I love the fact you can literally see the desperate, almost broken, glee on frozen Spamton’s face. You can tell the artist definitely knew how happy Spamton NEO was in his high defensive mode until he saw Kris call for Noelle like in the game. Then she actually appeared and with that, Spamton panicked quickly to get Kris’ soul before being frozen to death. Just within SECONDS too. Jesus.
i feel more bad for mags because i believe mags took it the hardest but didnt want the others to worry,and seeing spamtons frozen corpse possibly was the breaking point for him,because i think mags and spamton were close before spamton became corrupted puppet
When I actually thought about it for a second, I realized just how gruesome the snow grave route is. I couldn't imagine the horror of seeing your friends in a block of ice, just stuck there, with fear as their dying expression.
oh no, it's actually worse, they are alive, and they see everything, they can't interact, or do anything, and are so very cold; source? Only snowgrave actually plays a death animation
there is something really amazing about seeing a landmark scene from a series or game in a new format, seeing Spanton frozen after the game is over is insane and I really wish I had a statue of that scene.
@@jollyjadentnt7963 its the law of "getting over". You KNOW it was a bitch to fight him, you KNOW his personality, and thats hes the last person to show direct fear, especially like this. And yet... here he is. Frozen. Trapped. Fear. And a final desperate attempt to get out. And since we see it from a bystander, we KNOW how SCREWED he would be, should he have been unlucky enough to get in your, and therefore noelle's way. It really puts everything YOU did to all these people in context. YOU were the one that made noelle freeze everyone the second you got the chanse. YOU were the one that that gave spamton g spamton the oppertunity to become [[GOD]], YOU were the one that trapped all these people in the dark world, doomed to a slow and agonizing death with a 100% fatality rate. And YOU corrupted noelle, making her believe this is NORMAL! Berdly is dead, we dont know what happened to roulx card, and everyone else is doomed to turn to stone. Good job jackass... hope you are proud of yourself.
Imagine walking down the street, while everything in slowly falling apart, people are in a panic, then you see the body of someone who you used to be friends with, and you can clearly tell that there was a struggle
Magson probably had no idea that Spamton helped out Noelle become as powerful as she was, so to him, he could probably think that spamton desperately tried to stop them from sealing the fountain.
It wasn’t just spamton either. The pink one also had a hand in the city’s downfall. Despite how that interaction ended, he still willingly offered noelle the ring to make her stronger
Don’t forget how Spamton enabled the Player to go on the snowgrave slaughter on the city to begin with since he wanted to take over the city and queen’s manor for himself aka Mags and the other addisons don’t know that city’s half frozen because of him
@@TOMAAAAAAAAAAAA No he wasn’t at all, he’s only trying to stop the player cause they were getting in way of his plan to take over not because they done horrible things on snowgrave and sealing the fountain means he’d be trapped in a lifeless world that everyone will turn stone thus a world that he can’t rule over
Bruhhhhhh I love how Magson doesn’t even have any lines yet u can still *feel* his despair, anyway great job! I love how u brought this comic to life :DD
@@ollievalentine4239 the addisons don’t have official names, but the artist of this comic has made other art where they gave the addisons names. Blue is Magson, yellow is Videon, orange is Payton, and pink is Clickon :)
Not sure if I’m interpreting this correctly, as there’s many ways it could be, but I feel like Magson is not only feeling despair, but also guilt. It’s either due to him seeing Spamton NEO, that perhaps he became that monstrous form because he and the other addisons abandoned him. Or... He is feeling guilty due to him and the other Addisons turning their back on him, yet he still tried stopping the lightners, and by extension, saving the city.
@@N2Jay Yeah, Spammy was definitely *NOT* a good person. At least, definitely not by the end of Ch.2. Still... would a life under him be preferable to an eternal death? Maybe? Though maybe the Roaring would come anyway.
@@alexis_electronic well, "NOT a good person" is in the eyes of the beholder, yes if you go the normal route everyone gets saved and recruited to ralsei's kingdom and you avoid turmoil, but in the snowgrave route, although he's not doing it for the people, he is inadvertedly saving the whole place from not only an icy grave, but a stone tomb as most citizens of cyber world are frozen and lost for what to do after it all. In the eyes of everyone trapped in cybers world Spamton is their guardian angel, who cares it was selfish, he was saving everyone. I got something else, it's weird because Kris isn't exactly able to save everyone in their either, because it's the LIBRABYS computer lab, so he can't just take everything.
