The Secret Human Colonies Hidden in Plain Sight / HFY / A Short Sci-Fi Story

The Secret Human Colonies Hidden in Plain Sight / HFY / A Short Sci-Fi Story
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[@normaldude24]

few plot holes that I found:
1. When Jonas mentioned they had energy cloaking tech, Rathgar seemed surprised as if they didn't already see that upon approaching the asterid
2. Rathgar was torn at loyalty to the council vs the promise of high tech from the humans; but the humans already lost multiple times previously; where did this belief in human technology come from?
3. The Drakthar were described as a warrior type of race yet many of their behaviors in the story come off as very human versus what I would expect of a stereotypical warrior race. Their reaction of "not wanting to participate in the slaughter of innocents" really doesn't come off as them being the warrior type of reaction I would expect.
On the grammar side, there's a lot of grammar/spelling errors in the built-in sub-titles. One glaring one was the "slaughter of innocence" where this should have spelled as "innocents".
If AI was used to write this, then it needs to be heavily curated.

[@charleslahser2351]

How do you hear ships approaching through the vacuum of space?

[@czinn327]

Chatbots tend to repeat elements of the plot over and over. For example, that the alien had a choice between starting a war and obtaining human technology. This story repeats that a dozen times and it gets more tedious each time. "author"/prompt editor if you're reading this please do a better job of cutting down the story the chatbot gives you. Add new creative elements and eliminate this kind of repetition.