+Peter Gundry | Composer Hello, Peter! Congratulations for your wonderful work, I'm a big fan! This song is particularly one of my favourites, and it has been inspiring me in my latest photomanipulation artwork. I just finished it, here is the link, if you want to see it - fav.me/d9sby09 - I hope you like! Thanks a lot for sharing your imagination! ^^
“Forever?” I asked “Forever” she agreed, Two toddlers against the world “Forever?” I asked, tears streaming “Forever” she smiled, wiping them Two teens against the world “Forever?” I asked, outside the castle “Forever” she agreed, holding my hand Two adventurers against the world “Forever?” I asked, panic in my eyes “Forever” she said, fighting off soldiers It was two races against the world “Forever?” She asked, dying in my arms “Forever” I spoke, crying over her death It used to be us against the world “You promised forever” Said I infront of her grave. I laid the roses against the marble “And Forever it shall be” she said beside me
I don't know why silent tears streaming down my eyes hearing your words reminds me something what I had,and what I lost Beautiful,is this pain that keeps this heart beating and these tears silently streaming Forever,I said you remembered and you haunted me down the years I revived not knowing of my promise but yet,you haunted me hiding under the shadows now when I hear this you remind me of my promise and that centuries old love is unearthed till death,do us apart
Vampiric love is painful... not unlike grieving, or separation anxiety. It will hold a death grip on your heart with its cold hand and chill your blood until you're sick. It cuts deep as any stake and leaves you on the ground in blissful agony. There is no passion so permanent in its capacity to scar you for life and fill your life with the true meaning of darkness. Forever, you said? Together forever. May the pain be eternal.
@AreebaTariq-ur1sc It's mostly fictional, but there are real vampires. Unfortunately, they aren't the undead creatures of novels and stories, but they do exist, and they extract life energy from others.
I feel like the story behind this is the following: The vampire was lonely and everyone either feared him or wanted to kill him for who he was. However, a human girl from the town wasn't afraid and went to go see him anyways. She was very sick with an uncurable illness, why she is so skinny and gaunt in the first image. She wasn't afraid to die. So she wasn't afraid of him. She promised him that she would be with him forever so he wouldn't be lonely. However, since humans do not live as long as vampires. She later died. The vampire is now alone again and is remembering her words, "Forever" you said...
@@Nina-fc8ey No don't be. In fact I should thank you. I couldn't cry for a long time and finally your comment helped me. I felt relieved after. So thank you ^-^
@@fatirose5894 oh, well in that case you're welcome. Crying sometimes helps us feel better as it provides a release for our emotions rather than bottling them up on the inside. So I am glad I was able to help you in some way. Stay safe :)
I have been long interested in vampire stories, movies and legends. Such beautiful, seductive creatures, they are . My brother always teased me about being so “ pale “ - he jokingly told me once “ Rachel , you’re the secret vampire in the family, you never go into the sun , and you have a perfect white skin “ - lol 😂
the only one I've ever fantasized is the Count Dracula..I loved him till I was a kid,I love him as an adult and I'll love him when I'm just a decaying frame of an admirer.
First picture Forever you said Is someone who knows All your pain, sufferings, scars, death wishes Yet they still stay They hold your heart Share your happiness And cry tears when They see you torn apart. Forever you said Is a trust shared between two His heart is full of ice Her heart is full of fire Love blooms Crimson connects two For all of eternity. Second picture He had opened up his heart He gave me the world The world Took him away from me So i became something i'm not. Crimson flows the ground Of blood that took away my love Their blood reeks of ignorance In their last moments They regret But there is no medicine for regret Because they've already joined him.
Tears crease my face These rivers of death As I look into your eyes So filled with lies You running away Striking the floor Those lashes of today Changed nevermore As I talk to you -or try to Those eyes of hate Cannot see me anymore You were so beautiful Like the beginning of dawn When we were loved Though never anymore You tried to attack Your were insane Now where are we at? You were my bane When we kissed So long ago Are heads filled with song So long ago Now you are red Of apples from the pale dawn Forever you said But you have bled
Snow swirled as icy winds howled through the trees of the dead forest that once bloomed with life. She had come to meet her lover, the one that had promised forever. The sound of a stick snapping brought her attention to a lone figure dressed in black. She gasped as the familiar figure drew closer. "My Love?" She asked her voice shaking with fear. The figure flashed a fanged white grin. "Yes, my dear tis I in my true form and I still wish to give you forever, but will you still take me as I am now?" He spoke moving closer. She looked into his emerald eyes that shimmered with tears as he inched his lips closer and touched her cheek. "Will you be mine forever?" He asked. "Yes..." She whispered against his chilled lips. With those words he sealed her lips with a kiss and bowed his head and sank his fangs into her soft tender neck that carried the scent of roses. She gasped and her eyes grew wide as her teary eyes lifted to the full moon that cast a silver glow upon the dark forest. The warm red blood soon trickled down her slender neck and she felt her loves embrace as she closed her eyes. Everything soon faded around her, but she knew, when she awoken, she would be given forever with her love as he had promised. Soon her eyes slowly opened, and she found herself in the cold embrace of the chilling night as snow fell on her pale cheeks. Her heart raced in her chest as she looked about in hopes to see her love but only found silence and the stillness around her. She felt a stinging pain in her neck and with a grimace slipped an icy hand to the piercing marks in her tender neck. She pulled her hand back and looked down to see her stained fingertips and the droplets of the sanguine blood. A sharp pain ached in her mouth as two sharp fangs slowly gleamed in the bright silver light as the gloom of the clouds peered from the faded moon. Her heart sank to the pit on her stomach she was now a child of the night as her love had promised but where was he? Tears simmered in her eyes as she called out to him, but all could be heard was the call of an owl nothing more. Her heart broke as fear clasped tightly to her chest. "Forever you said... But where are you?" She whispered with such sorrow upon her lips. Was she truly alone, had he truly abandoned her in this dark forsaken world? Cursed forever to be neither living nor dead.
