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  • 5 Lyric Writing Tips for Immediate Results - Songwriting Lessons with Stuart!
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Комментарии • 202

  • @Orla-sc2ml
    @Orla-sc2ml 11 месяцев назад +438

    If you constantly write lyrics down, interesting thoughts you have, stories you come up with, words that sound nice melodically you’ll honestly never struggle to write lyrics again

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +34

      👍👍

    • @_Jackkv4
      @_Jackkv4 11 месяцев назад +15

      seems to be true is what i recently discovered in my journeys of being a musician. it’s very intriguing the whole process.

    • @robertgold2643
      @robertgold2643 3 дня назад

      Yup, and then wish the tap would turn off once in awhile 😉

  • @alejandrabarrios1554
    @alejandrabarrios1554 11 месяцев назад +178

    Tip 1: Avoid obvious rhymes
    Tip 2: use other songs as templates!
    Tip 3: Dont tell how you feel, use metaphors!!!! describe the things that i feel and see when i feel that certain emotion; pick something specific to you
    Tip 4: The 5 word challenge... write down the overall message of the song in 5 words
    Tip 5: make a list of phrases youre not allowed to start with
    Bonus tip: hey yeah no ooh; use those words generously, those words go a long way!!!

  • @Azuhrael
    @Azuhrael 5 месяцев назад +111

    Tbh as someone that has ADHD, this man not only managed to keep me attentive but I also learned something AND got a dopamine boost due to his nature. Thanks Stuart!

    • @lindblom9135
      @lindblom9135 5 месяцев назад +2

      Same, bro

    • @0UmAndUh0
      @0UmAndUh0 Месяц назад +1

      Me too, and I'm not even a song writer. 😂

  • @virgiww
    @virgiww 11 месяцев назад +132

    We love you stuart

  • @AmattEUR
    @AmattEUR 11 месяцев назад +80

    "My world is too small" hit me as well Stu 🤔

  • @Ryjins
    @Ryjins 11 месяцев назад +105

    Stuart please don’t ever stop teaching😭

  • @B.moon.
    @B.moon. 11 месяцев назад +16

    i love that the color of your shirt fits the color of your eyes

  • @AzureIXVII
    @AzureIXVII 5 месяцев назад +14

    even with the horrible metaphor I understand you. you seem like such a genuine person and are an inspiration for me to keep writing.

  • @firewalk714
    @firewalk714 11 месяцев назад +49

    stuart the best teacher on yt

  • @chicken_monkey
    @chicken_monkey 6 месяцев назад +14

    "Forget I said anything" 2:23 I coughed up my drink. You're hilarious man xD

  • @verysuperkoolepicperson9790
    @verysuperkoolepicperson9790 11 месяцев назад +7

    this is the beginning of something great. a series of tips by the one and only. Guitar and Other tips and lessons would be amazing by Stuart. Like how to sing while playing guitar and so on

  • @OscarSchaffer-et1uy
    @OscarSchaffer-et1uy 8 месяцев назад +8

    This guy actually made my day so good. Forget the music part, he’s so happy and fun and it’s really cheered me up. Thank you

  • @Mid_Mountain_Cucumber
    @Mid_Mountain_Cucumber 11 месяцев назад +5

    Stewart you're awesome! I dont even own a guitar but i can't stop watching your videos lol
    You always manage to make my day, keep it up bud :)

  • @leopoldbode8509
    @leopoldbode8509 11 месяцев назад +67

    🗣️🗣️🔥🔥🔥Ouh ouh ouh im still here ouh ouh still here 🔥 🗣️🗣️🗣️🔥🔥

  • @ronaldbean3355
    @ronaldbean3355 11 месяцев назад +5

    another thing that helped me a lot is to be more willing to stretch out words for longer than youre usually comfortable with, give em a few bars. also something that makes lyrics feel more natural and impactful at times is to give them more space, for a verse, instead of doing line after line of lyrics, throw some bars of just instrumental between them to let them breathe.
    excellent video stuart, (though i fear you may be lonely and or sad based on very hidden contextual clues)

  • @camillessimo
    @camillessimo 11 месяцев назад +41

    I can’t imagine Stuart without a guitar under the arm

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +7

      Did I even play it at all in this vid?

    • @camillessimo
      @camillessimo 11 месяцев назад +11

      @@marinmusic not a single time but I’m sure holding it the secret tip for songwriting

  • @releasetease9123
    @releasetease9123 3 месяца назад +2

    your authenticity makes this whole lot better. thanks for your tips Stuart little

  • @mattgould8592
    @mattgould8592 11 дней назад

    That first tip you gave is a beauty,
    it really means so much to me.

