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  • Опубликовано: 20 янв 2024
  • An alien empire seeking easy spoils invades a remote human colony world, only to be brutally decimated by an unseen enemy that hunts their veteran troops with ruthless, untraceable precision.
    All my stories are original.
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  • @jamiepatterson1214
    @jamiepatterson1214 5 месяцев назад +28

    Just because fancy tech couldn't detect humans, doesn't mean they aren't there. Just because they think they are fierce warriors, doesn't mean there aren't others who are fiecer warriors.
    In short, leave the humans alone. They know war like a brother.

  • @DylonBridson
    @DylonBridson 5 месяцев назад +33

    “Your army is so vast, our land is so small. Where will we find space to bury you all?”

  • @a.m.v.6938
    @a.m.v.6938 5 месяцев назад +66

    What’s up with the voice cutting out before finishing the sentence. Instead of trying to fix the robot reading program it’s just getting worse. Love the stories but you need to fix this.

    • @sam2x13
      @sam2x13 5 месяцев назад +11

      I'm glad you said something. I rewound it twice thinking it was me.

    • @larrytate6884
      @larrytate6884 5 месяцев назад +16

      No, it's the AI I think. It sure takes away from the story.

    • @VentOutEyes-Channel
      @VentOutEyes-Channel 5 месяцев назад +1

      Go do your own videos.. más triste i swear #ComptonCaliLove sheeeeeesh n a bunch

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon 5 месяцев назад +4

      Sloppy work, I reckon. Bad editing, stilted delivery, bizarre and inconsistent pronunciation. Zerk, Zark? It doesn’t matter to them.
      Bonus! I just came to the abrupt, mid-sentence ending. A new feature, I guess . . .

    • @willreaver2294
      @willreaver2294 5 месяцев назад +6

      They don’t care, these types of channels are popping up daily, it’s been covered by tech companies, science media and regular media. AI auto generated channels sole purpose is to produce quantity and not quality content. Pump out as much content with as little effort as possible, its purpose is to maximize engagement to generate more ad revenue , they are actually making a lot of money now. They don’t need quality work, because they know people are going to click on it anyway, and maybe if some get tired of low effort junk, there are always more that are still going to click on it, that’s all they need, it’s a numbers game.

  • @railtonfeagus8539
    @railtonfeagus8539 5 месяцев назад +19

    It's a shame about the skipping of whole words and poor production quality as I've been enjoying this channel recently.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад +6

      Sorry I am trying to get better at the audio and a hang of it but I can't afford the unlimited regenerations rite now hopefully soon I'll have better quality.

  • @jamesha175
    @jamesha175 5 месяцев назад +10

    LOL the scary alien in the illustration has beautiful dentures like actor George Hamilton

    • @jackmandu
      @jackmandu 5 месяцев назад

      Plus it has five fingers on the left hand, it only four fingers on the right.

  • @ccp4415
    @ccp4415 4 месяца назад +1

    Well, there's 13 minutes I'll never get back again.

  • @trevormillar1576
    @trevormillar1576 5 месяцев назад +1

    The aliens look like the oned in "The Tommyknockers".

  • @LoriFoster
    @LoriFoster 3 месяца назад

    I liked this story very much!

  • @DaytonaRoadster
    @DaytonaRoadster 5 месяцев назад

    "WE WILL NEVER BE SLAVES...but we will be...Conquers"

  • @jamesphillipturpin1452
    @jamesphillipturpin1452 4 месяца назад +1

    Audio cuts out words as if it editted incorrectly, missing words. It also lacks even optional captions, so we can't read the missing words.

  • @lennym1636
    @lennym1636 5 месяцев назад +3

    NO no no no, you can't end it like that...

  • @TairnKA
    @TairnKA 5 месяцев назад +6

    I must be missing something, there seems to be a continuity error; the humans allowed a shuttle to land and pick up its dead, but then informed the alien, his ship wouldn't make it to orbit?
    Maybe the alien ship that landed wasn't a shuttle, but an armed craft?

    • @uwillnevahno6837
      @uwillnevahno6837 5 месяцев назад +5

      Well while the two sides came to terms the alien broke the ceasefire by firing.

