Look No I don’t really care for the shorter story all of them that I Listen to showing your passion first Star Wars and telling stories. Don’t let prejudice ruin your joy and creativity. Stay determined ❤ and write Until you can’t write anymore. Keep up the amazing work.
What if Bo-Katan Kryze was a stronger and better fighter than Maul and Pre Vizsla combined, thus defeating Maul and/or Sabine Wren in combat for leadership of Mandalore and/or the Darksaber?
You shouldn't be bullied for making stuff you like dude, this stuff is great, and you wrote the sequels SO MUCH BETTER than Disney did, it's so disappointing that Disney messed up with everything, but you gave The Sequel Trilogy the justice it DESERVED
and I’m going to be honest with you guys I do think he makes way way better ones and he should not be bullied for making stuff about something he loves so yeah
47:44 I love when silly moments like this get added into really serious stories. Yeah, some might not like the immersion breaking, but to me it's really neat.
Attempt 8 (I think is 8) What if Wullf Yularen didn’t join the Empire or defected from the ISB and instead formed his own rebel cell using clone war era ships, fights, vehicles and clone troopers like Captain Howzer and his men. I feel like he would have one of the most successful rebel cell under his leadership and maybe he might even meet Ashoka again under fulcrum.
If I'm going to be completely honest, this reimagining of the sequel trilogy is so much better than the actual thing, I think Disney should hire you and have you be one of John favros writers for the reboot of the sequel trilogy
A great idea and it would make better movies than the sequel trilogy. As for your next videos, here are some ideas: - What if Shmi and Anakin were Mandalorians? - What if Luke was raised by the Naberries? - What if Qi'ra wasn't caught on Corellia and joined the Empire like Han did? - What if the New Republic never demilitarized in the first place? - What if it wasn't Del Meeko that Luke met on Pillion but Iden Versio (leading to Luke/Iden pairing)? - What if Luke and Lando discovered Exegol?
I wish you were the one who wrote the sequels it has more compound character bills a plot line I mean just everything from beginning to end you can feel that you’re a true Star Wars fan at heart and a very charismatic writer wish you the best in your future endeavors and may the force be with you
I don’t like the execution of the Sequels, but they had the potential to be masterpieces had they actually went in with a solid plan & plot outline. The acting & visuals were top notch, but the story was the ultimate flaw. Don’t let these trolls talk trash to you. You’re easily one of the best Star Wars RUclipsrs out here. Your videos are always a highlight of my week & you’re a fantastic storyteller. You did an amazing job with this Sequel series. Keep up the great work & May the Force be with you!!!
I loved this! It was such a unique story! Honestly need more of this. Also love the multipart episodes too cause they build up so well and then have amazing endings
On the comments, dont let it bother you. Some of us is happen to like the sequel trilogy, as well as your content. On a more personal note, thank you for jow ypu handled the passing 0f Leah/Carrie. I remember her as a young woman, havijg met her through the Reynolds family, as a kid. Loved visiting with her and her mom, and miss them both.
I can't give you a big enough thumbs up for a like. Not a huge sequel guy but this has been A very exciting twist. I've seen almost all of your videos and I'll always stop what I'm watching when i see another videos of yours drops. Keep up the great work 👍
These 2 stories are AWESOME! I admit, I wasn't going to watch this one but you did a really great job. These stories are way better than the sequels are. Thank you for being a great content creator.
I've always wondered about "What If the Republic KEPT it's Military, but in secret?' Basically After the last war with the Sith, some members of the Republic's Military, Senate and some of the Jedi including one or two council members all agreed to keep the Armies & Navy of the Republic but hidden from the public eye cause they believed that the Sith weren't really gone and would return.
Please do all the re-writes of the sequils you can. It will help me to forget how nausiated I was with Disney's treatment of my favourite characters. You get a like for this one for sure!
I really wish darth jar jar was the big bad of the recent movies kill Ray and Ben solo and let jar jar rain supreme a fight between jar jar and luke skywalker would be epic
Finally! Once again Pente does Justice for a trilogy that is hated by many! I love it! This ending was phenomenal! I love it so much! I’m so glad Finn got his proper flowers! As well as wrapping everything up neatly and beautifully! Also attempt 42 of what if Anakin Skywalker and Galen Marek were rivals and trained together!