  • @christiansanders1
    @christiansanders1 11 месяцев назад +15

    I really needed to hear tip #2. I’ve been writing lyrics for years and I was always embarrassed by the fact that I had to use existing songs as a template for my own

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +1

      It’s the best. It gets you started immediately!

  • @someonequinof
    @someonequinof 2 месяца назад +5

    The tip about writing lyrics for a song that already exists is amazing and I use it all the time! And to expand on it, you can take a song with a similar message to what you want to say and think to yourself "If I had to add lyrics to this, what would I write?" and you use those!!

    • @joewilliams5396
      @joewilliams5396 2 месяца назад +1

      Yes this is my favourite way to write songs.

  • @beeg8979
    @beeg8979 11 месяцев назад +3

    W this helps I’ve been writing a ton of lyrics at work but I tend to just drift out of a song and start on another when they start sounding repetitive

  • @whiteboywednesday1265
    @whiteboywednesday1265 11 месяцев назад +6

    This and the song writing video were helpful a lot THANK YOU FATHER STUART 🙏

  • @abdulrahman-cf4sk
    @abdulrahman-cf4sk 11 месяцев назад +6

    STURAT YOU'RE MY FAV TEACHER OF ALL TIMEEEEEEE

  • @AceArty23
    @AceArty23 Месяц назад

    I’ve been writing songs for years and this is great advice! Thank you

  • @filipneculai155
    @filipneculai155 11 месяцев назад +3

    I really needed this!! Thanks unc! 😘

  • @alejandrabarrios1554
    @alejandrabarrios1554 11 месяцев назад +1

    stuart i am literally so thankful you make these videos i love you

  • @kraz000
    @kraz000 11 месяцев назад +4

    i love you sm i’ve been wanted this recently

  • @St4rgzer
    @St4rgzer 11 месяцев назад +3

    Stuart is the best music teacher I’ve ever had. ❤️

  • @eddiejoseph.
    @eddiejoseph. 11 месяцев назад +1

    The songwriting tutorials/help/tip videos are the best, thank you

  • @richardmartinez9284
    @richardmartinez9284 11 месяцев назад +6

    We love you stort

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +6

      My new favorite nickname 😍

  • @skiper129
    @skiper129 11 месяцев назад +2

    Thank you Stuart I really liked your green pencil

  • @ava.ryan_music
    @ava.ryan_music 6 дней назад

    I love your video style. Conversational, awkward, funny. Makes me want to watch. :)

  • @lestat..
    @lestat.. 11 месяцев назад +1

    Great tips Stuart ! 🕺👏🏼

  • @33SOL8
    @33SOL8 22 дня назад

    Thank you brother

  • @afsdfsda34a_j
    @afsdfsda34a_j 3 месяца назад +1

    Thank you for this

  • @drummermomcjs
    @drummermomcjs 5 месяцев назад +1

    You are a hoot wo watch! Thank you for these tips. As an aspiring song wri9yter I appreciate them.

  • @Nick-qj7ym
    @Nick-qj7ym 8 месяцев назад +2

    You are HALARIOUS! 9:30 & 10:15 & 14:35😂🤣Love your sense of humor🙌

  • @KernowEDC
    @KernowEDC 2 месяца назад +1

    So glad I found this channel. Pure entertainment 😂

  • @jenbriela6762
    @jenbriela6762 6 месяцев назад

    you're the best teacher ever stuart istg i learn sm with your vids THANK YOUUUUUUUU

  • @grinningcheshire7695
    @grinningcheshire7695 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you, Stuart xx

  • @jessvrooman
    @jessvrooman 3 месяца назад

    stuart u are awesome. thank you

  • @lauryv1e
    @lauryv1e 7 месяцев назад +11

    I love you pls dont die

  • @freakpetux4452
    @freakpetux4452 11 месяцев назад +1

    That's exactly what I'm currently struggling with 😔. Thank you a lot, Stu!❤❤

  • @SonicSympothy
    @SonicSympothy 4 месяца назад +11

    When I close my eyes, I hear Sonic The Hedgehog

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  4 месяца назад +5

      When I close my eyes I see sonic the hedgehog

  • @rileymooneyham8051
    @rileymooneyham8051 11 месяцев назад +2

    These are actually really great tips 👍

  • @laketoriver
    @laketoriver 11 месяцев назад +1

    Saw this at midnight but knew I had to sleep so i’ve been excited since.. Thanks for your wisdom music man 🙏

  • @chelseathomas4275
    @chelseathomas4275 11 месяцев назад +2

    Love your vids!!! Do you have a video on how to start learning barre chords?

