It's surprisingly fitting given how easily she flies off the rails. I mean she gives aj, twilight, and rarity a run for their money on details & obsession. She rivals rd in passion for a hobby she loves and fluttershy for emotional wiplash. *(and I say this as a die hard fluttershy fan.)*
I’m pretty sure the original quote was “You must always keep your friends close, but your enemies closer” (Can’t remember when was the last time I heard it)
Referential subversion of expectations. The narrator speaks in a suggestive tone about Applejack's desires for a book. As "50 Shades of Grey" is a horrible mess of abusive relationship rape-fic, calling it "50 Shades of Hay" leads us to think it's a novella on sex with the usual horse-play-on-words seen in most pony stories.
@@ashleyvanhammer3448 Actually there is no rape in it, but it does get close to it multiple times. Well, at least that's what I know from Dominic's review on it. I refuse to read it though.
If you're targeted by Pinkie Pie you have 1 of 2 options. A: Cooperate. B: Face Pinkamena. And if Rainbow Dash can't escape, I don't see Apple Jack's odds being any better and this story is the proof.
Oh my gosh that thumbnail. I remember it from that one episode where Pinkie pie played the bag pipes and got all depressed when he friends asked her to stop. She was making cupcakes with Rainbow Dash, the writers knew EXACTLY what they were doing. Loved the story and voice work! Well done!
So, here I am. I'm not a brony, but I've been following this channel for a while now. Damn it man, your videos are just so impressive, even if I couldn't understand a lot of what was happening.
“L-lemme l-lemme in l-let let me in!” “Hi nice to see ya! OPEN THE DOOR!-“ “apple jack apple~ jack” “nothing will stop me from being with you” “we gonna have some fun~” pinkie REALLY likes apple jack-
I really like the bait-and-switch at the end. Given that Pinkie Pie is such a perfect character to write horror fanfics about and some of the most popular MLP horror stories are centered around Pinkie, it is clever how this story sets her up as a manic only to reveal at the end she never had any plans to hurt Applejack.
" hi its me , pinkamena ...OPEN THE DOOR !!! " " wanna hang out huh huh HUH HUH !?!?" " c'mon applejack let me in " And last but not least " let me in , LET ME IN !!!" those made me laugh so hard I cried
This reminds me of that urban legend about 'black-eyed children' that come to the door. Basically, the myth boils down to the following: Don't open the door for them or you're more than screwed.
I tend to envelope myself within the story believing I'm IN the story so this got me holding my dessert eagle 357 ready to pop a cap in the next thing that sneaks up on me. ESPECIALLY PINKY.
Its time yet again for another story time with everyone's number 1 narrator TheLostNarrator! Lost I was hoping for this story! You did an amazing job yet again seriously you are without a doubt the best Narrator/Voice Actor in the entire galaxy! You are awesome! Keep it up Lost stay rad!
Very well read. Great inflection in vocal storytelling. The biggest issue I have has to go to RUclips. Het RUclips- Thanks for interrupting the tense atmosphere with ads twice. I didn't need to enjoy that immersion.
Love your readings. You should think about uploading your narrarations on podcast apps like stitcher or soundcloud. ♡♡ Heehee, that way I can secretly listen to them while at work. ^^
(Panting)....Here just in time!!!!! Early squad rollcall!!!! you and your friends impressive Mlp impressions always puts a smile on my face losty!!!! Keep up the outstanding work my friend!!! I love applejack freak out when pinkie licks her (7:11) too funny! And have Happy early Easter & Earth day !!! And My Easter & Earth day cover May there be peace from Disney the Lion guard May take a while but it’s totally worth it!!
0:17 It's a beautiful day outside, birds are singing, flowers are blooming, on days like this, Ponies like you *eyes become empty sockets* ShOuLd Be BuRnInG iN hElL *Megalovania intensifies* Don't leave me so "bonely" Pinkie (Heh I'm a weirdo)
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! DON'T EAT THE CUPCAAAAAAAAAAAAAKES! WHYYYYY is there only one bakery in Ponyville AAAAHHHH! Good story though! On this note, I'm gonna go listen to "Mare of the House" again!
Jesus Christ, Lost. This was actually very scary. Now I see why you read mostly grimdarks and creepypastas. You can really bring a chill to anyone. Say, had Mags ever considered doing fanfic readings? I'd really like to see her tackle them in the future.
