, if they valued growth of the populace, they would not only adore cities, but, would not work with other members of the galactic community, as, they would instead pursue growing there own race. They LITERALLY had an alien mention the concept of evolution, yet, they seem to act as if the concepts of biodiversity, mutagens, and viruses, are foreign to them. As of there races are homogenous wholes, as of, they didn't have, and , couldn't conceive, of biological warfare, BEFORE unlocking there genome. They speak of altruism, yet, dismiss empathy, as illogical, while, describing sociopathy, the lack for forethought, which they were horrified at, as also foreign to them. The author clearly ether has, no concept of how society and socialization, philosophy, or, how the English language, or, any eurocentric language I could describe, works. The clearest point in which this is brought up, is the false presence the author gives, in calling the aliens " rational" , " diplomatic" , or " empathetic" , while, presenting humanity as irrational, with no socio cultural context, to justify it, instead of letting the characters actions and words speak for themselves, without such frivolous descriptors. Truly, ether this author performed not even the first session of edit and review, let alone the first three, to give themselves 4 options, as most do, or, they are some form of ai attempting to write the story, in which case.... Impressive, but, utterly lacking in contextual merrit. Else, the author should stick to writing post apocalyptic/ environmental stories, with little socialization, or " a boy and his dog" style stories, where, the main side characters, are non sentient or primitive creatures, which, only demonstrate specific qualities, as seen through the outlook of the pov character. Else, they should simply give up writing hfy. No middle schoolers book report, nore absurdist dinosaur pornography, has caused me such ire, as to treat it so unfavourably as this. Heck, " a pickle for the Knowing ones" , famed for it's lack of punctuation throughout the entirety of the book, has given me more joy to read. .... : /
Things have to edited for dramatic effect. Would you really want a story that runs for 24 hours, full of political droning ? It's a story channel, not C-Span. 😉🙂
That and they are giving negative talking points about humanity that their own council member races were censured for, meaning that their own collective is not as "peaceful and logical" as they are clearly trying to say they are compared to humanity. "Humans messing with bio engineering is dangerous!" "Werent (insert name of species)", recently might I add, censured for bio engineering and are already members of this "esteemed" council?" And the delegate giving the presentation was clearly biased and presented the majority of data that was only negative, and that being data that was primarily in the past, vs more recent changes, obviously in an attempt to sway the opinions of the council at large.
I got tired of the constant deathworld one upping. Ah yes a tier 8 deathworld. That's interesting. Hmmm a tier 13 deathworld-oh wait now it's a tier 14 deathworld? Ok, bud.
it IS good to hear you getting more comfy with your vocalizations with the characters in the stories, a big bonus for us listing to these enjoyable tales . THANK YOU !
@calumbutter6124 that's just paying attention, and can easily be forgotten or dismissed if the need serves you. Remembering the pain for burning your own had... not so easily dismissed.
Kyrak did terrible research on humanity. Like I get not having the time to understand all of our history but he doesnt understand literally any of what hes talking about.
It depends really. no matter which version of history we choose... to review the amount of atrocities human kind have committed cannot be understated. The founding of what Human's would call this so-called modern age were come on the back of unrepentant exploitation, slavery and genocide. Kyrak delivered a brief explanation for what we could see under observation. Human's allow their own to Starve to the multitude of tens of thousands per day... in the name of some - with too much - to enjoy a life of what they would call "luxury.". That any member of the council could overlook what they do to themselves, to the only planet they have ever inhabited... and consider these greedy, and illogical creatures something that we could either trust, or control are truly foolish. Humanities leaders do not abide by the commandments of the Gods they claim themselves to serve, Nor do They listen to the proclamations of scientists they employ. Worst yet they will not listen to the will of their people that their governing bodies are meant to edify and protect. So we would add them to the council believe that they are prepared to follow the laws of the council - prepared to listen and be guided by what the term they use - A Foreign Power? It would be quire foolish of us to reject empirical evidence before us. That is simply, if humanity the tools, they would fan the flames of war to unseat us if it meant that they line their coffers with our planets natural resources, our technology, and land.
