A fire in a landscape without wood. A fire that does not melt the ice beneath it. And nobody does a survival exercise on their own. You work together, supporting each other.
Funny, I've been on 3 survival trips, each of them was solo. If I got in a jam there was emergency communications but I was on my own for as much as 4 days, all in Northern Ontario, two summer, one fall/winter. My instructors were experts, my favorite was a Canadian Forces Sargent, a little gnome like fella, who carried more gear in his pocket than you or I carry in our packs. This guy was perfectly at home in the bush, summer or winter.
Please, can we have third person singular instead of plural? The story says she goes off in another direction, then uses the plural to describe her travel. The. Properly uses the plural when a group of aliens come by. It throws me out of the story.
This is a single person you are talking about. NOT PLURAL. So, it is him and not they. His boots; He fell; he lay there; he pushed himself up. Taylor is one - not several. He ate the fish not they. Get real. This story is ruined by using plural words - it is not real.
you are telling a story about a single person and his feats. but you use 'they, them' in every sentence. is there someone else there I didn't hear about? or did you feel he was more than a single person? 'he,she, it' instead of they and them would be better IMO
What's up with the singular and plural descriptions? They are not interchangeable when you're talking about 1 person. To be honest it's bit annoying, everytime I hear it my head screams a correction. Please fix that pronto. Other than that I enjoyed the story. I would have like a bit more explanation of the fluid in the vile, I suspect it was a life form but that just be to much Star Trek on my part.
Every scifi story is they/them. These stories are badly written, and no one edits them. The AI constantly mispronounces the English language. Again, no one edits the narration. A lot of the I don't bother to listen to as they are really badly written or just boring. My favorites are the stories done tongue in cheek.
Is it Creos, Krios, or Cryos? What's the planet's name? I guess it depends on what line we're talking about. Please, get some consistency in major details and pronunciation. It has a way of really distracting from an otherwise good story.
Nonsensical woke verbiage. He would have been wise to bring some sort of compact heating unit. The Inuit used fat burning lamps. An ice saw or blade would have been useful. Oh well I've had enough of this garbage.
The reader gets worse. The miss use of certain WOKE pronouns ruined the good storyline. Too bad the ending sucked. I’ve cancelled my abo to this content maker.😮
Hey, Your AI is a woke joke. Good story but it sounds/reads totally bizarro. Edit: Take the transcript, find and replace all the bizarro Woke crap and it's quite readable.
A fire in a landscape without wood. A fire that does not melt the ice beneath it. And nobody does a survival exercise on their own. You work together, supporting each other.
Funny, I've been on 3 survival trips, each of them was solo. If I got in a jam there was emergency communications but I was on my own for as much as 4 days, all in Northern Ontario, two summer, one fall/winter. My instructors were experts, my favorite was a Canadian Forces Sargent, a little gnome like fella, who carried more gear in his pocket than you or I carry in our packs. This guy was perfectly at home in the bush, summer or winter.
Even the AI is woke on a trip with pronouns.
Hume? Hum minus the E ending.
Nuff to make ya barf, isn't it?
you keep saying they and Taylor - is Taylor not alone. Bad AI writing. Why was this not read over first before issuing.
I agree, it is disturbing and kills the story....
And the story ...is no story at all. Just a lot of 'Word Salad'.
Must be Progressive pronouns. :}
Driving me crazy...😢
And don't get me started on 'hyum' instead of HUM. Oh, good gravy.
They never do.
She a single person,not a group or a they. Would not have thought an AI would need to be taught this.
Taylor is one person so quit saying "THEY" and "THEIR".
The AI was set up in a woke lab.
why is Taylor a they and them, but, the teacher is a she?
my guess is that this is more of a woke terminology /// it confused me too.
@@tomfreeman2456 all or nothing
@@tomfreeman2456 These people that WOKE up need to go back to sleep.
Please, can we have third person singular instead of plural? The story says she goes off in another direction, then uses the plural to describe her travel. The. Properly uses the plural when a group of aliens come by. It throws me out of the story.
That's one cold planet. Even the AI teeth are chattering and stuttering.
Improper use of language. Drove me nuts. Couldn't finish.
Why is the audio STUTTER?
This is a single person you are talking about. NOT PLURAL. So, it is him and not they. His boots; He fell; he lay there; he pushed himself up. Taylor is one - not several. He ate the fish not they. Get real.
This story is ruined by using plural words - it is not real.
Stuttering AI? Must be the cold.
you are telling a story about a single person and his feats. but you use 'they, them' in every sentence. is there someone else there I didn't hear about? or did you feel he was more than a single person? 'he,she, it' instead of they and them would be better IMO
Is this a woke novel? Why the Hell use the wrong pronoun?
What's up with the singular and plural descriptions? They are not interchangeable when you're talking about 1 person. To be honest it's bit annoying, everytime I hear it my head screams a correction. Please fix that pronto. Other than that I enjoyed the story. I would have like a bit more explanation of the fluid in the vile, I suspect it was a life form but that just be to much Star Trek on my part.
Instead it they/them a more appropriate reference should be “shit” (covers she/he/it).
Starbound HFY HUMANS READING STORIES.
This AI reading needs to go away
When did one person become a they, them, how about checking what the ai is doing.
0.12 cool story and listening, thank you
Every scifi story is they/them. These stories are badly written, and no one edits them. The AI constantly mispronounces the English language. Again, no one edits the narration.
A lot of the I don't bother to listen to as they are really badly written or just boring.
My favorites are the stories done tongue in cheek.
Taylor is "they".
Is it Creos, Krios, or Cryos? What's the planet's name? I guess it depends on what line we're talking about. Please, get some consistency in major details and pronunciation. It has a way of really distracting from an otherwise good story.
Nonsensical woke verbiage. He would have been wise to bring some sort of compact heating unit. The Inuit used fat burning lamps. An ice saw or blade would have been useful. Oh well I've had enough of this garbage.
I refuse to listen to woke AI idiocy. Repeat after me, his, his HIS.
Is Taylor a man or woman? Wait, I know…both. That’s why he/she is they/them.
15min in. Had to give up watching this. So annoyed listening to an AI trying to come to terms with use of 'WOKE' terminology
The pronoun game has made it to AI, Taylor is a they, them?
Knock off the woke crap. You get an F for improperly using pronouns.
crap don't bother
The reader gets worse. The miss use of certain WOKE pronouns ruined the good storyline. Too bad the ending sucked. I’ve cancelled my abo to this content maker.😮
Hey, Your AI is a woke joke. Good story but it sounds/reads totally bizarro. Edit: Take the transcript, find and replace all the bizarro Woke crap and it's quite readable.
Pronoun misuse again . Fail.
Good story ruined by wokerry cant Taylor j7st be a woman or a man and not Tyler durden
Woke B.S. Story.