You also brought up alot of valid points that the republic depended to much on fighter instead of capital ship combat, they also should never have demilitatirized at all.
So far all your stories are great and it would be interesting hearing more sequel series stories in a new light. And what if the Imperial fought against the first order
i was honestly excited for this and waiting, although i mostly dont like the sequels i do like some of the things from them, and all of your vids have amazing story's no matter the era, keep up the good work
An entertaining twist on the sequels. I liked it better than the last Jedi! I'm glad you didn't waste Luke and made Finn half likable. Thanks for the entertainment and hour and a half break.
i love this. so much better than disney. i’d actually really like to see a scenario where mara jade was on the second death star after luke killed the sith lord
This was a really good story, I don't know who would dismiss a story that's goal is to improve on the sequels. I don't hate the characters in the sequels, I just wish Disney had taken their time and written a better story for the fans.
This was excellent! I really should comment more often, however, I usually watch RUclips on a smart TV RUclips app that doesn’t have a way to comment on videos. I am actually one of those people that generally dislikes the sequels. I also don’t let that stop me from seeing the good parts of what was done in the sequels. Most of the characters from the sequel trilogy had a lot of potential that I think was squandered by direction… just like I think and have always thought that the idea of midi-chlorians has a lot of potential, it just isn’t explored very thoroughly in the movies and glossed over and as such comes off as a negative point for a lot of viewers. All of this said, I appreciate every video you make. Even if some of them aren’t my taste, like your Halloween video on the Black wing virus, just because I never liked the whole situation with that involved with from the original Content. Despite that your video about it was very entertaining just because of all the effort and passion that you have for everything you do. It comes through and makes even stuff I normally dislike (like all the different kinds of zombies that exist) really entertaining. I hope despite the comments on Finn being a Jedi part one don’t hold you down for too much longer, because your content is absolutely awesome every time. Sorry for writing you an essay and taking up so much time. I guess since I’m making a comment again, I’ll throw an idea out there for a potential video in the future if you feel like it’s something you can run with at some point. “What if the Rebels formed a new form of government (to the standards of galactic level) instead of another republic, confederacy, or empire after they overthrow the Empire?”
Duuuude..these are soo dope man..I love these. Definitely helps me get through some of my work days.props dude keep up the good work and thank you very much!
This is great idea and story. I didn't like the sequel trilogy and they had the ability to be so much better. If you continue to do sequel trilogy stuff could you look into Templin Institues version of the First Order. That would be a great villain to write against
I am sorry for not posting a comment in the previous video. I normally don't post but I feel like I need to. I love your videos, even the ones I am not a fan of. I try to watch them all and always enjoy them. Keep doing what you are doing even with the sequels. I may not like the movies that Disney made but I will still watch the "what if"s
What if Darth pleaguis trained Anakin....and you did Kylo Ren justice...and I agree the sequel what if should be better then the sequels we got cause theres more room to play with
I am so salty for how long you'd made me wait for this. This is a great Sequel Trilogy rewrite and I have been waiting to see the conclusion to this end. Finn is a definition of a wasted character and you gave him the respect he'd deserved. Rey is also a wasted character that you had acknowledged and made me respect. You have no idea how much I love the way that you had written them in this timeline.
Ooh love triangle between Bastila Shan, Revan & the Exile. All three knowing the light *and* dark quite well. Revan takes Bastila with him & tells T3 to get the exile. Kreia knows this and muddled up this plan. Sneaks upon the hawk with T3 & the exile to go to Revan. Then a Mustafar type speech between Kreia & the other 3. How would this gray-triad defeat the sith emperor?
Crazy idea, what if instead of the Clone War/Galactic civil war, you got the "Jurassic Park incidents" but on a galactic stage (instead of just an island).