@@ireallyreallyhategoogle Over Generalization? I understand how Kyrak's decision may have appeared hasty. However their is no fault in Kyrak's research, Kyrak need not to lay out each and every instance of the failings of humanity - as there are too many leave room for any fair judgement. Kyrak did humanity a favor for not going deeper than he did - for several points in history would not only exclude humanity from a seat on the council... but warrant the complete annihilation of the species. More Warlike and bloodthirsty than any that currently hold a seat at the council, Humans have caused more destruction to themselves and their own planet than rogue AI were capable of doing in several galaxies. Humans were given a chance to prove they can be more than their history and recent events suggest they are. A chance that is much more than they deserve, considering that if they do not change they could destroy themselves, and take half of the galaxy with them...
@@Shadowkey392 It's not about being right the first time, it's about methodology. He's just as wrong as Europeans declaring Africans had no souls so they could enslave them and calling Native Americans savages to steal their lands and exterminate them.
😊 enjoyed the reader/narrators style and delivery immensely. The galactic councils debate cleverly reflected a most human-like approach to deliberations... I'd like to thank the author for sharing avery enjoyable story. Uplifting entertainment is well appreciated these days. Thanks again! 🥰
"OI YA GITS, DON'T TALK TO ME ABOUT LOGIK! I WAS SENT TO ROUSE UP DA BOYZ! I AM TO PROFIT OF MORK AND GORK, AND ENTIRE WORLDS BURN IN OUR BOOTPRINTS. WE IS UMIES AMD EE WAS MADE TO FIGHT, AND WIN! WAAAAAAAAGH!"
I love this page !!! Not only are the stories well written, but the narration is top class.... Cheers to the narrator. He is definitely in the top 5, if not the top 3, of all the narrators on RUclips, and proves just how abysmal most the screen reader (I refuse to call them AI's) driven pages are !! 9.5/10
because that's what any kind of council or "united" body of elected individuals is. That is what government is. You think humanity is any different? Were you given the option and choice to be a member of your local government and decide whether or not to abide by its laws? Either you are accepted and ruled by the collective, or you are a rogue and get stomped.
We as a race are still too tribalistic and selfish to be accepted into a galactic community, but our curiousity, willingness to learn, and adaptability to what we learn are traits worth keeping is on a galactic radar, at least until armed forces and politicians get involved. Then the council might split humanity between the curious and the tribal, leave one on earth to rot while welcoming the other with open arms. This is coming from a real life alien (autistic person). Humanity cast me out at a young age, so i got to study humans as though i was an observer sent from another world.
They should've brought up the idea of genetic experiments being able to save lives or help the wounded. Even now we have prosthetic limbs and other such surgeries.
I think they were more concerned with the fact that humans tend to experiment without much regard to consequences. They were thinking more of worst case scenarios than best case. And looking at the vast majority of what most human technological innovations are put towards, many more of our breakthroughs are typically first put to use in our military than in any life saving applications as a trend.
@@Shadowkey392Cor fuc'n 'ell, got a proper fanatic 'ere, 'ent we, lads? Literally nothing about COVID or vaccines at all and he just goes off. What could make a mind like that? I interpreted the comment as being about alcohol. I took my medicine last night and am certainly ill this morning.
Contrary to popular beliefs, the Football War wasn't started due to the match itself. It just so happen that tensions between El Salvador and Honduras reached a peak during that time, and the football riots may or may not be the straw that broke the camel's back. The coincidence was amusing, but not as impactful as one might think to the overall conflict.
Tbh im not sure why but why do i think this is the exact reason no one as said anything to us let alone see any other intelligent life because we're just so damn confusing do the most random stuff that should and shouldn't work at the same time
Just a thought…. You might want to include the reader view window in your thumb nails. Lots of us out here are clicking on stories only to be disappointed by shitty AI readings. THANK YOU FOR A REAL EXPERIENCE!!!