    • @laketoriver
      @laketoriver 11 месяцев назад +1

      They’ll get easier over time, sometimes at the beginning they might feel to “stretchy” or might not be clean. You can do this!❤

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад

      You don’t even know. Check out marinmusic.com

  • @luminadovletova2649
    @luminadovletova2649 5 месяцев назад

    Love your energy!

  • @leroyosbourne3808
    @leroyosbourne3808 Месяц назад

    Stuart/ Stewart ?? Thanks for making this video bro! Your 5 tips make a whole lot of sense. Also I found your natural presentation style, very funny. I like the template tip..

  • @tt0kii
    @tt0kii 11 месяцев назад

    I absolutely love ur vids stu , this made my songwriting skills better :)

  • @gracemarr1195
    @gracemarr1195 4 месяца назад

    I LOVE this guy

  • @BrianOboylemusic
    @BrianOboylemusic 2 месяца назад

    Your personality is hilarious I appreciate the info !!

  • @vikiblue_5651
    @vikiblue_5651 5 месяцев назад

    Hello, there are other videos about songwriting? This one was very useful and very funny at the same time! I learnt a lot!

  • @vivianrendall7099
    @vivianrendall7099 5 месяцев назад

    Great tips thanks 😊

  • @lukitess2176
    @lukitess2176 11 месяцев назад +1

    Stuart you are the best🥰🥰

  • @peterfalc9989
    @peterfalc9989 11 месяцев назад

    Like the song writing tutorials. Keep them going please! 🙏

  • @FrogeFella
    @FrogeFella 11 месяцев назад

    very good practical advice 👍

  • @nagitokomaeda6312
    @nagitokomaeda6312 Месяц назад +1

    thanks unc

  • @greasebag7032
    @greasebag7032 11 месяцев назад

    Needed this!! Thank you!

  • @SnuggeSnugge
    @SnuggeSnugge 8 месяцев назад

    You crack me up man, you are very funny and I like your style! ❤

  • @RoneyLMA
    @RoneyLMA 4 месяца назад

    Thanks alllott..

  • @Kpopgloom
    @Kpopgloom 3 месяца назад

    This is so useful and motivational

  • @danielcarvalho1599
    @danielcarvalho1599 11 месяцев назад

    Love you stuart!! you are amazing

  • @progamerkevin3946
    @progamerkevin3946 11 месяцев назад +1

    I will use this in my first song

  • @largechungus4209
    @largechungus4209 5 месяцев назад +2

    11:59 you by radiohead starts with the word you

  • @feliciteebimina226
    @feliciteebimina226 11 месяцев назад

    Thank you so much stu ive been trying with no succes… i hope these tips help

  • @J831-t5i
    @J831-t5i 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад

      Welcome!

    • @J831-t5i
      @J831-t5i 11 месяцев назад +1

      @@marinmusic we need more music theory, you’re a good teacher, whether it being chromatic scales or explaining music theory, I know it’s boring… but you’d break it down well for your followers

  • @ThePhoenixSlayer
    @ThePhoenixSlayer 11 месяцев назад +2

    Hey Stuart, I have a question: Do you recommend starting with the lyric-writing, or starting with a melody, and writing lyrics to fit that. Because when I start with lyrics, I always find it hard to think of a unique melody to fit with it, and the exact problem arises the other way round: when I start with a melody, I struggle thinking of lyrics that fit into that tune. A question to add to this is: how do you recommend trying to think of a unique melody. As a huge consumer of music, I sometimes sporadically start humming something unique, but as soon as I realize I'm doing it, my brain automatically just reverts to some random song that sounds kinda similar, and the idea is just lost. Hope you're having a good day (I guess your trip was good as well?)

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +3

      This is such a big question. Answer #1: every approach is a totally legit approach- lyrics first, melody first, both at the same time… Answer #2: I’ll dive into that in some upcoming vids 😉

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +3

      Answer #3: I usually write lyrics first, but change them quite a bit as I’m writing the melody.

    • @ThePhoenixSlayer
      @ThePhoenixSlayer 11 месяцев назад

      @@marinmusic Thanks Stuart!

    • @dickrichard626
      @dickrichard626 7 месяцев назад

      It's easier to make a great piece of music without lyrics. If you write lyrics first then the music gets forced to comfort to them somehow and the actual creating of the music suffers as a result because it's much more difficult where as if you create the music and have basically the entire song worked out it can be used as inspiration for the lyrics because the music should have some kind of vibe already to base your ideas off of. People that write lyrics and then put music to them usually don't make music that is very creative or complex. Many famous bands do the music first, then vocalist goe's to work for reasons that I just described.

