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  • Опубликовано: 15 сен 2024

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  • @jayleehna
    @jayleehna  16 дней назад +92

    📚IG @Jayleehna
    💌TikTok @Jayleehna

  • @Bookswriter-124
    @Bookswriter-124 16 дней назад +669

    THEN THE VILLAIN PULLS AWAY ONLY TO BE PULLED BACK IN FOR ANOTHER KISS BY THE DETECTIVE 🫶🏼🥹🥰

  • @kus1ck
    @kus1ck 15 дней назад +41

    me thinking it was going down the "the villain who was actually trying to kill themselves" path

  • @Bookswriter-124
    @Bookswriter-124 16 дней назад +324

    I stand there stunned as Silas kisses me, his lips sealed firmly to mine.
    He’s kissing me. He’s. Kissing. Me.
    Suddenly, Silas pulls back and stares down at me, heat and worry mingling in his eyes.
    “ Shit, Rose, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean- “
    I cut him off when I yank on his T - Shirt and pull him down to my level, sealing my lips to his.
    He walks forward without breaking the kiss, pushing us into the wall. His hands frame my face and my hands cup his neck.
    Oh my God. I’m kissing Silas.
    What the hell?!

    • @blapii
      @blapii 16 дней назад +22

      THIS IS GOOD!! Also this jumpscared me because I have a character named Silas and haven’t run into other people’s comments that have similar names for our characters HGDHS I LOVE THIS THOUGH!!

    • @sunnEvibes
      @sunnEvibes 16 дней назад +8

      OMG WHAT BOOK

    • @AeritheAffectionateBabyPenguin
      @AeritheAffectionateBabyPenguin 16 дней назад +12

      I need the whole story now…I need it. Not want. Need.

    • @ThanksSam.and.Colby.
      @ThanksSam.and.Colby. 16 дней назад +8

      SOMEONE CONTINUE THIS PLEASE I NEED IT!

    • @Bookswriter-124
      @Bookswriter-124 16 дней назад +10

      I will tomorrow if u guys want?