@@GabrielAndCo-c2k Well it is new, and it does add an interesting element to the story, kinda like those pick your own plot stories, but that will not change how I felt afterwards.
I was so familiar with this comment that I was thinking about which character's line it was, and I was very surprised and got goosebumps when I found out that it was Chaos King's line. :o This line is now well-aged like wine. An underrated line. Now that there's a snowgrave route, if you substitute that line into a snowgrave route situation, it really fits.
Jesus Christ, seeing spamton like that gives me an emotion I can't describe. Edit: I suppose it may be a combination of dread, sorrow and desperation. It looks like Spamton was trying so hard to stop kris, we can see by his pose he was so desperate to stop them, but ended up frozen.
i always seem to forget just how big spamton neo is and the fact that noelle dealt 1800 dammage to him with a single iceshock when we could only do 10 was noelle holding back the entirety of the game?
@@noobfart Well... I think it only doesn't say that "Noelle became stronger" after the Berdly fight to keep the terrifying atmosphere. Maybe tapping into her Snowgrave ability made her realise just how much of a destructive force she is? We can't really know.
I love the small detail that Spamton's strings are frozen to the ground in the last panel, as if to show that he's completely done. Edit; Also could mean that whatever was able to bind Spamton, may not even be able to go against the player and Noelle.
also the " snowgrave " that ended spamton wasn't a snowgrave it was a ice shock Also i have a feeling snowgrave is a more of a status attack that deal damage attack since we did not see a damage indicator when she used snowgrave
Damn, the scene of Mag just.. looking at Spamton NEO really got to me. I mean think about it. These two had worked together for a good portion of their lives. And now? The whole world’s in distress. Remaining Darkners are attempting to open the fountain again. And now Mag is looking at his former coworker, looking as if he had transcended to god, who was frozen solid. You happy now? Your undying curiosity has been fulfilled.. *And an entire race of people is going to die.*
@@shawermus They don't know that, though. They have no way of comprehending the light world, and even when they return to being inanimate objects, their consciousness essentially ends. They can't perceive an afterlife, from their perspective they really do just die. It doesn't change anything if they're dying or becoming inanimate objects- there really isn't a difference at all.
The most horrifying part of this is that the fountain is still sealed on the normal route. This heavily implies that the chaos king was right. After all ,there was no town in the first chapter who’s to say the majority of the card kingdom didn’t die when the fountain was sealed.
I mean why sealing the fountain means darkners gonna die? Darkness always mention their past and King and Queen clearly met before so they are definitely alive even if the fountain is sealed
In the normal route [The SOUL in Kris] probably just took an old laptop or something to castle town, everyone seems to be there, I just assumed castle town is way bigger than we see in game like how we never see where most of the monsters in undertale actually live because we can't get behind the castle where there is probably more, like in undertale when you never even see where the monster kid lives, or at least you can't get there, [The SOUL in Kris] requited NO ONE in this route so they had no way to get there, I so I just assumed this would only happen in the weird route, and in the first 10 minutes of chapter 2 [The SOUL in Kris] takes all of card kingdom to castle town, and you can't tell me they got Roules and not the addisons when they did the same at the END of chapter 2.
This is beautiful. I love how you painted the Cyber World in the Snowgrave, after the fountain have been sealed. Also loved that huge Spamton Neo at the end, frozen in his last attempt to fight. I love this so much, great work
i think i should not say this, as i think is obvious, but this is more like "What if the dark worlds didn't despawn after you sealed the fountain" because in deltarune after you seal a fountain, that world just dissapears (also, in case someone thinks that the dark world survives at least a day after the fountain is sealed, i think not, because King's Castle was erased in less than a day)
@@electricx2.5.02 now that you say that, in the game, they only come with you if you spare them, probably meaning that the ones that don't come with you are probably dead or stone, because they decided to stay in the cyber world
Here Spamton was kind of a hero, sure he was stopping the player for his own purpose , but no matter how bad Spamton could be, he was still better than the player and Noelle, or whatever was left of her. He really was population's only hope, and he would have won, if it wasn't for Noelle.
