The Black Ship (Part 8) | HFY | A short Sci-Fi Story

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  • Опубликовано: 23 дек 2023
  • The Black ship continues...
    If you've just found this story, I implore you check this playlist and start from the beginning: • The Black Ship
    This is the continuation of the story "The Black Ship" from Reddit. The original story ended abruptly, and no other chapters could be found. I hope you enjoy these new chapters.
    if you like what we've done to continue the story It would be great if you could give this story an upvote on reddit. More chapters will follow. Thank you!
    Author: u/EkhidnaWritez
    Link to chapter 2: / the_black_ship_chapter_2
    I'd love to know what you think of the story in the comments. Does it meet your expectations?
    The original Story details:
    author: u/[deleted]
    original story link: / oc_the_black_ship
    #scifi #hfy #scifistories1977
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Комментарии • 58

  • @johncunningham4820
    @johncunningham4820 5 месяцев назад +33

    This really is an Outstanding Story Ark . Proper , Old-School Space Opera .

  • @leonievanheerden7090
    @leonievanheerden7090 5 месяцев назад +31

    For the author, the narrator, and the story...thank you very much 💐⭐⭐💐

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 5 месяцев назад +3

      Thank you for reading/listening!

    • @GeorgeOrwell-yz6zx
      @GeorgeOrwell-yz6zx 5 месяцев назад +2

      ​@@ekhidna4Thank you for making the story available. I am enjoying the series very much

    • @austinenns9502
      @austinenns9502 2 месяца назад

      The narrator is an AI 🙂 but it's definitely an outstanding story

  • @maxjjackson
    @maxjjackson 5 месяцев назад +15

    This might be the first serial since The Last Terran (hmm, maybe The New Species too..) where I check multiple times a day to see if the next instalment has dropped. Enjoying it immensely.

  • @valeriejames4675
    @valeriejames4675 11 дней назад

    What an FNG. Stealth and ambush dishonourable?
    You can fight clean and fair.
    Or, you can fight to win!
    "Stand in the ashes of a trillion dead souls, and ask the ghosts if honour matters."
    - Commander Javik

  • @Soundwave119
    @Soundwave119 5 месяцев назад +2

    This was a geat Christmas Eve🎄 present. Merry Christmas to you too!
    I do love how Wyatt enjoyed having his own top of the line starfighter. I do love how Wyatt cusses out Epsilon 4 getting himself and 2 other pilots killed for personal glory. I do like after E4 gets himself killed, no one else in his wing obays his orders without hesitation.
    Great job with the complex space battle in this chapter. I do like how Wyatt's experience with Blackships/subs gives his fellow fighters a fighting chance.

  • @cuzz63
    @cuzz63 5 месяцев назад +5

    I have been watching for the next episode to drop. Thank you.

  • @cjjlmorris
    @cjjlmorris 5 месяцев назад +3

    What a GREAT Christmas present to us❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @user-yx2is7ew6h
    @user-yx2is7ew6h 5 месяцев назад +6

    Love this channel. One of my three favorites on all of RUclips. A WH40K battle report channel, a humorous WH40K channel, and yours. The writing is really excellent. Please more content.
    Do you have a Pateron Page?
    Charles 58 year old 43 year DM and gamer.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 5 месяцев назад +1

      Glad you're enjoying this story, mate.

  • @steelblackface
    @steelblackface 5 месяцев назад +2

    A nice christmas gift

  • @davidorf3921
    @davidorf3921 5 месяцев назад +4

    I am enjoying this story so much 🙂

  • @Shadow.Dragon
    @Shadow.Dragon 5 месяцев назад +4

    Great episode!

  • @swampyankee72
    @swampyankee72 5 месяцев назад +3

    Damn cliff hanger... 🤣

  • @evanemerson2472
    @evanemerson2472 5 месяцев назад +1

    Wooooohooooo, more please!!!! Amazing

  • @wadeenyart9676
    @wadeenyart9676 3 месяца назад

    great job, just found story and channel a few days ago. It is so compelling you have a 52 yr old school teacher binge listening. My high school students cracked up when I said binge listening to them they tried to correct me and say binge watching and I said no Binge listening lol, I think some of the boys are listening also now, hope they pay more attention to you than when I give them notes in class. Great job now I am on to part 9. TY

  • @stevebowman421
    @stevebowman421 5 месяцев назад

    Great story, look forward to next chapter.

