I was lulled to sleep by the hum of the night breeze, the quiet whir of the fridge downstairs, and the soothing sound of footsteps. Bare skin, slapping against concrete outside. *wait-*
The way her clothes were found and folded, considering the detail of the man being naked, feels like it was significant. Like, he didn't just take her, he made her like him. It's a very haunting setup…Well wrought, author and Creeps alike!
This is an amazing creepypasta. It was very emotional and I felt care/sympathy for the characters within the story, and the way you told the story made this even better. I partially wish for a sequel, but maybe some things are best left alone, such as this beautiful story; it had a great amount of realism but a mixture of fiction that made the story easy to understand and grow fond of. Phenomenal job as usual, CreepsMcPasta and also a job well done to the author of this amazing story. Well done. 👍
I didn’t even realize how long this was, that sincerely creeped the shit out of me when the man popped up in the tree line, that kinda shit scares me. Great creepypasta
ParasiteXSnuff lol - but relying on drunk people to find you might not go so well. After a few drinks, they'd forget. "Duuuude. That guy looks familiar. I think I've seen him before." "Yeah bro, he's on the other beer bottles." "Oh, cool. He must like beer. Maybe he's their mascot." "Yeah... would be cool to have a drink with him." *hours go by * "Hey, this guy looks familiar..."
A well-written pasta that makes the reader (or listener, as it were) want more. That being said, there were a few things about this story that didn't make much sense: 1) No one has a three-year class reunion. Most schools start them after the first ten years. Unless it was something put together independently by a group of students, but why would they feel this necessary? 2) Daniel mentions that his second conversation with Maisie happened on the last day of the term, in summer. He actually says that school got out a day early. Then, after the night in Daniel's bedroom, they spend several MORE weeks in school before the summer holidays begin. He actually says: "We finished school without ever speaking again. On the last day, I slipped my number into her locker, in case she ever wanted to get in touch." What kind of school lets out twice for summer holidays within a single year and holds three-year class reunions? 3) When Maisie and David leave the movies, their behavior is erratic. She begs David to take her home "Now, please" after he describes the naked man in the trees. This urgency to return home is forgotten when David randomly stops the car for some fresh air. He suggests that she join him and-- inexplicably-- she does! Why would you just randomly stop for a bit of air when someone clearly has expressed an urgent need to get home? And if you want so badly to get home, why would you not insist upon it? Make it clear that climbing out of the car in the middle of nowhere isn't what you asked him to do. The author explains away this behavior by stating: "Perhaps it was the pleasant view before us, or the fresh air, or perhaps it was the excitement of being out at night - whatever it was, something made her forget whatever had frightened her." I'm sorry, but if I was being stalked by an incubus (most likely what it was) that first attached itself to me after I went playing in the woods, I don't think being on a dark country road bordered on one side by "thick woods" would put me at ease. Not at all. Especially considering Daniel had described seeing it nearby only minutes before.
If you think about it, since she was very distant from everyone including her father... her father explained that he acted like a gentleman. He was a gentleman at 3 different places... the cinema, the place overlooking the field, and at his house where he let her sleep in his bed... the “demon” was in 3 different places. It would make sense that maisie was scared of something that followed her everywhere because maybe that something was her father who as the narrator explained looked very skinny, the demon was also lean as if he hadnt eaten... just food for thought
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It would explain why she got angry at the movie with possession, her dad is possessed and has been doing horrible things to her and she knows she cannot do anything since he is now a demon, the clothes being gone is because demon dad took her away, maybe to hell or just threatened to kill the boy and maisie loved him so much she went willingly to save him from a horrible fate..
I'm at 15 mins and I'm guessing that when she heard him running she was scared because someone was stalking her which explains the moving a lot... but it's a creepy pasta so ya know unpredictable.
I listened to this when it was first uploaded. Found it haunting sad and another weird feeling I can’t explain. Here I am three years later and still haven’t been able to get it out my head
Yeah, I don't know why. I have listened to hundreds of his videos, and most of them are great, but for some reason this one really stuck with me, to the point I remembered the title after 5 years. I can't think of any other specific ones that stuck out with me like this one did.
