Damn this hurts but it’s so well done, everything from the song choice to the character designs and movements are perfect, the part where it shows Tommy spinning around as time goes on but he’s still just as confused and hurting was incredible, and the part where it showed Tommy’s letter to Ranboo saying “help me” hurt so much, it’s such a simple thing but it gives me shivers when you think of the context and how much c!Tommy was suffering, just man the exile arc was rough and this captures that perfectly, it’s so well done
I think it was the one he put in Puffy's therapy office-we see her right after, so I believe that's supposed to represent her responding. I'm not sure there was ever a response in the lore (if there was, there either wasn't a stream or I didn't see the stream,) but in this animatic I think that's what it stands for.
@@StoneBasilisk Oh! Now that I think about you’re probably right (also yes Puffy did give Tommy a response, she wrote him a letter then left it in his house, and Tommy found it not long after and got really excited), but what I said before still stands, c!Tommy was in a bad place for a really long time and he still is honestly
@@clairebear9886 Oh, yeah! I wasn't disagreeing-sorry if it came off that way. I just wanted to make sure you actually knew what was happening, lol. Do you happen to know what stream he found the response in? I'm really curious as to what it said, and how he reacted.
@@StoneBasilisk Don’t worry! I didn’t think of it as disagreeing or anything and I’m glad you reminded me, you’re fine lmao and as for the vod where it’s from I can’t remember exactly but I know it took place shortly after Tommy got revived because the statues were still there, but other then that I don’t have much to go off of I’m sorry
Amazing, i love how Tommy looks with long haired, unkept and his facee. maan, the song fits his exile arc so much, and as he was gonna jump and the different emotions, I thought there was a part where he would be in a braid, winter cape and not as sad, cause Technoblade took him in, well more like he intrude and Techno couldnt shoo him away xD But, the benchtrio end is best cause they actually cared for him.
Stunning. Loved the trident scene, the sheer horror of when Dream finds the stuff he hid, when it rotates through his different states of being, all amazing
1:28 - 1:35 OMG THIS THIS PART SHOWS SO MUCH GOOD FLOWING BODY GESTURES AND FACIAL EXPRESSIONS I MEAN THE WHOLE VIDEO ITSELF HAS SUCH EXPRESSIVE FACES AND BODY MOVEMENTS BUT THIS PART HITS THR SPOT SO GOOD
Always great to see another Crane Wives fan! I really love the little moment at 0:40. "Nobody ever loved me" he says and he's smiling, however forced, and it's clear that's he's trying to play it off as a joke but he just gives up partway through it
i love love love all the times where it shows Tommy speaking to the words of the song and all the little changes in his facial expressions. the first time the chorus comes around and hes holding himself and trying to convince himself that dream cares. the sheer emotion in the scene where he tears up the cake. the way you can see him reasoning out "something is better than nothing." and the last circle around after he jumps off and you can see him figuring out that dream never cared and that everyone else did. beautiful.
Yo this is so pog!! I love how you focused on the more direct physical abuse c!tommy faced, usually people just skip over it or pretty drastically play it down. Great job!
Yeah cause at first it doesnt seem to bad then when tommy is in the prison you can see him backing very far away and in the streams when he was teaming he also backed away from techno whenever he held a weapon and only until later streams did he stop using his shield when techno had a weapon
I really love this! I like that you included the moment at 1:08 where Tommy falls while tridenting because he went too high up and the rain turned to snow. Also, I love the way you drew his expression as he falls. Instead of fear, he looks more resigned and sad.
OMG ONE OF YOUR BEST ANIMATICS YET WOAHH THE SUBTLE DETAILS PULL THIS TOGETHER SO WELL LIKE THE LITTLE TALLYS ON A TREE IN ONE FRAME- OH AND THE SONG CHOICE WAS *AMAZING* don’t get me started on your artstyle! i just love this sm omg
when i saw the title i thought the song would be mitski's (which would have been also great, it's a beautiful song), but you have no idea how ecstatic it made me to hear my favorite band ever instead. so yeah, beautiful animation featuring an underrated song by an underrated band? you gain a sub and a friend, pal! :D
This animatic is so amazing and I have to come watch it sometimes- 1:27 also just scratches my brain so nice with those footsteps and the movements of the shadow vistages it's just like wow-
My day be so fine then boom! i remember that Exile arc happened... But seriously i love this, the art style is amazing and the transitions are fantastic! Really depressing, 10/10.
