Lonely Eyes original acoustic guitar song by Marty Mugerian

Copyright 2010 Martin Mugerian.
All work is original and property of Martin Mugerian
This is a song I wrote not too long ago. Audio quality is really bad, but its the best I got. Below are the lyrics. Please comment and rate. Enjoy!
It didn't take long at all for me to know
I'd lose myself before I'd ever let you go
Tides are changing in this sea of lonely tears
I'd give it all just so I could hold you near
(Chorus)
I'm mesmorized
By those lonely eyes
I see myself inside them
As she turns away
The tears she cries
From those lonely eyes
Mean "tell me everything is
Gonna be ok"
Everyday these thoughts replay inside my head
Thinking about you, and all the things you said
Your painted smile can't hide all that I know
It's time for you to walk away and just let go
(chorus)
And I know, as you go, these feelings you won't show
Tell me how, here and now, you can walk away from me and just go?
(Chorus)