outstanding story, its amazing what friendship between two people can do even if they are of the same race or world as in this story. The man go to stay on earth with his little earth girl friend. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
This was a good story! Most of these similar sci-fi tales involve far too much hubris or unrealistic human characterization of extra terrestrials. Good listen.
INTERESTING Story! But when Nora left, Kale was sitting in an empty room, not an empty booth? "... the one you were talking about in the cafe?" not "... to one you were talking TO in the cafe?" The ending brought me to tears.
I really like that. I thought I couldn’t sit through 30 minutes of it, but it was really good. There’s a verse from the book called the holy Bible. It says “a child shall lead them”!
This one is very much a non-standard narrative for stories that sound like HFY. Alas, the human protagonist seems too young, because human children are taught not to chat with strangers.
Story started off implying the alien came through the door and Nora saw him sitting in a booth and he already had a cup of coffee. If he just entered, how did he get the coffee? Did I miss something?
Such a satisfying ending. Not what I expected at all, but that's what made it so good. 😊
Easily the best of this style of fiction I have heard in RUclips.
Head and shoulders above most of the same genre on RUclips. Kudos to the author and production team. 👍
I'll take this as a compliment to the team that's just me hehe lol
...Are you a real human? Or an A.I. @@FictionalReimagined
@@peternesbitt3647 I'm just a Human helped by AIs... but whatever you want, I'm here to help... being SCi-Fi stories lol
@@FictionalReimagined ... Excellent i love hearing all yours fantastic stories... You are great 👍!
@@peternesbitt3647 I'm glad to hear that!
outstanding story, its amazing what friendship between two people can do even if they are of the same race or world as in this story. The man go to stay on earth with his little earth girl friend. (Mississippi Gulf Coast, USA).
Wonderful story
Great! Thanks!
Actually, this is a pretty decent tale.
Well read, too.
Nice, different but good altogether! One of the FEW such stories saved to my playlist.
A very good story. To the writer thank you for sharing your story.
I think these stories are ai generated
@@insylem Some of them are undoubtedly A.I., but this one didn't have that " feel " to it. Either way it was a good story.
Anyway, I'm a human behind this story! lol
Anyway, I'm a human behind this story! lol
Thanks!
I thank you for your help God bless you
I thank you for your help God bless you
An excellent and very unique sci-fi story. Great narration
Wonderful story well told. Thank you .
a great little story -thx
also kids like nora are why even adults who never met a kid will still die for them ^^
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Heh, that is twist. I approve.
Great story! Love every minute of it
well done.
Great story
I kept thinking of the implications of an emperor being the sole survivor of the race.
great video ,love it please more.
Lovely story thank you. UKUK
Nice read on a nice story
Light years is a measure of distance, not just time.
This was a good story! Most of these similar sci-fi tales involve far too much hubris or unrealistic human characterization of extra terrestrials. Good listen.
Thanks!
The most satisfying story I heard
more please
Nice!
Probably just a coincidence, but it seemed like a response to Kenneth Bulmer's "Earth's Long Shadow."
Good story, but will the bounty hunters stop looking for him? ;-)
Stay for an uncertain future! lol
INTERESTING Story! But when Nora left, Kale was sitting in an empty room, not an empty booth? "... the one you were talking about in the cafe?" not "... to one you were talking TO in the cafe?" The ending brought me to tears.
Words exchanged in the wind...
I really like that. I thought I couldn’t sit through 30 minutes of it, but it was really good. There’s a verse from the book called the holy Bible. It says “a child shall lead them”!
God bless you my dear reader, I'm glad I kept you entertained during this time, there will always be more here!
Note to Syfi authors:eyes don't glow. If they did, you would be blinded.
Your brilliant comment is noted lol
It might not be literal.
Sweet story🤍
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Sweet story.
Can this alien find happiness on earth with a little girl and her mother? Time in next week as hijinks ensue in the hot new comedy, "Kael for Lunch"
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For some reason, I keep imagining "Life in a Northern Town" by Dream Academy playing in the background. And I don't know why.
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Not bad, but throughout his name is inconsistently Kale, then Cale. Her "childlike" innocence is more accurately a genuine child's innocence.
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Nkce story. But, I wonder, was the Emperor's name Kale, Cale or Kael? All three were used. I applaud the use of punctuation and capitals, though.
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This one is very much a non-standard narrative for stories that sound like HFY. Alas, the human protagonist seems too young, because human children are taught not to chat with strangers.
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Story started off implying the alien came through the door and Nora saw him sitting in a booth and he already had a cup of coffee.
If he just entered, how did he get the coffee? Did I miss something?
interesting observation
Is it a c or a k for Kale
My AI reader gets confused sometimes
Does it matter? If you are not reading it sounds the same.
Hello I am Rutabaga and I am Kale's evil twin brother !!! 👽👾👽
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