This story is messed up. The same sequences happen more than once, like it was rewritten without taking out the original text. The story would have been good otherwise, but it obviously wasn't properly edited before publishing on RUclips.
THIS SUCKED SO BAD........ How did it get 35 likes...... to hear nothing...... JUST GOT TO LOVE THE CRAP THAT THIS STORY DID NOT TELL....... HE DIED FOR NOTHING......
This is the usual cookie cutter story this author puts out. Good grief he can't even think of new names for aliens. 22:35 ] Time to see if i can find a better story to listen to.
This story is messed up. The same sequences happen more than once, like it was rewritten without taking out the original text. The story would have been good otherwise, but it obviously wasn't properly edited before publishing on RUclips.
41 minutes and a decent ending is nowhere in sight. Save yourself some time and skip to the end...totally underwhelming!
With this writer I'm not surprised.
1st!
THIS SUCKED SO BAD........ How did it get 35 likes...... to hear nothing...... JUST GOT TO LOVE THE CRAP THAT THIS STORY DID NOT TELL....... HE DIED FOR NOTHING......
This is the usual cookie cutter story this author puts out. Good grief he can't even think of new names for aliens. 22:35 ] Time to see if i can find a better story to listen to.