So does anybody have a theory about who took the picture of Maisie and why? I'm really said there is no part 2 because I really wanna know what happened to her, why her clothes were inside that house and who took the picture
i think the naked guy took it, or maybe Maisie did. i think that they are the same "species" now (maisie and the naked guy). it seems like such an odd detail to say that the clothes were neatly folded in the cottage without it meaning something, which leads me to believe that maisie became the same sort of creature as the naked man. it would also explain why nobody has seen her, since the creatures reside in that haunted forest. the reason for stealing the picture could potentially be that the maisie/ the naked man didnt want maisie to be remembered, or maybe since the main character saw the naked man its a warning sign that hes going to be next.
Hakinator maybe its her brother, they never mentioned the parents being seen by people so what if her and her brother are genetic experiment and he was coming to collect her
I'm fine with creepypastas, but I have dreadful nightmares if I watch horror movies, I watched The Grudge when I was 9, I'm now 18 and still occasionally have nightmares about it, that shit traumatised me
This was one of the best stories I've heard. I personally really enjoyed it so much I listened to it three times. I really did like it. It was told extremely well. Thank you so much for your time and effort in the selection and narrative of these stories. This one in particular. I would like a Maisie part ll. I usually don't like sequels. 👍
I just want to have a moment of appreciation for the background music, for a while it was playing "Lilium" its a beautiful song and always makes me emotional because of Elfen Lied 🙂💕
This was such a magnificent and intensifingly slow burn. The writing, the narration, and the music were all perfect. The subtle suspense was gripping the whole time I listened. I felt what these characters felt. I can honestly say that this is my favorite creepypasta, I don't usually ever listen to a creepypasta more than once and I have listened to this one more times than I can count. It leaves me with a sense of melancholic wonder and a rolling sense of sadness for the characters. Such a great story. It is perfect the way it is.
I dunno man. We still say the A is Maisie. I don't know where creeps is from, maybe he's Mancunian or something, but it's pretty universally known to have a hard A. Like "G'day Maysey"
Sorry Cormac B but I dont agree with that, Havent you ever seen How I met your Mother when Marshell tells Barnie when hes going to slap him? and how much that made it even worse. Maybe in this case yeah the unknown is better then what could of been said but I wouldent say Nothing is more scary :P
Giving to much information about the monster makes it less scary, its best to only give the bare minimum, too keep the reader guessing. The reason behind this is that keeping the reader in the dark about the monsters true abilities and weaknesses stops the reader from knowing when/where the monster will strike and how to stop it. This can give the reader a sense of paranoia and powerlessness, after all, knowledge is power. Also, no, I haven't seen "How I met you Mother", infact, I don't think I've ever heard of it.
Apparently I have gone missing haha always funny to see things with my name on it, doesn't happen much. Can't wait to listen when it comes around on my work playlist.
Major Bubbie I used to go to sleep to these all the time in 9th grade, now like 4-5 years later I try and they usually put me just slightly too much on edge lol. I also used to listen to more of the Jeff the killer and Ben drowned type ones though amd those aren't that creepy
There should be some kind of "clown" repellent/antidote like there is for werewolves & vampires with a cross & silver bullet. 😂👌😂👍😂 This was a great story.
The main character is soooo stupid. Stopping in the middle of the road next to the forest you saw a naked man in? After maisie insisted she needed to go home? Like wtf
Amazing story., a perfect blend of scary and sad. Full credit to Spuk for his imagination and Creepy for the stirring and elegant narration as usual. The background music was a great touch as well.
This CreepyPasta is surely one of the best. I love stories with elements of mystery and tragedy. We didn't find out what happened to poor Maisie but then again, maybe that's for the best. It could be supernatural or not, either way, it's something that'll keep me up at night.
kinda sad and right in the feels as I felt very antisocial and ''somewhere else'' in my highschool years, often told by people too, once a guy in our track team told me, I felt like you weren't even there sometimes and forgot you were even in the team. Im not even sure how anyone manages to be as shy as I was.
As a lifelong musician, whenever I've been asked about songwriting, I would tell whomever was asking, that when you write something, if you can't make someone feel the emotional place you were in when you wrote it, you've missed the mark. This story does just that. It pulls you into the emotional rollercoaster and keeps you there until the end...
