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The bit at the end was spot on - "Don't get it right get it written!" That was brilliant. I am writing my PRP (professional research proposal) and have been terrified all week to start writing, now I am inspired. Thank you
It’s Monday night, 11:30 pm, I have a paper due tomorrow, and I am struggling to write an intro. I did not see myself here 5 years ago. Basically thank you for helping me in my time of need.
I'm currently facing the challenge of writing my first (extensive) theatre analysis for uni and watching some of your videos has been really, really useful. Keep doing what you're doing.
All great tips. I work as a writing tutor at my college, and I see so many essays that start with just a vague statement about the topic "Blank is a very important issue in our society." Might have to use this video in some of my sessions to give students some options!
Interestingly, I think the intention behind that's great, they absolutely should be telling us that blank is important, just maybe finding a slightly more subtle/creative way of doing so!!
I can't believe that even though I love writing, I forgot hot to write a hook just because I haven't written an essay in only a year. Thank you for making me remember! This is gonna help me with my final on Philosophy!!
I had to make an article but i forgot how to make an intro of it xD this video helped me alot and because of this video i hope i will get a high score on my performance task and 1 thing i will say to you is keep up the good work and may god bless you thank you very much!!!
Thanks, Tom! I've published in a couple of international journals before, but that doesn't help when I'm having a writer's block. Your essay series is extremely helpful!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for your videos!! Your videos are really helpful. They are concise, clear, and relevant for starters in research like me :)
These are great tips. I appreciate the video and look forward to watching your other writing-oriented ones, (as well as the WTT ones). I also teach writing, and an additional tip I advise my students is to consider writing an introduction or hook only after they've written an initial draft and not before because then, they will already know where that hook is leading, which can inform the choice of the hook. I found as both an undergraduate and MA candidate that I often had a head full of information without knowing what I was trying to argue, until I opened myself to the idea that an initial draft can serve as an exploration to discover the argument, while subsequent revisions can serve to reshape the essay into that argument.
I have an essay to give in tomorrow and this video has helped me with my intro. I was really stressed out on how I was to do this until i came across this video. Really appreciate it bro! (1 problem though, my small brain couldn't really process a few of the words you said! xDxD)
I Started my essay by telling the reader what it is about and i got a mark off because she said "its pretty obvious what its about, you don't have to tell the person"
Why thank you for the very important tips that will certainly make me less fearful when my english teacher tells me to START an essay and may you also have a good week too.By the way this name was randomly given to me by Google.
Trying to write my EPQ oof. My title sounds kinda difficult : "What has been the impact of the Church in shaping Great Britain as a nation?". I am so excited and hopefully I will look back to this comment in a while with a A* qualification. Thanks for the great video Tom x
Alright, so I've been holding off on doing my finals essay for like 5 weeks after its due date, but the majority of the class hasn't started either so we have until the last day. I'm beginning my essay right now and I'm here commenting this. I'll edit this when I get graded on it. Im nervous, and I haven't done anything because of my fear of failing it, so i've been avoiding it.
after 3 days i will write my first essay and i’m so worried because it will be for a five marks my essay will be a descriptive one about a hole place and i’m thinking about an outline at this moment.
my Argument essay I cant use in included "i" my teacher wants an interesting but I cant us a question for my hook! and im so sad becaues i dont know how to do this T^T
This is probably a dumb question but are all the first for tips a must in a introduction OR is it a case of you pick which one is best suited to your essay situation ?
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I mean.. as a marker in the humanities if I see an essay starting with a quote or personal story in the humanities the student can forget about a first.
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Tom Nicholas thank you for your channel. I just subscribed.
The bit at the end was spot on - "Don't get it right get it written!" That was brilliant. I am writing my PRP (professional research proposal) and have been terrified all week to start writing, now I am inspired. Thank you
It’s Monday night, 11:30 pm, I have a paper due tomorrow, and I am struggling to write an intro. I did not see myself here 5 years ago. Basically thank you for helping me in my time of need.
My motto to start writing is what Ernest Hemingway said, "the first draft of anything is shit".