Hey guys, here is a new Dark Emotional Vampire themed piece called "You Said Forever". I hope you enjoy it!!. The sun is rising over here but i couldn't stop writing until it was finished =) Have a great week everyone ruclips.net/video/qdEV-MpgNm0/видео.html
I know I'm probably too late for you to ever even read this reply with you being such a busy composer and all. However, I would like to say that I notice a pattern in your music in the dark/dark fantasy/vampiric settings. They usually have a sort of "slinking" vibe to them that just hypnotizes the ears. It puts you in your own scenario of complications that fit the music. As for this piece I imagined that I was running, running back home from a war. Battle scarred and all. Once I arrived, there she was. Dead on the living room floor with the enemy flag stabbed in her. Blood read on the wall "Forever you said." And I began to grow irate and went out in my cloak with my dagger and flintlock in hand and began to take my revenge. You're music gives people imaginary scenario's that affect them emotionally with the strength as if they were real. You're doing something right Mr. Gundry. Keep it up, please.
+The Lonely TimeLord I like your user name, last Time Lord, sir. But you will find her again, she is not dead. She wanted everyone to think that she was.
+Peter Gundry | Composer Absolutely a beautiful piece! I wanted to ask if you'd let me use it in a non-commercial game I'm making for a school project? I am trying to make a dream scene and can't find any fitting music (as well as I can't make music myself or I wouldn't be asking around :P ). Look forward to hearing from you, -LordV
Her eyes reflected the life I'd lost, the life I'd forever be exiled, her warm hands cursed my cheeks wiping away the blood stained tears from the snowy canvas of my complexion. I could not take her to where I'd been her life was fragile, and it was for that purpose I'd love her so..I peered into her mind and projected a life of darkness a life past the embrace , she pushed back with her mind and showed me a life in the sun where my eternity was short lived ...it was beatiful, as she pulled from my thoughts and the vision faded she casted me a glance and tilting her head to expose her neck said " I've already lived my life with you, let me share in your death , embrace me and let our eternity be
***** This is what came to mind when I heard this song. So long I have searched, so long I have shed tears, I have cried oceans of tears Forever alone, Gone from the day, The hunter of the night, You were once my prey, You were once my opposite, You are my beating heart given life, You are the dream, I dream when I sleep When You Said Forever, I knew I wasn't alone When you Said Forever it was meant to be
Pale snow fell upon December eve, when the first sight of you was placed upon me. The air was stiff, and the ground could not be seen But the beauty of your face made the very shadows hide, and the cold cease from the world. Your silken skin danced in the trace of the pale moonlight, And eyes that made the stars themselves grow with envy. When we met, the very touch of your hand burns my now long cold flesh, and your purity binds the very emptiness on my longing soul. Are You, my dearest love, But an angel sent from God to haunt me. Have you need to run, from the very fate i will place upon you, Have you need for the sun, that will shun the sight of you from holding my heart. God himself will cease to call you child, and turn you to the chain of the hand of hell itself. I walk on a blinded path my Dearest, And walk alone. You head to know the mystery of my heart, and soul But i Not have either of these, to curse you into join in hand of my sins.. You my love, said forever But Thou will not see, nor ever bare the cost Of a rose, that has forever rusted And become lost in the frost. -Reilly Lagemann (2017)
Reilly Lagemann your comment needs more appreciation! It's so moving and, in my opinion, adds a beautiful and fitting story to an already amazing song. It just makes the whole thing much more epic.
I really truly love your music. I have a sleep disorder where I can't get sleep like I should and your music gets me to sleep. thank you and you are a really great inspiration of what music really means👏👏👍
Thank you so much Angel, that means a lot to me, i really appreciate your comment. I too have bad sleeping problems (insomnia), so im happy it helps one of us out =) Have a great weekend and thanks again
"if I told you my dark secret, will you stay by my side? No matter how dark and scary is is?" The man asks his love of his life, "of course, I love you no matter what, no secret could tear me away from your side, I will stay by you forever" He softly puts his hand to her head, and brings her forehead to his, he smiles, but his teeth change shape, "You said you'd be by me forever, and you shall keep that promise, my love," the girl just sits there stunned, and the man bites into her neck, Forever she said, but nothing lasts forever. Centuries pasted, and the woman grew dark, she killed anyone who dare crossed her, The town angered her one night, she was killing men women, even children, the man hating to see what he did to his sweet innocent love, tried to stop her, but she was to strong, "My love, stop this! There are innocent kids!" "Do you dare stop me from getting my dinner?" She asks, the man looks into his loves eyes, black as her heart, he knows what he must do to protect the innocent, As he gets ready to strike, the woman shoves her hand into his chest, grabs his dead heart, and she says, "no one, no one dare shall cross me" and the man utters one sentence, "Forever you said"
G= girl, b= boy B: you said forever, did you lie G: of course not B: then why do you insist on leaving me G: because you are not what I once thought you were B: have I not proven myself to you, have i not shown you i could be trusted G: how can I trust you when you are so different B: you trusted me before you found out what I am G: but you lied about what you were all this time B: I did not lie, I just didn't want you to find out like this G: but you didn't tell the truth B: I didn't want you to fear me, I wanted you to love me G: was it so hard to believe that i would love you for you, not for who you wish to be B: how could someone like you love a monster like me? i am heartless, cold, and cruel. G: just because you don't have a heart that beats and skin that's cold to touch does not mean your heartless and cold B: I attacked those people, I nearly killed them! G: you were protecting me! Without you i would be dead! B: but that is when you started to fear me. You don't trust me, you said it yourself G: why should I trust you when you can't trust yourself B: because you should trust in my love for you! I don't trust myself not to scare you again, but I know I won't ever harm you. And I wished you did too. G: is that why you distanced yourself? Because you were didn't want to frighten me? B: indeed. When you saw the blood you screamed, and I knew, just knew that I would loose you because I was careless. G: do you really think you've lost me? Well your wrong because I love you more than you know. I love you more than I should. B: but how? G: because I have seen your heart, and i have felt your gentle touch, and know you wouldn't hurt me. Oh, don't cry, please don't cry B: you have no idea of the gift you have just given. You are my life, my soul, and my existence. Now look who's crying my love. G: didn't I say it was forever? B: you said it was forever.
has no words but this a tragic love story of a rose and a lost soul loved each other but the sad truth is that he does not want to lose control and hurt her so he left and she yelled "FOREVER YOU SAID" he stood there heartbroken and he left her there to cry in an ocean of pain and sorrow
@Peter Gundry this piece is absolutely beautiful, I wrote a poem listening to this and it gave me so much feeling, so much emotion, that I was stunned by how deep it came out. Thank you for your beautiful, awe inspiring music, and please don't ever stop making music ❤❤❤
a song as warm as lips that give life cold like an eternity of loneliness darkness plunders my thoughts while I remember how love and curse can walk the same path...
