Awwwww poor Sara and her past with Jay! T.T Gosh I'm so intrigued to see what the necklace is about and the reason behind Jim reacting to it toooooo AND THE FEELS MAN, YOU'RE MAKING ME SHIP THOSE TWO
YOU SO FAST GIRL. How you do it? We must know your waaayyysss. Any who, here are the notes!: JUDGES’S NOTES: -Your pacing and atmosphere is on point! -The interactions between Jim and Sara are extremely well written (we admit we’re starting to ship them ourselves) -EXCELLENT use of facial expressions throughout the video -The part with the necklace is really intriguing! We’re really curious where this goes! -Ending was soooo goooood! We got chills! And that title card manip is amazing! -Our one hangup is Jay’s death, in that the pacing in the scene is really rushed. We found this strange seeing as to how the pacing in the rest of the video is really well done. We think you could have gone two directions with this: Make the scene more dramatic so the death doesn’t seem as jarring Keep it jarring, but make Sara’s reaction last longer (maybe she doesn’t think he’s dead at first and is in denial) PERSONAL NOTES (since Maria did this for her judging, i decided to keep the trend going myself): -Loooove the camera movement at 0:21 -Excellent use of those Tangled backgrounds! -The animation and sound effect at 0:36 is perfect! -0:44 Meg gives zero fucks and I love it -1:01 another wonderful Meg line -I noticed you changed Jay’s eye color to a brown. A nice detail to notify the difference between him and Jim! -Effects for Jay’s death are really well done! -The scene with Meg’s breakdown and Proteus is chilling! The music and uncomfortable environment is exactly what I had in mind for this part and you executed it perfectly! I can really feel the uneasiness. -Showing the characters one by one activate the spell sets up amazing suspense! -Loooove how everyone’s eyes turned green! Nice! -4:22 The multicolored text is extremely creative! -A personal thing I think helps in dramatic scenes is intense coloring, which seemed to be lacking in your climax. Overall, the coloring in your video is done really well. But in more intense scenes like the escape, you could definitely play around with the colors a bit more. Popping highlights, darker tones and heavy shadows are the biggest play factor in this. I thought you did it extremely well last round, so I was sad to see it missing in this entry. This doesn’t effect your climax and score to much, as the scene in itself still works AMAZING on its own. But I do think stronger colors can add a lot of intensity. Overall, this was a fantastic entry and you’re definitely improving by every entry! Most of our negatives at this point are nitpicking, because you do such a wonderful job and in such a quick amount of time!
Oooh 😮 this was so enjoyable to watch!! Love the dynamic between Jim and Sarah. Also felt the pain Meg went through finding out about Proteus’s death. So sad. Can’t wait for next episode!
Thought the expressions were splendid the editing was on point the music and build up was on point, and can't wait for more! (Theory if permitted) . . . . Jim is either Jay himself or Jim is Jays twin brother/long lost brother and they were separated at God knows what point in life. If first one, his necklace is the only thing he remembers after she "killed" him. And If second one he recognizes the necklace of his brother, from before they were separated
You disable comments for the “in the house in a heartbeat” but I just wanted to say that it is probably my most favorite of your videos and because of it I found “28 days later” which became a favorite series of mine. I guess what I wanted to say was thank you and I hope to see more amazing stuff from you in the future! Nice video here btw I love Jim :00
I love Sara and Jim together, you made them work so well together.
Sorry for commenting late but
Tulio casually saying, "we're gonna die..." , seems really like a mood!🤣😂🤣😂
*S H O O K E T H T O T H E V E R Y C O R E*
This gives me chills its so good
Awwwww poor Sara and her past with Jay! T.T
Gosh I'm so intrigued to see what the necklace is about and the reason behind Jim reacting to it toooooo
AND THE FEELS MAN, YOU'RE MAKING ME SHIP THOSE TWO
YOU SO FAST GIRL. How you do it? We must know your waaayyysss. Any who, here are the notes!:
JUDGES’S NOTES:
-Your pacing and atmosphere is on point!