  • @that.dam.moonlark
    @that.dam.moonlark 16 дней назад +63

    WHYD I GET BUTTERFLIES. ITS. NOT. REAL…

  • @melancholycali
    @melancholycali 16 дней назад +99

    “Maeve! What were you thinking? You could’ve killed yourself. I-” Luca rubbed his temples, seething beneath what was left of his calmer, more practical exterior.
    “--All the better, no?” Maeve laughed softly, a shadow crossing her face before she masked it with another cheeky smile. “It means I’d be out of your hair, detective.” She held her hands up in a placating gesture, her sharp eyes briefly looking Luca up and down. “...Wouldn’t you like that?”
    Luca’s arms folded across his chest defensively. How could she possibly think that? Maeve was certainly not the most innocent of them all, but that never meant Luca would wish death upon her. He thought about it for a moment. The idea of Maeve’s forever absence actually made his stomach twist up in knots, leaving him with a sinking feeling of nausea. “No,” he replied, averting his gaze. Absent-mindedly, he kicked a rock on the pavement, feeling rather hollow inside.
    “No?” Maeve repeated, twisting a strand of her dark hair around her finger. Her mouth was slightly open as she smiled, squinting at him as the sun shined in her eyes. “I suppose I’m supposed to know what that means.” She sighed, a long and heavy breath escaping her lips. She tapped her chin in mock consideration for a moment, before inevitably shrugging. “Well, spoiler alert: I can’t read minds, bozo.”
    “..Oh, I.. um, right…” Luca mumbled, scratching his neck. “So, now I’ve got some explaining to do?” His blue eyes flicked back up to her face, and he felt his cheeks grow hotter.
    All Maeve did was nod slowly, her stare never wavering from his.
    “Um.. Okay. I.. I guess I just don’t want to see someone die?” Luca fumbled with his words, his tongue refusing to make things sound right. He sure sounded flustered, and it only fueled Maeve’s amusement.
    “Uh huh,” Maeve didn’t look convinced. She blinked at him, swaying on her feet as she considered her options. Her eyes swept the road around them, lingering on the alleyway that she had scaled moments before Luca had intercepted her. The chase had been fun, but talking to him… eh, not so much. She had never been fond of the ‘good guys.’
    Sensing her growing detachment, Luca piped up again. “I really just don’t want to see you get hurt, you know? Regardless of whether the police are in pursuit of you, please stop jumping between all those buildings!” He stepped closer, hesitating briefly before grabbing her wrist. Lightly, he twisted it, revealing the bruises along her forearm. “Look. Does that not hurt? Don’t lie to me, Maeve, please-”
    Maeve’s idea had come rather sudden, and she didn’t stop herself as she went with it. She knew the repercussions, and yet, her impulses drove her. Hastily and efficiently, she cupped his cheek with one hand. This is what made Luca stop in his train of thought, his eyes widening.
    “What.. What are you doing?” Luca stammered, releasing her wrist. Instead of moving away, however, his hand found her waist, keeping her in the embrace.
    “Shh…” Maeve murmured, her eyes fluttering shut just momentarily. That’s when she kissed him. And all Luca wanted was to deepen that kiss, to hold her tighter, remind her that she was loved…
    PART 1: with added details ofc ;)
    But it was short-lived. Maeve pulled away as soon as her lips brushed his. “So… Am I going to turn into a frog now?” she asked gently but jokingly, still close enough that Luca could feel her breath on his cheeks. Her head moved up to look him in the eyes, her freckles more prominent with the way the sun casted shadows on them.
    He flushed a bright red, pulling her hand away from his cheek. “You… you didn’t have to do that!” He struggled to collect himself, appearing more frazzled by the minute. “Now I’m all…” he paused, searching for the right word. “...Tingly,” he finished, though he instantly regretted his choice of words.
    “But it shut you up, didn’t it?” Maeve laughed, a playful twinkle in her eyes as she nudged him. “Besides, I’ve been dreaming about it for far too long. Had to see for myself if it was really as good as I imagined.”
    Luca’s lips curved up, but he instinctively bit back the smile. He had to remind himself that this was Maeve he was talking to. “Was it…?” he asked cautiously, testing the waters.
    Maeve tipped her head to the side. “Oh, wouldn’t you like to know!” she chuckled, swatting a hand in the air as though that was the funniest thing she’d heard all day. “Catch you around, detective.” She mimed tipping an imaginary hat on her head.
    And off she went. Luca watched her walk away, his hand pressed up against his lips as he still felt the warmth of hers lingering there. It had startled him, but it also left a fullness in his heart he hadn’t thought was possible.
    EDIT: grammar (it's always this, so i, um... if you see my comments anywhere else... yup.)

    • @lilipad5907
      @lilipad5907 16 дней назад +1

      I LOVE THIS SMMMM😻😻

    • @girlducky
      @girlducky 16 дней назад +1

      Omg I love this ❤❤❤❤❤

    • @AbsTheWriter
      @AbsTheWriter 16 дней назад +1

      I love this so so much ❤

    • @melancholycali
      @melancholycali 16 дней назад +5

      aww you guys are so sweet!! i made a part 2 if y'all somehow see this and wanna read more too!

    • @AbsTheWriter
      @AbsTheWriter 16 дней назад +1

      @@melancholycali I love this so soo much 🩷🩷🩷

  • @Phobia-w7y
    @Phobia-w7y 16 дней назад +17

    What a hug tho? I feel like that would be more meanjngfull

    • @Pancraken
      @Pancraken 16 дней назад +5

      But a kiss is better for what is practically a wattpad story at this point 😂

    • @Phobia-w7y
      @Phobia-w7y 15 дней назад +3

      ​@@PancrakenTrue

  • @Im_Anna28
    @Im_Anna28 16 дней назад +18

    Hiii!!! I have a goond one! (I think)
    The villains son, a child, with his father gone. He tries to be like him.
    *Only the find out he is the destinied, most important of the hero team*

  • @Randomthing.123
    @Randomthing.123 16 дней назад +43

    i have a weird theory about jayleehna's shorts. what if she"s actually writing a book and these videos are based on the chapters in the book? most of the video's are villain/hero related so it's where i got the idea from

    • @blapii
      @blapii 16 дней назад +7

      I WAS GONNA SAY,,there’s a lot of detective/villain ones too and I’ve been wondering if these are just based off actual parts of a story she’s making

    • @Randomthing.123
      @Randomthing.123 16 дней назад +6

      @@blapii maybe she's writing a love triangle between the villain, hero, and detective????

