I think I like the original Carter intro better. ... Strange you didn't collect the turtle meat. ... Some of the futzing around -- while completely understandable -- could've been cut from the final video to save us some time. Ditto for long pauses. ... You really just needed that first palm frond bandage. It seems to me the 2nd and 3rd ones were wasted. On the other hand, you almost waited too long before applying one at all! Lucky for you, that poisoned condition wore off just in time. I'm guessing it was caused by a spider, because nothing else was ever even visible that could've caused it. ... Hmm, about that second "Escape!" note, the developers should be told they accidentally put the text for the second sentences' beginning as "I she...," when it *should've* been "Is he..." ... On page five (why didn't you let us read page 4?) of the Corporate Greed note, when the last sentence starts "I just need sometimes...," the developers should know that, also, is a goof misprint. That sentence *should* start "I just need *something* ..." ... With Claire's 2nd note (to Emma), again, why linger on page 1, but then give us *no* opportunity to read the other pages? Ditto for the other notes you don't let us read all the pages of. Honestly, you might as well not have bothered showing them to us at all. ... At around 1 : 19 : 20 or so --- Dude! Seriously?! When you're at death's door, maybe worry less about chopping trees, just for a freaking moment, and make and use a palm frond bandage, and *Heal* Yourself! Yeah, I know you eventually did. But *wow,* did you almost wait too long! Which reminds me, when are you going to learn *not* to dive into shark-infested waters without Shark Repellant? ... ... Kind of a lackluster ending. May I suggest you continue the game here, for us, but make sure each episode ends on a high note of some sort of accomplishment. This is important. Also, you should narrate it. Talk to us!
Thank you for the feedback! I will definitely take heed to everything you say. Narrating starts soon! I can't wait to be able to do that! Also, thank you for watching my vids. I am kinda new and still working on being able to edit my vids. Right now they are raw footage. I am currently learning that. Again, thank you so much for the feedback and I will do what I can to try to fix the things you talked about! Thank you again!
I think I like the original Carter intro better. ... Strange you didn't collect the turtle meat. ... Some of the futzing around -- while completely understandable -- could've been cut from the final video to save us some time. Ditto for long pauses. ... You really just needed that first palm frond bandage. It seems to me the 2nd and 3rd ones were wasted. On the other hand, you almost waited too long before applying one at all! Lucky for you, that poisoned condition wore off just in time. I'm guessing it was caused by a spider, because nothing else was ever even visible that could've caused it. ... Hmm, about that second "Escape!" note, the developers should be told they accidentally put the text for the second sentences' beginning as "I she...," when it *should've* been "Is he..." ... On page five (why didn't you let us read page 4?) of the Corporate Greed note, when the last sentence starts "I just need sometimes...," the developers should know that, also, is a goof misprint. That sentence *should* start "I just need *something* ..."
... With Claire's 2nd note (to Emma), again, why linger on page 1, but then give us *no* opportunity to read the other pages? Ditto for the other notes you don't let us read all the pages of. Honestly, you might as well not have bothered showing them to us at all. ... At around 1 : 19 : 20 or so --- Dude! Seriously?! When you're at death's door, maybe worry less about chopping trees, just for a freaking moment, and make and use a palm frond bandage, and *Heal* Yourself! Yeah, I know you eventually did. But *wow,* did you almost wait too long! Which reminds me, when are you going to learn *not* to dive into shark-infested waters without Shark Repellant? ...
... Kind of a lackluster ending. May I suggest you continue the game here, for us, but make sure each episode ends on a high note of some sort of accomplishment. This is important. Also, you should narrate it. Talk to us!
Thank you for the feedback! I will definitely take heed to everything you say. Narrating starts soon! I can't wait to be able to do that! Also, thank you for watching my vids. I am kinda new and still working on being able to edit my vids. Right now they are raw footage. I am currently learning that. Again, thank you so much for the feedback and I will do what I can to try to fix the things you talked about! Thank you again!