Additionally, I would like to see a what if scenario where Empire didn't outlaw the Jedi and kill them. Rather have the Jedi be the founders of the Empire. A sort of Dark Jedi order. Alternatively, I think a cool scenario to have go down, would be to have the New Republic fragment and dispand gradually over the years after the fall of the First Order. When I say fragment, I don't mean that in a bad way. I mean have them form a sort of Confederation of governments that do have basic laws that they all follow, but also have their own territorial laws and semi-separate militaries. Semi in the sense that they have their own respective military uniforms, starship designs, weapons, etc, but do have a unified military as well that becomes active in times of galactic crisis. Like the inevitable rise of some new dark side threat. This one is a bit of reach, but I think that it would be doable. Let me know what you think.
I really loved this story, you did an amazing job so keep up the good work. Don’t listen to those who hate on any of your work, they might be apart of the 1st order and we don’t need anyone tearing you down with all the work you do each week. Thank you so much again for all you do and keep up the good work. Sure I’ll even admit I didn’t like the ne sequels because they were just copies of the orignal imo except for how the 3rd went but it destroyed likes character and it played out the last last Jedi like an episode of Clone wars where it all takes place mainly in 1 spot. But listening to this new take I prefer this so much more cause it’s that much better and redeems Luke as well also I love and ship Rey and Finn more so then Rey and Ben/Kilo
What if Depa trained Anakin? what if Master Arca trained Anakin? What if Anakin took Galen Marek as a Padawan, instead of Ahsoka, or after her departure? What if Obi-Wan & Luminara fell in love? What if Depa & Obi-Wan fell in love? what if Shaak Ti was the Chosen One? What if Caleb Dume was the chosen one? What if Depa was the Chosen One? What if Revan reborn & Meetra Surik showed up during the clone wars? What if the entire clone army defied Order 66? What if Galen Marek blew up the Death Star? What if Revan became Mand'alor? What if Senator Chuchi was the Dark Lord of the Sith? What if Shaak Ti visited Kamino with Obi-Wan, during attack of the clones? What if Omega was in Attack of the clones? What if Depa survived order 66? What if Plo & Shaak Ti fell in love? What if Kal Skirata & Shaak Ti fell in love? What if Omega was Shaak TI's Padawan? What if Jango raised both Boba & Omega? What if the clones had full citizenship and rights? What if Starkiller was Dooku's apprentice during the clone wars? What if Depa and Commander Grey fell in love? What if Ahsoka killed The Son on Mortis, instead of giving him the dagger? What if Shaak Ti was immortal? What if Tarkin or Palpatine was framed for the temple bombing?
What if assejj ventress saved ahsoka when ahsoka was accused of treason, could they bond over both being betrayed by Sith and Jedi how would Anakin react
I thought you don't do cross overs? Why did you mention Kryptonite? As for this what if story, as I said in the comments of part 1 the PPSW team could have done a better job writing the Disquel trilogy, unfortunately my distain for the Disquel and the characters they introduced hinders my ability to fully enjoy this story. I understand you were working with what they introduced, so it is a very tough thing to over come such feelings, so no matter how great a story you created it would still be tainted which is very unfortunate because this is a great story aside from that. That said I paused the video on an image of Rae and I could not help but notice she has very masculine facial features, so I just do not find Daisy Ridley attractive. (I know that last part has nothing to do with the story, but I wanted to mention that anyway). Thank you for the great stories you continue to produce, and this is a great story, unfortunately it is tainted with Disney's influence which was unavoidable as you had to include those characters to do the "what if..." story.
FYI - I did watch parts 1 and 2 all the way through and I think you did a great job rewriting the sequels, my comments to part 1 and this part are not throwing shade and it is because I enjoy the work you do that I watched not only this 2 part series, but the other videos you did on the Disquel, but yes I did struggle with it because of the sour taste the Disquel tainted Star Wars with. I just wish I had never watched the Disquel because then I could have fully enjoyed this story without the Disney taint on any of the characters.
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Look No I don’t really care for the shorter story all of them that I Listen to showing your passion first Star Wars and telling stories. Don’t let prejudice ruin your joy and creativity. Stay determined ❤ and write Until you can’t write anymore. Keep up the amazing work.
@PentePatrolStarWars I love your work and the effort you put into this
What if Ashoka was in the Siege of Mandalore with Obi-Wan and Anakin?
What if Bo-Katan Kryze was a stronger and better fighter than Maul and Pre Vizsla combined, thus defeating Maul and/or Sabine Wren in combat for leadership of Mandalore and/or the Darksaber?