Damn I really didn't see the ending coming... I mean I knew it was going to fake out and she wasn't going to go all "cupcakes" on apple jack, but I did not see them playing go fish together...
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Dark.... Comedy..?
_Oh no_
What could possibly go wrong?
🧁🍖 oh no In ded
Rogelio Paul Cavazos Sandoval lol
@@darkpince1310 everything
Its a black comedy
"Applejack has always been the least sociable." More so than Fluttershy?
"Pinkie has always been the most delicate." More so than Fluttershy?!
XD
Oh my
Inky Adres Izzain 🅱️0nl3ss
RockHoppr3 wooowww.
Well, Fluttershy isn't really unsociable, just shy, there's a difference. And Pinkie is more mentally delicate, I think
I shouldn't laugh I know this is supposed to be a dark story but the idea of Pinkie Pie being a Yandere is hilarious to me at the moment.
Oh my fiking gosh yes
It's surprisingly fitting given how easily she flies off the rails. I mean she gives aj, twilight, and rarity a run for their money on details & obsession. She rivals rd in passion for a hobby she loves and fluttershy for emotional wiplash. *(and I say this as a die hard fluttershy fan.)*
Why not? Its just a story set in a fantasy land with ponies lol
'BANG'
" hey nice to see ya! -open the door- "
that got me good
that part disturbed me so much at first😭😭
That small part is the main reason I come back to this story over and over 🤣🤣🤣🤣
You must keep your friends close and your enemies even closer. Pinkie Pie would cover both equally at the same time. XD
There was 69 likes and I ruined it
I’m pretty sure the original quote was
“You must always keep your friends close, but your enemies closer”
(Can’t remember when was the last time I heard it)
9:39 the book she chose was 50 shades of hay
Me : WHAT?
Narrator: a book about something else. . .
Me: ok but why is it called like that?
Because comedy!
Referential subversion of expectations.
The narrator speaks in a suggestive tone about Applejack's desires for a book.
As "50 Shades of Grey" is a horrible mess of abusive relationship rape-fic, calling it "50 Shades of Hay" leads us to think it's a novella on sex with the usual horse-play-on-words seen in most pony stories.
@@ashleyvanhammer3448 Actually there is no rape in it, but it does get close to it multiple times. Well, at least that's what I know from Dominic's review on it. I refuse to read it though.
It’s about 50 shades of colors for hay
So like 50 shades of grey
13:45 “I don’t know who you are, but In’t scared of y’all”
That was a lie.
Honest Applejack LIED!!
Itzia Manriquez...
She has lied on the actual SHOW a few times
Blue-Red Dare that’s because discord did something to her
Honest apple horse is a lie!
@@Magicalwolfgamer I'm pretty sure she lied to Pinkie Pie when it was her birthday
Maybe that. Why pinkie stalking her
When Pinkie muttered " best friend " it was at that moment I knew applejack was screwed.
You think she's crazy now, AJ? Just wait and see what she's like on date night with her Dashie! ;)
*C o u g h* *C o u g h*
*Never mention that ship ever again.*
*C o u g h* *C o u g h*
@Inky boy :v XD
@Inky boy :v It's funny because it's true.
@Inky teen :v Tell that to Lost and Mag XD
I’d watch that xD
If you're targeted by Pinkie Pie you have 1 of 2 options. A: Cooperate. B: Face Pinkamena. And if Rainbow Dash can't escape, I don't see Apple Jack's odds being any better and this story is the proof.
“Nods” cants find a way to disagree
7:11
“This is the taste of a liar, Applejack!”
*giorno theme earrape*
Pinkie: Notice me Applejack senpai!
Oh my gosh that thumbnail. I remember it from that one episode where Pinkie pie played the bag pipes and got all depressed when he friends asked her to stop. She was making cupcakes with Rainbow Dash, the writers knew EXACTLY what they were doing. Loved the story and voice work! Well done!
Spectacular reading Losty. This is just like the Fluttershy version of Let Me In only with a twist at the end
So, here I am. I'm not a brony, but I've been following this channel for a while now. Damn it man, your videos are just so impressive, even if I couldn't understand a lot of what was happening.
You know what? My homework can wait.
Yea, ya can do it while you're laying away at night.
I wish I could lay off my work ... but I don’t want it to pile up
same
My sleep can wait
“L-lemme l-lemme in l-let let me in!” “Hi nice to see ya! OPEN THE DOOR!-“ “apple jack apple~ jack” “nothing will stop me from being with you” “we gonna have some fun~” pinkie REALLY likes apple jack-
AJ: ‘well I have other things to take care of-‘
Also AJ a second later: ‘Did you just lick me?’
