Aliens Shocked When Little Human Girl Not Only Tames But Makes Apex Predator Her HORSE! BEST HFY

[@kentgladden4316]

I really liked this one. great job :)

[@FictionalReimagined]

WoW thank you very much! I try hard to post some good stories! Thanks for the recognition!

[@grantgunz]

"Peace cannot be kept by force; it can only be achieved by understanding." - Albert Einstein
Humans . . . Pro-tip: Humans can pack bond even with animals who will eat them.

[@GrigoriZhukov]

Boop the sshark.

[@barrygann3761]

This is a pretty good dadgum story you should have stretched it out just a tad bit longer find out what happened

[@roberthodge2771]

Stories should go to the real ending; not the chapter ending.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks!

[@lynneclark5313]

VERY Interesting!! But I thought they were on Earth, but they are on a Zelthr world? How did the Humans get there? And what was all the talk about the Zelthr invading? I am totally confused.

[@FictionalReimagined]

WoW... Excellent observation!

[@jamesbarnard928]

That was pretty good, thanks

[@FictionalReimagined]

Hey thanks for this!

[@ronsindric4241]

Good tale; there aew a few inconsistencies, and a few places where more is needed. Spoken words and displayed text needs to be more tightly edited and integrated. But this yarn has possibilities. It needs a prequel, and two postscript to turn good into Great.

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks!

[@williammann7247]

I concur..good first effort. Looking forward to your continuing story. ​@FictionalReimagined

[@FictionalReimagined]

@@williammann7247 Thanks!

[@brianblackwell5713]

Quit reading the damn asterisks!!!!

[@FictionalReimagined]

Thanks for this!

[@DavidClark-es1ww]

Got to agree with the comment regarding the 'asterisks'. They really are irrelevant without some sort of illustrations to accompany them.🧐🤔

[@0neTwo3]

Anybody else hearing that squeeky, chirpy noise in the soundtrack…. It’s driving me freak’n nuts!