@@leeeshizzy4296 Yeah Spamton was just gonna kill the kris and rule as a tyrant once everything was over. Still, he was the only one who even had a chance of stopping the fountain from being sealed.
You can see the fear in his face, it’s so horrifying, especially considering how he was actually trying to save everyone by stoping Kris at sealing the fountain
imagine being blue, hearing that a friend you abandoned has taken over the world, and now everyone is suddenly turning into the stone. You went to check of the friend was doing well, and you see him being frozen to death
bright’s stuff is so good, their version of the addisons is probably my favorite every time at the end of this comic I get chills bc I can only imagine what blue is thinking, bc like that’s obviously his old friend, but somethings gone terribly wrong
Dang. Making me feel emotions I didn't even know were possible with that heart-wrenching reveal of Spamton. I'll just be crying in a corner, don't mind me.
The thing about games is that most of the time [at least when I play], you don't really think about what you might be leaving behind. Sure, it might just be a game, but if you take that aspect out and look as the NPCs as actual beings... The devastation you might leave is kinda...
For some reason, Swatch reminds me of Seam. He accepts the end, but doesn't do anything about it. On the other hand, he tries to make the end as best as he can for everyone, giving them food and shelter in their last moments. Perhaps a bit more like Seam before he realized nothing he did mattered. After all, choices don't seem to matter here, hm?
In its own twisted way in snowgrave spamton is the hero trying too stop you.....the VILLIAN. Edit: I mean by the npcs/"enemy's" perspective,like the Addisons
@@Ashuri_Vodka Yep, that's another difference between Snowgrave and UT Genocide. Genocide had you as the villain, and the ones who stood up to you as the heroes. Snowgrave only has villains and victims. You continue down a dark path which essentially drains the world of any relevant good influence...
The feeling one would get when the last hope for survival is a psychotic spam salesman… and that last hope spam salesman is frozen dead in front of you in a position of opposition and fear. Damn.
I like this. Like some concept after a snowgrave, yeah. Like this, with minor characters. Although if the fountain was successfully re-opened, Kris and everyone else would return too because the room became a Dark World again... assuming they didn't leave in time. One thing I have to ask, what about Sweet, Cap'n and K-K? Or the Cyber Field? Surely at least the musical trio should be here.
Take them with you or leave them to die It doesn't matter what you did if you didn't do pacifist then whoever you fight is stuck there until their demise.
I mean they had memories before the fountain so they probably stay alive in some manner, but if you just attack one they're all alone (but nubert makes them company so do they need anything else?)
THE ENDING GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS. The Deal Gone Wrong was SUCH a good placement. Thats exactly how I imagined it when I saw the comic on Twitter. What a fantastic job, when I heard the song fading in I instantly knew and I gasped and my eyes widened, I was amazed!!! OH MY GOD I just can't, this is too perfect
I...I haven't through of this.Just to think that every other person we meet other the the Queen, are just stuck there, basically on there final hours.Just the idea that the addisons are just going to lose everything they done, and see an old friend dead, is just gratifying
HOLY CRAP I HAVE NO WORDS!!! The fact that none of the Darkners are actually survivors, but they have just one more hour to live is SIMPLY TERRIFYING!! Seeing Swatch so depressive and indifferent with the situation and Yellow Addison just going crazy, trying to laugh through the whole situation is SO SAD!! I was already shocked, but when Magson saw frozen Spamton I went NOOOOOOOOOOOOO- AND I ALMOST FORGOT TO MENTION THE PHENOMENAL VOICE ACTING!! THE COMIC IS AWESOME AND YOU GUYS JUST MADE IT BETTER!! 💖💖💖💖💖
The Colorful Butler was incredibly calm. Maybe because he knew he would be one of the very few souls spared in a Geno Run since he's a shop owner. (The one kind of monster a Geno Route character CAN'T murder. Look at Gerson and Burgerpants from Undertale) The Addisons could go either way since only like ONE survives making it to Castle Town in the end game. Ambyu-Lance and Virovirokun? They're screwed and they know it. Not just because their fellow monsters are frozen to death, but because there is no possible way to bring them to Castle Town. The only thing that kept them alive and filled with personality...was the Dark Fountain. Also interesting is the use of THOSE two monsters specifically. Since the only time we see them together, it's implied they have a rivalry. They've put it aside to do something pointless than is bigger than themselves.