I'm legit not joking when I say I listen to this about 40 times it's still scares the crap out of me and last night I had a dream about that thing in the story and I woke up with shivers all over This one still delivers and I think there's something scary about not knowing what happened to her that makes it better
pug life is the best life 567 Isn't that the fucking point of commenting unless the person in the video literally tells you to comment a specific thing or are you just salty as hell
I really enjoyed this story, my only problem was the ending which was unsatisfyingly vague. I wanted a forgiving end or even a bigger cliff hanging ending. I would of added to the last few paragraphs of this story that Maisie had somehow volunteeringly turned into one of those naked stalker things from the fact that her clothes were found in the cottage in Scotland. I wanted the Daniel to somehow come across the naked man but now, erringly with another tall, naked female figure alongside him, ending the story with an answer. (Her description of having a tall figure and fast speed kind of were alike with the stalker’s)
There should be a prequel story ab Maisie and what happened in the woods when she was 13 and it should be based on her point of view leading up to the events in this story that would give us some closure as to what happened great story tho
Why would you "stop for fresh air" after the girl you're with insists that she needs to get home immediately? You're in a car. Open the window for some fresh air.
This story is eerie and leaving an eerie feeling. There are two actual missing person cases under the same name 1)Maisie Stretch 2)Two girls Maisie and Jessica 3)In the movie DARK ENCOUNTER the missing girl's name is Maisie 4)I know a person who had a similar haunting experience during my medical school days but never went missing though. This story is so surreal and beautiful! Narration is simply fantastic too.
Awesome. I really enjoyed the fact that they were legitimate friends or at least that if there was a crush from the protagonist towards Maisie it remained unspoke. I like to think that it was here that took her photo from him in the end, and she's still alive and did so in order to fully vanish, not to involve her demon with the main character any further.
I was lulled to sleep by the hum of the night breeze, the quiet whir of the fridge downstairs, and the soothing sound of footsteps. Bare skin, slapping against concrete outside. *wait-*
Shiho That part ruined me lol
Wtf happened
@@razorblade2332 you know exactly what happened
Weirdo...lol
Demons are dummy thicc
This was like a feelspasta, man.
If you like this try penpal
@@allenstewart8535 what's penpal?
@@declanjones8888Basically the narrator is stalked by this entity known as the "Penpal" that kills everyone the Narrator gets close to.
"I need to get home RIGHT NOW!!!" "Okay.... Wait let me stop in this empty field and stare at the dark for 10 minutes first"
The way her clothes were found and folded, considering the detail of the man being naked, feels like it was significant. Like, he didn't just take her, he made her like him. It's a very haunting setup…Well wrought, author and Creeps alike!
Do you know who the author is
@@thebarefootdrummer6375 No, nor do I particularly care. A story should stand on its own merits.
Another nearly hour-long creepypasta? Have you been reading my Christmas list?
Yes, me too. I LOVE this guys voice. This is a very good dose :)
who writes a christmas list in may?
Me
Drablord birthday in two days perfect way to waste the time until then
staffieSquad me
Who win?
A beautiful talented and naturally athletic female?
Or one pasty boi
One pasty b0I
Dylan Okouchi Boy*
ProjectSPARK TM Boy*
ẘөᏞfíєLႩʊg͓̽нֆ Boy*
@@chrishuston6652 stop its a meme just stop
Its kind of funny that the religious man in this story is named heathen.
This is an amazing creepypasta. It was very emotional and I felt care/sympathy for the characters within the story, and the way you told the story made this even better. I partially wish for a sequel, but maybe some things are best left alone, such as this beautiful story; it had a great amount of realism but a mixture of fiction that made the story easy to understand and grow fond of. Phenomenal job as usual, CreepsMcPasta and also a job well done to the author of this amazing story. Well done. 👍
Jake Little Finally, a comment about the creepypasta. Wish there were more people like you haha.
well said
I AGREE WITH YOU!
Truth
I didn’t even realize how long this was, that sincerely creeped the shit out of me when the man popped up in the tree line, that kinda shit scares me. Great creepypasta
I love the way he says Maisie, I don't know why but it sounds so beautiful when he says it.
idk it bothers me. im a stickler for saying things the right way and him saying m-eye-see instead of may-see bothers me
Lol and idk why but i found it little annoying
If I ever go missing, I want my picture on a beer bottle, instead of a milk carton so only *fun* people find me!
ParasiteXSnuff lol - but relying on drunk people to find you might not go so well. After a few drinks, they'd forget.
"Duuuude. That guy looks familiar. I think I've seen him before."
"Yeah bro, he's on the other beer bottles."