Otherwise, I'd be just staring at a blank paper ! Lol
I'm currently facing the challenge of writing my first (extensive) theatre analysis for uni and watching some of your videos has been really, really useful. Keep doing what you're doing.
I'm so glad, the hope is that they're useful in some small way. Best of luck with the assignment!
I’m doing my summer hw and I forgot how to make an intro🤣
Hope this helped!
summer hw?
@@Goosier_ summer school
All great tips. I work as a writing tutor at my college, and I see so many essays that start with just a vague statement about the topic "Blank is a very important issue in our society." Might have to use this video in some of my sessions to give students some options!
Interestingly, I think the intention behind that's great, they absolutely should be telling us that blank is important, just maybe finding a slightly more subtle/creative way of doing so!!
Thanks Dudley Dursley!
That's a new one but yeah I'll take it.
Geez, your saying thanks to Dudley Vernon
Oh my gawddd yesssss!!!!
He looks like a hybrid of harry and dudley
I often start my essay with some questions about the given theme or topic that will leave the readers with "Oh yea I thought about that too".
Me too😂
I’m currently trying to apply to a high school called Cast Technical, but first I needed to write an essay.
This helped a lot, thanks!! ❤️
I can't believe that even though I love writing, I forgot hot to write a hook just because I haven't written an essay in only a year. Thank you for making me remember! This is gonna help me with my final on Philosophy!!
thanks man! my main problem is definitely starting an essay. This helped me sooo much!
I had to make an article but i forgot how to make an intro of it xD this video helped me alot and because of this video i hope i will get a high score on my performance task and 1 thing i will say to you is
keep up the good work and may god bless you thank you very much!!!
Concise, Creative, and Explosive. Thank You
Thanks for taking the time to say so, I really appreciate it!
Thanks, Tom! I've published in a couple of international journals before, but that doesn't help when I'm having a writer's block. Your essay series is extremely helpful!
Thanks this video really helped me out
Really glad to hear it!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for your videos!! Your videos are really helpful. They are concise, clear, and relevant for starters in research like me :)
Hey Borne, so glad you've found them helpful! Best of luck with it all!
Yo this video was so helpful. Short and simple. Great video
These are great tips. I appreciate the video and look forward to watching your other writing-oriented ones, (as well as the WTT ones). I also teach writing, and an additional tip I advise my students is to consider writing an introduction or hook only after they've written an initial draft and not before because then, they will already know where that hook is leading, which can inform the choice of the hook. I found as both an undergraduate and MA candidate that I often had a head full of information without knowing what I was trying to argue, until I opened myself to the idea that an initial draft can serve as an exploration to discover the argument, while subsequent revisions can serve to reshape the essay into that argument.
Very helpful! I didn’t know you could add a personal story in an essay though.
Love it! Been watching your new stuff and stumbled on this
Thank you so much for these tips! They were really helpful! 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
dude this was great, thanks for the tips awesome job
Thank you so much I didn’t know where to start but this is really helpful
I have an essay to give in tomorrow and this video has helped me with my intro. I was really stressed out on how I was to do this until i came across this video. Really appreciate it bro!
(1 problem though, my small brain couldn't really process a few of the words you said! xDxD)
I like the idea of an essay tip series.
I Started my essay by telling the reader what it is about and i got a mark off because she said "its pretty obvious what its about, you don't have to tell the person"
the content is so good that I didn't notice the purple jacket make your hair and skin so bright.
Thanks for the very helpful tips , Tom..I appreciate you very much. I better start writing . Have a great weekend ❤️😇
I love these videos so much! I hope you will do more tips and advice for writing academically 🎉🎉
Got exam tomorrow... helpful
Best of luck!
I had to do a Battle if Bosworth essay thanks for the help!
a splendid channel, very useful. Both theatre and studying stuff. I really wish you go big. Thanks!
+Zulfikar Filandra Thanks Zulfikar! Really pleased to hear you've enjoyed it!
Thank you so much! This is so helpful!💖
Thank you for your good work, I am going to start my essay with your tips.
Awesome, best of luck with the essay!