THIS DUB!! I SWOON!! Oh my gosh the voice acting in this is absolutely amazing! It really made me feel for all these poor guys. Thank you for making this awesome dub for us all!!
aaaaand this is EXACTLY why i’m not doing snowgrave! amazing voices by the way they fit really well! Edit 2/16/22: so I changed my mind and did the route…
I honestly wish that there would be a part two, I really wanna see what would happen next. Anyhow, this was amazing to watch, and the voices and comic were awesome
Seeing Spamton Frozen was very damn sad but it was so well drawn.. this comic deserves an award and I hope a part 2 comes out. You did a great job voicing it!
i think this comic is one of the most realistic portrayals of the snowgrave route. a cynical, scary ending. leaving everyone to die. we need more comics like this.
I was wondering why I recognized the background music, but I quickly recognized it. Destiny 2 Soundtrack Track 37: Voyage It's the character select screen background ambience. I absolutely did not expect to hear it in a Deltarune comic dub, but a good choice anyway.
This idea, that Spamton tried to save everyone, but failed...It just blow up my mind! I started to looing at Spamton from another perspective! And I love this perspective!
A thing I just remembered is the difference in Susie’s dialogue between the normal run and Snowgrave. In the normal run, since all the Darkners head to the castle town when the fountain is sealed, you’ve both saved the light world and the Darkners from dying due to the fountain being closed. But if you do Snowgrave, Susie will instead say that it doesn’t feel like you saved the world. Which makes sense considering although you did save the light world, you’ve also left all the Darkners in the cyber world to die.
The fact that Spamton started this, gave to Kris the thorn ring. Then he become NEO. And in the end he try to protect everything. His fountain, his city. In the end, he didn’t know but he almost save the cyber world. And he was the only hope to save it. Now the hope is gone. This comic it’s just great it show us, what our (the player) decisions can do. You’r dub fits perfect and the music that you choose for the Spamton scene was perfect, it felt that all the hope to be save is gone. I liked it .Great job.
He wasn’t trying to protect the city, he just didn’t want Kris to seal the fountain the moment before his victory. He was trying to stop Kris from stopping him.
@@everyonegetselfears1444 true but the soul us we started everything we forced noelle to do this but when spamton neo came in mind he had everything but he didn't know when he took the soul everything would've been saved and now he's a big shot again
@@Space_geep True. Accidental hero. You know what, Imma go search for an AU where he got the SOUL and let’s see what happened to our favorite blue enby. If I don’t find it I’ll FUCKING MAKE IT MYSELF.
Everything about this is amazing! Every tiny detail adds on significantly, whether people notice them or not. Everything about it conveys the emotions of the scene perfectly- a sense of pure dread and hopelessness, yet somehow beautiful at the same time. The dialogue is perfectly fitting, VAs say their lines as if they were actually feeling the same emotions as their characters, the background's dull greys combined with the character's bright highlights, the music perfectly conveying everything... It's amazing. I don't think I could find something better put together if I tried.
the frozen Spamton NEO part really made me feel uncomfortable, and kind of sad too, it's like he just tried to stop a greater evil, but he ended up unfairly frozen, you can see his agony in that static frozen face.
Well we had to do what we had to do, Seal fountain. The thing Is that we Are evil only if we let people there die. Also idk about spamton being "infairly frozen" He was thé one who gave us that ring after all. Plus i think He knew well to much what we were about to do with it
THIS IS A MASTER PIECE! Your voices hit very well. The despair, the hopeless, it's just awesome! That frozen Spamton... it really hurt a lot, the Snowgrave route it's really dark like this. Incredible job! 💖
god imagine what was going through Mag's head, Spamton, the friend he and the others abandoned out of envy and jealousy filled the mansion with traps (pipis), ventured into the basement of the mansion, got the old robot body out, and stood in the way of kris, all as a last ditch attempt to save the dark world and its people. Imagine the guilt he must feel.
