I don't know if it’s a demon or a devil, or just some hungry thing from some dark place and time…. -Jeepers Creepers. There’s a theory it’s a Mayan God.
I LOVE werewolf stories, and the "Beast Within" is a good story, but IMO, the author dragged it out way too much by repeating the same things over and over again. Whenever, a story does that I remember how my writing teacher used to say "Give a brief description of ur antagonist's surroundings, and whatever u do, don't keep repeating the same things because u lose ur reader(some folks get very rude, when a story does that) when u keep going around in circles, never getting to ur story's climax?" In this story, we get trapped inside his transformation, when he kills the guy, also, when he battled the pack of wolves, the alpha, that creature, the other creatures, how the blood moon did this and that a few times? I am not trying to be rude, in fact, I really want and hope for the author to go as far as his dreams can take him, but there are other ppl that have no respect/chill, with how they give critiques? I do not want for that to happen to this writer/author? I did sub and like this video!
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I don't know if it’s a demon or a devil, or just some hungry thing from some dark place and time…. -Jeepers Creepers.
There’s a theory it’s a Mayan God.
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I LOVE werewolf stories, and the "Beast Within" is a good story, but IMO, the author dragged it out way too much by repeating the same things over and over again. Whenever, a story does that I remember how my writing teacher used to say "Give a brief description of ur antagonist's surroundings, and whatever u do, don't keep repeating the same things because u lose ur reader(some folks get very rude, when a story does that) when u keep going around in circles, never getting to ur story's climax?" In this story, we get trapped inside his transformation, when he kills the guy, also, when he battled the pack of wolves, the alpha, that creature, the other creatures, how the blood moon did this and that a few times?
I am not trying to be rude, in fact, I really want and hope for the author to go as far as his dreams can take him, but there are other ppl that have no respect/chill, with how they give critiques? I do not want for that to happen to this writer/author? I did sub and like this video!
Good to know. Iwas listening to a few other channels and they did the same so I thought I would give it a try. But I guess 2 much.
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