There's a lot I like in the expert chart, but a lot I really don't like. 0:52 Quick jumps from U+D to L+R are NEVER fun. There are a few other offences throughout the chart like at 1:08. I feel like there's some ITG inspiration so maybe make this stuff more like brackets. Your 12th note streams are very awkward. You're like half-commited between making them really easy and making them really hard. The actual streams have very little movement (especially at 1:27), but then you see fit to add jacks everywhere, including a 4-note jack and a 24th drill. At 200bpm this is just ludicrous. All the jacks and jumps makes me read this as a keyboard chart tbh. If you want a 17, get rid of (or severely reduce) the jacks, drills, and jump streams. Take a page from other 200bpm 17s like Avenger, Idola, Dopamine, Anti-Matter, or Love is a space war. Those are great examples of the difficulty you want to shoot for if you want a 17. (side note, if you take my advice, you could also make the movement in the 12 the stream a bit harder. Maybe some cross-overs). If you want an 18 then almost everything is fine but you need to make the streams (both 16th and 12th) a fair bit harder. The 12th streams should definitely have a lot more complexity (not more jacks) and even the 16th streams (because they are so short and few) should have a little more challenge to them. Overall, the chart is okay, but you can make it great imo with those changes. The 15 is solid. A few small parts felt repetitive or lackluster at the beginning and especially in the 12th section, but it's still a solid chart. I would play it if it were at an arcade. Happy charting
![PIT A PAT [EXPERT - 15 / DIFFICULT - 12]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/ETmKqccTJ9k/mqdefault.jpg)
![PIT A PAT [EXPERT - 15 / DIFFICULT - 12]](/img/tr.png)
![In the Blackest Den [EXPERT - 16 / DIFFICULT - 13]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/wQmfQbRJfLQ/mqdefault.jpg)
![Go Beyond!! [CHALLENGE - 18]](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/Cil1mcASBIw/mqdefault.jpg)
![Witch doctor [CHALLENGE - 18]](/img/1.gif)
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There's a lot I like in the expert chart, but a lot I really don't like.
0:52 Quick jumps from U+D to L+R are NEVER fun. There are a few other offences throughout the chart like at 1:08. I feel like there's some ITG inspiration so maybe make this stuff more like brackets.
Your 12th note streams are very awkward. You're like half-commited between making them really easy and making them really hard. The actual streams have very little movement (especially at 1:27), but then you see fit to add jacks everywhere, including a 4-note jack and a 24th drill. At 200bpm this is just ludicrous. All the jacks and jumps makes me read this as a keyboard chart tbh.
If you want a 17, get rid of (or severely reduce) the jacks, drills, and jump streams. Take a page from other 200bpm 17s like Avenger, Idola, Dopamine, Anti-Matter, or Love is a space war. Those are great examples of the difficulty you want to shoot for if you want a 17. (side note, if you take my advice, you could also make the movement in the 12 the stream a bit harder. Maybe some cross-overs).
If you want an 18 then almost everything is fine but you need to make the streams (both 16th and 12th) a fair bit harder. The 12th streams should definitely have a lot more complexity (not more jacks) and even the 16th streams (because they are so short and few) should have a little more challenge to them.
Overall, the chart is okay, but you can make it great imo with those changes.
The 15 is solid. A few small parts felt repetitive or lackluster at the beginning and especially in the 12th section, but it's still a solid chart. I would play it if it were at an arcade.
Happy charting