  • @Joaquim-i2h
    @Joaquim-i2h 5 месяцев назад +1

    you could be a character from The Office XD ty for the tips!!!!

  • @mitch5944
    @mitch5944 11 месяцев назад +2

    Have fun in Colorado tommorow

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +3

      Thanks I actually already got back and I got sick there. But I played fortnight for the first time

  • @danielcarvalho1599
    @danielcarvalho1599 11 месяцев назад +8

    For the bonus tips, I think Hey by Pixies is the best example, because they use Hey, Woo and Yeah in the same phrase

  • @melt3215
    @melt3215 7 месяцев назад

    Youre awesome man

  • @nottheaverageperson7428
    @nottheaverageperson7428 11 месяцев назад

    We Love You Uncle Stuart

  • @zvw444x3zefa
    @zvw444x3zefa 2 месяца назад

    Good vid!

  • @BossManDayz
    @BossManDayz 4 месяца назад

    The rock metaphor reminded me of I’m just a fan by teezo touchdown

  • @mitch5944
    @mitch5944 11 месяцев назад +2

    Songwriting vids=best vids :)

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад +1

      Oh good, I’m glad you like them. I’ll keep doing song tutorials for sure, but I really like making these.

  • @MommaKayleigh
    @MommaKayleigh 7 месяцев назад

    Omg I found my new teacher!! 😂thank u so much man!!

  • @freakpetux4452
    @freakpetux4452 11 месяцев назад

    Thank you Stuart

  • @cheribarkman1784
    @cheribarkman1784 4 месяца назад

    Thanks for the info and the laugh. 😂

  • @aasara4
    @aasara4 11 месяцев назад +1

    Youre the best

  • @NOTurbuisness-r5q
    @NOTurbuisness-r5q 11 месяцев назад

    Very awesome video.

  • @I_AmCwispBruv
    @I_AmCwispBruv 5 месяцев назад +1

    What about;
    Her look, turning cold,
    Her eyes colored gold
    I kinda like it, what do you think?

  • @OWIEEE123
    @OWIEEE123 11 месяцев назад

    Stuart, how do you keep reading my mind like this. I wanted to learn Chop suey and saw that you just uploaded it, same thing with apple cider and now just when I want to write a song, you upload this.

  • @LQ2DARESQ
    @LQ2DARESQ 11 месяцев назад

    This man is a national treasure

  • @steven4969
    @steven4969 7 месяцев назад

    thank u bro

  • @KinoKutie
    @KinoKutie 6 месяцев назад

    the uh oh at 9:38 tugged at my heart!! ;=;

  • @Insane_world-y5k
    @Insane_world-y5k 8 месяцев назад

    Stuart ! Its too art 🎶 😂❤

  • @VocalEdgeTV
    @VocalEdgeTV 5 месяцев назад

    This is quite good.

  • @hrrrtshapedbox129
    @hrrrtshapedbox129 10 месяцев назад

    I LOVE U MAN!!

  • @brandonstrauss5228
    @brandonstrauss5228 11 месяцев назад

    Thanks Stuart! Can you do a tutorial of Run by Snow Patrol, I’d be forever grateful.

  • @thecoolestmanever9068
    @thecoolestmanever9068 4 месяца назад +1

    i’m gonna write five songs instead of going to sleep now uncle stu, i like your green pencil.

  • @osifoeke
    @osifoeke 11 месяцев назад +3

    can you do a modern baseball song tutorial next pls

    • @marinmusic
      @marinmusic  11 месяцев назад

      Added to the list- thanks!

  • @michalterplyvec4044
    @michalterplyvec4044 11 месяцев назад

    Hi stuart I love your energy and I was thinking if you could teach this song called dont know how to love by band caled ever thanks so much

  • @kalvino67
    @kalvino67 11 месяцев назад +1

    Too many lyrics? It works for Taylor Swift! 😂 Love your vids btw…and your Martin guitars!

  • @jakekilemade3313
    @jakekilemade3313 11 месяцев назад

    Stuart you are too good

  • @mirwanazzayni188
    @mirwanazzayni188 4 месяца назад

    thank you so much uncle stuart and you remind me of dr house for some reason idk

  • @n_eemo
    @n_eemo 5 месяцев назад

    bestest teacher ever

  • @aysnothingmore
    @aysnothingmore 11 месяцев назад

    stuart can you make a tutorial on that "disneyland rules" song? i really need that

  • @adelaide5437
    @adelaide5437 11 месяцев назад

    best teacher

  • @celobisicchia8544
    @celobisicchia8544 11 месяцев назад

    Stuart the GOAT