Yes, so helpful. I recorded GED Math videos on my channel. I will be more thank happy if you visit my channel and leave my any comments or suggestions. That will help me for improvement.
Your introduction is your intro to what you will be talking about, so you may have a reason why a passage is better supported in there that you then talk about and explain in your body. You want to rephrase though. You shouldn't just repeat exactly the way you had it before.
This is quite simple for those who are new to essays, and i am one who particularly don't like to write essays. However i am here because i need to schedule my exams and is a bit delayed because i am trying to catch up with some practice. I noticed that their are no topic included in the introduction, would this be a problem? I have seen other examples with the topic sentence included at the beginning. For example; Lately the issue with recycling has generated a lot of debate.
Maybe. I am not sure. I recorded GED Math videos on my channel. I will be more than happy if you visit my channel and leave my any comments or suggestions. That will help me for improvement.
My teacher told me to take reasons, evidence and examples from the passage buh u are also explaining things that makes a part stronger than the other only am confused sir can you please reply me b4 my exams
you are explaining which passage is stronger or better supported. As such, you can take reasons and evidence from one passage to show why you think it is stronger. Remember, you should not be explaining the passage-but explaining with evidence why it is the better supported one.
Are you stating that you should not include opposing or counter information from the other author in the body paragraphs? Also, could you clarify if there is only one passage now rather than two passages for the extended response? I have heard two different responses to the essay.
There are still two passages. You show which is the stronger passage. You should include counter information-where you now show why the other passage is weak instead of why you don't agree with it. It may be lacking factual information for example, or did not include experts in their reasoning-etc.
This was so helpful to me! I passed mine today!
Great job!
This was helpful. Thank you.
Yes, so helpful. I recorded GED Math videos on my channel. I will be more thank happy if you visit my channel and leave my any comments or suggestions. That will help me for improvement.
Great video ❤ I had a little issue passing my maths on GED I had no option than to pay for help
Happy to hear that it was helpful. Good luck on the math
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Can I use this essay to write real exam on Ged Essay?
Yes-You can use this format
How did you do?? I am in the process.
helpful indeed thanks
Glad it helped
Can we use transitional words for 3rd and 4th body paragraphs can u show some transitional words for 3rd & 4th body paragraphs
Yes you can, and yes I will. Stay tuned.
Also I was told that we're not supposed to use the same sentences to much. Would that mean the sentences in your introduction as well?
Your introduction is your intro to what you will be talking about, so you may have a reason why a passage is better supported in there that you then talk about and explain in your body. You want to rephrase though. You shouldn't just repeat exactly the way you had it before.
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Hopefully I can pass it this time around
You will. Continue to review
This is quite simple for those who are new to essays, and i am one who particularly don't like to write essays. However i am here because i need to schedule my exams and is a bit delayed because i am trying to catch up with some practice.
I noticed that their are no topic included in the introduction, would this be a problem? I have seen other examples with the topic sentence included at the beginning. For example; Lately the issue with recycling has generated a lot of debate.
The topic in the introduction would be your thesis statement where you explicitly state which passage is better supported
Is this extended response part of the ged ready practice questions ?
Maybe. I am not sure. I recorded GED Math videos on my channel. I will be more than happy if you visit my channel and leave my any comments or suggestions. That will help me for improvement.
The Extended Response is the essay that you will write in response to the prompt. That is different from the multiple choice questions
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My teacher told me to take reasons, evidence and examples from the passage buh u are also explaining things that makes a part stronger than the other only am confused sir can you please reply me b4 my exams
you are explaining which passage is stronger or better supported. As such, you can take reasons and evidence from one passage to show why you think it is stronger. Remember, you should not be explaining the passage-but explaining with evidence why it is the better supported one.
Are you stating that you should not include opposing or counter information from the other author in the body paragraphs? Also, could you clarify if there is only one passage now rather than two passages for the extended response? I have heard two different responses to the essay.
There are still two passages. You show which is the stronger passage. You should include counter information-where you now show why the other passage is weak instead of why you don't agree with it. It may be lacking factual information for example, or did not include experts in their reasoning-etc.
How did you do??
Where is the thesis statement in the introduction
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Can you send me a few of your completed extended response essays?
Please stay tuned as we will be posting sample essays this week. Also, you can review the openessayme website as they have a good essay writing system
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