Excellent stories. I love the imagination in the first one, and the atmosphere was perfect in the second. The poem is a wonderful bonus."Moon obscured by clouds of dread" is a chilling line.
Stories are great, love the ambiance and introduction character. Narrators voice is good as well, only it sounds a bit robotic. Honestly I can’t decide if it’s AI or not…….? Poem was terrific!! Over all I like it, keep up the good work and good luck 👏🏼
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Perfection and the poem short and sweet and right to the point
Thank you Cathy 🤗✌️
Excellent stories. I love the imagination in the first one, and the atmosphere was perfect in the second. The poem is a wonderful bonus."Moon obscured by clouds of dread" is a chilling line.
Thank you for this amazing feedback 😱✌️🤗
the story and the poem were great, I liked the poem a little more though.
Thank you
Poems will always be part of the stories. Maybe I will create a short story in the form of poem 😱
@MidnightStories1980 Please do! Whilst I love stories I have a particular love of poetry. I'd love to see this happen.
@@lunapuella2611 I will try one but it will be a scary one 😱
@@MidnightStories1980 Perfect!
Stories are great, love the ambiance and introduction character. Narrators voice is good as well, only it sounds a bit robotic. Honestly I can’t decide if it’s AI or not…….? Poem was terrific!! Over all I like it, keep up the good work and good luck 👏🏼
Thank you kindly for this nice feddback and for the support