Although the story is interesting and I enjoyed, there is always that same mistake. Why would aliens count time in years, decades and typical Earth measurements? Use some kind of star date, cycles, galactic rotations, what ever! Anything that doesn't involve time that Earth revolves around the Sun. It just ruins the immersion into the story.
I am disqualified from Illogical arguments and please note that the "Galactic Council" should be counselled in their own logic, since they are all miraculously speaking English in it's modern form, a language that is hard to understand just 1,000 years ago and 2,000 years ago it was non existent! The purview of these Galactic Council seems rather prodigious, in that they must have learnt to speak in not only a foreign, but also Alien language to them, therefore the logical conclusion is that they find English to be a very suitable means of communication and have broadly accepted it as if their own! This indicates they must have learned from humans, directly and specifically from the English speaking peoples of planet Earth and are very familiar with them, holding them normally in very high regard, so no real cause for concern, except that is for the two world wars that be could spread Inter Galactically if they choose to have a third world war, which seems very likely!
The author presents a very pessimistic and meme influenced view of humanity. It falls into the same trap of many science fiction authors. A very self hating view of us as a species based on current media and opinions of talking heads but not the bigger picture.
This is a VERY climate-mattters-more and planets are somehow important beyond harvesting everything for the system sized ship to protect humanity & anything we pickup from unscheduled natural disasters/the universe kinda story. So a lack of logical meaning in the story. Add in that literally another other species would go through the same issues humans face and yeah... Narration is good though!
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Your voice characterisations is what makes your story telling so compelling. I just close my eyes, and let my imagination does the rest.
Especially when a lot of AI will randomly switch voices, even in the middle of someone's dialogue.
@@Serahpin Exactly. But at least those channels guided me to r/FYH...
Ehh, your voice acting is good and clear, but.... That's about the only good thing here.
The story it's self is poorly written, contradictory, and, requiring of an effort in suspension of disbelief, it simply gives no payout for.
At it's base level, it neglects a baisic level, in the discussion of ai, it neglects any separation or appreciation for the three distinct concepts, of; intelligence, sentience, and sapience.
Intelligence; the ability to abstract information, from large amounts of accumulated data, or, to display data rapidly.
Sentience; to be aware of ones " self" , ounces limitations, abilities, and, role in the environment, as well as ones ability to effect the environment, to better achieve ones purposes, then through singular ability alone.
Sapience; 4 basic characteristics; predictive modeling of scenarios, through various means, and, to guess at & plan for various outcomes, 2. Mimicry, through immigration or synthetic creation, of living things in ones environment, in order to better understand methods of interacting with it. 3. Extrapolation; the ability to look at past historical accounts, and, create possible outcomes for what could have been done differently, in order to create better outcomes in the future, and 4. Empathy; the ability to understand the motivations, short comings, and special abilities, of those different from ones self.
They say that they themselves experimented with ai, to catastrophic effect, then, claim humanity with lack of forethought, in spite of having created fictions and modeling, in order to better prevent catastrophe.
They chastise the loss of life in gladiatorial ancient sport, yet, both mock overpopulation decimating the planet, and, empathy to non sapient creatures.
If they didn't value creatures radically different from them, they would never have evolved a concept to fly, let alone reach the stars. If they valued the group, they would ensure it's healthiest members, testing them the same way gladiatorial sports did. And, if they valued growth of the populace, they would not only adore cities, but, would not work with other members of the galactic community, as, they would instead pursue growing there own race.
They LITERALLY had an alien mention the concept of evolution, yet, they seem to act as if the concepts of biodiversity, mutagens, and viruses, are foreign to them. As of there races are homogenous wholes, as of, they didn't have, and , couldn't conceive, of biological warfare, BEFORE unlocking there genome.
They speak of altruism, yet, dismiss empathy, as illogical, while, describing sociopathy, the lack for forethought, which they were horrified at, as also foreign to them.