Thank you my dude
This really helped! I know where to go when I have an essay 😂😅
Wow. Absolute heroic. This is what I wanted. You killed my tension. I prefer to start with a quote tho! Anyway, applause!
Why thank you for the very important tips that will certainly make me less fearful when my english teacher tells me to START an essay and may you also have a good week too.By the way this name was randomly given to me by Google.
Very useful tips, thanks for sharing!
Thank you. This has given me so much. Most appreciated
I hope I won't fail following these !
Last two really helped.
I just got educated by a teenager!!!! lol I love 2021.
Trying to write my EPQ oof. My title sounds kinda difficult : "What has been the impact of the Church in shaping Great Britain as a nation?". I am so excited and hopefully I will look back to this comment in a while with a A* qualification. Thanks for the great video Tom x
Wow i needed this
Good information!
This is really so helpful. Thank you so much
U r the best!
really helpful for some essays, ur brill!
Alright, so I've been holding off on doing my finals essay for like 5 weeks after its due date, but the majority of the class hasn't started either so we have until the last day. I'm beginning my essay right now and I'm here commenting this. I'll edit this when I get graded on it. Im nervous, and I haven't done anything because of my fear of failing it, so i've been avoiding it.
so did u get ur grade yet?
after 3 days i will write my first essay and i’m so worried because it will be for a five marks my essay will be a descriptive one about a hole place and i’m thinking about an outline at this moment.
Thank you! This was very helpful!
i might need this
Thanks a lot 😀 I can now write my essays well
Glad it was of some help!
this is really helpful thank you!
Have to write essay...this was very helpful!
You are so helpful!
This is sooo helpfull, thank you !
우연히 찾았는데 꿀팁이 엄청 많아요! Thank you!!
I’m doing an essay on dangers & consequences of shooting a gun ... any tips you guys would like to provide would definitely be appreciated it .
I'm here for my homework:)
Thank you!
Wow that is very helpful
This is what my teachers always tell me haha. Maybe I should understand what they're talking about before searching for what other people tell me...
my Argument essay I cant use in included "i" my teacher wants an interesting but I cant us a question for my hook! and im so sad becaues i dont know how to do this T^T
I feel you 😭 I can’t think of a good hook, it always comes out bad
Thank you!👏 This help me a lot and I enjoyed this video. Sending love from the Philippines.💓
I've got an exam this morninggg
This helps a lot.
Glad to hear it, thanks for saying so!
So helpful! Thank you .
No worries, glad to hear it!
Thanks buddy
Thank you
Love this
I’m here because of online class :)
very usefull!!
Thanks bro
Thank-you very much ,your videos are really helpful .
No problems Ankit, glad you found it helpful!
Really Useful. I Had to make an essay on 'FITNESS BEATS PANDEMIC' and my mam was impressed...
Thanks :)
This is probably a dumb question but are all the first for tips a must in a introduction OR is it a case of you pick which one is best suited to your essay situation ?
Thanks ever so much
this guy must be an actor on Harry Poter's movies
thx
Thanks
Good
I’m doing an essay about how can social media work in a positive way and I’m talking about suicide prevention how can I do it
im a gaming type of person but i have a essay coming up and i hope this video will help me get better grades in science!!!!!
Best of luck with the essay!
Just email me. I will guide you and deliver great papers
This guy is British I noticed
I like British people
Still haven't started my essay coz I don't know how to. And I want to know how to do the hook chuchu. Friday na pasahan TT
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Don't question it.
Cat's are amazing but I found another thing that is amazing. I'll talk about toilet paper.
How about "we live in a society" as an intro.
Am I the only one that went to the comments to see if this video can help me or not
I mean.. as a marker in the humanities if I see an essay starting with a quote or personal story in the humanities the student can forget about a first.
cool man
Is it good to start with "In this essay I will...." ?
Humaid Alshamsi no. that’s like the last thing you’d ever want to do when writing an essay lol especially for school
Never!!! You just start with blank sentences, then, you start the tension and then at the end of the intro you write the thesis statement.
@@ogsaladbar ok great. I will remember that. thank you..
you are so adorable with your little red ear
LOOL
Done
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