AHHHHH!!!! ROZU!!!!! This is sooo gooddd!!!! praying this gets more appreciation, I absolutely adore everything about this, the composition in this one is simply... mwuah,, you put all the scenes together so so well, showed the time passing so well, and i wanted to pick my favorite bit, but everything here just flows so well,,, i really like the scene at1:27 tho,, And that last frame... of the monument,, ahhh that makes me so happy. EVerything about this was just spectacular, your art is always such a treat, I really really love this!!!
This is so fricking good, might be one of my favorites tbh. The way Tommy recoils and is grabbed is so simple but so human and immersive. The whole thing is simple yet done beautifully 10/10 will watch every 5 seconds for the next couple months
This is one of my favourite exile arc animatics. I feel like a lot of people have captured the fear and depression Tommy felt, but I like how this one also spends a lot of time showing Tommy trying to convince himself that his relationship with Dream is all okay. My favourite frame is, ‘this close enough to perfect,’ where he’s taking a photo with him. From what I’ve heard about abusive relationships that fear of loosing the ‘positive’ parts of the relationship overriding your courage to leave as a response to the bad things they do to you is really realistic. To him at that point if he didn’t have Dream he had nothing. Perfect song choice! 👏🏻. Well done.
I LOVE the way you draw Tommy, he looks worn and beaten down, and the longer hair is a nice detail since he wouldnt be able to take care of it. It helps emphasize the effect all this has on him
ohh my gods i wasnt here for the premiere bc i was sleeping unfortunately but this is actually so amazing!!! i was physically pogging while watching this the entire time. the movements were soooo smooth and the character designs over time were also so amazing!! i honestly thought this was going to be the mitski song but im glad it was the crane wives, theyre so underrated plus i have songs i already relate to the dsmp by them :) anyways in conclusion very good animation good night
By the end of exile tommy would have had to had been partially def because of the tnt exploding so close to him along with all 3 of L’manburg explosions. Wow I thought too much about the tnt bit. Love the animation lol.
OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO GOOD WTF‼️‼️🤎🤎🤎🗯🗯🗯 BRO YOU’VE SERIOUSLY IMPROVED SO MUCH- HOLY SHIT THIS WAS SO SMOOTH!!! AND THE EXPRESSIONS AND LIGHTING ESPECIALLY WERE SO FUCKING SPOT ON- AAAA🤎🤎🤎🤎‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️🗯🗯🗯🗯
Omg I just thought about this but you should do a animatic of “we will rock you” for lmanburg, the first verse being Tommy’s, then wilburs, then Tubbos and it all leads up to lmanburg independence:)
@@pearlyp9898 actually using basic math and lore C!Tommy was 9 when the whole van thing started. Then 7 years passed and around the first L'manburg revolution C!Tommy was 16. Then just about 13 or so years passed and that's when Wil was revived and in those 13 years Tommy had spent just around 4 years in exile and a year with Techno. Simple
@@randumrav3n bro.... bro, where the fuck are you taking your information off of???? Dark twitch??? Besides all the other stuff, It wasn't "about 13 years" that Wilbur was dead in real time, Tommy and Will both explicitly said that limbo time went slower than real time in the dsmp, so a few months in dsmp was 14 years in limbo for c!wilbur, and 2 days in dsmp was a few months in limbo for c!tommy. I am so confused on your thought process here.