These comments and this melody make my heart ache to remember what it was once like to put ink to paper and be caressed with the rhythm of writing.....
Oceans of time , tears of sadness and heartache. I come back to my castle and sleep. I hear the old piano playing , and the music beckons me further down the corridors, a dark figure sits at the piano, the music fills the room with an ambient, soothing feel. My feet on the floor feel cool to the touch , yet I almost feel like I am floating. My night dress , swirling around my ankles, I come to see , hear and feel the strains of the music . It’s here where I feel that I am truly home , yet a stranger making me feel on edge. “Come , sit with me , “ he says . I sit and listen and receive a heady high , the music is euphoric. After finishing the composition, he leans into me , lightly kisses my moist lips. “ I want to give you the gift of life eternal, “ . I accept, “ Forever, you said . “ I take the bite and the elixir of life .
Breeze chose to kiss my face,giving chills,black locks embracing my face only to flutter and twirl with zephyr; and then I saw the mythic eyes,those oceanic blue seemed to be calling me to them,one moment they were gazing into my soul and so was mine into his and the next moment they were gone,those blue,in a blink of eye....as if they were never there.... and here I stand stupefied to the ground,with moonlight glimmering down upon me,yet lost in dark,for my heart speaks,he was my flame and I a moth!!
When you told me that you want to be with me in the dark. I never thought you were serious my love. I love you even though I can not be in the sun. The dark is and always will be me home. I can not pull you from it. Yet I can't live with out you. You mean to much. I love you my Queen of Sunlight. For I the Shadow King shall make you my Shadow Queen.
great music! The way the music sounds like two lovers are having a hard time to be with one another. I love it! Please continue to compose this kind of music. It's really good.
This. Is. Just. Perfect. ❤️ I cant get out of my head love story between a vampire and a girl from that small town near the dark forest, story that end up in a sad way.
Wow! Just wow (again). Not only do you (at least to my taste) fulfill themes incredibly well, but the rate at which you put out new music is astounding! It's almost everyday I check my RUclips feed and a new song from you is there! And you compose in so many different themes and moods... your almost exactly the type of composer I would've liked to be hahahaha!! Keep up the good work Peter, you really have a great talent going for you here!
Peter I'm so sorry you have to deal with these wannabe poets in your every comment section. The fact you keep it up despite what must be a painfully cringeworthy experience is truly admirable.
I came from your Dark Music compilation and didn't know the cover pictures of 'Forever You Said' was these ones. My head was filled with thoughts about a set of twins being separated by Death ever since I read a story listening to this.
I'm just wondering but is there going to be a final version of this melody? I really enjoy listening to it but feel that the high vocals and climax like notes were a bit much for this piece. Other than that, it beautifully tells the sorrow and emotional pain of what this lovely star-crossed couple is going through. But it also tells what forever can truly mean. Will she join him in this darker version of eternity? Or will she follow her head instead of her heart? Wonderful job, Mr. Gundry! 😊
Amazing comment and yes there will be a final version on an album im writing =) I will take your constructive comments on when i make the final version =) Thanks for the comment
This is nine years ago but I absolutely cannot let this pass. "The Blue Moon's Promise " Beneath the pale glow of the blue moon's light I saw her dancing through the forest bare An angel of beauty so fair and bright Yet sickness within did not leave her spare While shunned was I, a creature of the night With eyes of blood and hair dark as sin My pale complexion caused others affright Alone in this world, no peace could I win But she saw past what others thought a curse Within her eyes my soul she did unlock A love so true, beyond what words can immerse Under blue moon our hearts entwined as lock We cared not what others might say or decree This brief love of ours would forever be But humans are fragile, as I would learn All too soon, to the grave she would turn Now only memories of her do remain Of beauty and love, now lost in vain For humans death comes, it is their fate While I walk alone in eternal wait For true love once more I may never find Left with only blue moon and her behind Our promise of forever, cruelly now done Proving nothing lasts 'neath the setting sun This is but one tragic tale of love's plight When mortal meets immortal under moonlight May you find comfort, my darling, where'er you be This vampire's heart is forever with thee
-You said "always and forever" but We both know that forever to a human is NOTHING, forever to a human doesn't exist! Turn me in to a vampire my love and I'll be yours forever. - I can't turn you into a monster like me! I have no soul! - You do have a soul! If you didn't have a soul you wouldn't be able to love me. Please, my love! -I... I-I can't ... -Fine then! So you don't leave me another option... -What are you doing? What's this? ( She screams out loud and tears comes from her eyes. There was blood everywhere, on her dress, on the floor. She stuck a knife on her chest and He holds her fast before she fells on the floor) - If... (Coughs and talks slow) If... you can't... turn me... my love, because you don't... you... don't (coughs) have the courage to so... Now you have no other option. (She takes a deep breath and whispers) So now or you rather let me die as a human knowing you'll never see me again or you turn me into a vampire and let me be dead by your side. (While he was holding her, there was crying from her and from him. He holds her head and look right at her eyes while his other hand was on her face. They lips was so close that they almost kissed) - I love you and I'm sorry. (He said whispering and right after he whispered, He went close to her neck, put his fangs out and bit her) "AGRRRR...." (She screams) (He almost couldn't stop drinking her blood ' Cause her scent was different from the others .) {But this is a story from another day 😜} She dies and stay unconscious for 4 hours (this was the time needed until his venom takes over her whole body) - My love... (She whispers) - ... My love! (He says) (She wakes with her body and her face full of blood but the bruised was gone. She wakes as a vampire and kiss him like he was her whole world.) The storyline could say "And they lived in a bed full of happiness always and forever" But... do they really? 😏 Well this one as well is a story for another day... hahaha Hope you guys liked. I felt very inspired by this instrumental song and this came out on my mind... 💛
omg! I love the picture. It reminds me of when I imagine a gothic vampire beauty bites me and we fly together around Dracula's castle in peace as vampire bats! (obviously a dream)
music played that only i could hear the pain lingered death reached for her as i told her forever the look in her eyes as she faded away told stories of life and love "forever"
Under a tree at quarter five she and I combined with darkness and light, I look upon her scared eyes and told me "An bhfaighidh mé bás...?" My warmth drew away her fears, I protected her from the humans... I held her in my arms for a long time until the day I gifted her the darkness, "forever?" She asked, "forever..." I said
forever, you said. tears rolling down my face, as doom awaits us. we kissed, for just a moment. your hands were cold, but i knew why. i wasn't of your kind. soon, death would await me. forever, you said. but deep inside, i always knew, it was never possible. snowflakes, gently falling down from the sky. yet icy and cold. the dead trees loomed over us, yet providing no shelter. tonight, i would die. in your arms. you were like snowflakes, like the trees of the dead forest. forever, you said. my body grew colder. the last thing i saw, where your beautiful eyes. like emeralds, twinkling in the moonlight. you cried. and i closed my eyes. i wish it had gone different. but it was never meant to be.
