I liked it, but I really don't think that Susan would have accepted a marriage proposal from a man who had kidnapped her and killed so many of her country's allies. Perhaps after she had gone home with her brothers and enough time had passed so that Rabadash got a chance to show her how sincere he was, she might have consented to marry him. My husband, who loves happy endings, thinks it's perfect. But then again, he was always a romantic.
I usually really like your stuff but there is a 0% chance my girl Susan would accept a marriage proposal after he kidnapped her and killed a bunch of people to try to do so.
I honestly agree with you whole-heartedly! I just wanted this fanfic to have a happier ending than most of them do, so that's what I came up with. But yes, I highly doubt Susie would do that! Thank you for your feedback!
Also because all of the Calormenes worshiped Pagan gods. 2 Corinthians 6:14 Be ye not unequally yoked together with unbelievers: for what fellowship hath righteousness with unrighteousness? and what communion hath light with darkness?
I love how you said susan's your girl. So cute
I liked it, but I really don't think that Susan would have accepted a marriage proposal from a man who had kidnapped her and killed so many of her country's allies. Perhaps after she had gone home with her brothers and enough time had passed so that Rabadash got a chance to show her how sincere he was, she might have consented to marry him. My husband, who loves happy endings, thinks it's perfect. But then again, he was always a romantic.
Most likely it will be disaster cause rabadash don't accept defeat and later killed by two brother
I usually really like your stuff but there is a 0% chance my girl Susan would accept a marriage proposal after he kidnapped her and killed a bunch of people to try to do so.
I honestly agree with you whole-heartedly! I just wanted this fanfic to have a happier ending than most of them do, so that's what I came up with. But yes, I highly doubt Susie would do that! Thank you for your feedback!
Also because all of the Calormenes worshiped Pagan gods.
2 Corinthians 6:14 Be ye not unequally yoked together with unbelievers: for what fellowship hath righteousness with unrighteousness? and what communion hath light with darkness?
@@NarniaLore Would Susan belly dance for Rabadash?
Then Susan would dress like a harem girl and belly dance for her husband all day long.