    • @shiny_crystal
      @shiny_crystal 16 дней назад +4

      idk she probably just likes those dynamics, i feel like its be hard to fit all these in one book

    • @blapii
      @blapii 16 дней назад +3

      @@shiny_crystal so real, these are all rlly good dynamics/ideas

    • @blapii
      @blapii 16 дней назад +1

      @@Randomthing.123 if she won’t I will HGSGH

  • @usherme
    @usherme 16 дней назад +75

    "It's too late," his voice reverberated low and deadly amongst the stillness of the abandoned warehouse.
    _"You're_ too late." The villian mused, a dangerous glint in his eyes, looking down upon her standing far below him, under the ragged steel structure he was standing upon.
    "You-," the detective stuttered, her pupils blown wide.
    "Yes, _me._ I already abducted the mayor. He's hidden away some place you'll never find."
    She looked up at him with a dead look in her eyes. Turned her eyes to the side. Then made a quiet sigh, swiping a hand down her face.
    "No, you idiot. I meant get off the ledge."
    A muscle in her jaw ticked. She added, her cheeks growing hot as she muttered, "It's dangerous up there."

  • @Why_Rayy.
    @Why_Rayy. 16 дней назад +16

    YOUR ACTING IS SO CUTEE, love this song w/ this pov-just fits

  • @ceaseless_spiral_avatar69
    @ceaseless_spiral_avatar69 16 дней назад +61

    “You *fucking* idiot!” Sasha yelled at her. Jane slowly closed the door behind them, knowing what was about to happen.
    “Do you know how absolutely insane that was? Do you know what danger you just put yourself in?!” she was trying to scream, obviously, but was having a harder time holding back her tears. That was so fucking close, and she could have lost Jane! Jane stayed silent though.
    “Look, Sash…”
    “Don’t you *Sash* me! You could have been killed, you moron! After all our planning-“
    It was at this point Jane started blocking out all Sasha was saying, and started focussing on her as a person. She started focussing on her uniform which they had stolen together from an unsuspecting guard. She started focussing on her cheeks, flushing red from talking this loud. She started focussing on her eyes, those gorgeous stormy rings glistening with emotion and tears. She landed on her lips. Mouthing insults disguised as compliments. *That* was Sasha’s style. She wasn’t one to tell you off and stay angry. When she cared about you enough, she would let that love take over more than anything else. That’s what Jane loved about her.
    She took slow steps forward. Sasha started stuttering her words as she watched her do so. “J- Jane. I’m so mad at-“
    She kissed her. She kissed that woman who had helped her, when she didn’t have to. Jane loved that woman, and that woman loved her back.
    Sasha was so shocked. God, she’d wanted this for so long. Jane… she’d wanted her for so long, and *this* is how she got her. She wanted to stay like that forever.
    They pulled apart for a moment, locking eyes. “Jane Doe. I am *so* mad at you.” the words barely made it out of her smile, before she was pulled into another.

    • @MaggotsRotting
      @MaggotsRotting 16 дней назад +4

      HEHEHE JANE DOE HAHAHAHA

    • @AbsTheWriter
      @AbsTheWriter 16 дней назад

      @@MaggotsRottingI love this 😂

    • @AbsTheWriter
      @AbsTheWriter 16 дней назад +1

      This is awesome

    • @ceaseless_spiral_avatar69
      @ceaseless_spiral_avatar69 15 дней назад +2

      @@MaggotsRotting THANK YOUU IM SO GLAD YOU LIKE THAT. LOVE THE CONCEPT OF JANE/JOHN DOE 😆

    • @MaggotsRotting
      @MaggotsRotting 15 дней назад +1

      @@ceaseless_spiral_avatar69 LOL. Jane doe reminds me of Jane citizen aka the log in example on every acc

  • @lilipad5907
    @lilipad5907 13 дней назад +3

    Hii! I have an idea for a video that you could do.
    Song: video game lover
    2 enemies that despise each other (can be hero or villain or just enemies)
    And they don’t know the person they’re flirting with on an online game is their enemy!
    Hope you use this idea and I love your videos!💗

  • @ItsHopefhull
    @ItsHopefhull 14 дней назад +1

    Please, make a book! :)
    It’s the only book I will gladly read 23 times and more! No matter how many chapters there are!