Godddd the music and ice sfx really made the end hit much much harder. Ever since I saw this comic on tumblr I’ve been enamored with how grim it feels, and this dub made it pop even more!!
One of the survivors yelling “this can’t be the end” desperately while the horrifying imagery of Spamton’s final lunge at kris looms over Mags, and the music kicks in. This is quality shit right here.
the second-to-last made me shudder a little the first time i saw it but just. the desperate wail before he’s revealed while deal gone wrong plays low in the background? genuinely chilling. not to mention all the voices are just perfect. good job
Can you imagine how horrifying it would be to see the corpse of your dead friend with such a look on his face? I can only imagine what all's going through the blue guy's head.
The rest of the darkners would look to spamton as a fallen hero who had a desperate attempt to stop kris and noelle. Using an ancient power, yet he failed.
Ah, I remember another dub of this. Your take is beautiful, but just as horrifying. I'm subscribing. Edit: The instrumental Deal Gone Wrong is amazing.
This is amazingly done, the acting and editing are so polished, pretty much how I imagined it while drawing the comic~ Excellent job!
You did an excellent job too.
It's funking amazing!
I wonder if spamton Will Ever get out the ice i feel that he’s still alive just in stasis
sometimes I forget you're an undertale/deltarune fan bright LMAO
Man you're feeding every fandom a 5 course meal every time you post
holy fuck that was awesome
I love the fact you can literally see the desperate, almost broken, glee on frozen Spamton’s face. You can tell the artist definitely knew how happy Spamton NEO was in his high defensive mode until he saw Kris call for Noelle like in the game. Then she actually appeared and with that, Spamton panicked quickly to get Kris’ soul before being frozen to death. Just within SECONDS too. Jesus.
thats damn scary
i feel more bad for mags because i believe mags took it the hardest but didnt want the others to worry,and seeing spamtons frozen corpse possibly was the breaking point for him,because i think mags and spamton were close before spamton became corrupted puppet
You can even see how it happened
his feet
his torso
and with the farthest he could possibly go his right arm
@@Shkumped damn, your right, it does look like that.
Also, is it just me, or does spamton in that pose almost look like some sort of Sphinx?
Wow you got all that? I just thought it looked cool. I guess there are 2 types of people in this world
When I actually thought about it for a second, I realized just how gruesome the snow grave route is. I couldn't imagine the horror of seeing your friends in a block of ice, just stuck there, with fear as their dying expression.
@Лисица Арава. It's fine, don't let grammar freaks ruin it for you, broken English is very easy to understand
@Лисица Арава. Cool!
oh no, it's actually worse, they are alive, and they see everything, they can't interact, or do anything, and are so very cold; source? Only snowgrave actually plays a death animation
Seeing Spamton’s frozen over corpse with the dramatic version of big shot was horrifying in an oddly beautiful way
I feel an emotion that isn’t like any when I saw that scene
I think it is because of the art
there is something really amazing about seeing a landmark scene from a series or game in a new format, seeing Spanton frozen after the game is over is insane and I really wish I had a statue of that scene.
I'm not gonna lie, his fearful face *really* creeps me out...
@@jollyjadentnt7963 its the law of "getting over". You KNOW it was a bitch to fight him, you KNOW his personality, and thats hes the last person to show direct fear, especially like this. And yet... here he is. Frozen. Trapped. Fear. And a final desperate attempt to get out. And since we see it from a bystander, we KNOW how SCREWED he would be, should he have been unlucky enough to get in your, and therefore noelle's way. It really puts everything YOU did to all these people in context. YOU were the one that made noelle freeze everyone the second you got the chanse. YOU were the one that that gave spamton g spamton the oppertunity to become [[GOD]], YOU were the one that trapped all these people in the dark world, doomed to a slow and agonizing death with a 100% fatality rate. And YOU corrupted noelle, making her believe this is NORMAL! Berdly is dead, we dont know what happened to roulx card, and everyone else is doomed to turn to stone.
Good job jackass... hope you are proud of yourself.
