"A Pitiful Little Town" Creepypasta Scary Story

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  • Опубликовано: 22 сен 2024
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    CREEPYPASTA STORY Author► Vesper's bell
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Комментарии • 108

  • @tylerthegrimm
    @tylerthegrimm 4 месяца назад +75

    I live in a town with a population of around 40 people. I love it, no one bothers you, theres no crime, and you can walk around outside in your underpants and no one says anything. Its great.

    • @music79075
      @music79075 4 месяца назад +3

      Where?

    • @coolnaruto56
      @coolnaruto56 4 месяца назад +14

      @@music79075 they ain’t gonna tell ya. Gotta keep it small

    • @blumiu2426
      @blumiu2426 3 месяца назад +2

      @@music79075 Probably somewhere beyond rural and abandoned over time for one reason or other. Not hard to look up places with small populations.

    • @blumiu2426
      @blumiu2426 3 месяца назад +5

      Everywhere has crime of some kind. It just depends on if those living there consider what they do a crime or accepted people keep deeds to the households.

    • @Lady-C
      @Lady-C 3 месяца назад +1

      40 people ?! Is this that own country in the US or something like that if I recall us having one ??

  • @ronda7340
    @ronda7340 4 месяца назад +12

    That was a great story!!! Those gas station people were nice people for a change instead of mean horrible ones. Loved this one... Thanks... 😊

  • @ruth_southernstar
    @ruth_southernstar 4 месяца назад +9

    I'm English and currently livein England. However, I used to live in Houston, Texas, where I worked for Fumducks as a waitress x

  • @justachick9793
    @justachick9793 4 месяца назад +10

    Best story I've heard in a LONG time, kudos to the author. Also, bonus points for featuring a dog that isn't there to be killed off by monsters. Seriously, this is excellent storytelling. 👏

  • @Kehwanna
    @Kehwanna 4 месяца назад +5

    Oooh! That one was good. For some reason my imagination was going all out on that one, also the weather where I am at is raining, so it fit the feel.
    My questions are, how does a town like get shipments and mail if it is constantly shifting around? How has the government not picked up on it being weird? I'm overthinking it, but I just wonder how life in that town is. Any perks to being there?

    • @BarryHart-xo1oy
      @BarryHart-xo1oy 4 месяца назад +1

      All good questions.

    • @WoozyCool
      @WoozyCool 2 месяца назад +1

      They probably have someone trustworthy, outside of town, yet quite close to their town and knows what goes down, handle most of shipments, receive it on their behalf, pay on their behalf, etc.
      So once the transits are in their favor, they can go to this nearby place, swiftly get the supplies, pay for supplies, pay for their help, etc.
      It's not as if they tried to leave their town, in large numbers, for a noticeably long time period, hence the forlorn might not strongly react.

  • @aimeeprincessofpower
    @aimeeprincessofpower 4 месяца назад +16

    What a sad place to live 😮. Great job as always CGS ❤

  • @donaldmccleary9015
    @donaldmccleary9015 4 месяца назад +10

    Good story and narration! Interesting story.
    Thanks!

  • @KarenJarrett-q1f
    @KarenJarrett-q1f 4 месяца назад +7

    That was terrific. Thank you !

  • @donnavalliere8722
    @donnavalliere8722 4 месяца назад +4

    Loved the story very creative and refreshing, and as always excellent narration 😊

  • @LTJC70
    @LTJC70 4 месяца назад +5

    Great story and narration... Thx so much 🙃

  • @maxdoles5806
    @maxdoles5806 4 месяца назад +2

    How did anyone manage to vandalize the gas station sign with how little time there is once you get there?

  • @punkyreggaeparty8786
    @punkyreggaeparty8786 4 месяца назад +6

    Enjoyed this one very much. Thank you. Stay well. ❤

  • @Letmebe_2363
    @Letmebe_2363 4 месяца назад +5

    Great story!

  • @baffledbits3226
    @baffledbits3226 4 месяца назад +2

    I hope there's a sequel or extended universe to this 👀

  • @Martial-Mat
    @Martial-Mat 4 месяца назад +5

    Excellent story. Would really like to know more.

  • @EvelynFacchine
    @EvelynFacchine 4 месяца назад +6

    I absolutely loved this little story. Amazing job!!

  • @sherylsocia4496
    @sherylsocia4496 4 месяца назад +5

    Great story

  • @223winchester
    @223winchester 4 месяца назад +3

    The name of the fog enteties sound a lot like "Verlorene". That means "lost (n.)" in German. Very good story. Thank you.

  • @dylanhebert7313
    @dylanhebert7313 4 месяца назад +5

    I loved this story

  • @rouninpanda6318
    @rouninpanda6318 4 месяца назад +3

    How could they possibly know what happens to people who leave town if they are rarely in the same place twice? And how the hell does anyone in town ever get more supplies, like... gasoline and fireworks, food?
    And how on Earth would the station's credit card reader work? Electricity?
    Other than that, great story.