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon 5 месяцев назад +1

      I don’t think you’re missing anything. The author just forgot the previous invitation, or maybe the humans are all psychopaths. I’ve been getting the impression lately that these stories are being AI written as well as voiced.

  • @GrumpyJerk
    @GrumpyJerk 5 месяцев назад

    Good short story. Thanks for postin'. Cheers from H-Town! :)

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      Thanks for listening

  • @HFYStories
    @HFYStories 5 месяцев назад

    Very nice video . Good story and voice. I Subcribed for you 😍😍

  • @davidstrickler6570
    @davidstrickler6570 5 месяцев назад +5

    It keeps skipping like an old 45 record. Missing a significant amount of the story this way.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      No it is not missing any of the story.

    • @davidstrickler6570
      @davidstrickler6570 5 месяцев назад

      @ALLSciFi88. Please try listening to the story. It skips and / or breaks up. Just for clarification, I'm using a brand new tablet and this has been the only video I've seen/listened to that has presented this issue. No trolling intended. It's just an attempt to make it better so more people can enjoy your work. Stay warm and enjoy the rest of your weekend.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      @davidstrickler6570 thank you rite now I can not afford unlimited regeneration but next month I will be able to do hopefully that will not be a thing soon.

  • @grogvaughan5649
    @grogvaughan5649 5 месяцев назад +1

    An entire planet of SF guys let off the leash.. hot damn.

  • @terryjenkins252
    @terryjenkins252 5 месяцев назад +2

    So then the humans surrendered their honor. They gave safe passage and then killed the the the person sent down.

  • @warboss1117
    @warboss1117 5 месяцев назад +2

    Am I the only one that noticed the right hand has four fingers and the left has five

    • @beverlycrusher9713
      @beverlycrusher9713 5 месяцев назад +1

      nope, i noticed it too, i was guessing that he had lost one in battle or something like that.

  • @lerchdag
    @lerchdag 5 месяцев назад +8

    Is it just me or does the alien in the graphic have a five fingered left hand and a four fingered right hand?

    • @kdrapertrucker
      @kdrapertrucker 5 месяцев назад +5

      Nothing unusual, I know a guy who has 5 fingers on one hand, and 4 on the other. On an unrelated note: be careful with firecrackers kids.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад +1

      🤣🤣🤣

    • @jdau2b
      @jdau2b 5 месяцев назад

      Good eye!!

    • @vividdawn913
      @vividdawn913 5 месяцев назад +2

      its an AI generated image... AI has a hard time with hands! I saw a pic of Indiana Jones that had 7 fingers on one hand (not including the thumb!)

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon 5 месяцев назад +1

      Typical AI art errors; they have problems with hands(and written words, I’m told).

  • @Sarah-gw3ng
    @Sarah-gw3ng 4 месяца назад

    Zark...Zirk...interesting name. 1:45

  • @cindaschuster6725
    @cindaschuster6725 5 месяцев назад

    💙👍🏼

  • @markvangorkum8091
    @markvangorkum8091 5 месяцев назад +3

    The ai narrator has been used so much its slowly losing its voice.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад +1

      Lol I like that one.

  • @tommcl8548
    @tommcl8548 5 месяцев назад

    👊👍

  • @GoCoyote
    @GoCoyote 4 месяца назад

    Audio seems to be glitching occasionally.

  • @norneaernourn8240
    @norneaernourn8240 3 месяца назад

    So space ninjas?

  • @vividdawn913
    @vividdawn913 5 месяцев назад +2

    I subscribed, and won't skip ads, if that helps you earn more income for the new voice generator. Yeah, it's kind of annoying, but the story itself is still fun! :)

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      Thank you you don't know what that means to me.

    • @vividdawn913
      @vividdawn913 5 месяцев назад +1

      @@ALLSciFi88 This one seems to be the worst one. I'm listening to others, and they're not so bad. One from 2 weeks ago doesn't seem to have any trouble at all with disjointed narration.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      @juliadespain4892 which one is good maybe I can figure how I got that decent.