I have a writing character that I love to throw into different stories or whatever, (don't judge me, but I've currently thrown him into Twilight... I'm bored) and he has the ability of iridescence, meaning anything that has any form of glimmer or shine naturally on the object is his to command to control and travel with. He's not a vampire, but he did have limbs replaced with robotic parts. He is described by random people as bronze skinned, on kind of the fact that his skin does have a natural shine to it. I like the idea that when he walks through certain areas, he has a very specific presence. Almost an unnatural one, moths, crows, and shells of other kinds are his archetypes.
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Wowwww
My dear friend this is awesome
Touching
Loved
+Peter Gundry | Composer Hello, Peter! Congratulations for your wonderful work, I'm a big fan! This song is particularly one of my favourites, and it has been inspiring me in my latest photomanipulation artwork. I just finished it, here is the link, if you want to see it - fav.me/d9sby09 - I hope you like! Thanks a lot for sharing your imagination! ^^
Fernanda Brussi Your art is amazing!
+Peter Gundry | Composer where did you get the picture????
Peter Gundry | Composer Where is the Picture from if i may ask? :0
“Forever?” I asked
“Forever” she agreed,
Two toddlers against the world
“Forever?” I asked, tears streaming
“Forever” she smiled, wiping them
Two teens against the world
“Forever?” I asked, outside the castle
“Forever” she agreed, holding my hand
Two adventurers against the world
“Forever?” I asked, panic in my eyes
“Forever” she said, fighting off soldiers
It was two races against the world
“Forever?” She asked, dying in my arms
“Forever” I spoke, crying over her death
It used to be us against the world
“You promised forever” Said I infront of her grave.
I laid the roses against the marble
“And Forever it shall be” she said beside me
You're welcome for eighty likes. Nice story btw
Cloak star YT thanks so much •3•
@@fangirl2840 nice story indeed
I love your story! Thank you 🖤⚘🖤
I don't know why
silent tears streaming down my eyes
hearing your words
reminds me something
what I had,and what I lost
Beautiful,is this pain
that keeps this heart beating
and these tears
silently streaming
Forever,I said
you remembered
and you haunted me down the years
I revived
not knowing of my promise
but yet,you haunted me
hiding under the shadows
now when I hear this
you remind me of my promise
and that centuries old love is unearthed
till death,do us apart
"I'm going to give you the choice... I never had."
-Lestat de Lioncourt
Lestat...the true vampire😍❤️ I love him
@@nicolerossi1740 i love that chaotic dumbass
However, you may live to regret your decision... 🧛♂️😈
🤍🤍🤍
🖤🖤🖤
Vampiric love is painful... not unlike grieving, or separation anxiety. It will hold a death grip on your heart with its cold hand and chill your blood until you're sick. It cuts deep as any stake and leaves you on the ground in blissful agony. There is no passion so permanent in its capacity to scar you for life and fill your life with the true meaning of darkness. Forever, you said? Together forever. May the pain be eternal.
Love your comment and love your profile photo of Freddie Mercury!
May the pain be eternal!!! Deep i love it!!
Powerful words
Do vampire are in real ,why everyone here is obsessed with vampire character, give me one reason
@AreebaTariq-ur1sc It's mostly fictional, but there are real vampires. Unfortunately, they aren't the undead creatures of novels and stories, but they do exist, and they extract life energy from others.
I feel like the story behind this is the following: The vampire was lonely and everyone either feared him or wanted to kill him for who he was. However, a human girl from the town wasn't afraid and went to go see him anyways. She was very sick with an uncurable illness, why she is so skinny and gaunt in the first image. She wasn't afraid to die. So she wasn't afraid of him.
She promised him that she would be with him forever so he wouldn't be lonely.
However, since humans do not live as long as vampires. She later died. The vampire is now alone again and is remembering her words, "Forever" you said...
This made me cry.
@@fatirose5894 ^^; sorry
@@Nina-fc8ey No don't be. In fact I should thank you. I couldn't cry for a long time and finally your comment helped me. I felt relieved after. So thank you ^-^
@@fatirose5894 oh, well in that case you're welcome. Crying sometimes helps us feel better as it provides a release for our emotions rather than bottling them up on the inside. So I am glad I was able to help you in some way. Stay safe :)
@@Nina-fc8ey True. Stay safe too.
As a vampire lover this music is simply perfect!
Bite me my vampire boyfriend!!!!!! 🧛🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
I have been long interested in vampire stories, movies and legends.