Can you do something about the reckless telegram scammer on me in this video?
You shouldn't be bullied for making stuff you like dude, this stuff is great, and you wrote the sequels SO MUCH BETTER than Disney did, it's so disappointing that Disney messed up with everything, but you gave The Sequel Trilogy the justice it DESERVED
I agree...
I agree to but I still hate the disney sequels lol 😂
and I mean like who likes the sequels anyways no one it suck’s
and I’m going to be honest with you guys I do think he makes way way better ones and he should not be bullied for making stuff about something he loves so yeah
47:44 I love when silly moments like this get added into really serious stories. Yeah, some might not like the immersion breaking, but to me it's really neat.
Godly moment
@@somerandomguyinthe90s80 Hold up; that's the voice of Kylo Ren?!
@@talonstride nachos ren savage
This is way believable and better than the sequels we got. Thank you for doing this. Your content regardless of the Star Wars era is good 👍🏽
The sequel trilogy is my favorite era thank you for taking the time to write and perform this content
Attempt 8 (I think is 8)
What if Wullf Yularen didn’t join the Empire or defected from the ISB and instead formed his own rebel cell using clone war era ships, fights, vehicles and clone troopers like Captain Howzer and his men. I feel like he would have one of the most successful rebel cell under his leadership and maybe he might even meet Ashoka again under fulcrum.
That would be badass and don’t worry I have been asking for what if ventress and talzin killed grievous and dooku for almost 9 months
If I'm going to be completely honest, this reimagining of the sequel trilogy is so much better than the actual thing, I think Disney should hire you and have you be one of John favros writers for the reboot of the sequel trilogy
A great idea and it would make better movies than the sequel trilogy.
As for your next videos, here are some ideas:
- What if Shmi and Anakin were Mandalorians?
- What if Luke was raised by the Naberries?
- What if Qi'ra wasn't caught on Corellia and joined the Empire like Han did?
- What if the New Republic never demilitarized in the first place?
- What if it wasn't Del Meeko that Luke met on Pillion but Iden Versio (leading to Luke/Iden pairing)?
- What if Luke and Lando discovered Exegol?
I wish you were the one who wrote the sequels it has more compound character bills a plot line I mean just everything from beginning to end you can feel that you’re a true Star Wars fan at heart and a very charismatic writer wish you the best in your future endeavors and may the force be with you
I don’t like the execution of the Sequels, but they had the potential to be masterpieces had they actually went in with a solid plan & plot outline. The acting & visuals were top notch, but the story was the ultimate flaw.
Don’t let these trolls talk trash to you. You’re easily one of the best Star Wars RUclipsrs out here. Your videos are always a highlight of my week & you’re a fantastic storyteller. You did an amazing job with this Sequel series. Keep up the great work & May the Force be with you!!!
I loved this! It was such a unique story! Honestly need more of this. Also love the multipart episodes too cause they build up so well and then have amazing endings
I have always wondered if Finn was suppose to be a Jedi as I think that would have been good. I really enjoyed this
Love this story. It's really well done.
On the comments, dont let it bother you. Some of us is happen to like the sequel trilogy, as well as your content.
On a more personal note, thank you for jow ypu handled the passing 0f Leah/Carrie. I remember her as a young woman, havijg met her through the Reynolds family, as a kid. Loved visiting with her and her mom, and miss them both.
I can't give you a big enough thumbs up for a like. Not a huge sequel guy but this has been A very exciting twist. I've seen almost all of your videos and I'll always stop what I'm watching when i see another videos of yours drops. Keep up the great work 👍
Great story 👏👏
What if obi wan was framed for the Jedi temple bombing?
What if obi wan Kenobi was Count dooku's son?
IM REALLY SAD I MISSED THIS but atleast I know its gonna be good.
I think these two stories were excellent. I would like to see what if the Rebellion became an Empire.
These 2 stories are AWESOME! I admit, I wasn't going to watch this one but you did a really great job. These stories are way better than the sequels are. Thank you for being a great content creator.