    • @ooowatzthat
      @ooowatzthat 4 месяца назад +2

      Like the show From. It just works

    • @rouninpanda6318
      @rouninpanda6318 4 месяца назад +1

      @@ooowatzthat After 2 seasons of From, it still makes no sense.

    • @BarryHart-xo1oy
      @BarryHart-xo1oy 4 месяца назад

      Yes,there seems to be more questions than answers with this scenario.

    • @nancycollura1721
      @nancycollura1721 2 месяца назад +1

      its like a twilight zone! good story!

  • @blwolz8772
    @blwolz8772 4 месяца назад +1

    That was an interesting story. Well narrated too. Thank you.

  • @christinerewell9954
    @christinerewell9954 4 месяца назад +5

    How the he run out of the gas station door when it was locked and the shutters were down! 🤔

    • @BarryHart-xo1oy
      @BarryHart-xo1oy 4 месяца назад +2

      Good question.

    • @WoozyCool
      @WoozyCool 2 месяца назад

      I think the door, as well as, lock/grill against door, were openable from inside. Might've been set that way, in case they suddenly needed to leave the place swiftly.
      Downside being, anyone not thinking straight and trying to flee, can get outside as quick as they wanted.

  • @susanbutler2542
    @susanbutler2542 4 месяца назад +6

    Thank you so much it was a really great story❤

    • @CreepyGhostStories
      @CreepyGhostStories  4 месяца назад +3

      Thanks susan

    • @susanbutler2542
      @susanbutler2542 4 месяца назад +3

      @@CreepyGhostStories you are so welcome💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙

    • @kimberlyshepherd270
      @kimberlyshepherd270 4 месяца назад +1

      ​@@susanbutler2542 Hi friend 👋🫶🫂❤️💕💖🖤🧡💛💚🩵💙💜🩶🤍💝

  • @kimberlyshepherd270
    @kimberlyshepherd270 4 месяца назад +7

    Sorry I'm really late. Can you believe that I actually had yesterday and today off work? Two days in a row 🤯🤯. Had some house work to do but I'm listening now.

  • @RayRay-cq5ky
    @RayRay-cq5ky 4 месяца назад +1

    I love this one! It's clever and unique.

  • @lilybelleg9041
    @lilybelleg9041 4 месяца назад +1

    Loved this.. Thank you 😊

  • @baloneycreep2392
    @baloneycreep2392 4 месяца назад +1

    Hope to hear more about this town! Love the story.

  • @soulreaver1983
    @soulreaver1983 4 месяца назад +6

    Another outstanding video to end the day! 🙂

  • @rtempest12
    @rtempest12 4 месяца назад +9

    Hi 👾👻 & Fellöw Listener's.. 👋Great Story - Töök Üs Down a Different 'röad' 😅
    Thank Ü. Enjoyed.
    Take Care & Remain Blessed.. Fröm 👾 in Önt 🇨🇦

    • @CreepyGhostStories
      @CreepyGhostStories  4 месяца назад +4

      Thank you redren

    • @kimberlyshepherd270
      @kimberlyshepherd270 4 месяца назад +3

      Hi 👋💝🤍🩶💜💙🩵

    • @soulreaver1983
      @soulreaver1983 4 месяца назад +2

      🙂👋

    • @einienj3281
      @einienj3281 4 месяца назад +2

      Hello! 💜 I'm Finnish, and I just read your comment with the Ö's out loud and laughed at my new accent 😂😂

  • @jamesatherton5710
    @jamesatherton5710 4 месяца назад +3

    What is this? A poor man's American Brigadoon?

  • @darthjesus7959
    @darthjesus7959 4 месяца назад +1

    This was solid

  • @jeffhein7275
    @jeffhein7275 10 дней назад

    Excellent excellent story!!

  • @jennifergreene6469
    @jennifergreene6469 4 месяца назад +1

    Hell yeah, Pomeroy!

  • @The_child-catcher
    @The_child-catcher 4 месяца назад +1

    I really liked this story, thank you.

  • @MicocoSpice
    @MicocoSpice 4 месяца назад +2

    I love this! Hoping for another DumbLuck story ❤

  • @thecatspajamas1442
    @thecatspajamas1442 4 месяца назад +1

    I knew this was Vesper’s Bell! I didn’t think their stories were anywhere except CTFDN.
    But as soon as they started describing these guys I was like…. Hmmm I wonder if The Darlings are going to make an appearance? 😏

  • @7cats2
    @7cats2 Месяц назад

    Great story & narration! 😊😊😊

  • @itdoesntmatter181
    @itdoesntmatter181 Месяц назад

    Excellent story!

