Being from MT with family in Butte, I had a good laugh at the setting. The author has clearly never set foot in the state, but I appreciate the effort 😸
“Big Brain Brian’s a genius” Not that bright; keeps referring to the mold/fungus as a plant/flora (Fun fact: fungus is more closely related to animals than they are to plants)
happened to us one time in east Tennessee. We couldn't use the upstairs/attic. It was just this creepy old room up there with old timey furniture and boxes of junk. Used to think it was haunted XD
So the smart character doesn't know mold is a fungus and not a plant? I was letting it slip when the protagonist implied it was a plant and that they lacked the botany (not mycology) skills to identify it, but when your stock intelligence character gets it wrong...
That's a minor issue compared to the fact that there are multiple bodies in the basement that have been their long enough to rent the house to a random couple of guys from halfway across the country, yet they have begun to rot? Also the ending makes the story more convoluted as he doesn't mention hearing the scratching noises before, but those scratching noises lead him to the "red mold" and were supposedly the previous family warning him of Hank. Yet the ghost just remained with him to warn him after avenging their death(s)... cause? For what the story achieved, it took entirely too long as well.
@@annatardlordofderps9181yeah, and I am wondering if Brian ever found out about Alonzo's murder. Did Brain ever get involved with the investigation since he lost a friend and has another recovering? Is he just not on speaking terms anymore because he did blame his friend for him nearly losing his job?
Probably why the phone signal was so terrible, and without Wi-Fi. They didn't want to take any chances with anyone rubbing their wood. Not to mention the Hub app wasn't working. Lol.
I've run out of different ways to say it so I'll keep it as blunt as I can - a great story made even better by your awesome narration. I'd be lost without this channel giving me my horror fix. Many thanks CGS !
I had feel like this story had the potential but it fell short. Solid idea and characters were there but it lacked polish and a glue to connect it all together. Let me elaborate. It had this mold, the whispers, and the scratches and yet they didn't seem to work together. Then in the end it was just Hank killing them all anyways. I thought it might be some living house or something and Hank was being controlled by it, but there wasn't much going for that theory. The story just needs polish and glue and it could be something good but it's not a story that you would revisit. But as always thanks a lot man for what you do I always appreciate it.
@@mr.g5593 Because it gets very cold in Montana in the winter and not being able to use the fireplace means you're relying on gas/electric heat to warm an old home. Even newer homes with modern insulation are expensive to climate control in areas with extreme temps high or low.
Come on common sense! If there’s no electricity you still going down into the dark basement?! What purpose? You can’t see anything there and it’s off limit!! Please wait until the light comes back to investigate man! lol 😂 Sorry good story but I was annoyed!! Hehe Thank you for your great narration ❤😊
I find it hilarious when people from one demographic population transplant themselves into another and then act surprised when they are noticed. Makes you wonder about who is the intolerant one, when the obviously expected reactions are seen as an affront or insult.
Larger story. Florida does not have basements. They would flood. I know I worked at a house here in Florida that had one and that's all it did was flood.
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Im not renting a house where I can't get to the basement. But the landlord has access and that's where my breaker box is? Not only is that illegal, that's just plain creepy. Yea, that lock would have gotten picked with the quickness.
I wonder if Brian went to check up on his friend and get involved with figuring out the house and Alonzo's death. I wish the both of them made it out alive.
And literally as I'm pulling out of work, that's two in a row for the commute. Thus has been your algorithm comment for the video, good day and God bless America
Like 450 here or 451 me a someone hit like same time. Worry myself sick over buying a house .wen i got 1 already. Wondering if i might split both ends against the middle and end up homeless. Idk im glad this came up
Spoiler alert! Great story! I just wish we knew more as to why he killed them in the first place and stuck them in the basement. If his name wasn't actually Hank, then who was he? Thanks CGS for the longer story today! Hope everyone is having a fabulous day!🤗💜🕷
Same! I was hoping we would hear why Hank had murdered his sister & family. It was a good story but left me with more questions and wanting more story.