I love how you write bro and I rlly want to see What If snoke is the main villain just like how the force awaken build it up that would be cool
I've always wondered about "What If the Republic KEPT it's Military, but in secret?' Basically After the last war with the Sith, some members of the Republic's Military, Senate and some of the Jedi including one or two council members all agreed to keep the Armies & Navy of the Republic but hidden from the public eye cause they believed that the Sith weren't really gone and would return.
Please do all the re-writes of the sequils you can. It will help me to forget how nausiated I was with Disney's treatment of my favourite characters. You get a like for this one for sure!
I really wish darth jar jar was the big bad of the recent movies kill Ray and Ben solo and let jar jar rain supreme a fight between jar jar and luke skywalker would be epic
Kylo Ren: Who are you?
Darth Jar Jar: It doesn't matter. Yousa going die.
Wow, bro. You got the whole subscriberbase laughing. /s 🙄
Let the force guide you in your joy, you do good work , and while some may not enjoy the sequels as much as others. We all enjoy your content .
This was absolutely beautiful
Finally! Once again Pente does Justice for a trilogy that is hated by many! I love it! This ending was phenomenal! I love it so much! I’m so glad Finn got his proper flowers! As well as wrapping everything up neatly and beautifully! Also attempt 42 of what if Anakin Skywalker and Galen Marek were rivals and trained together!
You also brought up alot of valid points that the republic depended to much on fighter instead of capital ship combat, they also should never have demilitatirized at all.
What if Anakin fell in love with Dutchess Satine or Sabe. Also what if Anakin was trained by Bastillia Shan or Alayua Secura
So much better than the sequels! I knew you could do it.
What if Ahsoka helped Luke with the new Jedi order.
Great story keep them coming man your a great writer.
So far all your stories are great and it would be interesting hearing more sequel series stories in a new light.
And what if the Imperial fought against the first order
i was honestly excited for this and waiting, although i mostly dont like the sequels i do like some of the things from them, and all of your vids have amazing story's no matter the era, keep up the good work
An entertaining twist on the sequels. I liked it better than the last Jedi! I'm glad you didn't waste Luke and made Finn half likable. Thanks for the entertainment and hour and a half break.
i love this. so much better than disney. i’d actually really like to see a scenario where mara jade was on the second death star after luke killed the sith lord
What if the Bendu trained Anakin Skywalker?
This was a really good story, I don't know who would dismiss a story that's goal is to improve on the sequels. I don't hate the characters in the sequels, I just wish Disney had taken their time and written a better story for the fans.
It was enjoyable but I feel like a better title would be "What if Luke was more active" but it was enjoyable enough.
You know I don’t normally click on prequel videos but this has been interesting so far
Dude, do you, we are with it! We want more like this! Do your thing. Have a good one.
Thanks again for a great story mate. Keep up the good work 🤘
I really liked this one!!!
What if Anakin was raised by Jango Fett?
Great job on the story!
This was excellent! I really should comment more often, however, I usually watch RUclips on a smart TV RUclips app that doesn’t have a way to comment on videos. I am actually one of those people that generally dislikes the sequels. I also don’t let that stop me from seeing the good parts of what was done in the sequels. Most of the characters from the sequel trilogy had a lot of potential that I think was squandered by direction… just like I think and have always thought that the idea of midi-chlorians has a lot of potential, it just isn’t explored very thoroughly in the movies and glossed over and as such comes off as a negative point for a lot of viewers. All of this said, I appreciate every video you make. Even if some of them aren’t my taste, like your Halloween video on the Black wing virus, just because I never liked the whole situation with that involved with from the original Content. Despite that your video about it was very entertaining just because of all the effort and passion that you have for everything you do. It comes through and makes even stuff I normally dislike (like all the different kinds of zombies that exist) really entertaining. I hope despite the comments on Finn being a Jedi part one don’t hold you down for too much longer, because your content is absolutely awesome every time.
Sorry for writing you an essay and taking up so much time. I guess since I’m making a comment again, I’ll throw an idea out there for a potential video in the future if you feel like it’s something you can run with at some point. “What if the Rebels formed a new form of government (to the standards of galactic level) instead of another republic, confederacy, or empire after they overthrow the Empire?”
What if Luke Skywalker met Cal Kestis and his crew instead of Han and Chewbacca?