"Oh, cool. He must like beer. Maybe he's their mascot."
"Yeah... would be cool to have a drink with him."
*hours go by *
"Hey, this guy looks familiar..."
who did you steal that joke from?
projectOMA holy fuck I’m dying here 😂😂😂
shit fun people? that's the only way my family would find out I'm missing. 😉
LMFAOOO what a mood
And we still haven't filed a missing persons report
Pretty sure they did...
They literally started the plot by stating her parents filed a missing persons report as soon as she went missing
A well-written pasta that makes the reader (or listener, as it were) want more.
That being said, there were a few things about this story that didn't make much sense:
1) No one has a three-year class reunion. Most schools start them after the first ten years. Unless it was something put together independently by a group of students, but why would they feel this necessary?
2) Daniel mentions that his second conversation with Maisie happened on the last day of the term, in summer. He actually says that school got out a day early. Then, after the night in Daniel's bedroom, they spend several MORE weeks in school before the summer holidays begin. He actually says: "We finished school without ever speaking again. On the last day, I slipped my number into her locker, in case she ever wanted to get in touch."
What kind of school lets out twice for summer holidays within a single year and holds three-year class reunions?
3) When Maisie and David leave the movies, their behavior is erratic. She begs David to take her home "Now, please" after he describes the naked man in the trees. This urgency to return home is forgotten when David randomly stops the car for some fresh air. He suggests that she join him and-- inexplicably-- she does! Why would you just randomly stop for a bit of air when someone clearly has expressed an urgent need to get home?
And if you want so badly to get home, why would you not insist upon it? Make it clear that climbing out of the car in the middle of nowhere isn't what you asked him to do. The author explains away this behavior by stating: "Perhaps it was the pleasant view before us, or the fresh air, or perhaps it was the excitement of being out at night - whatever it was, something made her forget whatever had frightened her."
I'm sorry, but if I was being stalked by an incubus (most likely what it was) that first attached itself to me after I went playing in the woods, I don't think being on a dark country road bordered on one side by "thick woods" would put me at ease. Not at all. Especially considering Daniel had described seeing it nearby only minutes before.
Yeah! 50 minutes with Creeps McPasta, he made my day.
General Spärde ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Love the long ones like this!
the really Long ones, and the really Short ones are the best
That’s what she said
If you think about it, since she was very distant from everyone including her father... her father explained that he acted like a gentleman. He was a gentleman at 3 different places... the cinema, the place overlooking the field, and at his house where he let her sleep in his bed... the “demon” was in 3 different places. It would make sense that maisie was scared of something that followed her everywhere because maybe that something was her father who as the narrator explained looked very skinny, the demon was also lean as if he hadnt eaten... just food for thought
It would explain why she got angry at the movie with possession, her dad is possessed and has been doing horrible things to her and she knows she cannot do anything since he is now a demon, the clothes being gone is because demon dad took her away, maybe to hell or just threatened to kill the boy and maisie loved him so much she went willingly to save him from a horrible fate..
Oh shit, your right I just realized that!
I'm at 15 mins and I'm guessing that when she heard him running she was scared because someone was stalking her which explains the moving a lot... but it's a creepy pasta so ya know unpredictable.
Kinga Loves RUclips I mean yeah obviously kinda like silent hill
ironic how her last name is "heathen"
meme chef I thought it was Heven
All my friends are heathens take it slow...
I am so sorry I will leave now
@@aurorasantiago9763 ||-//
That was my thinking too..lol
His voice matches with the whole story and it scares me even though I'm with someone next to me😱😱😱👻👻👻👻👻
i always fall asleep during these long ones, and it takes like 3 days of picking up where i left off to finish the story, it's so good
I listened to this when it was first uploaded. Found it haunting sad and another weird feeling I can’t explain. Here I am three years later and still haven’t been able to get it out my head
same!
Same
Yeah, I don't know why. I have listened to hundreds of his videos, and most of them are great, but for some reason this one really stuck with me, to the point I remembered the title after 5 years. I can't think of any other specific ones that stuck out with me like this one did.
So does anybody have a theory about who took the picture of Maisie and why?