The author clearly ether has, no concept of how society and socialization, philosophy, or, how the English language, or, any eurocentric language I could describe, works.
The clearest point in which this is brought up, is the false presence the author gives, in calling the aliens " rational" , " diplomatic" , or " empathetic" , while, presenting humanity as irrational, with no socio cultural context, to justify it, instead of letting the characters actions and words speak for themselves, without such frivolous descriptors.
Truly, ether this author performed not even the first session of edit and review, let alone the first three, to give themselves 4 options, as most do, or, they are some form of ai attempting to write the story, in which case.... Impressive, but, utterly lacking in contextual merrit.
Else, the author should stick to writing post apocalyptic/ environmental stories, with little socialization, or " a boy and his dog" style stories, where, the main side characters, are non sentient or primitive creatures, which, only demonstrate specific qualities, as seen through the outlook of the pov character.
Else, they should simply give up writing hfy. No middle schoolers book report, nore absurdist dinosaur pornography, has caused me such ire, as to treat it so unfavourably as this.
Heck, " a pickle for the Knowing ones" , famed for it's lack of punctuation throughout the entirety of the book, has given me more joy to read.
....
: /
Love that the Galactic Council is making this momentous decision based on like 10 minutes worth of discussion and presentation.
lol
and it's basically just one guy making the decisions and calling it the council's decisions
Things have to edited for dramatic effect. Would you really want a story that runs for 24 hours, full of political droning ? It's a story channel, not C-Span. 😉🙂
@@ireallyreallyhategoogle Must be a council of democrats.
That and they are giving negative talking points about humanity that their own council member races were censured for, meaning that their own collective is not as "peaceful and logical" as they are clearly trying to say they are compared to humanity. "Humans messing with bio engineering is dangerous!" "Werent (insert name of species)", recently might I add, censured for bio engineering and are already members of this "esteemed" council?" And the delegate giving the presentation was clearly biased and presented the majority of data that was only negative, and that being data that was primarily in the past, vs more recent changes, obviously in an attempt to sway the opinions of the council at large.
Not calling Earth a deathworld just doesn't feel right to me.
Same
I got tired of the constant deathworld one upping. Ah yes a tier 8 deathworld. That's interesting. Hmmm a tier 13 deathworld-oh wait now it's a tier 14 deathworld? Ok, bud.
it IS good to hear you getting more comfy with your vocalizations with the characters in the stories, a big bonus for us listing to these enjoyable tales . THANK YOU !
If you don't fail you don't learn.
You can learn from the failure of others.
@calumbutter6124 that's just paying attention, and can easily be forgotten or dismissed if the need serves you. Remembering the pain for burning your own had... not so easily dismissed.
Kyrak did terrible research on humanity. Like I get not having the time to understand all of our history but he doesnt understand literally any of what hes talking about.
So much bias and over generalizations, i would say he's a complete failure as a scientist.
It depends really. no matter which version of history we choose... to review the amount of atrocities human kind have committed cannot be understated. The founding of what Human's would call this so-called modern age were come on the back of unrepentant exploitation, slavery and genocide. Kyrak delivered a brief explanation for what we could see under observation. Human's allow their own to Starve to the multitude of tens of thousands per day... in the name of some - with too much - to enjoy a life of what they would call "luxury.".
That any member of the council could overlook what they do to themselves, to the only planet they have ever inhabited... and consider these greedy, and illogical creatures something that we could either trust, or control are truly foolish. Humanities leaders do not abide by the commandments of the Gods they claim themselves to serve, Nor do They listen to the proclamations of scientists they employ. Worst yet they will not listen to the will of their people that their governing bodies are meant to edify and protect.
So we would add them to the council believe that they are prepared to follow the laws of the council - prepared to listen and be guided by what the term they use - A Foreign Power?
It would be quire foolish of us to reject empirical evidence before us. That is simply, if humanity the tools, they would fan the flames of war to unseat us if it meant that they line their coffers with our planets natural resources, our technology, and land.
