Interesting. The opening couple's vocal argument and moving to the main situation of the main couple's situation is good and leads into the main character's situation. The splitting of the characters in the initial shots worked well (typically, the vertical divide via the post, etc., works to show the division between characters is good, but your unbalanced shots tended towards showing her as having the advantage - I'm assuming that was intentional). I wanted to see more conflict and less of what he seemingly imagined -- stay with their reality -- and possibly use a higher comedic ending: what if she or he ironically solved the situation better either in opposition to the other person's perception or they both realized something together? Some resolution to the conflict is better to show the full circle scope of filmmaking. Am I missing that here?
Interesting. The opening couple's vocal argument and moving to the main situation of the main couple's situation is good and leads into the main character's situation. The splitting of the characters in the initial shots worked well (typically, the vertical divide via the post, etc., works to show the division between characters is good, but your unbalanced shots tended towards showing her as having the advantage - I'm assuming that was intentional). I wanted to see more conflict and less of what he seemingly imagined -- stay with their reality -- and possibly use a higher comedic ending: what if she or he ironically solved the situation better either in opposition to the other person's perception or they both realized something together? Some resolution to the conflict is better to show the full circle scope of filmmaking. Am I missing that here?
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