  • @eddiemaxwelljr3238
    @eddiemaxwelljr3238 22 дня назад

    i love the stories that keep you thinking afterwards

  • @junebuggurl2004
    @junebuggurl2004 4 месяца назад +2

    I really liked this one!

  • @The1adventurebound
    @The1adventurebound 4 месяца назад +2

    So, this is going to be a series, right? Right?????

  • @SeetheBlueprint
    @SeetheBlueprint Месяц назад

    Your stories are basically better than almost everyone else..... : )
    Top 2 in my personal opinion.
    I'm a big fan of HollowsEnd.... your solid good all the way there...

  • @earndoggy
    @earndoggy 24 дня назад

    This is a great story!

  • @junespence7546
    @junespence7546 3 месяца назад

    Good one!!!

  • @mitchellbailey4906
    @mitchellbailey4906 4 месяца назад

    How do you only have 168 thousand subscribers? You deserve more than that, your a great storyteller.

  • @einienj3281
    @einienj3281 4 месяца назад +1

    Aaww.. Flu or allergy? Lucky me having both! Get well soon! 🤧🌼🤒

  • @ScullyPop
    @ScullyPop 4 месяца назад +4

    The best ghost stories.

  • @ЯремаМихайлюк-ш1у
    @ЯремаМихайлюк-ш1у 4 месяца назад +2

    Is this going to be a series?

  • @phylippezimmermannpaquin2062
    @phylippezimmermannpaquin2062 4 месяца назад +1

    Its been a while since i ran across a creepypasta thats actually interesting

  • @karenbraughton3179
    @karenbraughton3179 7 дней назад

    After going through the comment I have to say they are correct you are my fav story teller

  • @Ryan-vs2dk
    @Ryan-vs2dk 3 месяца назад

    Please have more stories from this writer

  • @-Reagan
    @-Reagan 4 месяца назад

    This might be my town… I would wonder who told but, it doesn’t matter bc they’re never believed. When they’re even sober and aware of where they are to begin with. It’s not a bad place, really. Once you’re used to it.

  • @lisaaustin8150
    @lisaaustin8150 21 день назад

    Must’ve been in north Texas🤷🏼‍♀️

  • @nAuGhTykAt777
    @nAuGhTykAt777 4 месяца назад +2

  • @karenbraughton3179
    @karenbraughton3179 7 дней назад

    We live out in the country on 15 acres. My husband loves to salute the morning by taking a piss off the front porch. Hell you can run around naked damn near all day outside if ya wanted to. The mailman is about the only person you may see but he doesn’t mind nudity at all! Thinking about putting an old eagle claw bath tub on the porch so I can play rubber ducky under the stars

  • @Bebecat477
    @Bebecat477 4 месяца назад

    I'd live in that town lol

  • @BoReads
    @BoReads 3 месяца назад

    omg this is so creepy

  • @InaudibleRitual
    @InaudibleRitual 4 месяца назад +1

    You poor thing.. you have a cold. Or have been crying..

  • @froginprogress8510
    @froginprogress8510 4 месяца назад

    This story makes me think of the tv show, From.

  • @joshuayost1745
    @joshuayost1745 Месяц назад

    Silent hill vibes

  • @CynosureRam
    @CynosureRam 4 месяца назад +4

    🐏☑️

  • @peekaboo1069
    @peekaboo1069 4 месяца назад +3

    666 Views... Dammit 😂 I am number 666.

    • @kimberlyshepherd270
      @kimberlyshepherd270 4 месяца назад +2

      I would have kept checking how many likes until it was 666 already and then liked.

    • @urbanobstacles
      @urbanobstacles 4 месяца назад +1

      Your not gonna make it

    • @ruth_southernstar
      @ruth_southernstar 4 месяца назад

      That's a devil of a number

  • @kristinacable
    @kristinacable 2 месяца назад

    😊❤

  • @Dr.cursed
    @Dr.cursed 13 дней назад

    Nice video man! I just started with uploading creepy story’s, what do y’all think about my first video?

  • @InnocentFurryCat-we6yz
    @InnocentFurryCat-we6yz 2 месяца назад

    Are they zombies? Kind of sounds like it they are not very smart

  • @bryanarchy5824
    @bryanarchy5824 4 месяца назад +2

    im first

  • @nostromza3433
    @nostromza3433 4 месяца назад +2

    No more long Reddit-Slop tryhard hook titles and titles that actually make sense?

  • @nerroworks7562
    @nerroworks7562 4 месяца назад +1

    Second visible comment Idc if I am actually second

  • @amyrobles4780
    @amyrobles4780 4 месяца назад +2

    Great story!

  • @FancyMargot
    @FancyMargot Месяц назад

    Great story!!