Bravo! The expressions are wonderful and the look of horror on twilight's face says everything that is going on in her head. Keep it up, I am fascinated even if I keep making the mistake of watching these at night...
@@TaylorMLPFIDAU no worries! Take your time this stuff is great. it actually manages to make me feel like I need to keep looking over my shoulder even though I know there's no freaking way something is in my room. You managed to make these characters look unnerved afraid and just flat out terrifying without jumpscares or just excessive gore! Now that's good storytelling.
@@TaylorMLPFIDAU that's a shame that ya don't get more compliments. Ever since I stumbled upon the stages video I was fascinated. Imagine my delight when I saw that you were making a story. As a fanfic writer I know that interaction is like air for content creators. It lets us know that we are making something that others enjoy! So, when I see a skilled artist, writer, or anyone else I say so People are shy in comment sections w/o a lot of people. I'm just being honest about your stuff! Ya ain't just screaming into the void with your content. I, at the very least, think it's awesome. I've seen other comments praising ya too. Keep doing what ya like and I guarantee someone would like it too. Like... I didn't even pay attention to mlp after halfway through the season starlight glitter was introduced. I'm not sure if any of this is comprehensible (it's 10:12 oops), but I hope I got my point across 😅.
Do you have a background in Medical stuff? This is actually pretty well put together the process in which they develop with the clotting, undergoing rigor mortis due to localized blood stagnation, which in turn may cause the body to try and heal itself as its functions come back online is really interestint Not only that but the sunken in dull eyes to emulate a corpse, as well as the way atleast the mayor clings onto her memories when treated normally makes sense. Not only that but redheart trying to keep people alive despite the consequences doesn't feel too out of place given well how the world works.
1. I just try to do my research, I also watch Dr. Mike (check him out he’s very funny and very knowledgeable) who actually taught me a good few of things. But for the most part I just do my own research and honestly a quick google search can often let you find what you need. Of course this is all fantasy, and shouldn’t be taken with seriousness in actual medical treatments. Always consult your doctor if you are experiencing similar symptoms and are worried about anything.(of course after researching if it is even a real condition. I do not want to fill your head with scary thoughts as this is purely fiction, based on some research that I’ve done.) And 2. It was meant to be twilight’s imagination, however that is also a very interesting way of viewing it, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on it. It helps with my understanding of how to properly show my story without being overly one way or the other. I don’t want it to be COMPLETELY completely text, I’d like some visuals for the ones like me who like to look at something while reading, or just need visuals in general. I was having some sort of. Idea that I could try reading the words for the visually impaired, or maybe a separate version that has a text to speech. But that might seem presumptuous of me or at the very least, too advanced for me, and might be just too much work. Okay this has gone on long enough, thank you for reading this all if you did, and I really appreciate your feedback. :)
@@rayette715 of course I wasn’t implying that to you per se. I was mostly saying it for legal reasons (/j) no but really I appreciate you taking your time to comment, so I wanted to provide the best answer I could. Thank you!
Hello, I come from China, and many of our friends in China like your series, so I want to ask if you can authorize us to translate and reprint it to China and show the author and platform.
Bravo! The expressions are wonderful and the look of horror on twilight's face says everything that is going on in her head.
Keep it up, I am fascinated even if I keep making the mistake of watching these at night...
1. I’m so sorry. 2. Thank you I tried really hard! And I got sick while making part four so I’m sorry it got so delayed! 😭
@@TaylorMLPFIDAU no worries! Take your time this stuff is great. it actually manages to make me feel like I need to keep looking over my shoulder even though I know there's no freaking way something is in my room.
You managed to make these characters look unnerved afraid and just flat out terrifying without jumpscares or just excessive gore!
Now that's good storytelling.
@@moth4252 😭 thank you omg that’s literally the best compliment I’ve gotten
@@TaylorMLPFIDAU that's a shame that ya don't get more compliments. Ever since I stumbled upon the stages video I was fascinated.
Imagine my delight when I saw that you were making a story.
As a fanfic writer I know that interaction is like air for content creators. It lets us know that we are making something that others enjoy! So, when I see a skilled artist, writer, or anyone else I say so People are shy in comment sections w/o a lot of people.
I'm just being honest about your stuff!
Ya ain't just screaming into the void with your content. I, at the very least, think it's awesome. I've seen other comments praising ya too.
Keep doing what ya like and I guarantee someone would like it too. Like... I didn't even pay attention to mlp after halfway through the season starlight glitter was introduced.
I'm not sure if any of this is comprehensible (it's 10:12 oops), but I hope I got my point across 😅.
@@moth4252 omg thank you so much I’m crying that means so much to me
Poor redheart
:’) she’s such a strong queen though
@@TaylorMLPFIDAU yes she is! I hope she stays alive T3T
@@silentseeker74 me too bestie
Do you have a background in Medical stuff?
This is actually pretty well put together the process in which they develop with the clotting, undergoing rigor mortis due to localized blood stagnation, which in turn may cause the body to try and heal itself as its functions come back online is really interestint
Not only that but the sunken in dull eyes to emulate a corpse, as well as the way atleast the mayor clings onto her memories when treated normally makes sense.
Not only that but redheart trying to keep people alive despite the consequences doesn't feel too out of place given well how the world works.
Oh and the chalk drawings as to not draw away from the text and maybe emulate red hearts notes is a really good choice.
1. I just try to do my research, I also watch Dr. Mike (check him out he’s very funny and very knowledgeable) who actually taught me a good few of things. But for the most part I just do my own research and honestly a quick google search can often let you find what you need. Of course this is all fantasy, and shouldn’t be taken with seriousness in actual medical treatments. Always consult your doctor if you are experiencing similar symptoms and are worried about anything.(of course after researching if it is even a real condition. I do not want to fill your head with scary thoughts as this is purely fiction, based on some research that I’ve done.)
And 2. It was meant to be twilight’s imagination, however that is also a very interesting way of viewing it, and I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on it. It helps with my understanding of how to properly show my story without being overly one way or the other. I don’t want it to be COMPLETELY completely text, I’d like some visuals for the ones like me who like to look at something while reading, or just need visuals in general. I was having some sort of. Idea that I could try reading the words for the visually impaired, or maybe a separate version that has a text to speech. But that might seem presumptuous of me or at the very least, too advanced for me, and might be just too much work. Okay this has gone on long enough, thank you for reading this all if you did, and I really appreciate your feedback. :)
@@TaylorMLPFIDAU I wasn't taking it to heart as medical fact lmao
I was just complimenting it for being believeable
@@rayette715 of course I wasn’t implying that to you per se. I was mostly saying it for legal reasons (/j) no but really I appreciate you taking your time to comment, so I wanted to provide the best answer I could. Thank you!
Hello, I come from China, and many of our friends in China like your series, so I want to ask if you can authorize us to translate and reprint it to China and show the author and platform.
@@染琰 could you maybe elaborate more please?
@@染琰 actually, I’ve made up my mind, no thanks.