Well that escalated quickly-
“50 shades of hay, a how to book for become a successful farmer”
UMMM... YEAH SURE. THATS TOTALLY WHAT THAT BOOK IS ABOUT.
*the lost narrator uploads* Me:*clicks video like if my life depended on it*
The door encounter was the funny part for me. "L-let me in. Let me in. LET ME IN" 😂 I think pinkie took best friend a little too far
How is one able to make horror and comedy at same time?!
Watch Gremlins 1 and 2 bro XD!
Or nightmare on elm Street
Or my life
I was sure that Pinkie was gonna say "This taste. . . It's the taste of a liar!" on the second lick.
A good book! 50 shades of hay
A guide on how to be a good farmer
I thought she was already a great cow mare ❤️
The birds are singing, the flowers are blooming
On days like these, kids like you
Should be burning in [[HECC]]
Should be burning in hell
50 shades of hay...wow. Also cool story today, lost👍
17:21 "huh? Huh!? Huh!?! HUH?!" I couldn't stop laughing 😂
😂 Not the ending I was expecting, but thank Celestia. I thought for sure Pinkie was gonna make some "apple" fritters.😂
fr tho
nobody:
pinkie pie: LETME IN LETMEE INNNN!!!
Aj: have you been stalking me?
Pinkie: uh-huh
Well then 😂😂
A truly marvelous and astounding reading Lost i love it, once again you guys did such a superb and fabulous job with this project.
17:22
When her ‘huh’s were lowering pitch, I thought “she’s gonna go pinkamina ‘crazy’ pie”
"This is why i call her the pink nightmare"!
While it had a nice comical ending, the story still freaked me out. Magpie did a GREAT job on making a creepy Pinky.
FINALLY a fanfic with my kind of taste!
Yay lost narrator finally release something after a decade lmao
You know what else is Dark comedy? Pokemon lets play
I honestly had no remote clue what to follow that with and that’s what came out
I really like the bait-and-switch at the end. Given that Pinkie Pie is such a perfect character to write horror fanfics about and some of the most popular MLP horror stories are centered around Pinkie, it is clever how this story sets her up as a manic only to reveal at the end she never had any plans to hurt Applejack.
L-l-let me in, l-let me i-in- LET ME IN!!!😂😂😂😂
Just Pinkie (instead of Just Monika)
@@Frostblitz96 *Just Pinkie Pie song intensifies*
18:13
XD
It was adorable but also perverish(maybe it's just me?)
And also really funny.
" hi its me , pinkamena ...OPEN THE DOOR !!! "
" wanna hang out huh huh HUH HUH !?!?"
" c'mon applejack let me in "
And last but not least
" let me in , LET ME IN !!!"
those made me laugh so hard I cried
Wonderful as always and it just flipping started.
13:02 you got that right. This could become a Grimdark story at any second!
When I get grounded for nothing and they lock me in my room 15:33
This reminds me of that urban legend about 'black-eyed children' that come to the door. Basically, the myth boils down to the following:
Don't open the door for them or you're more than screwed.
The scene in the house was pretty cliche, but this was a really interesting read. :) And Magpie, your performance was quite marvelous! :D
“And it caused her to forget to lock the window..”
NOOO
Doctor: 50 shades of hay doesnt exist.
50 shades of hay:
Darn thought it was gonna end with...
Pinkie: now come here and get in this cake!!!
I tend to envelope myself within the story believing I'm IN the story so this got me holding my dessert eagle 357 ready to pop a cap in the next thing that sneaks up on me. ESPECIALLY PINKY.
That... That wasn't what I was expecting when Dark and Comedy are put together... I like it
amazing fanfic reading as always love it! pinkie pie can be creepy when she wants to be O_O (this kinda gave me chills) but still MLP forever!
I never shook so hard or laughed so sincerely.
Your readings are awesome Losty!
Man if you look closely at the window u can see pinkey pie. Also great job lost and mag can't wait till the next narration !
The juxtapositions in the story are so sudden they're almost whiplash inducing 😅
This is a good one. Pinkie has always been psychotic or as everyone would say "Delicate"
Loved it, good job Lost and Mag!
Its time yet again for another story time with everyone's number 1 narrator TheLostNarrator!
