Would you mind remakeing the series, it's good it's just that you added yourself and the story began to focus on you a bit more rather then naruto himself, but its your choice But as a fan of yours I would really like it if you remake it but with out you, no hate I just want the story's plot to be a bit less focused on you And more on the actual characters.♡♡♡♡
Ummm no offence but I’m not trying to be rude or anything but in some episodes you got of track and it wasn’t really related to Naruto and he wasn’t really depressed anymore so... Ummm what I’m trying to say is... ummmm try to focus on one topic/problem at a time and not make the story too complex and try not to make it wordy as not to have too many characters... also overall I think this story was lovely 😊. Although I’m not the one that should give you the feedback because I used to get ghat feedback from my writing tutor but please put it into consideration😊.
Hey I’m wondering if you could make it so sasuke and naruto argue and naruto hurts sasuke (not meaning to) and he then proceeds to you know?... And then kakashi finds him with scars all over his arms and stuff? Maybe he’s in a coma for a month or so and then he will wake up??? Oh and can we bed friends? Oh and if you have disc could I add you? It’s fine if not but I love this series (I know you stopped this series but could you continue It a bit longer? It’s okay if not
I hate this ship can you at least make it naruhina because you not ganna make demil and naruto date so please make a depressed naruto new story line and make demil and naruto date and make it so naruto not afraid of her or make it naruto and hinata
Hi new love video so much 😌😌😀😀
Lamya Younger thank you ☺️☺️clock the notification button I upload every single day
Ah yes love it when i see my fav ship early in the morning 😉😜
Ikr
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1:08
Naruto: I- I committed suicide *crying *
~Happy music.
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Can you make more SasuNaru text story’s plzzzzzz
I love it!! Make this series 50 episodes long !!❤️💖✨
But I wanted to make it 100 episodes??🙃🙃
E Girl Demil YASSSSS
Yea
I KNEW IT SINCE I KNEW DA TWIST WAS COMING I SHIPPED INO AND SAKURA OMGGGGG IMA LEGEND RESPECT MEEEEEEE (and the creator) YASSSS QUEEEN
Let me get this straight Sakura likes my mother NANI!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Lol tho 😂
Whoa I didn't expect that
Such a good channel me getting exited and happy
i love your videos keep up the good work
I love these videos!!
Ty 💞
I am watching this at 1am😐
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Girls: Cute
Boys: Weird
I am eternally screaming
I hate it when you puted yourself in the story but I liked it
E Girl Demil : this video is sponserd by hisoka
😂😂you're getting a ahoutout
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You're getting another by the way😭😂
@@egirldemil1789 lol 😂
Ion rlly care makes the story better anyways
Would you mind remakeing the series, it's good it's just that you added yourself and the story began to focus on you a bit more rather then naruto himself, but its your choice But as a fan of yours I would really like it if you remake it but with out you, no hate I just want the story's plot to be a bit less focused on you And more on the actual characters.♡♡♡♡
I agreed in a kind way
you should have said that's a wonderful idea
Sakura and ino
Na She likes I o Na chill wit that
me still wating on hinata to like naruto👁️👄👁️
I'm a bunnie Q.Q
Hi 👋👁👅👁
Hai 👋👁👅👁
5:03 So ino WAS right he IS gay
Ummm no offence but I’m not trying to be rude or anything but in some episodes you got of track and it wasn’t really related to Naruto and he wasn’t really depressed anymore so... Ummm what I’m trying to say is... ummmm try to focus on one topic/problem at a time and not make the story too complex and try not to make it wordy as not to have too many characters... also overall I think this story was lovely 😊. Although I’m not the one that should give you the feedback because I used to get ghat feedback from my writing tutor but please put it into consideration😊.
Hey I’m wondering if you could make it so sasuke and naruto argue and naruto hurts sasuke (not meaning to) and he then proceeds to you know?...
And then kakashi finds him with scars all over his arms and stuff?
Maybe he’s in a coma for a month or so and then he will wake up???
Oh and can we bed friends? Oh and if you have disc could I add you?
It’s fine if not but I love this series (I know you stopped this series but could you continue
It a bit longer? It’s okay if not
I have a similar idea to that but differently if you don’t mind??
tf check part 14 comments😐
Are there going to be more
Next part pwes
you do know naruto is married right?
What the heck
I hate this ship can you at least make it naruhina because you not ganna make demil and naruto date so please make a depressed naruto new story line and make demil and naruto date and make it so naruto not afraid of her or make it naruto and hinata