No doubt… and it does a great job of setting the stage for his mental battles to come. I wouldn’t be surprised if the writer has experienced deep suffering and come out the other side stronger. Kudos and love to the writer and narrator
Wow! That was an excellent direction of how a disturbed mind Went through the gates for of Hell & against all odds, emerged out the other side. Bruised, scarred & battered but Seeing their demons aren't going away but at least accepting they were there & finding the will to carry on regardless. So many of us go through the dark night of the soup & surprisingly find they can live with what they find. Whoever wrote this has either a very Perceptive view of how ones mind can turn against them but they can use that to co exist with the mind monsters & even just that acceptance & knowing they aren't alone & others have the same or even worse monsters helps put things into perspective & line up parameters we can live with. Thank you for to Brett for the brilliant depiction of sounding exactly like he knows how the Person in this story is coming from & not sounding like a stark raving lunatic ( No offence meant CGS) Its a difficult mind set to get into that doesn't sound patronising or Over dramatic! So very well done CGS I enjoyed this immensely Peace & Harmony
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Stories like this make me sad that i have to wait another 8 hours to go to bed.😅mr.Brett i hope you're doing well and its good to see that you're still the best
A really hard story to follow. If I was given one sentence to describe this story that's what I would say. At times in this story it was almost impossible to understand what was going on. The story line jumped all over and kept piling on random aspects to "make the story more full" but it just ruined it. I like to call these stories soup stories. Authors like to add in more and more different ideas and story elements in hopes of making it more "delicious" but it ends up ruining the dish. The flow was all out of control with the beginning and ends feeling like different stories all together. With the darkness only being talked about in the middle of story and then at the end not even mentioned. The whole incident near the end also was just pretty confusing as we weren't even given a hint about what happened in the hospital. Also the whole part with the Serbian lad was just out of left field. Somehow he had something to do with this darkness, but then it was never mentioned after that. The story just didn't work together. If the author was just to take one of the concepts in the story and go only with that it would have been a way better story. As always thanks to Creepy Ghost Stories and to the author, I enjoy all stories good or bad.
Thanks for the upload. I will never get through your library if you keep uploading them at this rate. Lol! RUclips deleted all the thumbs up I had to annotate your videos I listened to. They also removed the progress bar from all your videos I listened to. So, I decided to just start from Day 1. Lots of work ahead!! Thanks!! Keep the great stories coming!
@scrappydoo7887 mine still have them on other channels. I just lost them on these. I lost all my thumbs up and comments, too. On a positive note, I get to listen to these good stories again!!
@@donaldmccleary9015 that's really strange. I haven't had vids hold their place anywhere for ages. You're right though, every cloud has a silver lining
Can you please put a disclaimer in the beginning about suicide? I know it might not be that vulgar or descriptive but I think it's a topic that needs a proper warning
It's like an Easter egg hunt to find the mispronounced word in each video 😜 There's almost always one. Today's was Camarry (Camry? Camaro?) 1:16:24 I really don't mind and don't say this as an insult. It's just amusing. I've listened to every one of your videos now, from start to finish. Thanks for putting in so much work and effort into creating these videos for our listening pleasure. ❤
I've just got to add that my previous comment has a stack of errors Of course I meant the Dark Night of the Soul not the Soup! Which was rather funny but apt in a way. Ive just got a new high tech phone & I've no idea how to edit my comments.. help It seems the more evolved a phone is, the harder it is to control it It just takes time I guess! So if my 1st comment is abit " Iffy" it's this bloody phone . Cheers ,🇬🇧🙆
Hi Val, on mine there's 3sm dots at the top right of my comment. That gives me the opportunity to Edit, Delete, my comment..!! Hope that Helps Ü Fellow 👾👻 Listener..
I made it to 47:15 and this is too damn depressing with way too much unnecessary explanation before anything actually happens. Skipped to the last minute or so and maybe that was the point? Meh, what can you do? 😂
Jesus.
The beginning of this hits so much harder than many will ever understand
No doubt… and it does a great job of setting the stage for his mental battles to come. I wouldn’t be surprised if the writer has experienced deep suffering and come out the other side stronger. Kudos and love to the writer and narrator
That makes me very sad, sir. But I’m glad you are the person you are, despite it.
Wow! That was an excellent direction of how a disturbed mind
Went through the gates for of Hell & against all odds, emerged out the other side.
Bruised, scarred & battered but
Seeing their demons aren't going away but at least accepting they were there & finding the will to carry on regardless.
So many of us go through the dark night of the soup & surprisingly find they can live with what they find.
Whoever wrote this has either a very
Perceptive view of how ones mind can turn against them but they can use that to co exist with the mind monsters & even just that acceptance & knowing they aren't alone & others have the same or even worse monsters helps put things into perspective & line up parameters we can live with.
Thank you for to Brett for the brilliant depiction of sounding exactly like he knows how the
Person in this story is coming from & not sounding like a stark raving lunatic
( No offence meant CGS)
Its a difficult mind set to get into that doesn't sound patronising or
Over dramatic!