Imagine walking down the street, while everything in slowly falling apart, people are in a panic, then you see the body of someone who you used to be friends with, and you can clearly tell that there was a struggle
Imagine describing whole video
@@vdvd4826 imagine describing another person describing a video
@@demonspawn4511 imagine imagining. can't imagine.
@@demonspawn4511 well whoever did this he sure is a genius
@@vdvd4826 imagine assuming its a guy
Magson probably had no idea that Spamton helped out Noelle become as powerful as she was, so to him, he could probably think that spamton desperately tried to stop them from sealing the fountain.
It wasn’t just spamton either. The pink one also had a hand in the city’s downfall. Despite how that interaction ended, he still willingly offered noelle the ring to make her stronger
Don’t forget how Spamton enabled the Player to go on the snowgrave slaughter on the city to begin with since he wanted to take over the city and queen’s manor for himself aka Mags and the other addisons don’t know that city’s half frozen because of him
@@toughpuff1799 According to brightgoat's headcanon the pink one's name is Clickon, Click for short
Wait, wasn't spamton trying to stop them from dealing the fountain?
@@TOMAAAAAAAAAAAA No he wasn’t at all, he’s only trying to stop the player cause they were getting in way of his plan to take over not because they done horrible things on snowgrave and sealing the fountain means he’d be trapped in a lifeless world that everyone will turn stone thus a world that he can’t rule over
There needs to be more comics about some of these minor characters, they have LOADS of potential.
The Ambyulance that can’t poke
The ViroViroKun that can’t spread viruses
The Werewire that never needed a plug
These could all be potential characters
The addisons have loads of fan content on the spamton side of tumblr (my natural habitat)
@@odditycat2716 of course they do…
Honestly yeah!
i couldn’t agree more with ya, but they really have no SAVE-ation
That musical inclusion of Deal Gone Wrong when Spamton NEO's corpse showed...
That's powerful stuff.
It really was a deal gone wrong...
Wait they DIE? I thought they just go into suspended animationlike in discipicable me- that makes it much more nostalgic
the deal wasn’t the only thing that went wrong
yeah... everything went wrong lmao
@@teatime_yt7868 Canonically, spamton turned into a scarf in both routes. But I'm sure his mecha body was left behind.
Bruhhhhhh I love how Magson doesn’t even have any lines yet u can still *feel* his despair, anyway great job! I love how u brought this comic to life :DD
He just looks depressed
How do you know each of the Addison's name
Was there dialogue I missed?
@@ollievalentine4239 the addisons don’t have official names, but the artist of this comic has made other art where they gave the addisons names. Blue is Magson, yellow is Videon, orange is Payton, and pink is Clickon :)
@@toloveie that's so cool though
Im sure his first words are "Spamton?"
It was an honor to play Swatch.
Sincerely From TheSK.
Oh my God you really nailed the voice! i liked it, Swatch is one of my favorite characters in the game
The voice for him was amazing! You did a great job on it!
Honestly the voice could have been way better
@@Thatdamnflower4282oh hush with your negativity, like you could do any better
swatch's sober statements in the beginning reminded me of the fallout bad karma ending narration.
sets the mood perfectly good job
Not sure if I’m interpreting this correctly, as there’s many ways it could be, but I feel like Magson is not only feeling despair, but also guilt.
It’s either due to him seeing Spamton NEO, that perhaps he became that monstrous form because he and the other addisons abandoned him.
Or...
He is feeling guilty due to him and the other Addisons turning their back on him, yet he still tried stopping the lightners, and by extension, saving the city.
I wonder if they realize that Spamton tried to stop Kris from closing the fountain cause it would affects his reign
@@N2Jay Yeah, Spammy was definitely *NOT* a good person. At least, definitely not by the end of Ch.2. Still... would a life under him be preferable to an eternal death? Maybe? Though maybe the Roaring would come anyway.
@@alexis_electronic well, "NOT a good person" is in the eyes of the beholder, yes if you go the normal route everyone gets saved and recruited to ralsei's kingdom and you avoid turmoil, but in the snowgrave route, although he's not doing it for the people, he is inadvertedly saving the whole place from not only an icy grave, but a stone tomb as most citizens of cyber world are frozen and lost for what to do after it all. In the eyes of everyone trapped in cybers world Spamton is their guardian angel, who cares it was selfish, he was saving everyone. I got something else, it's weird because Kris isn't exactly able to save everyone in their either, because it's the LIBRABYS computer lab, so he can't just take everything.
