Rewriting Spider-Man Homecoming
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- Опубликовано: 31 июл 2024
- Rewriting Spider-Man Homecoming - In this video we discuss what I would change with Spider-Man Homecoming and we rewrite the film to fit in my new series for Spider-Man films
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I love how you did this! I think I like this one even more than the civil war one! Making peter get the no way home end suit EARLY, and doing it all without hurting the story, it was perfect!
14:21 the best part. 😂
Thanks!
This is one of the best fan fics you have done
I reeally liked how you managed to have Ben play a significant role in this rewrite and how he's also tied to Vulture,which further adds on to the conflict between Adrain and Peter,great job Lewis!
Apparantley they omitted ben because they felt someone as important as him shouldn't be relegated to a throwaway line.
The suit may gave him for the prom used to belong to ben.
You know if Tobey Maguire was the MCU Spider-Man I would have the Vulture get his wings the same way only that his costume would like the Spider-Man 4 FanScription.
I was okay with Ned because at least he wasn’t bitter after finding out that Peter is Spider-Man and is on good terms with it unlike Harry or Eddie always pointing their finger at saying that he ruined their lives after finding out that he is Spider-Man.
1-opening montage that Peter witness a mugging that reminds him of uncle Ben death setting up Peter arc that he is his own hero in a larger universe
2-Bokeem woodbine&abraham attah being used has spencer&allistar smythe yes I would used allistar being Peter friend instead of Ned
3-vultures motive being more against spencer who used to work for him but got a job at damage control where vulture vendetta is against Peter best friend dad
4-Liz just get to be Peter crush and nothing else
I wish Tom Holland was Ultimate Spider-Man in the MCU
Wdym?
@@T3aseW1thease Tom Holland is similar to Ultimate Peter Parker from earth 1610 and Tom Holland Spider-Man has almost similar to Ultimate Spider-Man from earth 1610. That’s why I wish Tom Holland was Ultimate Spider-Man in MCU.
@@raedgonzalezspideyfanboy true AWWW MAN now that I think that about it I can just imagine about what if Marvel had the rights to the X-Men and FF4 st the time. We could have gotten Kitty Pryde, The Human Torch, Iceman and this was never a thing in any medium but with Rogue specifically the emo version from X Men Evolution and Nightcrawler as Peter's Closest SuperFriends
I read the first few comics of ultimate Spider-Man and really enjoyed the story. I shortly got into it again after finding some motion comics that continued where I left off.
Also I’ve been thinking about writing my own fan made rewrite of Tom holland s trilogy, and also writing a tie in series that s inspired form the ultimate comics, and have each season set between films.
I know right cause I thought in the end of the Civil War post credit scene when we see Spider-Man’s spider tech gift it just show what kind of spider man he’s going to be
This is great. I like Peter's motivation here in this rendition and why his need of his suit and not wanting to give it back fits both Spider-Man and Peter.
I would say the one thing I'd have changed for Homecoming is to give Peter more of a sense of anxiety and overthinking when it comes to the people he's close to like Ned, Liz, and May in the original story.
I'm excited to see what you'd do with both No Way Home and Far From Home. And I don't know if this is acceptable, but I'd also like to see a somewhat full rewrite of NWH from you where its not a multiversal story but an identity crisis like movie with Chameleon being the main villain
It was ridiculous that Ben Parker wasn't even mention in the mcu Spider-man movies. There were some reference but they made it seems like he never even exist. And I don't know why would change the name from Mary Jane to Michelle Jones. Zendaya is playing the mcu version of Mary Jane but they change the name why would they do that?
I've always felt like Tom Holland's Spider-Man movies were always missing something, they just never provided that Marvelous vibe that the other films had (specifically the Rami trilogy and Spider-Verse films). Whenever I watched Tom's films I would always find myself wishing that certain things were done a bit differently specifically when it came to the dialogue. Perhaps it was studio interference, or just creative liberties that were taken, they just always felt like they were missing something. Especially Far From Home (for me personally). Either way I'm glad to see that the concepts are being shaken up a bit.
Tobey: Classic Spider-Man, Andrew: Modern Amazing, Tom: MArvel's Spider-man
3:32 was mj's dad the one who killed her mom?
How would you handle the X-Men in the MCU?
this is great, but after getting far from home , it’s hard for me to complain about homecoming anymore.
When you get to Far from Home can you make sure that Mysterio is just a guy who worked in a film industry and not Tony Stark especially his accomplices from the first Ironman where that line “Tony Stark, built this in a cave with a box of scarps “ and of course the Scorpion?
Mysterio isn’t in my version of the film!
@@LewisFanFictionokay that’s good I guess
I cannot wait for the rewrite of spider man far from home and no way home next😊
Amazing video bro. Keep it up!
Thanks!
Bro should write spider man movies for marvel
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I think for an origin rewrite instead of vulture being related to Ben, he should have killed him, we could have the ring fight then Peter chasing him, he will enter the ware house finding the vulture in his suit and being defeated by him, he let him get away and during the party it’s tense as he has to choose, cause a fight out of context at the party, or leave it for another day, that’s when on the news he sees cop cars all at an explosion and Peter heads their, vulture arrives and that’s the final fight. I also think the sinister six should be a group of villains all aware of Peter’s identity but wanting to kill them themselves, instead of Liz Mj could be vultures daughter which could create inner conflict as goblin and vulture are on the same team with goblin wanting to take away everything from Peter which means killing Mj, this could lead to a final battle where goblin beats vulture and the entire sinister six dismantled by now with goblin escaping, Peter is left to mourn Mj’s death which leads to the black trilogy where Peter meets black cat, they work together to take down Fisk, Peter gets the suit, he loses it and it finds scorpain, scorpain vowing to kill Peter after he tried to take down Peter before for Wilson and after failing Wilson killed his family, the symbiote convinces him it was Peter’s fault and not Fisk and so this sets up the final fight. I think this is better then Kraven being the villain instead I think it should be scorpian overall and Fisk pulling the strings
I enjoy Tom Holland's casting as Spider-man, but the main problem I have with it is the fact that they pretty much threw comic accuracy out the window and took away so many things that make Spider-man who he is. Even though your changes are pretty different to what I'd change, I still enjoyed it.
This sounds dumb asl
I think instead of vulture killing shocker he should just fire him and Peter stops him from robbing a bank and telling them abt the ferry
YEEESSSS
Peak ✌️
The thing i would change about spiderman homecoming is having peter be sad that liz left and still thinking about her cause in the movie as soon as she left he moved on immédiatly
I don’t mind that cause that attributes to the highschool theme. Most highschool relationships don’t work out and I always felt that’s what Liz and Peter was during Homecoming.
@@LewisFanFiction im totally fine with them not being togather at the end of the movie that's all good i Just don't like that peter totally lost feelings for her as soon as she left cause it just didn't feel real to me
Uncle ben and Adrian toomes being friends doesn’t make sense ngl
Great rewrite! Gotta say I can't wait for the sequel.
Thanks!
Hi
Awesome Spider-Man Video 💙❤️
First
Can you remaster the "What if Andrew Garfield Spider-Man was in the MCU" ? With future MCU events ?
It isn’t bad but why did you make it so much about uncle Ben ?
I felt like since it was an origin for this version of Spider-Man, uncle Ben had to have a looming presence over the film. One thing that I’m not fond of the MCU doing with the character