I'm really said there is no part 2 because I really wanna know what happened to her, why her clothes were inside that house and who took the picture
i think the naked guy took it, or maybe Maisie did. i think that they are the same "species" now (maisie and the naked guy). it seems like such an odd detail to say that the clothes were neatly folded in the cottage without it meaning something, which leads me to believe that maisie became the same sort of creature as the naked man. it would also explain why nobody has seen her, since the creatures reside in that haunted forest. the reason for stealing the picture could potentially be that the maisie/ the naked man didnt want maisie to be remembered, or maybe since the main character saw the naked man its a warning sign that hes going to be next.
@@misterlamprey7777 i think the clothes were more of a biblical reference
Hakinator maybe its her brother, they never mentioned the parents being seen by people so what if her and her brother are genetic experiment and he was coming to collect her
Nvrmnd they say something about the father my bad
It woulda been cool if they made a prequel from maisies point of view which leads up to the events of this story
> school reunion
> 3 years
Lol wut
An unofficial one?
Doesn’t happen every 5 years? I wouldn’t know because I swore I’d never go back and I never have.
well , this is gonna become a nightmare for me now which might haunt me for a week
midnight mistress can you please upload a video (if you can)? I am subscribed so i will get the notification!
midnight mistress yay!
Yeah ill probably subscribe if u do
I'm fine with creepypastas, but I have dreadful nightmares if I watch horror movies, I watched The Grudge when I was 9, I'm now 18 and still occasionally have nightmares about it, that shit traumatised me
This was one of the best stories I've heard. I personally really enjoyed it so much I listened to it three times. I really did like it. It was told extremely well. Thank you so much for your time and effort in the selection and narrative of these stories. This one in particular.
I would like a Maisie part ll.
I usually don't like sequels. 👍
I would like to know what happened to her from her perspective do you know who the original author is
@@thebarefootdrummer6375Spuk, link in bio
When you describes the half naked man with muscular shoulders and a supernatural vibe i couldn't help but to think of Ben Swollo
That was the most autistic comment I’ve heard.
Danlore you didnt hear it you read it
Danlore was hoping to make it more acoustic tbh
Best comment in this thread
Who?
Time and time again, you don't fail to please, thank you for all the hard work brother.
I just want to have a moment of appreciation for the background music, for a while it was playing "Lilium" its a beautiful song and always makes me emotional because of Elfen Lied 🙂💕
Paula Ramirez I was wondering where it was from! Thank you for saving me the time looking it up 😂🙂
Then have it?
Omg yes I love when he puts that music in the background it’s such a good anime ;-;
Oh yeah! That's where I've heard it! Thank you
I knew I couldn’t have been the only one who noticed!
Part 2 please!!!! That one was a pretty good story, I would love to hear part 2!!!! Like this comment so he can see it. Part 2 please brah!!!!
Dr. Fu//ck Yes please!! Me too I really enjoyed it.
Theres a part 2?
There is no part two as far as I can tell with the little bit of digging I’ve done
Dr. Fu//ck me 2 I wanna find our what happened 2 her
Nude boy got her. It ain't rocket science.
Wow. This has to be the you’re best creepypasta yet
Thanks for taking the time to make these long pastas for us to enjoy.
Greetings from germany.
This was such a magnificent and intensifingly slow burn. The writing, the narration, and the music were all perfect. The subtle suspense was gripping the whole time I listened. I felt what these characters felt. I can honestly say that this is my favorite creepypasta, I don't usually ever listen to a creepypasta more than once and I have listened to this one more times than I can count. It leaves me with a sense of melancholic wonder and a rolling sense of sadness for the characters. Such a great story. It is perfect the way it is.
Nah, Maisie is just in the washroom, putting on her makeup.
Mr GuessWHO yeah! at her cottage in Scotland
* sees my name in the title *
*MMM YES TIME TO WATCH* -MYSELF-
Lol
Lmao you went really Aussie the first time you said Maisie around the 2 minute mark
I dunno man. We still say the A is Maisie. I don't know where creeps is from, maybe he's Mancunian or something, but it's pretty universally known to have a hard A. Like "G'day Maysey"
This story still makes me cry at the end....he loved her and he never knew it
"Maisie is missing ..." Sudden mass exodus from the party XD
I wish it told me what happened ....it was kinda a cliff hanger
That's the point. Nothing is more scary then the unkown.