Such beautiful, seductive creatures, they are . My brother always teased me about being so “ pale “ - he jokingly told me once “ Rachel , you’re the secret vampire in the family, you never go into the sun , and you have a perfect white skin “ - lol 😂
the only one I've ever fantasized is the Count Dracula..I loved him till I was a kid,I love him as an adult and I'll love him when I'm just a decaying frame of an admirer.
As a sanguinarian, I love it. It's just fitting. I don't know why. One of my favorites honestly.
Can vampires be lovable they do feed off the blood of Innocents
First picture
Forever you said
Is someone who knows
All your pain, sufferings, scars, death wishes
Yet they still stay
They hold your heart
Share your happiness
And cry tears when
They see you torn apart.
Forever you said
Is a trust shared between two
His heart is full of ice
Her heart is full of fire
Love blooms
Crimson connects two
For all of eternity.
Second picture
He had opened up his heart
He gave me the world
The world
Took him away from me
So i became something i'm not.
Crimson flows the ground
Of blood that took away my love
Their blood reeks of ignorance
In their last moments
They regret
But there is no medicine for regret
Because they've already joined him.
Wow! That's so beautiful! You have really amazing skills! :D
Yes and we all die eventually but death shall not depart us for i bleed for you may our souls be bond when i die in your arms.
Tears crease my face
These rivers of death
As I look into your eyes
So filled with lies
You running away
Striking the floor
Those lashes of today
Changed nevermore
As I talk to you
-or try to
Those eyes of hate
Cannot see me anymore
You were so beautiful
Like the beginning of dawn
When we were loved
Though never anymore
You tried to attack
Your were insane
Now where are we at?
You were my bane
When we kissed
So long ago
Are heads filled with song
So long ago
Now you are red
Of apples from the pale dawn
Forever you said
But you have bled
that was wonderful!
Destiny Barron Thank you!
your truly welcome! 😸😺
Willow Forrest you are truly a poet my friend.
Huh, I hardly ever encounter another person who writes poetry dark like me 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
15 people accidentally hit the dislike button because they were crying so much.
Twenty four now, idiots....
I don't know why anyone would dislike this. It's so beautifully dark and deep.
they dislike it because its edgelord but it is good so I liked it
fun fact: these dislikes are from youtube music users that skip the video, it automatically dislikes it, no idea why tho
Alex H. 55 now stupid ppl don’t know nothing about beautiful music so dark so gothic 🦇
This burns something onto my lonely heart...
Me, too * Sigh *
Snow swirled as icy winds howled through the trees of the dead forest that once bloomed with life. She had come to meet her lover, the one that had promised forever. The sound of a stick snapping brought her attention to a lone figure dressed in black. She gasped as the familiar figure drew closer. "My Love?" She asked her voice shaking with fear. The figure flashed a fanged white grin. "Yes, my dear tis I in my true form and I still wish to give you forever, but will you still take me as I am now?" He spoke moving closer. She looked into his emerald eyes that shimmered with tears as he inched his lips closer and touched her cheek. "Will you be mine forever?" He asked. "Yes..." She whispered against his chilled lips. With those words he sealed her lips with a kiss and bowed his head and sank his fangs into her soft tender neck that carried the scent of roses. She gasped and her eyes grew wide as her teary eyes lifted to the full moon that cast a silver glow upon the dark forest. The warm red blood soon trickled down her slender neck and she felt her loves embrace as she closed her eyes. Everything soon faded around her, but she knew, when she awoken, she would be given forever with her love as he had promised. Soon her eyes slowly opened, and she found herself in the cold embrace of the chilling night as snow fell on her pale cheeks. Her heart raced in her chest as she looked about in hopes to see her love but only found silence and the stillness around her. She felt a stinging pain in her neck and with a grimace slipped an icy hand to the piercing marks in her tender neck. She pulled her hand back and looked down to see her stained fingertips and the droplets of the sanguine blood. A sharp pain ached in her mouth as two sharp fangs slowly gleamed in the bright silver light as the gloom of the clouds peered from the faded moon. Her heart sank to the pit on her stomach she was now a child of the night as her love had promised but where was he? Tears simmered in her eyes as she called out to him, but all could be heard was the call of an owl nothing more. Her heart broke as fear clasped tightly to her chest. "Forever you said... But where are you?" She whispered with such sorrow upon her lips. Was she truly alone, had he truly abandoned her in this dark forsaken world? Cursed forever to be neither living nor dead.
GORGEOUS!!!!💖💖
Hey guys, here is a new Dark Emotional Vampire themed piece called "You Said Forever". I hope you enjoy it!!. The sun is rising over here but i couldn't stop writing until it was finished =) Have a great week everyone
ruclips.net/video/qdEV-MpgNm0/видео.html
I know I'm probably too late for you to ever even read this reply with you being such a busy composer and all. However, I would like to say that I notice a pattern in your music in the dark/dark fantasy/vampiric settings. They usually have a sort of "slinking" vibe to them that just hypnotizes the ears. It puts you in your own scenario of complications that fit the music. As for this piece I imagined that I was running, running back home from a war. Battle scarred and all. Once I arrived, there she was. Dead on the living room floor with the enemy flag stabbed in her. Blood read on the wall "Forever you said." And I began to grow irate and went out in my cloak with my dagger and flintlock in hand and began to take my revenge. You're music gives people imaginary scenario's that affect them emotionally with the strength as if they were real. You're doing something right Mr. Gundry. Keep it up, please.
+The Lonely TimeLord I like your user name, last Time Lord, sir. But you will find her again, she is not dead. She wanted everyone to think that she was.
+Peter Gundry | Composer Absolutely a beautiful piece! I wanted to ask if you'd let me use it in a non-commercial game I'm making for a school project? I am trying to make a dream scene and can't find any fitting music (as well as I can't make music myself or I wouldn't be asking around :P ).
Look forward to hearing from you,
-LordV
Her eyes reflected the life I'd lost, the life I'd forever be exiled, her warm hands cursed my cheeks wiping away the blood stained tears from the snowy canvas of my complexion. I could not take her to where I'd been her life was fragile, and it was for that purpose I'd love her so..I peered into her mind and projected a life of darkness a life past the embrace , she pushed back with her mind and showed me a life in the sun where my eternity was short lived ...it was beatiful, as she pulled from my thoughts and the vision faded she casted me a glance and tilting her head to expose her neck said " I've already lived my life with you, let me share in your death , embrace me and let our eternity be
Amazing! It feels as if what you just have written was made for this beautiful song.