Lost I was hoping for this story! You did an amazing job yet again seriously you are without a doubt the best Narrator/Voice Actor in the entire galaxy! You are awesome! Keep it up Lost stay rad!
Very well read. Great inflection in vocal storytelling.
The biggest issue I have has to go to RUclips. Het RUclips- Thanks for interrupting the tense atmosphere with ads twice. I didn't need to enjoy that immersion.
Love your readings. You should think about uploading your narrarations on podcast apps like stitcher or soundcloud. ♡♡ Heehee, that way I can secretly listen to them while at work. ^^
I actually offer mp3 downloads of all of the readings in the description of each video :)
50 shades of Hay, a book on how to become a better farmer, sure, that's totally likely.
Great fantastic reading Lost i did enjoyed your fanfic
Eeeyyyyyyyy!!! :D
Your fanfic’s are always amazing!!! :O
Ora ora ora
17:59
I swear that's exactly what my sisters sound like when I have a friend over lol
(Panting)....Here just in time!!!!!
Early squad rollcall!!!! you and your friends impressive Mlp impressions always puts a smile on my face
losty!!!! Keep up the outstanding work my friend!!! I love applejack freak out when pinkie licks her (7:11) too funny! And have Happy early Easter & Earth day !!!
And My Easter & Earth day cover May there be peace from Disney the Lion guard May take a while but it’s totally worth it!!
Now that ending was unexpected. Great job 🙂👍
Wow, it's really felt weird when listening Dark story after all of those Grimdark.
Superb!
Demonitize bots: do I smell... NON-KID FRIENDLY CONTENT! REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
comedy grows dark
A dark comedy, this could only mean one thing......I forgot....
6 views, 9 likes, and even more comments? RUclips, you're drunk.
From the 50 shades of hay to the ending i've been on a rollercoaster of emotions...
Hey, this wasn’t as bad as I thought it was going to be!
Hi blue!
I was having a panic attack listening to this to find out the end wasn't a horror story
pinkie is me when my friend has cookies, coffee, and pocky
Awww nice ending :3
0:17 It's a beautiful day outside, birds are singing, flowers are blooming, on days like this, Ponies like you *eyes become empty sockets* ShOuLd Be BuRnInG iN hElL
*Megalovania intensifies*
Don't leave me so "bonely" Pinkie
(Heh I'm a weirdo)
Damn it I was expecting a jump scare
Me finding this: Eh… not looking for something like that rn. Maybe later.
*Realizes it’s by TheLostNarrator:* * click *
Yo, you got me spooked. Why did I watch this at 2:00 in the morning?
Kinda Like "Its Cold Out Here" When Fluttershy was looking at applebloom everynight but in this its funny.
I love me some Dark humour! XD
I like the voice actors they did a good job
Pinkie: Hey nice to see ya! OPEN THE DOOR
Me if I was Applejack: OH HELL NO-
Hmm; A story about Pinkie pie terrorising and stalking Applejack...
Seems like comedy to me
50 Shades of Hay? Hiw to for....... farming? You sure she doesn't just like reading things like that and wants to cover it up?
From creepy to funny and then a happy ending. Lol!
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH! DON'T EAT THE CUPCAAAAAAAAAAAAAKES!
WHYYYYY is there only one bakery in Ponyville AAAAHHHH!
Good story though! On this note, I'm gonna go listen to "Mare of the House" again!
Jesus Christ, Lost. This was actually very scary. Now I see why you read mostly grimdarks and creepypastas. You can really bring a chill to anyone. Say, had Mags ever considered doing fanfic readings? I'd really like to see her tackle them in the future.
I’m sorry FIFTY SHADES OF HAY?!!!
I thought pinkie was going to turn her into a cupcake
Ooh, I'm chilly and it's still warm in my house
Ohh this is so good. Both of you are the best at this
...ahhh?
didn't see that one coming😂
you really got me🤣
*Applejake reading Fifty shades of hay*
Me: Wait what!? 🤣
9:39 we all know what she was actually reading 😏
Hmm “Someone taking what someone said literally Cliche” I feel like I’ve seen this before
Anyway good story Lost
Damn I really didn't see the ending coming... I mean I knew it was going to fake out and she wasn't going to go all "cupcakes" on apple jack, but I did not see them playing go fish together...
The mane 6: 🌟 twilight sparkle, 🎈 pinkie pie, 🌩️ rainbow dash, 🍎 applejack, 💎 rarity, 🦋 fluttershy
Applejack
Applejack
*manly voice* APPLEJACK