  • @YenamFam
    @YenamFam 15 дней назад +2

    Plot twist: the detective kisses her(the villain) back

  • @hamnatahir-lt6ro
    @hamnatahir-lt6ro 9 дней назад +1

    Your smile is beautiful

  • @ReadingQueens
    @ReadingQueens 16 дней назад +2

    I was wondering why this looked similar until I realized she just changed the words slightly 😂

  • @NakaharaChuuya_i_love_dazai
    @NakaharaChuuya_i_love_dazai 9 дней назад +1

    Soukoku or shin soukoku ✨

  • @AeritheAffectionateBabyPenguin
    @AeritheAffectionateBabyPenguin 16 дней назад +4

    Did something similar to this with my story. Just different situation

    • @ZoyaAhmad-6
      @ZoyaAhmad-6 5 дней назад +1

      Can we hear the story?

  • @axpinl
    @axpinl День назад

    litterally Ace Of Theives on webtoon

  • @ZoyaAhmad-6
    @ZoyaAhmad-6 15 дней назад +2

    Guys can anyone recommend me a story on wattpad or something with like this exact or similar story? It really like these types of stories but can never seem to find them if anyone could tell me that'll be great thank you!!

  • @BangchansWife000
    @BangchansWife000 16 дней назад +3

    This gives me the shivers
    First ❤

  • @sitting.in.a.tree.d.y.i.n.g
    @sitting.in.a.tree.d.y.i.n.g 15 дней назад +1

    okay I have to use this

  • @PriyaArora-f8l
    @PriyaArora-f8l 16 дней назад +4

    Im fairly certain this has been reused from a previous video and i dont care

  • @Imanotter
    @Imanotter 16 дней назад +1

    I'd read that book

  • @LittleHopelessRomantic97099
    @LittleHopelessRomantic97099 13 дней назад +1

    🤭🤭🤭🤭stoppppp😂🤭🤭this is too good

  • @Fizziez
    @Fizziez 6 дней назад

    "You could've died! Why on earth would you do that?! Are you dumb? Do you *want* to die?! You need to be careful!" The detective scolded, clearly concerned and worried for the villian.
    "So you do care about me." The villain replied smugly, knowing that the detective hated to admit it.
    "Ugh.. Fuck you!" The detective replied, trying their best to sound harsh but clearly failed, a bit flustered.
    "Now that's not a very nice thing to say to someone who you care about.." The villain replied with a smug grin, clearly amused by the detective's denial.
    "Shut up!" The detective said, even more flustered than they had previously been.

  • @Fandomqueen_13
    @Fandomqueen_13 16 дней назад +2

    AHHHH!!! Why can't these men be real?!

  • @MariaJúliaMarcondesStramosk
    @MariaJúliaMarcondesStramosk 13 дней назад +1

    That's cute!

  • @sod4xdrugs-CN
    @sod4xdrugs-CN 15 дней назад +4

    Phantom theif soukoku fr 😭😭

  • @Hyeinlover905
    @Hyeinlover905 8 дней назад +1

    What’s the name of this book????

  • @user-si6oz5pk5o
    @user-si6oz5pk5o 16 дней назад +2

    5th ❤❤❤❤

  • @sakuragotchaworld3321
    @sakuragotchaworld3321 12 дней назад

    can I use this for my villain x hero trope

  • @blackswan_xoxo20
    @blackswan_xoxo20 16 дней назад +1

    Do I have permission to use this for a Wattpad story?

  • @Denkiischannel
    @Denkiischannel 16 дней назад +2

    2nd ❤

  • @glitchstrikr8415
    @glitchstrikr8415 16 дней назад +1

    Is it bad my first thought was Soukoku?

  • @Geckothesalamander
    @Geckothesalamander 7 дней назад +1

    oh

  • @HyunL1x4
    @HyunL1x4 16 дней назад +2

    AGHHH

  • @EJs_edits
    @EJs_edits 16 дней назад +1

    Early~~