+Indy Lunow Thank you this composition inspired me to start writing a book, I hope you get to read it some day
+PhoenixRyder21 i just got chills....o.O
+Haley Cheatwood :) much obliged for your feedback
PhoenixRyder21 dude you should write a fanfic for this paragraph you wrote, i guarantee it will be awesome.
The picture reminds me of Kaname and Yuuki from Vampire Knight. Beautiful.
+KanekoXLiamB yeah. but their eye color and hair longs are different
+Berfin Dilara Konyar Yeah
+KanekoXLiamB I thought that too!!
same
That's who I thought it was at first!!
***** This is what came to mind when I heard this song.
So long I have searched, so long I have shed tears, I have cried oceans of tears
Forever alone, Gone from the day, The hunter of the night,
You were once my prey, You were once my opposite,
You are my beating heart given life,
You are the dream, I dream when I sleep
When You Said Forever, I knew I wasn't alone
When you Said Forever it was meant to be
Beautiful !
I am glad you like
This poem goes wonderfully with the music and the first picture! Well done! 😊
Author4Croix
+Viersell Averos dam you got talent. ;)
Pale snow fell upon December eve, when the first sight of you was placed upon me.
The air was stiff, and the ground could not be seen
But the beauty of your face made the very shadows hide, and the cold cease from the world.
Your silken skin danced in the trace of the pale moonlight,
And eyes that made the stars themselves grow with envy.
When we met, the very touch of your hand burns my now long cold flesh,
and your purity binds the very emptiness on my longing soul.
Are You, my dearest love, But an angel sent from God to haunt me.
Have you need to run, from the very fate i will place upon you,
Have you need for the sun, that will shun the sight of you from holding my heart.
God himself will cease to call you child, and turn you to the chain of the hand of hell itself.
I walk on a blinded path my Dearest, And walk alone.
You head to know the mystery of my heart, and soul
But i Not have either of these, to curse you into join in hand of my sins..
You my love, said forever
But Thou will not see, nor ever bare the cost
Of a rose, that has forever rusted
And become lost in the frost.
-Reilly Lagemann (2017)
Reilly Lagemann your comment needs more appreciation! It's so moving and, in my opinion, adds a beautiful and fitting story to an already amazing song. It just makes the whole thing much more epic.
Reilly Lagemann wow that is so good and beautiful at this page
U need to make a book
I could read this over and over....youve taken my emotions and penned them...thank you so very much
thank you all very much. I really love to read poetry and create lyrics to music. These comments truly lifted my spirits.
I really truly love your music. I have a sleep disorder where I can't get sleep like I should and your music gets me to sleep. thank you and you are a really great inspiration of what music really means👏👏👍
Thank you so much Angel, that means a lot to me, i really appreciate your comment. I too have bad sleeping problems (insomnia), so im happy it helps one of us out =) Have a great weekend and thanks again
"if I told you my dark secret, will you stay by my side? No matter how dark and scary is is?" The man asks his love of his life, "of course, I love you no matter what, no secret could tear me away from your side, I will stay by you forever"
He softly puts his hand to her head, and brings her forehead to his, he smiles, but his teeth change shape,
"You said you'd be by me forever, and you shall keep that promise, my love," the girl just sits there stunned, and the man bites into her neck,
Forever she said, but nothing lasts forever.
Centuries pasted, and the woman grew dark, she killed anyone who dare crossed her,
The town angered her one night, she was killing men women, even children, the man hating to see what he did to his sweet innocent love, tried to stop her, but she was to strong,
"My love, stop this! There are innocent kids!" "Do you dare stop me from getting my dinner?" She asks, the man looks into his loves eyes, black as her heart, he knows what he must do to protect the innocent,
As he gets ready to strike, the woman shoves her hand into his chest, grabs his dead heart, and she says, "no one, no one dare shall cross me" and the man utters one sentence, "Forever you said"
As a hopeless vampire romantic, I can't get enough of these songs.
G= girl, b= boy
B: you said forever, did you lie
G: of course not
B: then why do you insist on leaving me
G: because you are not what I once thought you were
B: have I not proven myself to you, have i not shown you i could be trusted
G: how can I trust you when you are so different
B: you trusted me before you found out what I am
G: but you lied about what you were all this time
B: I did not lie, I just didn't want you to find out like this
G: but you didn't tell the truth
B: I didn't want you to fear me, I wanted you to love me
G: was it so hard to believe that i would love you for you, not for who you wish to be
B: how could someone like you love a monster like me? i am heartless, cold, and cruel.
G: just because you don't have a heart that beats and skin that's cold to touch does not mean your heartless and cold
B: I attacked those people, I nearly killed them!
G: you were protecting me! Without you i would be dead!
B: but that is when you started to fear me. You don't trust me, you said it yourself
G: why should I trust you when you can't trust yourself
B: because you should trust in my love for you! I don't trust myself not to scare you again, but I know I won't ever harm you. And I wished you did too.
G: is that why you distanced yourself? Because you were didn't want to frighten me?
B: indeed. When you saw the blood you screamed, and I knew, just knew that I would loose you because I was careless.
G: do you really think you've lost me? Well your wrong because I love you more than you know. I love you more than I should.
B: but how?
G: because I have seen your heart, and i have felt your gentle touch, and know you wouldn't hurt me. Oh, don't cry, please don't cry
B: you have no idea of the gift you have just given. You are my life, my soul, and my existence. Now look who's crying my love.
G: didn't I say it was forever?
B: you said it was forever.
Oh my so beautiful kakskxbajsj
Where's the wattpad??
I loved, please tell me there's more
How sad 😢😢😢😢
has no words but this
a tragic love story of a rose and a lost soul loved each other but the sad truth is that he does not want to lose control and hurt her so he left and she yelled "FOREVER YOU SAID" he stood there heartbroken and he left her there to cry in an ocean of pain and sorrow
This song touched my heart so deeply...-shed little bit of tears-...thank you so much for making this. 😯✔
Listening to this music and reading a vampire love story,is just amazing
yeah the characters of the story become more lively,thnx for this idea though.