Nope. He buried his armor and weapons under the monument he made in the exile base as a ‘burying the hatchet’ sort of way (it was in a semi recent stream)
0:43 I thought he was doing a Lil dance so I did i little dance and then I realized he was just moving so i stopped
LMAO
Damn this hurts but it’s so well done, everything from the song choice to the character designs and movements are perfect, the part where it shows Tommy spinning around as time goes on but he’s still just as confused and hurting was incredible, and the part where it showed Tommy’s letter to Ranboo saying “help me” hurt so much, it’s such a simple thing but it gives me shivers when you think of the context and how much c!Tommy was suffering, just man the exile arc was rough and this captures that perfectly, it’s so well done
i think that was the help me letter he sent to puffy.
I think it was the one he put in Puffy's therapy office-we see her right after, so I believe that's supposed to represent her responding.
I'm not sure there was ever a response in the lore (if there was, there either wasn't a stream or I didn't see the stream,) but in this animatic I think that's what it stands for.
@@StoneBasilisk Oh! Now that I think about you’re probably right (also yes Puffy did give Tommy a response, she wrote him a letter then left it in his house, and Tommy found it not long after and got really excited), but what I said before still stands, c!Tommy was in a bad place for a really long time and he still is honestly
@@clairebear9886 Oh, yeah! I wasn't disagreeing-sorry if it came off that way. I just wanted to make sure you actually knew what was happening, lol.
Do you happen to know what stream he found the response in? I'm really curious as to what it said, and how he reacted.
@@StoneBasilisk Don’t worry! I didn’t think of it as disagreeing or anything and I’m glad you reminded me, you’re fine lmao and as for the vod where it’s from I can’t remember exactly but I know it took place shortly after Tommy got revived because the statues were still there, but other then that I don’t have much to go off of I’m sorry
Started a your new boyfriend by Wilbur soot singing train during the premiere. I regret nothing. Amazing job btw :)
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Amazing, i love how Tommy looks with long haired, unkept and his facee. maan, the song fits his exile arc so much, and as he was gonna jump and the different emotions, I thought there was a part where he would be in a braid, winter cape and not as sad, cause Technoblade took him in, well more like he intrude and Techno couldnt shoo him away xD But, the benchtrio end is best cause they actually cared for him.
I STILL THINK ABOUT THIS ANIMATIC ALL THE TIME
Stunning. Loved the trident scene, the sheer horror of when Dream finds the stuff he hid, when it rotates through his different states of being, all amazing
was here for the premier, didn't regret it.
chat was singing your new boyfriend 💀
good animatic, as always 💜
Thanks for singing with us lmao
1:28 - 1:35 OMG THIS THIS PART SHOWS SO MUCH GOOD FLOWING BODY GESTURES AND FACIAL EXPRESSIONS I MEAN THE WHOLE VIDEO ITSELF HAS SUCH EXPRESSIVE FACES AND BODY MOVEMENTS BUT THIS PART HITS THR SPOT SO GOOD
Holy wow this hit me with the exile feels incredibly done
Always great to see another Crane Wives fan!
I really love the little moment at 0:40. "Nobody ever loved me" he says and he's smiling, however forced, and it's clear that's he's trying to play it off as a joke but he just gives up partway through it
I honestly love every C!Dream designs where he has any inhuman features. I really like the eyes on your Dream's arms, I think it looks really cool😊🍊
i love love love all the times where it shows Tommy speaking to the words of the song and all the little changes in his facial expressions. the first time the chorus comes around and hes holding himself and trying to convince himself that dream cares. the sheer emotion in the scene where he tears up the cake. the way you can see him reasoning out "something is better than nothing." and the last circle around after he jumps off and you can see him figuring out that dream never cared and that everyone else did. beautiful.
Yo this is so pog!!
I love how you focused on the more direct physical abuse c!tommy faced, usually people just skip over it or pretty drastically play it down.
Great job!
Yeah cause at first it doesnt seem to bad then when tommy is in the prison you can see him backing very far away and in the streams when he was teaming he also backed away from techno whenever he held a weapon and only until later streams did he stop using his shield when techno had a weapon
That animation where the lips sync with the singing riff was phenomenal. The technique is getting better every time.
