WOR Story - Honestly It Sucks, Could It Be Better?

Hello all!
Indulge me a complaint. There's way to much noun soup in this "story." I wanna fix it bad. This is gonna take a while!

[@spencerlauke9023]

when im reading every hero's story there, i really dought they use AI to create the whole story randomly.😅

[@FeralVincent]

Haha it feels like the base is written by AI. It may not be but then it shows a lack of objective.