I like to imagine it's a small amount of surprise from seeing his old friend Spamton frozen with a look of fear on his face
@@stumonster6091 How… [Refined]
Damn, if I felt bad for doing this route before, I feel even worse now.
Wasn’t it worth it? Freezing everyone? I enjoyed it
I enjoyed seeing spamton try to stop you
@@GabrielAndCo-c2k Well it is new, and it does add an interesting element to the story, kinda like those pick your own plot stories, but that will not change how I felt afterwards.
Or during the route.
@@michelleswondrousvideos2784 I hope people will stop going for the bad routes
I love how at the last dramatic, yet horrifying moment, Mags realizes that his old pal Spamton, tried to save everyone.
The shocked look of disbelief.
well, not quite save everyone, as he enabled the carnage himself,
but he *was* their last hope.
“You left them behind, just like how you left us”
- Chaos king
@@KONO-DIO-DA-c6f 2021
Chaos king i wasn't evil i just ran away from those swatchlings so they didn't get recruited, am i evil for fleeing
Whether intentional or not, you left them for dead.
I was so familiar with this comment that I was thinking about which character's line it was, and I was very surprised and got goosebumps when I found out that it was Chaos King's line. :o This line is now well-aged like wine. An underrated line.
Now that there's a snowgrave route, if you substitute that line into a snowgrave route situation, it really fits.
Jesus Christ, seeing spamton like that gives me an emotion I can't describe.
Edit: I suppose it may be a combination of dread, sorrow and desperation. It looks like Spamton was trying so hard to stop kris, we can see by his pose he was so desperate to stop them, but ended up frozen.
It's horrifying, sad, disturbing, and satisfying at the same time
It makes me feel the emotion that makes me say "nooooooooo"
The word your looking for is "depression."
Nostalgia?
puns aside, it literally gives me a shiver down my spine
Jesus Christ, how horrifying.
Shut up
@@spineratack8470 no u fidget spinner pfp
@@spineratack8470 no u spinner man
@@spineratack8470 please spin your way out of here, or don't ackt like troll wheel
i cant think of any better fidget spinner jokes or roast, gimme some
Spine-chilling... I had never really thought about the consequences of a Snowgrave route for the darkners who remained
basically everyone
Ha, spine-CHILLING
Dang you can feel the dread off of Magson when he sees Spamton NEO frozen to death
He's not dead Spamtons mind is there still in a disk waiting forever
@@krismemer5924 since you get the puppet scarf after defeating him I'd assume he just leaves the neo corpse to go with Kris
@@the_real_aa1 thats the non snowgrave route. Since he's frozen he just lays there forever
@@krismemer5924 you still get the scarf in the weird route
i always seem to forget just how big spamton neo is
and the fact that noelle dealt 1800 dammage to him with a single iceshock when we could only do 10
was noelle holding back the entirety of the game?
LV bruh
@@maxpiggybrawlstars7796 she didnt gain any lv after the berdly fight where she does 1800 dammage with a spell that normally costs 200tp
@@noobfart Well... I think it only doesn't say that "Noelle became stronger" after the Berdly fight to keep the terrifying atmosphere.
Maybe tapping into her Snowgrave ability made her realise just how much of a destructive force she is? We can't really know.
1-ThornRing
2-Emotions(Characters seem to deal more damage in battle if either one is emotional. Susie vs lancer,toriel vs frisk,kris vs spamton..)
It was also a surprise attack. As we know from Undertale those usually deal tons of damage
I love the small detail that Spamton's strings are frozen to the ground in the last panel, as if to show that he's completely done.
Edit; Also could mean that whatever was able to bind Spamton, may not even be able to go against the player and Noelle.
'...strong enough to break your own strings...'
The sight of solid-frozen puppet boi Spamton is horrifying and sad at the same time.
he was free ( free of his strings ) but at what cost?