  • @Iamkcs2c
    @Iamkcs2c 5 месяцев назад +1

    It only seems polite to link to the original story.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад +1

      All of my stories are original.

    • @Iamkcs2c
      @Iamkcs2c 5 месяцев назад +1

      ​@@ALLSciFi88That's awesome! You should put *that* in the description

  • @MurderPierrot
    @MurderPierrot 4 месяца назад

    Caption rhymes lol

  • @careydodson2804
    @careydodson2804 5 месяцев назад +2

    Cool story but what is up with the sound? It seems like it's cutting off the end of the sentence and then starting in the middle of the next sentence. This seems to happen quite often. Totally cut off the end of the story. Better get control of this before putting out more stories.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад +2

      Yes I'm sorry it is not cut off the program I use im trying to figure it out to get the best sound it is just expensive I can't regenerate specific text sometimes it sounds like it is about to say something else or you missed something but you did not next month I'll be able to get the unlimited.

  • @CaptainShield
    @CaptainShield 5 месяцев назад +1

    AgroSquirrel is better than a robo-voice. The stories need inflection and correct pronunciation.

  • @theunknowngamer5477
    @theunknowngamer5477 5 месяцев назад

    After one minute, the insult of waiting to find out if another word will be removed....
    while an entire ton of offensive language is allowed...
    So, I'm counting five of these very cool clips of vocal theater.
    This one is obscene Uncanny Valley antics, wondering if the others to be found will have the same disappointment.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад +1

      I created this there were no bad words the voice wasn't that good in this one but what offensive language are you talking about?

    • @theunknowngamer5477
      @theunknowngamer5477 4 месяца назад

      @@ALLSciFi88
      I apologize for being hyper critical about the format of your channel.
      I will remove the post, at the requesting.
      I am subscribing, the game of friendly parasite does not promote content.
      The deformation of reality is a handicap I do not care to tolerate. The structure
      of AI/Uncanny Valley trick used seems to not distract other people, with the
      channel content. My perception of how/what/why SPECIFIC words seem to
      be removed, with this video, is an insult to me, or is the word, offensive, in a
      different definition for you...intergalactic genocide and similar descriptions of
      destruction must be a math formula less than one word...removal of reality
      sure looks like a new game and distracts from the outlines I try using to be
      lost in a pretend place of fictional entertainment.

  • @DK-pb7tr
    @DK-pb7tr 5 месяцев назад +1

    I gave up on the story, too many adverts interrupting the story

  • @lewis7315
    @lewis7315 5 месяцев назад +4

    In reality, the invaders would glass the planet before leaving.

    • @lennym1636
      @lennym1636 5 месяцев назад +2

      In reality the humans would not stop and let them gather their dead, and when the captain drew his weapon at the human he and all his ships would have been vaporized...

    • @gilbertsandoval1888
      @gilbertsandoval1888 5 месяцев назад +1

      You have obviously not had military experience/training. Read SunTsu's "The Art of War",2000 years old and studied at the Army War College and tthe other services to this day. Think Kill or be killed!

    • @lewis7315
      @lewis7315 5 месяцев назад

      Ships vaporized with what??? I have read the history of warfare, and served as well. All the aliens had to do was send several large rocks a mile across onto the colony areas. no one on the planet would have been left alive. @@gilbertsandoval1888

  • @stanislawwasilewski7498
    @stanislawwasilewski7498 5 месяцев назад

    Where’s the beginning of this nice story’s ?

  • @jorymeyers4853
    @jorymeyers4853 5 месяцев назад

    Confusing sentence cut offs, no Bueno

  • @proudamerican183
    @proudamerican183 5 месяцев назад

    0:25 What is with the audio here?

  • @faheemahmad51
    @faheemahmad51 5 месяцев назад +1

    So odd as lot of people are having issues with skipping of narration, I listened to it 3 times over three days and never had any issues

    • @Ektalon
      @Ektalon 5 месяцев назад

      That is interesting. I wonder what’s happening? How did the story end for you?

  • @user-xw4gr9kn8n
    @user-xw4gr9kn8n 4 месяца назад

    The ai reading this script is horrible.