I really love this! I like that you included the moment at 1:08 where Tommy falls while tridenting because he went too high up and the rain turned to snow. Also, I love the way you drew his expression as he falls. Instead of fear, he looks more resigned and sad.
It’s upsetting that this is a bop
OMG ONE OF YOUR BEST ANIMATICS YET WOAHH
THE SUBTLE DETAILS PULL THIS TOGETHER SO WELL LIKE THE LITTLE TALLYS ON A TREE IN ONE FRAME-
OH AND THE SONG CHOICE WAS *AMAZING*
don’t get me started on your artstyle!
i just love this sm omg
YES!! The exile arc is my favorite as well, it was such a harsh ride,,,you captured the scenes perfectly
when i saw the title i thought the song would be mitski's (which would have been also great, it's a beautiful song), but you have no idea how ecstatic it made me to hear my favorite band ever instead. so yeah, beautiful animation featuring an underrated song by an underrated band? you gain a sub and a friend, pal! :D
Dream smiling like he new he was on the verge of breaking Tommy just hits to hard
2:31 was so well done I got chills
i literally think about this animatic all the time
This animatic is so amazing and I have to come watch it sometimes- 1:27 also just scratches my brain so nice with those footsteps and the movements of the shadow vistages it's just like wow-
My day be so fine then boom! i remember that Exile arc happened...
But seriously i love this, the art style is amazing and the transitions are fantastic! Really depressing, 10/10.
AHHHHH!!!! ROZU!!!!! This is sooo gooddd!!!! praying this gets more appreciation, I absolutely adore everything about this, the composition in this one is simply... mwuah,, you put all the scenes together so so well, showed the time passing so well, and i wanted to pick my favorite bit, but everything here just flows so well,,, i really like the scene at1:27 tho,, And that last frame... of the monument,, ahhh that makes me so happy. EVerything about this was just spectacular, your art is always such a treat, I really really love this!!!
this is so well passed to music and showcases Tommy's exile so well! great work! I said well twice oops lol
the plot, the animation, the song…this is all so perfect. amazing job :D /g
This is so fricking good, might be one of my favorites tbh. The way Tommy recoils and is grabbed is so simple but so human and immersive. The whole thing is simple yet done beautifully 10/10 will watch every 5 seconds for the next couple months
This is one of my favourite exile arc animatics. I feel like a lot of people have captured the fear and depression Tommy felt, but I like how this one also spends a lot of time showing Tommy trying to convince himself that his relationship with Dream is all okay. My favourite frame is, ‘this close enough to perfect,’ where he’s taking a photo with him. From what I’ve heard about abusive relationships that fear of loosing the ‘positive’ parts of the relationship overriding your courage to leave as a response to the bad things they do to you is really realistic. To him at that point if he didn’t have Dream he had nothing.
Perfect song choice! 👏🏻. Well done.
I love this, it's so amazing!
CRANE WIVES MY BELOVED, THIS IS A CROSSOVER I NEVER KNEW I WANTED
oh my HEART the FLOW.... the EMOTIONS of this animatic...... aaaahhhhhhh 🥺
I am so hyped just the thumbnail looks incredible
I LOVE the way you draw Tommy, he looks worn and beaten down, and the longer hair is a nice detail since he wouldnt be able to take care of it. It helps emphasize the effect all this has on him
I’m in love with your designs they’re so unique especially dreams
THIS WAS SO GOOD AND CRANE WIVES LETS GOOOOOO
This looks amazing! You popped OFF with this one!
The part where Dream grabs him by the hair and pulls him up is my favorite by fair like holy shit
OH MAN I WAS EXPECTING MITSKI BUT IT WAS ACTUALLY CRANE WIVES, I WAS SUPRISED IN A PLEASANT WAY
i remember sitting at my laptop waiting for the premiere of this last year, and even a year late this still looks amazing
ohh my gods i wasnt here for the premiere bc i was sleeping unfortunately but this is actually so amazing!!! i was physically pogging while watching this the entire time. the movements were soooo smooth and the character designs over time were also so amazing!! i honestly thought this was going to be the mitski song but im glad it was the crane wives, theyre so underrated plus i have songs i already relate to the dsmp by them :) anyways in conclusion very good animation good night
Never thought of Tommy's hair growing like that before.. Nice!