Duuuude..these are soo dope man..I love these. Definitely helps me get through some of my work days.props dude keep up the good work and thank you very much!
really enjoyed this tale, was sad Leia didn't survive to the end. I did like that Luke was there to rebuild the order
This is great idea and story. I didn't like the sequel trilogy and they had the ability to be so much better. If you continue to do sequel trilogy stuff could you look into Templin Institues version of the First Order. That would be a great villain to write against
Day 5 what if I was canon I was raised by darth jar jar on both I would have cameo to Luke and I would fight Rey’s order wich will be ez
Kylo loves himself some first order nachos
I was hoping someone else would comment on that. I thought it was a weird ad at first then I checked and I almost died laughing.😂
Thank you for writing this
What if Kyle Katarn was a descendant or reincarnation of Revan?
I don't really care about the sequels but this fic was really good and I look forward to more of your stuff 😁
Man I love this channel, you do such great great work!!
I am sorry for not posting a comment in the previous video. I normally don't post but I feel like I need to. I love your videos, even the ones I am not a fan of. I try to watch them all and always enjoy them. Keep doing what you are doing even with the sequels. I may not like the movies that Disney made but I will still watch the "what if"s
Dude this was great! Your Is my favorite channel and I am constantly revisiting your videos because they are like audio books.
These video's you made were what the Star Wars Sequels SHOULD Have been...
this is absolutely better than the original story. Good job.
What if Darth pleaguis trained Anakin....and you did Kylo Ren justice...and I agree the sequel what if should be better then the sequels we got cause theres more room to play with
Tbh., that is your best one so far!
I love your Videos you keep making video I’m a Star Wars fan and your doing great
I am so salty for how long you'd made me wait for this. This is a great Sequel Trilogy rewrite and I have been waiting to see the conclusion to this end. Finn is a definition of a wasted character and you gave him the respect he'd deserved. Rey is also a wasted character that you had acknowledged and made me respect. You have no idea how much I love the way that you had written them in this timeline.
Love the video
Ooh love triangle between Bastila Shan, Revan & the Exile. All three knowing the light *and* dark quite well. Revan takes Bastila with him & tells T3 to get the exile. Kreia knows this and muddled up this plan. Sneaks upon the hawk with T3 & the exile to go to Revan. Then a Mustafar type speech between Kreia & the other 3.
How would this gray-triad defeat the sith emperor?
I love your stores they kick ass!!!
Crazy idea, what if instead of the Clone War/Galactic civil war, you got the "Jurassic Park incidents" but on a galactic stage (instead of just an island).
Im just imagining Emperor Palpatine playing with his food like a child, and Supreme Leader Kylo eating nachos while on his throne.
Dude you make amazing content, I love Star Wars for Star Wars. The sequels were..... well they were bad, but had so much potential.
You have potential becoming a great youtuber!
What if Legends and Canon Merged part 1! Written with dialogue and has a great amount of elements from both sides!
Love the Thumbnail dude
what if han solo killed vader in the battle of yavin
May The Force Be With You
I love your storytelling can you do more alternate timelines of asajj ventress?
Wonderful listen also this could very much also be named " what if the sequal trilogy was written by someone with a functioning brain "
All of your content is great don't listen to people that wants to put down your story
I love your videos keep going👍
I hate the Sequels, but I love what you do. Keep up the good work man!
Amazing story
Additionally, I would like to see a what if scenario where Empire didn't outlaw the Jedi and kill them. Rather have the Jedi be the founders of the Empire. A sort of Dark Jedi order. Alternatively, I think a cool scenario to have go down, would be to have the New Republic fragment and dispand gradually over the years after the fall of the First Order. When I say fragment, I don't mean that in a bad way. I mean have them form a sort of Confederation of governments that do have basic laws that they all follow, but also have their own territorial laws and semi-separate militaries. Semi in the sense that they have their own respective military uniforms, starship designs, weapons, etc, but do have a unified military as well that becomes active in times of galactic crisis. Like the inevitable rise of some new dark side threat. This one is a bit of reach, but I think that it would be doable. Let me know what you think.