  • @angrycrusader3926
    @angrycrusader3926 5 месяцев назад +3

    Merry Christmas!

  • @galacticalliance4801
    @galacticalliance4801 5 месяцев назад +1

    Yes, i can forget my troubles for the day.

    • @thaphreak
      @thaphreak 5 месяцев назад

      short day friend

  • @walterlyzohub8112
    @walterlyzohub8112 5 месяцев назад +1

    It would be a nice touch to see the tactical screen as they examine the situation. But that idea may not be good for the story.
    Otherwise this is good.

  • @aightm8
    @aightm8 3 месяца назад

    7:20 - Gforces in space 😅

  • @BenjaminSchneider-wm2lk
    @BenjaminSchneider-wm2lk 5 месяцев назад

    Mmm get that trader in the fleet…..
    Oooohaaaa!! 29:57

  • @johnminer1407
    @johnminer1407 5 месяцев назад

    Making it hard to wait for the next chapter.

  • @johnnyrotten3175
    @johnnyrotten3175 5 месяцев назад +1

    👏👏👏👏👏

  • @kiwano1
    @kiwano1 5 месяцев назад +1

    wait wait wait. at 13:44 they say the corvette gets a hole 800 meters long blown in it?! the Nimitz class aircraft carrier is only 300m long and is manned by 5000 personnel. how big is a cruiser in this world?!

    • @arandomsystemglitch2398
      @arandomsystemglitch2398 2 месяца назад

      It is a space ship affterall not very surpising honestly since well most ships affter built won't ever go into atmo also don't need to worry about weight limits like you do in atmosphere

    • @kiwano1
      @kiwano1 2 месяца назад

      @@arandomsystemglitch2398 its just I thought they mentioned the crew of a corvette being pretty small.

  • @0987brian
    @0987brian 5 месяцев назад

    Merry Christmas and thank you great story I am eagerly waiting for more . so no pressure

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 5 месяцев назад

      Merry Christmas to you, too, mate.

  • @AndrewBrownballroomdru
    @AndrewBrownballroomdru 5 месяцев назад

    Love this story. Next chapter please.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 5 месяцев назад

      Coming soon!

  • @snowwolf8186
    @snowwolf8186 5 месяцев назад

    I hope this story arc last for a while.

  • @timiiewhite
    @timiiewhite 5 месяцев назад

    Would be a great movie

  • @intellectualredneck1813
    @intellectualredneck1813 5 месяцев назад

    When does the next part come out! This is the BEST HFY i have ever came across!

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 5 месяцев назад

      Soon, mate. And you flatter me! if you like this one, then maybe check out Hunter or Huntress, Nature of Predators, or the collection of short stories from Builders in the Void. They're all on HFY.

    • @intellectualredneck1813
      @intellectualredneck1813 5 месяцев назад

      @@ekhidna4I am listing to Nautre of predators right now! It's amazing! This story could be an entire video series even.... It would very easily make a good series. You could even get it to around pg-13 as it would fit perfectly!

  • @leadingauctions8440
    @leadingauctions8440 5 месяцев назад

    Yes!

  • @thomaslee5919
    @thomaslee5919 5 месяцев назад

    1:48 😂😂😂

  • @cindaschuster6725
    @cindaschuster6725 5 месяцев назад +2

    💙👍🏻

  • @sherritasanders996
    @sherritasanders996 5 месяцев назад

    Loving this story. Allow me a minor suggestion. Any chance of getting some illustration. I would love to be able to see some of the characters.

    • @ekhidna4
      @ekhidna4 5 месяцев назад +1

      Perhaps when/if I get the money to pay for them. I, unfortunately, suck at drawing and I've been working on a map of the Principality.

  • @thebuddha4208
    @thebuddha4208 2 месяца назад

    Is there a way to change the voice after a while it becomes so robotic. Good story though

  • @thebuddha4208
    @thebuddha4208 2 месяца назад

    Fast way to die disobey orders break formation 15:53

  • @thomaslee5919
    @thomaslee5919 5 месяцев назад

    12:56

  • @kiradead666
    @kiradead666 3 месяца назад

    Char /red comet ?

  • @davidstowe5652
    @davidstowe5652 5 месяцев назад

    Good luck

  • @yomogami4561
    @yomogami4561 5 месяцев назад

    enjoying the story but way to many commercials