Its really wholesome that both Rodrick and Greg are dating two people from the same family and the moms happy they are dating Its also cool and kinda wierd that Rodrick and Greg went on a double date themselves too
Abigail being a snake is back. Honestly I’m here for a female villian. Also I love how your channel has all kinds of wimpy fanfic, from the realistic/wholesome like these to the cursed (eg: edging)
Loved the sequel more then the original and my own. Corvo is a pretty good writer, 10:13 this is probably the most in depth emotion I’ve seen from any read of an LLB In my opinion after the double date: Greg, rowley and holly went to a Joshie concert I also accidentally posted this same comment in your YT shorts
my mans doin the lord's work. here before yall blow up. no shade to enigma but i really dont care for the long running series he has going on right now
Agreed and it’s actually already finished I just need to finish some other reading and it’ll be out, it’s called mother knows best and it’s longer then both this and the bachelor of Crossland
@@Thesteamsmythe honestly I hope it’s another Holly point of view story. That reminds me, do you think that Abigail setting greg up, was that part of patty farrell’s plan?
@@DamnZtar the creator of the holly pov said they are making it after they finish joyride which is from uncle Gary pov and they said the second holly pov story will have 50 pages
Probably because you didn’t watch the first since this is a sequel and is part of a series called the bachelorverse Here’s the playlist m8 :) ruclips.net/p/PLF8mQYaAzM1egwybyevvWDTmlfImYX6qt&si=JYorn7khuKKfLCll
Already made part 3 of this llb: ruclips.net/video/3yKss3y6N0I/видео.htmlsi=GzHBRLA1oQYZPxwL And even a spin off of it I made a reading to: ruclips.net/video/cN1pKmZYSWg/видео.htmlsi=UtS-b-DWmB8YL62y
I just say this now so i dont have to say it later You sound like an anime weeb who voice acts deku in the fanfics he writes Sorry, just needed that off my chest, no hate
@@Thesteamsmythe idk lot of em, I don't hate ur voice, it reminds me of a weeb, sorry 😭 Also, just want to tell u this Don't read text that isn't in the story, it's not really needed when you are reading texts to other people Usually I do this too, but I only do this for myself, when I'm not reading to other people. But it's not like most of your audience wants to hear any extra details from the story, anyways. Some just wanna read without extra stuff. Some people do. Essentially, many ppl just want the actual story read to them, unlike some others. No hate to your methods of reading, but you should probably stick to the conventional method and read the text without adding extra stuff to the story. If u want to add some stuff to the story, maybe release another vid. That's really all. Extra stuff: I know some ppl like it but others don't. So it's really up to u if u want to listen to this
I didn't expect to make a sequel but I'm glad I did. I was able to improve my edits with this one
pls make more like this!! also one with greg playing sports
@@arnavkashyap7805 agreed m8 and btw im working on the reading the 3rd entry into the Bachelorverse mother knows best soon so stay tuned for that :)
Ngl these fan fics are making greg and rodrick have a brotherly bond and its great
Agreed that’s why this fanfic series is one of my favorites :)
Susans alt
@@noname-iw3tj bruh that might be true lol /s
overflowing...
I love it
Is this a fanfic that isn't overly dark and satire? AND GREG ISN'T GAY???? FINALLY!!
I love the fact that holly and greg are dating each other and that she believe greg.
And the fact that heather and rodrick stood up for greg.
Its really wholesome that both Rodrick and Greg are dating two people from the same family and the moms happy they are dating
Its also cool and kinda wierd that Rodrick and Greg went on a double date themselves too
The way it all came back together with Greg asking if he wants to come over and play like the first book is so good
Abigail being a snake is back. Honestly I’m here for a female villian. Also I love how your channel has all kinds of wimpy fanfic, from the realistic/wholesome like these to the cursed (eg: edging)
nnn is the most cursed
the worst part in the LLB is that Rowley stops listening to Joshie
Fax abagail really messed up the goat 😔
9:13 i read hard luck and then watched this video and realized abigal's face didn't look right
Loved the sequel more then the original and my own. Corvo is a pretty good writer,
10:13 this is probably the most in depth emotion I’ve seen from any read of an LLB
In my opinion after the double date: Greg, rowley and holly went to a Joshie concert
I also accidentally posted this same comment in your YT shorts
I wonder what the next story will be 🤔
@@Thesteamsmythe I have some ideas, same with corvo
my mans doin the lord's work. here before yall blow up. no shade to enigma but i really dont care for the long running series he has going on right now
Im glad you stayed m8, I’ve been uploading a lot more since the other llb tubers have gone silent for over 2 weeks
Also glad you enjoyed my reading
Charachter development with Greg? Impossible, this has to be a dream
The extra dialogue and the voice acting are great.
Thanks
Awesome! We need a 3rd installment!
Agreed and it’s actually already finished I just need to finish some other reading and it’ll be out, it’s called mother knows best and it’s longer then both this and the bachelor of Crossland
@@Thesteamsmythe honestly I hope it’s another Holly point of view story. That reminds me, do you think that Abigail setting greg up, was that part of patty farrell’s plan?