  • @tensay86
    @tensay86 5 месяцев назад

    At first it didn't bother me when the sound skipped but after so many videos its really annoying....you need help whit the editing or rerecord were you had problems in the middle of the sentence...

  • @billhinkle5344
    @billhinkle5344 5 месяцев назад

    Would have liked to hear the story but too much skipping. Bowed out at the 1:54 mark.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      I am sorry about this one didn't have great audio it is not always like this I post daily in store you will find one you like.

  • @waynes9275
    @waynes9275 4 месяца назад

    COMPUTER VOICED STORIES are so so, real human voice is better.

  • @Questor-ky2fv
    @Questor-ky2fv 5 месяцев назад

    Who undoes your hair?

  • @HawkGTboy
    @HawkGTboy 5 месяцев назад

    What’s with the skipping audio? Are you bleeping out words that the almighty algorithm might have a problem with?

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад +2

      LOL no nothing is skipped or missing the program i cant get unlimited generation so what i get is what i get next month i will get the better version with unlimited regeneration.

  • @elusiveeskimo3013
    @elusiveeskimo3013 5 месяцев назад

    This is an audio book story. The words are important cause there is no video image reference to fill in for the missing words. But if there were images, would most likely have been blurred or cut out by RUclips Censors also. This RUclips Censorship is out of control. Sorry I did not Like and Subscribe but truth is I did not even make it to the 3 minute mark. Got fed up with the Censorship and quit. I will totally stop using RUclips if this Insane SHIT continues.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      No the audio did not come out great in this video not all of them are like this one nothing is missing it it is just what I use sometimes it sounds like a word was supposed to be said or missing words but it isn't

  • @heironeous0530
    @heironeous0530 5 месяцев назад

    Nothing for the author? Not a mention or a link? Seems like a stolen story to me

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      They are all original.

  • @leadingauctions8440
    @leadingauctions8440 5 месяцев назад +1

    So humanity has no honor?

    • @leothenomad4855
      @leothenomad4855 5 месяцев назад +3

      Honor doesn't win battles.

    • @stellaluuk2713
      @stellaluuk2713 5 месяцев назад +2

      Honor is a human concept, who knows how an alien would think? Besides, a threat is a threat and best eliminated. These aliens were aggressive.

    • @carldooley9344
      @carldooley9344 5 месяцев назад

      He was granted safe passage to the surface, not away. Then also he attacked on the surface... Granting the overlord a chance to send a message was a mercy.

    • @leadingauctions8440
      @leadingauctions8440 5 месяцев назад

      @@carldooley9344
      True on attacking when on the surface.
      As for the prior, he did say they could take the dead home.

  • @Music-lx1tf
    @Music-lx1tf 5 месяцев назад

    I'd like to story and I would have given you an upvote. But you've cut it off just before the end so it's very unsatisfying. I give you a thumbs down because of that.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      Thank you and sorry for that but no nothing is cut off that is how I ended it I have been trying not to get it to sound like it is skipping when it isn't.

  • @talyn3932
    @talyn3932 5 месяцев назад

    Oof. Bad ai voice. Cobstantly cutting off. Cant get past a couple mins.

  • @OriginalMergatroid
    @OriginalMergatroid 5 месяцев назад

    The story was interesting but the reading was horrid. Stopped listening.

  • @Im_Not_From_Around_Here
    @Im_Not_From_Around_Here 5 месяцев назад +1

    You need a better AI this one is so bad. Was hard to follow with its broken sentences and incoherent pronunciations.

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      Yea I know in sorry this did not have great audio they usually are not this bad I post daily subscribe you will always have something to put on.

  • @stevenfranklin7060
    @stevenfranklin7060 5 месяцев назад +1

    boring

    • @ALLSciFi88
      @ALLSciFi88  5 месяцев назад

      sorry you feel that way i post daily I am sure there will be a few you will like.

  • @martyschrader
    @martyschrader 5 месяцев назад +1

    Very crappy AI rendering. Get a real person to read this stuff or just publish it as text. This choppy, poorly-accented "reading" does the work no favors.

  • @nikod9530
    @nikod9530 5 месяцев назад +1

    Boring voice over ...