So very well done CGS
I enjoyed this immensely
Peace & Harmony
Thanks for doing a longer story! I have trouble committing to the
Wow… that was just an all around incredible story with a great message/ lesson. Thanks !!
Best ghost stories on the planet.
Nice, a long one! Perfect for bedtime! Thank You! 🙏🏻😴💭👻
Haha Bomboclat is one of the best expletives ever, even more so since most don’t know what it means since it’s Jamaican.
Literally: butt wipe
Figuratively: mfer, oh shit, ew gross (but a "curse word")
God bless ya brother fot yer another long story to keep us company. Thank you profusely
We all end up there eventually
Many thanks for another outstanding story CGS I hope everyone is having a fantastic weekend!
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Hi Tempest hope You're recovering well my friend sending positive thoughts to you!🙏💙
Nice long one. Thank you, sir.
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@@rtempest12 Hello, Lady Ren. Always a pleasure to receive a message from you.
You are right, that wasn't the story I was expecting but a damn good story nonetheless
Thank you CGS!🤗💜🕷
Stories like this make me sad that i have to wait another 8 hours to go to bed.😅mr.Brett i hope you're doing well and its good to see that you're still the best
A really hard story to follow. If I was given one sentence to describe this story that's what I would say. At times in this story it was almost impossible to understand what was going on. The story line jumped all over and kept piling on random aspects to "make the story more full" but it just ruined it. I like to call these stories soup stories. Authors like to add in more and more different ideas and story elements in hopes of making it more "delicious" but it ends up ruining the dish. The flow was all out of control with the beginning and ends feeling like different stories all together. With the darkness only being talked about in the middle of story and then at the end not even mentioned. The whole incident near the end also was just pretty confusing as we weren't even given a hint about what happened in the hospital. Also the whole part with the Serbian lad was just out of left field. Somehow he had something to do with this darkness, but then it was never mentioned after that. The story just didn't work together. If the author was just to take one of the concepts in the story and go only with that it would have been a way better story. As always thanks to Creepy Ghost Stories and to the author, I enjoy all stories good or bad.
Happy Sunday 😊 CGS my friend
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RUclips asked me to rate your comment. Full marks, good sir. 👍🏻
That was a mood 😮
WOW. That was....WOW
Thanks for the upload. I will never get through your library if you keep uploading them at this rate. Lol! RUclips deleted all the thumbs up I had to annotate your videos I listened to. They also removed the progress bar from all your videos I listened to. So, I decided to just start from Day 1. Lots of work ahead!!
Thanks!! Keep the great stories coming!
The progress bar has been being removed for a long time.
It's best to comment on the video including a timestamp
@scrappydoo7887 mine still have them on other channels. I just lost them on these. I lost all my thumbs up and comments, too.
On a positive note, I get to listen to these good stories again!!
@@donaldmccleary9015 that's really strange. I haven't had vids hold their place anywhere for ages.
You're right though, every cloud has a silver lining
Can you please put a disclaimer in the beginning about suicide? I know it might not be that vulgar or descriptive but I think it's a topic that needs a proper warning
Very good story!
Love psych horror
You’re very good at this. I can only hope.
Very good
I’m sure it gets better but man I can’t sit through this opening, made it 18 min and I’m bored silly
It does not get better.
I am the 1st one & a big thanks for the scary creepypasta :)
A super long one to gear me up for a long work week. 🎉
Loved it
The ending was perfect
Thanks!
It's like an Easter egg hunt to find the mispronounced word in each video 😜 There's almost always one. Today's was Camarry (Camry? Camaro?) 1:16:24 I really don't mind and don't say this as an insult. It's just amusing. I've listened to every one of your videos now, from start to finish. Thanks for putting in so much work and effort into creating these videos for our listening pleasure. ❤
You're just too bored. Amd weird
Bro needs to lay off the edge.
Whoop Whoop homies
Smokem if you gottem 🧖🏼♂️ 🙏🏻
✌🏻🐵✌🏻
I've just got to add that my previous comment has a stack of errors
Of course I meant the Dark Night of the Soul not the Soup!
Which was rather funny but apt in a way.
Ive just got a new high tech phone & I've no idea how to edit my comments.. help
It seems the more evolved a phone is, the harder it is to control it
It just takes time I guess!
So if my 1st comment is abit
" Iffy" it's this bloody phone .
Cheers
,🇬🇧🙆
Hi Val, on mine there's 3sm dots at the top right of my comment.
That gives me the opportunity to Edit, Delete, my comment..!!
Hope that Helps Ü Fellow 👾👻 Listener..
Not the best. Not onecI would save to listen to again.
Pulling me in a hundred different what? 5:57 😂
Directions at once?
Oh I bet he heard "erections"
Hello brother
Hey... There ain't nothing wrong with being a nihilist!
I made it to 47:15 and this is too damn depressing with way too much unnecessary explanation before anything actually happens. Skipped to the last minute or so and maybe that was the point? Meh, what can you do? 😂
Not scary at all and bland
666th like😉
Thanks mr CGS ✌🏻🫡🇳🇴
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