I met a stranger (an adult woman) reading next to me while I took my break to prepare for today's video. I asked her to evaluate my performance at 15:00. I was immediately confronted with a real-life situation, so I staggered for the first 1:00 - 3:00 minutes. But later I found my feet and logically applied yesterday's corrections. I am a bit nervous about this exam after what I experienced today. A big thank you to this woman for her honest advice and recommendations.
Wow Adam! That was a tremendous improvement! This was, in my opinion, your best performance yet. Even in the first three minutes, it was clear that you were making sure to not rush. I think the woman's comment about your German not always being "sauber," but still understandable is the next thing you should work on. Here are my ideas: 1. I think you should consider using a "canned" argument essay structure to deliver your arguments. I can tell you are using an essay structure of some kind, but I think you should consider switching to an argument essay structure. There are a lot of good outlines for argument essays on the internet. Pick one and follow the structure closely for the intro, body paragraphs and conclusion. 2. Memorize the transition sentences for moving from one point to the next. 3. Try to not use super long sentences that get convoluted.
This was why I stopped to think yesterday and not make videos to improve behind the scenes. And I try to gather all comments and worked on it. Your comments motivates me and sheds light on what to actually do. It’s absolutely my ladder to improving. Thank you so much. I tried to use these tips in todays video. Hope it’s inline? You shall be able to see the video later this morning. Thanks once again for your assistance in progressing in the language.
Hey Adam, ich bin selbst zertifizierte Prüferin (A1-C2), Deutschlehrerin und Muttersprachlerin. Hier ein paar Korrekturen von kleinen Fehlern in chronologischer Reihenfolge der ersten Minuten des Videos. 😊 "in Geschäften" (nicht "in der Geschäft"), "bewusster in einem Geschäft einkaufen" (Dativ), "nachhaltige Produkte", "wenn wir Bioprodukte kaufen, verlängert es... " (falsche Satzstruktur im Video), "Möbel" ( nicht "Mobel", falsche Aussprache), "Die Unternehmen nehmen einen großen Einfluss..." (Verbkonjugation), Hier sind einige weitere nützliche Ausdrücke zu dem Thema: - sein Kaufverhalten kritisch hinterfragen - auf nachhaltige Produkte setzen - Bewusstsein für etw. schaffen - klimafreundliches Verhalten fördern - Verantwortung als Konsument übernehmen - bewusst auf bestimmte Produkte verzichten Viel Erfolg bei deiner Prüfung! 🤗
I met a stranger (an adult woman) reading next to me while I took my break to prepare for today's video. I asked her to evaluate my performance at 15:00. I was immediately confronted with a real-life situation, so I staggered for the first 1:00 - 3:00 minutes. But later I found my feet and logically applied yesterday's corrections. I am a bit nervous about this exam after what I experienced today. A big thank you to this woman for her honest advice and recommendations.
Wow Adam! That was a tremendous improvement! This was, in my opinion, your best performance yet. Even in the first three minutes, it was clear that you were making sure to not rush. I think the woman's comment about your German not always being "sauber," but still understandable is the next thing you should work on. Here are my ideas: 1. I think you should consider using a "canned" argument essay structure to deliver your arguments. I can tell you are using an essay structure of some kind, but I think you should consider switching to an argument essay structure. There are a lot of good outlines for argument essays on the internet. Pick one and follow the structure closely for the intro, body paragraphs and conclusion. 2. Memorize the transition sentences for moving from one point to the next. 3. Try to not use super long sentences that get convoluted.
This was why I stopped to think yesterday and not make videos to improve behind the scenes. And I try to gather all comments and worked on it. Your comments motivates me and sheds light on what to actually do. It’s absolutely my ladder to improving. Thank you so much. I tried to use these tips in todays video. Hope it’s inline? You shall be able to see the video later this morning. Thanks once again for your assistance in progressing in the language.
Respekt! Das hört sich richtig gut an. Echt interessant zum zuhören und etwas zu lernen! Mach weiter so 💪👍🏻
Dankeschön. Es freut mich, dass du etwas gelernt hast. Ich lerne auch 😂. Sehr schön
Respekt!
Dankeschön
Alles Gute und viel Erfolg!
Danke sehr
Sehr gut!
Dankeschön
Hey Adam, ich bin selbst zertifizierte Prüferin (A1-C2), Deutschlehrerin und Muttersprachlerin. Hier ein paar Korrekturen von kleinen Fehlern in chronologischer Reihenfolge der ersten Minuten des Videos. 😊 "in Geschäften" (nicht "in der Geschäft"), "bewusster in einem Geschäft einkaufen" (Dativ), "nachhaltige Produkte", "wenn wir Bioprodukte kaufen, verlängert es... " (falsche Satzstruktur im Video), "Möbel" ( nicht "Mobel", falsche Aussprache), "Die Unternehmen nehmen einen großen Einfluss..." (Verbkonjugation),
Hier sind einige weitere nützliche Ausdrücke zu dem Thema:
- sein Kaufverhalten kritisch hinterfragen
- auf nachhaltige Produkte setzen
- Bewusstsein für etw. schaffen
- klimafreundliches Verhalten fördern
- Verantwortung als Konsument übernehmen
- bewusst auf bestimmte Produkte verzichten
Viel Erfolg bei deiner Prüfung! 🤗
Wow, Danke sehr :) Ich schreibe diese Ausdrücke sicher auf. Ihre Videos sind mir auch sehr hilfreich.