I Adore your voice and the most of the stories you narrate........ My one issue, big ISSUE actually. Is why you don't have a bigger following?? ....... People have no idea what they're missing out on, seriously. Stay safe, loads of love being sent out to you. xx xx xx
37:00 What a good friend. So, heavily wounded, the guy managed to sneakily army crawl up the entire basement stairs, rolling a nat20 on his stealth check, but not warning poor Alonso about being met by an armed killer at least a BIT earlier than right until the moment, when it was too late!? Ahhh! No way, this was not intentional. The protagonist wanted Alonso gone and watch the killer shank him! (Or was just pretty dumb, as so often 😬) Poor Alonso :-(
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Being from MT with family in Butte, I had a good laugh at the setting. The author has clearly never set foot in the state, but I appreciate the effort 😸
I lived in butte , billings and deer lodge and superior I miss it
“Big Brain Brian’s a genius”
Not that bright; keeps referring to the mold/fungus as a plant/flora
(Fun fact: fungus is more closely related to animals than they are to plants)
Who rents a house that you can't use the whole house and the owner leaves their furniture and paintings? That's sketchy!
happened to us one time in east Tennessee. We couldn't use the upstairs/attic. It was just this creepy old room up there with old timey furniture and boxes of junk. Used to think it was haunted XD
Habitat house multi center's under one roof. Some rooms off' limits
How did he get the sample from behind the padlocked door?
So the smart character doesn't know mold is a fungus and not a plant? I was letting it slip when the protagonist implied it was a plant and that they lacked the botany (not mycology) skills to identify it, but when your stock intelligence character gets it wrong...
Yep, I liked the story, but that bit irked me some.
That's a minor issue compared to the fact that there are multiple bodies in the basement that have been their long enough to rent the house to a random couple of guys from halfway across the country, yet they have begun to rot?
Also the ending makes the story more convoluted as he doesn't mention hearing the scratching noises before, but those scratching noises lead him to the "red mold" and were supposedly the previous family warning him of Hank. Yet the ghost just remained with him to warn him after avenging their death(s)... cause?
For what the story achieved, it took entirely too long as well.
He mentioned the scratching at 13:50 the first nite in the house.
@@annatardlordofderps9181yeah, and I am wondering if Brian ever found out about Alonzo's murder. Did Brain ever get involved with the investigation since he lost a friend and has another recovering? Is he just not on speaking terms anymore because he did blame his friend for him nearly losing his job?
It's how the AI training gets screwed 😂
They are not allowed to warm the house with wood? That's the true horror! 😄😉
Probably why the phone signal was so terrible, and without Wi-Fi. They didn't want to take any chances with anyone rubbing their wood. Not to mention the Hub app wasn't working. Lol.
@@BenSS3 😄
Don't know where you found this one but full applause to the author.
I've run out of different ways to say it so I'll keep it as blunt as I can - a great story made even better by your awesome narration. I'd be lost without this channel giving me my horror fix. Many thanks CGS !
Exactly my thoughts. Why does he not have a bigger following?
I don't get it xx
Sooo…the nerd in me is like …mold is not a plant. 🤷🏻♀️😂
I had feel like this story had the potential but it fell short. Solid idea and characters were there but it lacked polish and a glue to connect it all together. Let me elaborate. It had this mold, the whispers, and the scratches and yet they didn't seem to work together. Then in the end it was just Hank killing them all anyways. I thought it might be some living house or something and Hank was being controlled by it, but there wasn't much going for that theory. The story just needs polish and glue and it could be something good but it's not a story that you would revisit. But as always thanks a lot man for what you do I always appreciate it.
Not to mention the author had a perfect Chekhov's gun with the whole .357 magnum paragraph, just for hank to use a knife anyway...
Can’t use wood heat in a house in Montana? Hope the owner is covering the gas bill
Electricity bill must be astronomical 😱
@Former11b why…?
@@mr.g5593 cold.
@@selectidiot why not wood..?
was the ?
@@mr.g5593 Because it gets very cold in Montana in the winter and not being able to use the fireplace means you're relying on gas/electric heat to warm an old home. Even newer homes with modern insulation are expensive to climate control in areas with extreme temps high or low.
How did he get the sample with the padlock on the door? Was there more around the house?
Come on common sense! If there’s no electricity you still going down into the dark basement?! What purpose? You can’t see anything there and it’s off limit!! Please wait until the light comes back to investigate man! lol 😂
Sorry good story but I was annoyed!! Hehe
Thank you for your great narration ❤😊
Oh, I do hope there is another to this one!
Dude.... you ordered a bloody Mary???!!!! Thats preposterous 😮😮😮😮
Many thanks for another awesome video CGS!😎
Really good story and as always a great narration.