Sorry Cormac B but I dont agree with that, Havent you ever seen How I met your Mother when Marshell tells Barnie when hes going to slap him? and how much that made it even worse. Maybe in this case yeah the unknown is better then what could of been said but I wouldent say Nothing is more scary :P
Giving to much information about the monster makes it less scary, its best to only give the bare minimum, too keep the reader guessing. The reason behind this is that keeping the reader in the dark about the monsters true abilities and weaknesses stops the reader from knowing when/where the monster will strike and how to stop it. This can give the reader a sense of paranoia and powerlessness, after all, knowledge is power.
Also, no, I haven't seen "How I met you Mother", infact, I don't think I've ever heard of it.
It's a make your own idea story. So people can make theory's and speculate.
Perhaps it's on purpose..to bring a part two later
WHAT A LONG VIDEO :D more pls
You're amazing Creeps
This is what I call quality pasta, awesome narration of an awesome story!!!
Would love a follow up to this one where he follows her footsteps to the cottage in Scotland
How to be an idiot: watch a marathon of these in the dark.
Apparently I have gone missing haha always funny to see things with my name on it, doesn't happen much. Can't wait to listen when it comes around on my work playlist.
Maisie Crowley is there a Mr Crowley?
Where did you go did the demon take you
Maisie Crowley Maisie why you vanish? Not okey
Pretty scary...
But I'm going through a phase...
I'm currently unphased.
Fear is no longer a concern.
So edgy
You know what is and should be a concern fucking school and money
Nejc Guček not until something spooks you and makes you question your reality. I used to be on the same boat until I started seeing things.
probably because you know it's not real and you're not in any immediate danger so there is no need to be concerned.
Major Bubbie I used to go to sleep to these all the time in 9th grade, now like 4-5 years later I try and they usually put me just slightly too much on edge lol. I also used to listen to more of the Jeff the killer and Ben drowned type ones though amd those aren't that creepy
Stop listening to these and than come back after like maybe 3 months or 1 I stopped for some time just was busy , came back and got shook
There should be some kind of "clown" repellent/antidote like there is for werewolves & vampires with a cross & silver bullet. 😂👌😂👍😂 This was a great story.
Jake lmao I was going to say the same thing.
those emojis paint true horror
Yeah we need the repellent to get rid of tiffany the rat nigga
Flamethrower, .50 cal, Shotgun, take your pick my friend
There really should be, Tiffany.. I'd buy it! lol
We need a part 2 😭
Yeah really
*grabs popcorn* Let do this!
Edit: I want a part 2!!
TheRealDaveMG there is no part 2
I figured, but hey I can dream
TheRealDaveMG. Why don't you write a part 2?
Sadly I don't have the talent to do the story justice and I am to busy with collage to decade my time to trying to write a creepypasta.
TheRealDaveMG cmon cuz use ur imagination
Is it weird that I kinda have a crush on Maisie?
Me too 😍
Waruu same
Waruu I think we all do
Not at all
It’s weird
36:36
"Why would a random skinny naked man in the middle of the woods fill a young woman with such fear?"
Gee, who knows 🤦
The main character is soooo stupid. Stopping in the middle of the road next to the forest you saw a naked man in? After maisie insisted she needed to go home? Like wtf
A sad and beautiful story. Great narration
Have'nt had time to listen to these stories for a long while and i just now can feel how much i've actually missed them
I have so many questions about that ending. 🤔🤔🤔
Definitely a creepy story...one that I wish had a Part 2! Thanks for the wonderful narration! 😊✌👍
This is my comfort creepypasta..........I watch this when I'm sad
I fall asleep to a lot of creepypastas but something about this one gave me a nightmare for the first time in awhile so good job
It still gives me nightmares
The first creepypasta to ever make me cry
its been over a year since i watched elfen lied and when you put that elfen lied music on all the feels came back, feelsbadman
*Sees guy in the woods that's freaky.*
Decides to stop and take a breath in the middle of no where
*LOGIC* 😂😂
Horror logic
Amazing story., a perfect blend of scary and sad. Full credit to Spuk for his imagination and Creepy for the stirring and elegant narration as usual. The background music was a great touch as well.
I really love your videos, hearing your voice really helps calm my anxiety.
This CreepyPasta is surely one of the best. I love stories with elements of mystery and tragedy. We didn't find out what happened to poor Maisie but then again, maybe that's for the best. It could be supernatural or not, either way, it's something that'll keep me up at night.
Hey I know you get a lot of comments like these and you may not see this but I just want ed to tell you that I love your videos
Good thing it’s a long video I need this
Really awesome! I wish you uploaded longer stories like this!!! 👌 do more!!!
