Flying Changes - "Just Some Novice Logs"

This is a work in progress scene! Laurel's friend Cassidy convinces her to come out to the cross-country course for the first time since Laurel's wreck (Cassidy just met Laurel, by the way.) While Cassidy is jumping around a little course, Laurel is plagued by memories of her accident. (Chronologically, this happens before the flashback crash scene, so viewers don't know what actually happened yet.)
Apologies for my horrible acting. :( I am riding the bay mare (my friend's horse). The main actress is riding her own horse in this particular clip. The 'lead horse' is played by three different horses.
Constructive Criticism please!
NOT BASED ON BOOK (Must change title soon!)

[@HorseyLuv28]

Wow..I love It!!!It's all coming together really well.Great Job. :D.