@@ireallyreallyhategoogle Over Generalization? I understand how Kyrak's decision may have appeared hasty. However their is no fault in Kyrak's research, Kyrak need not to lay out each and every instance of the failings of humanity - as there are too many leave room for any fair judgement. Kyrak did humanity a favor for not going deeper than he did - for several points in history would not only exclude humanity from a seat on the council... but warrant the complete annihilation of the species.
More Warlike and bloodthirsty than any that currently hold a seat at the council, Humans have caused more destruction to themselves and their own planet than rogue AI were capable of doing in several galaxies. Humans were given a chance to prove they can be more than their history and recent events suggest they are. A chance that is much more than they deserve, considering that if they do not change they could destroy themselves, and take half of the galaxy with them...
@@ireallyreallyhategooglei wouldn’t. It’s not like WE got everything figured out right the first time.
@@Shadowkey392 It's not about being right the first time, it's about methodology.
He's just as wrong as Europeans declaring Africans had no souls so they could enslave them and calling Native Americans savages to steal their lands and exterminate them.
😊 enjoyed the reader/narrators style and delivery immensely. The galactic councils debate cleverly reflected a most human-like approach to deliberations... I'd like to thank the author for sharing avery enjoyable story. Uplifting entertainment is well appreciated these days. Thanks again! 🥰
"OI YA GITS, DON'T TALK TO ME ABOUT LOGIK! I WAS SENT TO ROUSE UP DA BOYZ! I AM TO PROFIT OF MORK AND GORK, AND ENTIRE WORLDS BURN IN OUR BOOTPRINTS. WE IS UMIES AMD EE WAS MADE TO FIGHT, AND WIN! WAAAAAAAAGH!"
As I listened to this galactic counsil, an answer came to mind.
Kurt Russell's last line to the alien in the movie The Thing.
" Yeah f*** you too ! "
I love this page !!! Not only are the stories well written, but the narration is top class....
Cheers to the narrator. He is definitely in the top 5, if not the top 3, of all the narrators on RUclips, and proves just how abysmal most the screen reader (I refuse to call them AI's) driven pages are !! 9.5/10
Thank you very much!
Why does it sound like species aren't given a choice but to join the council and be under its control?
because that's what any kind of council or "united" body of elected individuals is. That is what government is. You think humanity is any different? Were you given the option and choice to be a member of your local government and decide whether or not to abide by its laws? Either you are accepted and ruled by the collective, or you are a rogue and get stomped.
Ah the great football wars. truly a dark time.
lol'd when they called small fights over sports "wars"
It makes me laugh that these "logical" species couldn't grasp the obvious mathematical expression in music, both in terms of rhythm and pitch.
We as a race are still too tribalistic and selfish to be accepted into a galactic community, but our curiousity, willingness to learn, and adaptability to what we learn are traits worth keeping is on a galactic radar, at least until armed forces and politicians get involved. Then the council might split humanity between the curious and the tribal, leave one on earth to rot while welcoming the other with open arms. This is coming from a real life alien (autistic person). Humanity cast me out at a young age, so i got to study humans as though i was an observer sent from another world.
2:04 I can see my house from here!
They should've brought up the idea of genetic experiments being able to save lives or help the wounded.
Even now we have prosthetic limbs and other such surgeries.
I think they were more concerned with the fact that humans tend to experiment without much regard to consequences. They were thinking more of worst case scenarios than best case. And looking at the vast majority of what most human technological innovations are put towards, many more of our breakthroughs are typically first put to use in our military than in any life saving applications as a trend.
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Your voice acting is improving!
Glad you think so!
Fear of Biological Warfare, War over sports, Crazy Experiments
did those Aliens not stumble over the Geneva CHecklist on their research ?
I doubt that would have helped the case, rather it would have hurt it lol
First thing I think of is Canadian’s . And I’m a American
About music... show them "Lingua Ignota"
WOW what an amazing consul! So diverse yet function so harmoniously.