تخيلني قاعد جوا الاوضة ومتكتف مليانة شخبطة عن طفل بيتأسف الاضاءه خافتة مفيش اي مهندس
انا بحب اشوف فانز موسي اوي
You know what? Thank you so much for existing lol It is so hard to find music like this. You have an amazing talent, I love your work :)
Right now I am on a full non stop binge of everything that says Peter gundry. I'm more then impressed
A great tribute to a wonderful woman who will never be forgotten.
@Peter Gundry this piece is absolutely beautiful, I wrote a poem listening to this and it gave me so much feeling, so much emotion, that I was stunned by how deep it came out. Thank you for your beautiful, awe inspiring music, and please don't ever stop making music ❤❤❤
a song as warm as lips that give life
cold like an eternity of loneliness
darkness plunders my thoughts
while I remember how love and curse can walk the same path...
These comments and this melody make my heart ache to remember what it was once like to put ink to paper and be caressed with the rhythm of writing.....
hmm... I don't like this song. you know why?
it's too short. needs a ten hour loop
*10 hour loop later*
Needs more...
*100 hour loop later*
That's better
Y.E.S
Exactly
Wow..wow..Peter Gundry i respect and admire your talent 4 all of your songs .Congratiolations,onestly ,they are all magic .
Oceans of time , tears of sadness and heartache. I come back to my castle and sleep. I hear the old piano playing , and the music beckons me further down the corridors, a dark figure sits at the piano, the music fills the room with an ambient, soothing feel. My feet on the floor feel cool to the touch , yet I almost feel like I am floating. My night dress , swirling around my ankles, I come to see , hear and feel the strains of the music . It’s here where I feel that I am truly home , yet a stranger making me feel on edge. “Come , sit with me , “ he says . I sit and listen and receive a heady high , the music is euphoric. After finishing the composition, he leans into me , lightly kisses my moist lips. “ I want to give you the gift of life eternal, “ . I accept, “ Forever, you said . “ I take the bite and the elixir of life .
Breeze chose to kiss my face,giving chills,black locks embracing my face only to flutter and twirl with zephyr; and then I saw the mythic eyes,those oceanic blue seemed to be calling me to them,one moment they were gazing into my soul and so was mine into his and the next moment they were gone,those blue,in a blink of eye....as if they were never there.... and here I stand stupefied to the ground,with moonlight glimmering down upon me,yet lost in dark,for my heart speaks,he was my flame and I a moth!!
This composer is pure genius 👏
This is heart breaking and powerful, so full of emotion
"forever you said...that's what they all say.."
this actually made me cry i love it so much thank you!~ TuT
When you told me that you want to be with me in the dark. I never thought you were serious my love. I love you even though I can not be in the sun. The dark is and always will be me home. I can not pull you from it. Yet I can't live with out you. You mean to much. I love you my Queen of Sunlight. For I the Shadow King shall make you my Shadow Queen.
Oh my.....i have no words to describe your work tour talent.
Im só in love by your músic Im adicted in your songs
We all break our rules for someon... 😔💔😢
My grandma was from Transilvania and I have vampire teeth 😱 . Nice music makes me feel proud :)
So beautiful.
great music! The way the music sounds like two lovers are having a hard time to be with one another. I love it! Please continue to compose this kind of music. It's really good.
Love it , from one vampire to another , the music speaks to my soul
Loving these vampire theme songs :D
I'm reminded of "Queen of the Dammed" when I listen to this. Very beautiful.
Unidos Raúl y yo Myriam en la eterna juventud...🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 Toreador
This. Is. Just. Perfect. ❤️ I cant get out of my head love story between a vampire and a girl from that small town near the dark forest, story that end up in a sad way.
Finally found a song i can fall asleep to. It's truly beautiful
Wow! Just wow (again). Not only do you (at least to my taste) fulfill themes incredibly well, but the rate at which you put out new music is astounding! It's almost everyday I check my RUclips feed and a new song from you is there! And you compose in so many different themes and moods... your almost exactly the type of composer I would've liked to be hahahaha!! Keep up the good work Peter, you really have a great talent going for you here!
What is the name for the artist of this pic, or the name of the cartoon?
The music is very fantastic!
Shafitya (The pic in 1.00 )
Shafitya dark knight a very beautiful anime about vampire
As a mosquito 🦟 killer i use this to attract them ❤
BTW this is so good 👍
I love writing stories to your music ❤️
Peter I'm so sorry you have to deal with these wannabe poets in your every comment section. The fact you keep it up despite what must be a painfully cringeworthy experience is truly admirable.
awesome awesome very awesome no words for your musics out standing
Another wonderful composition.
This really brings me to tears 😢😢😢
I came from your Dark Music compilation and didn't know the cover pictures of 'Forever You Said' was these ones. My head was filled with thoughts about a set of twins being separated by Death ever since I read a story listening to this.
I'm just wondering but is there going to be a final version of this melody? I really enjoy listening to it but feel that the high vocals and climax like notes were a bit much for this piece. Other than that, it beautifully tells the sorrow and emotional pain of what this lovely star-crossed couple is going through. But it also tells what forever can truly mean. Will she join him in this darker version of eternity? Or will she follow her head instead of her heart? Wonderful job, Mr. Gundry! 😊
Amazing comment and yes there will be a final version on an album im writing =) I will take your constructive comments on when i make the final version =) Thanks for the comment
No problem. ☺️
thank you so much peter for these musics... it's art.
I'm so in love with tragic love stories/music so beautiful keep up the good work!
So precious, i would like to us this for my original history..
un arte de melodia que te lleva a lugares inimaginables
Beautiful, love it. Keep up the good work!!
O my God this is so beautiful! I lost my sense of reality for 4:27 min. So beautiful!!!
When I listen to this kind of music, I tend to lose my sense of reality.
I start making histories in my head
This is nine years ago but I absolutely cannot let this pass.