@@DamnZtar the creator of the holly pov said they are making it after they finish joyride which is from uncle Gary pov and they said the second holly pov story will have 50 pages
3rd installment is out btw m8, mother knows best just to let you know :)
Greg… Being a GOOD PERSON?!?
Thanos: impossible
AMONG US
@@MilesTailsPrower256 sus
This isn’t Greg, this is Gerg
Who are you and what dud you do to Greg!
I love the voice acting lol
Thanks :)
This is the most normal wimpy kid fanfic I’ve watched
where is the manny decapitation?
@@HistoricalFanatics wait what?
@@Tar_Pick_Piano the average LodedDiper fanfic be like: manny dying.
This one is normal though
@@HistoricalFanatics yeah
I love these fan made doawk keep it up
The best diary of a wimpy kid fanfic I've ever read
how u not got more subs than tales of an enigma or diary of a wimpy kid enjoyer broooo u upload way more than them
Glad you liked the reading, I guess it takes time but I’m a very patient person :)
And I agree with the upload thing they are both taking a while I remember the days they uploaded weekly
These are so adorable and wholesome haha
Quite a surprise given what i've come to expect from doawk fanfics
Rodrick and greg in the actual books:😈🤜😟
Rodrick and Greg in the fan stories:🙂🤝😁
@@Slowed_reverb_guy fax bros are chill with each other
This was way better than the first half
4:16 "Mom says I need to talk to you guys about safe sex"
Nice start Frank
Book: "Yea"
Steam: *SnIf sNiF* "YeA gReG, i ThInK i WoUlD lIkE tHaT"
adds charcter
You are pretty good ngl
Thanks m8
Great Video!
Glad you enjoyed it m8 :)
5:39 is weird . There are two Hollys?!
Typo lol
“wow abigal, i didnt know your dad was famous.”
In all honesty I feel like Greg would be the kind of person to get better during High School, he’s finally being a decent person
Savin the bachelor for a prequel
4:15 NAH THERE FATHER IS REALLY TELLING THEM ALL ABOUT THE DEED😭🙏🙏🙏
Weirdest diary ever.
Probably because you didn’t watch the first since this is a sequel and is part of a series called the bachelorverse
Here’s the playlist m8 :)
ruclips.net/p/PLF8mQYaAzM1egwybyevvWDTmlfImYX6qt&si=JYorn7khuKKfLCll
they actually made greg a good guy
facts gregdeption
This has only reminded me i am alone and will be forever 😊
Amen
I got first again. This has happened a lot of times so I will say something different: I exist.
Glad you realised that I was starting to think you were a bot lol
Okay
WHAT!? REALLY! I THOUGHT THE COMPUTER WAS TYPING THIS ITSELF!
As Baldi from Baldis Basics once said
“Wowwwww, you exist!”
Dammit Abigail she really is evil💀
Facts
Make a more parts please
What if the regular Greg was in this situation you know the (alleged) sociopathic one
W Greg for not lowering to his simple level to date Abigail 🗿
simp*
W vid
Greg redemption
5:42 me holly rodrick and holly
Offbrand third wheel
It’s superior cause Greg scores
How is holly actually self aware
What do you mean
@@HistoricalFanaticsshe has a story in her point of view too
yeah dude im capital substance 7310, the writer of the bachelorette
we need part 3
Already made part 3 of this llb: ruclips.net/video/3yKss3y6N0I/видео.htmlsi=GzHBRLA1oQYZPxwL
And even a spin off of it I made a reading to: ruclips.net/video/cN1pKmZYSWg/видео.htmlsi=UtS-b-DWmB8YL62y
Happy ending
I just say this now so i dont have to say it later
You sound like an anime weeb who voice acts deku in the fanfics he writes
Sorry, just needed that off my chest, no hate
What here or in all my videos because I’ve been improving on each video and this one was from months ago
@@Thesteamsmythe idk lot of em, I don't hate ur voice, it reminds me of a weeb, sorry 😭
Also, just want to tell u this
Don't read text that isn't in the story, it's not really needed when you are reading texts to other people
Usually I do this too, but I only do this for myself, when I'm not reading to other people. But it's not like most of your audience wants to hear any extra details from the story, anyways. Some just wanna read without extra stuff. Some people do.
Essentially, many ppl just want the actual story read to them, unlike some others.
No hate to your methods of reading, but you should probably stick to the conventional method and read the text without adding extra stuff to the story. If u want to add some stuff to the story, maybe release another vid. That's really all.
Extra stuff: I know some ppl like it but others don't. So it's really up to u if u want to listen to this
Guys… tgis isn’t related to this video but I see no nut November 2 on one of the videos on the side and the mom has… she- SHE HAS A GUN!!!
Why do most fan fictions make holly and greg get together in high school
Nah Low-key I like this, in the films they got really good chemistry
In this fanfic gregs a g
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