-The interactions between Jim and Sara are extremely well written (we admit we’re starting to ship them ourselves)
-EXCELLENT use of facial expressions throughout the video
-The part with the necklace is really intriguing! We’re really curious where this goes!
-Ending was soooo goooood! We got chills! And that title card manip is amazing!
-Our one hangup is Jay’s death, in that the pacing in the scene is really rushed. We found this strange seeing as to how the pacing in the rest of the video is really well done. We think you could have gone two directions with this:
Make the scene more dramatic so the death doesn’t seem as jarring
Keep it jarring, but make Sara’s reaction last longer (maybe she doesn’t think he’s dead at first and is in denial)
PERSONAL NOTES (since Maria did this for her judging, i decided to keep the trend going myself):
-Loooove the camera movement at 0:21
-Excellent use of those Tangled backgrounds!
-The animation and sound effect at 0:36 is perfect!
-0:44 Meg gives zero fucks and I love it
-1:01 another wonderful Meg line
-I noticed you changed Jay’s eye color to a brown. A nice detail to notify the difference between him and Jim!
-Effects for Jay’s death are really well done!
-The scene with Meg’s breakdown and Proteus is chilling! The music and uncomfortable environment is exactly what I had in mind for this part and you executed it perfectly! I can really feel the uneasiness.
-Showing the characters one by one activate the spell sets up amazing suspense!
-Loooove how everyone’s eyes turned green! Nice!
-4:22 The multicolored text is extremely creative!
-A personal thing I think helps in dramatic scenes is intense coloring, which seemed to be lacking in your climax. Overall, the coloring in your video is done really well. But in more intense scenes like the escape, you could definitely play around with the colors a bit more. Popping highlights, darker tones and heavy shadows are the biggest play factor in this. I thought you did it extremely well last round, so I was sad to see it missing in this entry. This doesn’t effect your climax and score to much, as the scene in itself still works AMAZING on its own. But I do think stronger colors can add a lot of intensity.
Overall, this was a fantastic entry and you’re definitely improving by every entry! Most of our negatives at this point are nitpicking, because you do such a wonderful job and in such a quick amount of time!
Oooh 😮 this was so enjoyable to watch!! Love the dynamic between Jim and Sarah. Also felt the pain Meg went through finding out about Proteus’s death. So sad. Can’t wait for next episode!
I am so in love with this. Mainly the Jim/Sara chemistry! 💕
Tulio is so negative xD
Omg, This is incredible, the story telling is clear and you editing Is purely amazing 😍😍
Wow amazing work the editing is stunning
Jim looks soooo good in a blue shirt
Thought the expressions were splendid the editing was on point the music and build up was on point, and can't wait for more!
(Theory if permitted)
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Jim is either Jay himself or Jim is Jays twin brother/long lost brother and they were separated at God knows what point in life.
If first one, his necklace is the only thing he remembers after she "killed" him.
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If second one he recognizes the necklace of his brother, from before they were separated
Amazing story so far I can't wait for the next part
I'm so proud of you! Thank you for this
This is amazing and I was really engrossed in it!
Sara and the others came so close to escape... and yet, so far.
What about round 3 😯and so on? It is so cool😍
Wow! Is so incredible!♡
Please keep making more!
This-WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!Can you show other masking?)
(Cinderella,AladdinFrollo?)
So good!!
Woah this is sooooo good 😍😍😍
NOOOOOO HOLLI!!!!
You disable comments for the “in the house in a heartbeat” but I just wanted to say that it is probably my most favorite of your videos and because of it I found “28 days later” which became a favorite series of mine. I guess what I wanted to say was thank you and I hope to see more amazing stuff from you in the future! Nice video here btw I love Jim :00
Continue plis ❤️😍👌👍
Oi XD soo interesting, love it...but I'm more of a shipper for SaraxChel hehehe nevermind love your edits as always. Thanks for all the hard work
And one more subscriber !
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hows round 3 coming?
nice
I ship jim and meg all the way