Really been going through it lately. Thanks for always being consistent, CGS 😌
Only thing to be scared of in Butte Montana is the crackheads
Love the stories over here.
if you smoke it. it becomes purple haze. 🎸
Excellent story and narration. Greatly enjoyed it.
His voice makes it perfect I love reading books bc it’s like a movie in your head he makes it the same way thank you for that keep it up
I find it hilarious when people from one demographic population transplant themselves into another and then act surprised when they are noticed.
Makes you wonder about who is the intolerant one, when the obviously expected reactions are seen as an affront or insult.
Larger story. Florida does not have basements. They would flood. I know I worked at a house here in Florida that had one and that's all it did was flood.
The house in which they are residing in is not in florida.
Florida is only a few feet above sea level. If you did 4 ft down you usually hit water! Having a basement would definitely flood!
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Thanks...
Some of these stories would make really good screenplays.
Hey you, thank you for the great stories. Hope you’re having a good Monday.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Good story and narration!
Thanks!
Perfect timing CGS.
Got distracted with eclipse party. Sorry.. listened in peices!
You never disappoint my friend 🦉
That was awesome 😎👻☠️
Such an entertaining story. Thanks 🎉🎉🎉
Upset with our careers at 25. This story was written by a child who is going to find out some very hard lessons about work and life.
AMAZING. WAYYYYY MORE OF THOSE BRUH.
Im not renting a house where I can't get to the basement. But the landlord has access and that's where my breaker box is? Not only is that illegal, that's just plain creepy. Yea, that lock would have gotten picked with the quickness.
I wonder if Brian went to check up on his friend and get involved with figuring out the house and Alonzo's death. I wish the both of them made it out alive.
I live in Butte Mt. It's a strange place
Thank you, Lord Brett. o7
And literally as I'm pulling out of work, that's two in a row for the commute. Thus has been your algorithm comment for the video, good day and God bless America
I'm excited for you buddy. I know this feeling all too well, although its bedtime for me, not the commute ❤❤❤
Like 450 here or 451 me a someone hit like same time. Worry myself sick over buying a house .wen i got 1 already. Wondering if i might split both ends against the middle and end up homeless. Idk im glad this came up
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It was very similar to a movie I saw yrs ago. Great narrative, though😊
Spoiler alert! Great story! I just wish we knew more as to why he killed them in the first place and stuck them in the basement. If his name wasn't actually Hank, then who was he? Thanks CGS for the longer story today! Hope everyone is having a fabulous day!🤗💜🕷
Same! I was hoping we would hear why Hank had murdered his sister & family. It was a good story but left me with more questions and wanting more story.
What happened to the heavy lock that Hank left??
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I Adore your voice and the most of the stories you narrate........ My one issue, big ISSUE actually. Is why you don't have a bigger following?? ....... People have no idea what they're missing out on, seriously.
Stay safe, loads of love being sent out to you. xx xx xx
37:00 What a good friend. So, heavily wounded, the guy managed to sneakily army crawl up the entire basement stairs, rolling a nat20 on his stealth check, but not warning poor Alonso about being met by an armed killer at least a BIT earlier than right until the moment, when it was too late!? Ahhh!
No way, this was not intentional. The protagonist wanted Alonso gone and watch the killer shank him! (Or was just pretty dumb, as so often 😬) Poor Alonso :-(
A petri "disk"? No, its a dish*
Very cliché and amateurish story but I enjoyed it well enough. Solid 3 outta 5.
Nice
Lonzo 😢😢
Why does Hank have a southern accent?
No p-hub or wifi..adios
Dude! ❤
Would've been good if he didnt botch it by adding in that cheap shit ending about the red mold following him.
Men try not to mention sexual endeavors in horror scenario challenge easy mode!!! (Failed).
Done
You da man
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Last.✌🏻😉
Even last-er! 🙋🏻♀️
@@einienj3281 yes you are.👏🏻😂🇳🇴
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@@einienj3281 Finland nice to see you.😁
@@mr.g5593 Right back at you, Norway! 😊
2 much bull crap
I better not hear a lazy mispronunciation like some narrators do
Hallo
This is such a great scary story! Check out the one I just posted!
Super early
I can't lol
Thanks cgs.👋🏻🫡🇳🇴