"The Blue Moon's Promise "
Beneath the pale glow of the blue moon's light
I saw her dancing through the forest bare
An angel of beauty so fair and bright
Yet sickness within did not leave her spare
While shunned was I, a creature of the night
With eyes of blood and hair dark as sin
My pale complexion caused others affright
Alone in this world, no peace could I win
But she saw past what others thought a curse
Within her eyes my soul she did unlock
A love so true, beyond what words can immerse
Under blue moon our hearts entwined as lock
We cared not what others might say or decree
This brief love of ours would forever be
But humans are fragile, as I would learn
All too soon, to the grave she would turn
Now only memories of her do remain
Of beauty and love, now lost in vain
For humans death comes, it is their fate
While I walk alone in eternal wait
For true love once more I may never find
Left with only blue moon and her behind
Our promise of forever, cruelly now done
Proving nothing lasts 'neath the setting sun
This is but one tragic tale of love's plight
When mortal meets immortal under moonlight
May you find comfort, my darling, where'er you be
This vampire's heart is forever with thee
That image is of the top quality. Awsome peter.
I would love to have the picture, and the song is one of the best I have ever heard.
very nice work my dear friend..
One of my favorite pieces ♥😢
-You said "always and forever" but We both know that forever to a human is NOTHING, forever to a human doesn't exist! Turn me in to a vampire my love and I'll be yours forever.
- I can't turn you into a monster like me! I have no soul!
- You do have a soul! If you didn't have a soul you wouldn't be able to love me. Please, my love!
-I... I-I can't ...
-Fine then! So you don't leave me another option...
-What are you doing? What's this?
( She screams out loud and tears comes from her eyes. There was blood everywhere, on her dress, on the floor. She stuck a knife on her chest and He holds her fast before she fells on the floor)
- If... (Coughs and talks slow) If... you can't... turn me... my love, because you don't... you... don't (coughs) have the courage to so... Now you have no other option. (She takes a deep breath and whispers) So now or you rather let me die as a human knowing you'll never see me again or you turn me into a vampire and let me be dead by your side.
(While he was holding her, there was crying from her and from him. He holds her head and look right at her eyes while his other hand was on her face. They lips was so close that they almost kissed)
- I love you and I'm sorry.
(He said whispering and right after he whispered, He went close to her neck, put his fangs out and bit her)
"AGRRRR...." (She screams)
(He almost couldn't stop drinking her blood ' Cause her scent was different from the others .)
{But this is a story from another day 😜}
She dies and stay unconscious for 4 hours (this was the time needed until his venom takes over her whole body)
- My love... (She whispers)
- ... My love! (He says)
(She wakes with her body and her face full of blood but the bruised was gone. She wakes as a vampire and kiss him like he was her whole world.)
The storyline could say "And they lived in a bed full of happiness always and forever" But... do they really? 😏 Well this one as well is a story for another day...
hahaha Hope you guys liked.
I felt very inspired by this instrumental song and this came out on my mind... 💛
I love this music 🎶 🎵 ❤!
I feel like I've heard this somewhere before but I can't place it! Also listening to this to create a small vampire story I'm making!
That's a lovely violin
omg! I love the picture. It reminds me of when I imagine a gothic vampire beauty bites me and we fly together around Dracula's castle in peace as vampire bats! (obviously a dream)
You are a wonderful composer sir
Beautiful song...
(I swear it looks like ulquiorra and orihime.) This I one of many songs I favor. I love you work and home you do it for a long time!
Çokkk super bir parça😍😍😍 ellerinize sağlık👍👍👍
This goes directly to my heart
music played that only i could hear
the pain lingered
death reached for her as i told her forever
the look in her eyes as she faded away told stories of life and love
"forever"
Amo esta música,amo a Dracula,amo a los vampiros
J adore!!!C est juste magnifique !!!!
Peaceful
This is so beautiful
I like this, the whole album... Sorry that I don't find the vinyl... 🇧🇪
Pretty music of genius composer
I love this so much the music inspired me to draw something dark and vampiric like
Under a tree at quarter five she and I combined with darkness and light, I look upon her scared eyes and told me "An bhfaighidh mé bás...?" My warmth drew away her fears, I protected her from the humans... I held her in my arms for a long time until the day I gifted her the darkness, "forever?" She asked, "forever..." I said
@Pure Heart hi I'm sorry for answering late but no I don't know anything about that
@@LittleDestler that's beautiful you are good at poetry
Thx guys ;)
Wow...where have you been...why didn't I know of this composer...I love music like this...played on my koto...I subscribed immediately
forever, you said.
tears rolling down my face,
as doom awaits us.
we kissed,
for just a moment.
your hands were cold,
but i knew why.
i wasn't of your kind.
soon, death would await me.
forever, you said.
but deep inside,
i always knew,
it was never possible.
snowflakes,
gently falling down from the sky.
yet icy and cold.
the dead trees loomed over us,
yet providing no shelter.
tonight,
i would die.
in your arms.
you were like snowflakes,
like the trees of the dead forest.
forever, you said.
my body grew colder.
the last thing i saw,
where your beautiful eyes.
like emeralds,
twinkling in the moonlight.
you cried.
and i closed my eyes.
i wish it had gone different.
but it was never meant to be.
In 2021 and still listening to this masterpiece
I love it it's so touching the music as well as images are beautiful it's great 👌🙌👏💖
I always love this style of music you make!
Splendid . Happy Halloween 🎃
Marvelous
Magnificent ❤️
I have a writing character that I love to throw into different stories or whatever, (don't judge me, but I've currently thrown him into Twilight... I'm bored) and he has the ability of iridescence, meaning anything that has any form of glimmer or shine naturally on the object is his to command to control and travel with. He's not a vampire, but he did have limbs replaced with robotic parts. He is described by random people as bronze skinned, on kind of the fact that his skin does have a natural shine to it. I like the idea that when he walks through certain areas, he has a very specific presence. Almost an unnatural one, moths, crows, and shells of other kinds are his archetypes.
I Love dis video is so Beautiful music in it
Halo Peter u do great job, this song remind me with my dreams.. I love it :)
Beautiful!