An interesting sub plot might have been the eventual recognition of the AI as a sapient new species...working with the humans and eventually gaining independence.
Yes ai can be as dangerous as helpful and yes ai can mentally control everyone on a planet that is why some people don't like AI because they know how dangerous AI can be
" Spectre was left to decay" but how was still operational? "sweat it aside" should "swat it aside". "The Spectre sees the advantage..." should be seized the advantage.." "that ghost had zone" should be "that ghost had shown"
A very good story, however, some parts read as an assignment of so many words. It was unnecessary to reiterate the complications and dangers of the AI resulting in its original decommission. Otherwise, a great story. Thank you.
okay it got a AI, but why keep talking about the AI so much it gets boring fast, i quit the story 5min in, i hate long winded stories, just get to the point.
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Great story! Loved the story line as it was something completely new, at least to me.
Glad you like the AI generated stories!
Magnificent Story. More of such, please.
I hope the algorithm that wrote this story of hope always keeps us lowly humans as allies.
An interesting sub plot might have been the eventual recognition of the AI as a sapient new species...working with the humans and eventually gaining independence.
Yes ai can be as dangerous as helpful and yes ai can mentally control everyone on a planet that is why some people don't like AI because they know how dangerous AI can be
" Spectre was left to decay" but how was still operational? "sweat it aside" should "swat it aside". "The Spectre sees the advantage..." should be seized the advantage.." "that ghost had zone" should be "that ghost had shown"
"Would you intercept me? I'd intercept me."
A very good story, however, some parts read as an assignment of so many words. It was unnecessary to reiterate the complications and dangers of the AI resulting in its original decommission. Otherwise, a great story. Thank you.
The same is true regarding your comment!!! Too many unnecessary words!!!
This would have been a good story if you didn't mention the ships name and the ai every 3 seconds
ok then write a better combat engagement story.
Instead of criticism try to do better!!!
An AI bot has created the story, so the AI is the hero. Still an ok story.
but the bot makes mistakes too cold, for took hold. silly stuff
17 min for what could have been a 10 min story. To much repeating of facts we already know…
okay it got a AI, but why keep talking about the AI so much it gets boring fast, i quit the story 5min in, i hate long winded stories, just get to the point.
Ok...as you wish. The ghost ship was activated and win the battle. Story ends!!! Good enough???
Not bad but why could it make up its mind what they were calling the alien species and repeating stuff this could have been shorter and better
Repeat, repeat, repeat, repeat, repeat, repeat, repeat, repe...............
No, not a good story. And the A.I. voice doesn’t work for me.
A rumor cant spread thru the galaxy during just this short encounter.
Just saying.
Why not? Just asking!
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