Dude write what you want to and people it's entertainment listen to it and open your minds
Fin is confirmed to be force sensitive, so this is not far fetched
Love this so much
It'd be nice if Kylo didn't die and Anakin's spirit consoled him that this is not what he wanted his grandson to be.
What if Darth Vader kidnap baby Leia from Alderaan?
This was literally better than the sequels
What if the brain worms got out into the galaxy? Ie Ashoka wasn’t able to stop it.
Dude I hated the sequels but this 100% great job man
This is the sequel trilogy that should’ve happened, not the trash we’ve got now. Well done Pente.
What if Count Dooku was born in the Old Republic era?
What if Dooku learned how to become a force ghost and redeemed himself
What if Obi-wan had a child after revenge of the sith
I still dislike the whole kyber crystal thing since it was a forced random retcon.
I really loved this story, you did an amazing job so keep up the good work. Don’t listen to those who hate on any of your work, they might be apart of the 1st order and we don’t need anyone tearing you down with all the work you do each week. Thank you so much again for all you do and keep up the good work.
Sure I’ll even admit I didn’t like the ne sequels because they were just copies of the orignal imo except for how the 3rd went but it destroyed likes character and it played out the last last Jedi like an episode of Clone wars where it all takes place mainly in 1 spot. But listening to this new take I prefer this so much more cause it’s that much better and redeems Luke as well also I love and ship Rey and Finn more so then Rey and Ben/Kilo
Jar Jar is a clown
I’m not a big Star Wars fan but this fanfiction is way better than the Disney trilogy 👍🏾
And then Palpatine shows up
What if Depa trained Anakin?
what if Master Arca trained Anakin?
What if Anakin took Galen Marek as a Padawan, instead of Ahsoka, or after her departure?
What if Obi-Wan & Luminara fell in love?
What if Depa & Obi-Wan fell in love?
what if Shaak Ti was the Chosen One?
What if Caleb Dume was the chosen one?
What if Depa was the Chosen One?
What if Revan reborn & Meetra Surik showed up during the clone wars?
What if the entire clone army defied Order 66?
What if Galen Marek blew up the Death Star?
What if Revan became Mand'alor?
What if Senator Chuchi was the Dark Lord of the Sith?
What if Shaak Ti visited Kamino with Obi-Wan, during attack of the clones?
What if Omega was in Attack of the clones?
What if Depa survived order 66?
What if Plo & Shaak Ti fell in love?
What if Kal Skirata & Shaak Ti fell in love?
What if Omega was Shaak TI's Padawan?
What if Jango raised both Boba & Omega?
What if the clones had full citizenship and rights?
What if Starkiller was Dooku's apprentice during the clone wars?
What if Depa and Commander Grey fell in love?
What if Ahsoka killed The Son on Mortis, instead of giving him the dagger?
What if Shaak Ti was immortal?
What if Tarkin or Palpatine was framed for the temple bombing?
What if Grievous killed Obi wan?
What if assejj ventress saved ahsoka when ahsoka was accused of treason, could they bond over both being betrayed by Sith and Jedi how would Anakin react
I thought you don't do cross overs? Why did you mention Kryptonite? As for this what if story, as I said in the comments of part 1 the PPSW team could have done a better job writing the Disquel trilogy, unfortunately my distain for the Disquel and the characters they introduced hinders my ability to fully enjoy this story. I understand you were working with what they introduced, so it is a very tough thing to over come such feelings, so no matter how great a story you created it would still be tainted which is very unfortunate because this is a great story aside from that. That said I paused the video on an image of Rae and I could not help but notice she has very masculine facial features, so I just do not find Daisy Ridley attractive. (I know that last part has nothing to do with the story, but I wanted to mention that anyway). Thank you for the great stories you continue to produce, and this is a great story, unfortunately it is tainted with Disney's influence which was unavoidable as you had to include those characters to do the "what if..." story.
FYI - I did watch parts 1 and 2 all the way through and I think you did a great job rewriting the sequels, my comments to part 1 and this part are not throwing shade and it is because I enjoy the work you do that I watched not only this 2 part series, but the other videos you did on the Disquel, but yes I did struggle with it because of the sour taste the Disquel tainted Star Wars with. I just wish I had never watched the Disquel because then I could have fully enjoyed this story without the Disney taint on any of the characters.