By the end of exile tommy would have had to had been partially def because of the tnt exploding so close to him along with all 3 of L’manburg explosions. Wow I thought too much about the tnt bit. Love the animation lol.
This looks amazing! Super excited!
This is amazing!
What a fitting song for his exile arc. Love the crane wives thank you
I've been rewatching this a lot and 1:27 is my favorite part just cuz of how nice the walking looks.
Your animatics are amazing. Im seriously shocked you don't have much more attention
Probably my favorite exile arc animatic I've seen,, I always find myself coming back to this
You have the maddest of skills and I am extremely jealous
Heart: broken
Tear: stricken
Pain: to the max
Thank
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OH MY GOD THIS WAS SO GOOD WTF‼️‼️🤎🤎🤎🗯🗯🗯 BRO YOU’VE SERIOUSLY IMPROVED SO MUCH- HOLY SHIT THIS WAS SO SMOOTH!!! AND THE EXPRESSIONS AND LIGHTING ESPECIALLY WERE SO FUCKING SPOT ON- AAAA🤎🤎🤎🤎‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️🗯🗯🗯🗯
ROZU THIS IS AMAZING AND WONDERFUL I LOVE IT SO MUCH IM SO SAD THAT ITS TAKEN ME THIS LONG TO WATCH IT BUT AAAAAAAAA YOUR ART IS ALWAYS INCREDIBLE
I can’t wait!!!!!
EXILE CONTENT LETS GOOOOOOOOOOO
Amazing 🥺
This is a great animation, keep up the work!
Absolutely amazing work
this is soooo good!!
I cant wait for premiere
I love this animatic, Rozu!
Whoo, angst!
This is very cool animation
Your Dream design 😘
I'm certain everybody that was there for the exile arc wanted to hug tommy
and kill dream
brutally kill dream
When you know the whole song because Crane Wives are great
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TOMMY AND THE CRANE WIVES 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
YOOOOO IM PUMPED
holy shit this is the coolest thing ever
Omg I just thought about this but you should do a animatic of “we will rock you” for lmanburg, the first verse being Tommy’s, then wilburs, then Tubbos and it all leads up to lmanburg independence:)
Just a idea tho :)
Ohhhh that sounds like a good idea
THIS IS LITERALLY SO GOOD!!!!!!!! what did you use to make this? I wanna do somethin similar(as in an animatic) and I love what you did!!!
I used procreate and imovie for this one :DD
Hello, thank you for pain!
ok but the hands are just *chefs kiss*
keep makin shit my dude!
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Why do I hear Mitski Nobody song
I'm sad now
AHHHH IM A PREMIERE BOI :D
I feel horrible for C!Tommy because he was in exile for three to four years--
he wasn't, that's just a rumor.
@@pearlyp9898 actually using basic math and lore C!Tommy was 9 when the whole van thing started. Then 7 years passed and around the first L'manburg revolution
C!Tommy was 16. Then just about 13 or so years passed and that's when Wil was revived and in those 13 years Tommy had spent just around 4 years in exile and a year with Techno.
Simple
@@randumrav3n bro.... bro, where the fuck are you taking your information off of???? Dark twitch???
Besides all the other stuff, It wasn't "about 13 years" that Wilbur was dead in real time, Tommy and Will both explicitly said that limbo time went slower than real time in the dsmp, so a few months in dsmp was 14 years in limbo for c!wilbur, and 2 days in dsmp was a few months in limbo for c!tommy. I am so confused on your thought process here.
Tus videos son geniales
Holy fuck dude
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Did tommy die?????
Nope. He buried his armor and weapons under the monument he made in the exile base as a ‘burying the hatchet’ sort of way (it was in a semi recent stream)
@@rozugold oh I got scared for a moment
Yooo
Puppyinnit?
Don't ruin this fucking song 💀