When discussing the ones we raise statues to, downtown we have a statue of Arthur fonzarelli, the Fonz
They put poisions in their bodys ... to heal themselfes. And don't know why they become ill.
You really didn’t like the idea of staying healthy during COVID, did you?
@@Shadowkey392Cor fuc'n 'ell, got a proper fanatic 'ere, 'ent we, lads? Literally nothing about COVID or vaccines at all and he just goes off. What could make a mind like that?
I interpreted the comment as being about alcohol. I took my medicine last night and am certainly ill this morning.
@@Shadowkey392 I was healthy during Covid. Without any shots.
@@Shadowkey392 you do know, that EVERY medication, is a poison, right?
I live yor Voice. Gretings from Romania.❤
Contrary to popular beliefs, the Football War wasn't started due to the match itself. It just so happen that tensions between El Salvador and Honduras reached a peak during that time, and the football riots may or may not be the straw that broke the camel's back. The coincidence was amusing, but not as impactful as one might think to the overall conflict.
Loked this story ,will there be a part 2
You win for not using Lame AI voices like all the other channels
I like how the story mentioned the groxx and then the humans called them "moon dogs" lol
We're glad someone noticed!
I am disappointed that I have to look at the box because it kills my imagination 😤
when did we ever make a war over sport?
Tbh im not sure why but why do i think this is the exact reason no one as said anything to us let alone see any other intelligent life because we're just so damn confusing do the most random stuff that should and shouldn't work at the same time
fk that logic, and that to, that one over there seems fun, fk it!
Ignorant and pompous aliens are the worst kinds of aliens
Well some of these aliens have a lot in common with the main stream media they should apply for a role as a smear merchant.
Just a thought…. You might want to include the reader view window in your thumb nails. Lots of us out here are clicking on stories only to be disappointed by shitty AI readings. THANK YOU FOR A REAL EXPERIENCE!!!
Ah yes logic what is that again
Honestly, listening to the "beliefs" of these "aliens" makes me glad to be human. Their existences sound boring!
Although the story is interesting and I enjoyed, there is always that same mistake. Why would aliens count time in years, decades and typical Earth measurements? Use some kind of star date, cycles, galactic rotations, what ever! Anything that doesn't involve time that Earth revolves around the Sun. It just ruins the immersion into the story.
If someone doesn't like something no one will force them to experience it it would be illogical ......just saying......
I am disqualified from Illogical arguments and please note that the "Galactic Council" should be counselled in their own logic, since they are all miraculously speaking English in it's modern form, a language that is hard to understand just 1,000 years ago and 2,000 years ago it was non existent! The purview of these Galactic Council seems rather prodigious, in that they must have learnt to speak in not only a foreign, but also Alien language to them, therefore the logical conclusion is that they find English to be a very suitable means of communication and have broadly accepted it as if their own! This indicates they must have learned from humans, directly and specifically from the English speaking peoples of planet Earth and are very familiar with them, holding them normally in very high regard, so no real cause for concern, except that is for the two world wars that be could spread Inter Galactically if they choose to have a third world war, which seems very likely!
The author presents a very pessimistic and meme influenced view of humanity.
It falls into the same trap of many science fiction authors. A very self hating view of us as a species based on current media and opinions of talking heads but not the bigger picture.
Honestly I wouldn’t want to be on this council. They sound so boring
link so I can read the story pls?
This was written by the channel; not a Reddit story
This is a VERY climate-mattters-more and planets are somehow important beyond harvesting everything for the system sized ship to protect humanity & anything we pickup from unscheduled natural disasters/the universe kinda story. So a lack of logical meaning in the story. Add in that literally another other species would go through the same issues humans face and yeah... Narration is good though!
don't like pip
A story full of tropes and cliches and not much else. Good voice acting though.
Love the stories but can u change the human names cause it's all the same names ,just saying
Gay
Crap telling of a crap story