Great story, and a great narration. I really enjoyed it
Thank you Creeps, mysterious and melancholy.
Why did Amazing Story, I really like it a lot. Your narration was excellent. Thank you very much.
Man I would love a second part to this, maybe him trying to find her and he ends up dealing with the demon to. That would be awesome
Love these long stories, keep them up!!
This is one of the best pastas I’ve heard in a while
This really reminds me of "It Follows" without all the sex
wow she smiles so quietly "she smiled quietly to herself"
kinda sad and right in the feels as I felt very antisocial and ''somewhere else'' in my highschool years, often told by people too, once a guy in our track team told me, I felt like you weren't even there sometimes and forgot you were even in the team. Im not even sure how anyone manages to be as shy as I was.
this is one of the best ones ive heard in a long time.
As a lifelong musician, whenever I've been asked about songwriting, I would tell whomever was asking, that when you write something, if you can't make someone feel the emotional place you were in when you wrote it, you've missed the mark. This story does just that. It pulls you into the emotional rollercoaster and keeps you there until the end...
Holy shit he's sprinting
Bravo man I’d love to hear more stories like this
This is one of the best creepypastas i've ever heard!
This was 10/10, beautiful pasta.
Literally my favorite creepypasta
I’ve been meaning to listen to this for years. Good story, but I was disappointed that I figured it out by the movie theater scene.
I'm legit not joking when I say I listen to this about 40 times it's still scares the crap out of me and last night I had a dream about that thing in the story and I woke up with shivers all over This one still delivers and I think there's something scary about not knowing what happened to her that makes it better
Well my virginity went missing last year
(Don't read my name)
Pubg better then fortnite nobody asked u!
pug life is the best life 567 Isn't that the fucking point of commenting unless the person in the video literally tells you to comment a specific thing or are you just salty as hell
Who took it?
Pubg better then fortnite fortnite is better then pubg
ginger psycho his right hand
I love those long CreepyPastas
Rarely is there such thing as an hour long CreppsMcPasta happen,but when it does I go to a secluded place,and simply enjoy
Ahhh the long ones are the best ones ... coupled with the most soothing and talented voice on RUclips - heaven for my ears
I really enjoyed this story, my only problem was the ending which was unsatisfyingly vague. I wanted a forgiving end or even a bigger cliff hanging ending. I would of added to the last few paragraphs of this story that Maisie had somehow volunteeringly turned into one of those naked stalker things from the fact that her clothes were found in the cottage in Scotland. I wanted the Daniel to somehow come across the naked man but now, erringly with another tall, naked female figure alongside him, ending the story with an answer. (Her description of having a tall figure and fast speed kind of were alike with the stalker’s)
Excellent as usual CreepsMcPasta, keep up the great work. Keep your awesome videos coming!!!!
i listened to lavendertowne read this :3
Currupt 64 Patches I heard her version as well, but I prefer Creeps version a bit more! Lol
hehehe i personally like both. They both have soothing, calming voices...to me atleast
There should be a prequel story ab Maisie and what happened in the woods when she was 13 and it should be based on her point of view leading up to the events in this story that would give us some closure as to what happened great story tho
Demon stole that man's future wife!😭
Thank you for helping me sleep almost every night.
I hear lilium in the background. Amazing
Awesome :3
Wow, I gotta say, this one was really, really good!
Why would you "stop for fresh air" after the girl you're with insists that she needs to get home immediately? You're in a car. Open the window for some fresh air.
Right? Lels
This story is eerie and leaving an eerie feeling. There are two actual missing person cases under the same name
1)Maisie Stretch
2)Two girls Maisie and Jessica
3)In the movie DARK ENCOUNTER the missing girl's name is Maisie
4)I know a person who had a similar haunting experience during my medical school days but never went missing though.
This story is so surreal and beautiful! Narration is simply fantastic too.
Awesome. I really enjoyed the fact that they were legitimate friends or at least that if there was a crush from the protagonist towards Maisie it remained unspoke. I like to think that it was here that took her photo from him in the end, and she's still alive and did so in order to fully vanish, not to involve her demon with the main character any further.
I was very happy with this one , great story -(characters , plot , turnout , narration all of the above) . ☺️
Amazing story!!
I love the long hecking stories keep it up:)