That slowdowned theme tho hitted harder than that final snowgrave attack
that violin and slowed down " deal gone wrong " mmm
Neo may be known for it's defense
But this... THIS WILL BE KNOWN FOR IT'S HIGH ATTACK
also the " snowgrave " that ended spamton wasn't a snowgrave it was a ice shock
Also i have a feeling snowgrave is a more of a status attack that deal damage attack since we did not see a damage indicator when she used snowgrave
Damn, the scene of Mag just.. looking at Spamton NEO really got to me.
I mean think about it. These two had worked together for a good portion of their lives. And now?
The whole world’s in distress. Remaining Darkners are attempting to open the fountain again.
And now Mag is looking at his former coworker, looking as if he had transcended to god, who was frozen solid.
You happy now? Your undying curiosity has been fulfilled..
*And an entire race of people is going to die.*
Well considering that it is a dark fountain what gives them lives...
Technically they just become computers again
in a bideogame
@@shawermus They don't know that, though. They have no way of comprehending the light world, and even when they return to being inanimate objects, their consciousness essentially ends. They can't perceive an afterlife, from their perspective they really do just die. It doesn't change anything if they're dying or becoming inanimate objects- there really isn't a difference at all.
@@leeeshizzy4296 Yeah we know, doesn't mean we can't be curious.
A small price to pay to debunk matpats theory that is just susie and kris playing
The ending actually gave me the chills holy wow.
(Ba-dum-tss?)
*chills*
The most horrifying part of this is that the fountain is still sealed on the normal route. This heavily implies that the chaos king was right. After all ,there was no town in the first chapter who’s to say the majority of the card kingdom didn’t die when the fountain was sealed.
We clearly see Kris taking the entire card kingdom population to Ralsei’s kingdom in the first 10 minutes
I mean why sealing the fountain means darkners gonna die? Darkness always mention their past and King and Queen clearly met before so they are definitely alive even if the fountain is sealed
@@marsh3535 they also mention that the fountain gives them life and form to their land
"The fountain is made from pure darkness, all darkners can live there." Yea, as appose to the other fountains made of 20% darkness, 80% plastic
In the normal route [The SOUL in Kris] probably just took an old laptop or something to castle town, everyone seems to be there, I just assumed castle town is way bigger than we see in game like how we never see where most of the monsters in undertale actually live because we can't get behind the castle where there is probably more, like in undertale when you never even see where the monster kid lives, or at least you can't get there, [The SOUL in Kris] requited NO ONE in this route so they had no way to get there, I so I just assumed this would only happen in the weird route, and in the first 10 minutes of chapter 2 [The SOUL in Kris] takes all of card kingdom to castle town, and you can't tell me they got Roules and not the addisons when they did the same at the END of chapter 2.
This is beautiful. I love how you painted the Cyber World in the Snowgrave, after the fountain have been sealed. Also loved that huge Spamton Neo at the end, frozen in his last attempt to fight. I love this so much, great work
bruh, they didn't make the comic, they voiced over it.
@@Aya_32125 you're right! I've understand from prev post that this was made by them.
Anyways, still both beautiful comic and dub
i think i should not say this, as i think is obvious, but this is more like "What if the dark worlds didn't despawn after you sealed the fountain" because in deltarune after you seal a fountain, that world just dissapears (also, in case someone thinks that the dark world survives at least a day after the fountain is sealed, i think not, because King's Castle was erased in less than a day)
Wait meaning in the game when the fountain got sealed all if the living things got killed or turned to stone?
@@electricx2.5.02 now that you say that, in the game, they only come with you if you spare them, probably meaning that the ones that don't come with you are probably dead or stone, because they decided to stay in the cyber world
Here Spamton was kind of a hero, sure he was stopping the player for his own purpose , but no matter how bad Spamton could be, he was still better than the player and Noelle, or whatever was left of her. He really was population's only hope, and he would have won, if it wasn't for Noelle.
ok but Spamton gave you the thorn ring in the first place
@@leeeshizzy4296 Yeah Spamton was just gonna kill the kris and rule as a tyrant once everything was over. Still, he was the only one who even had a chance of stopping the fountain from being sealed.
@@leeeshizzy4296 as-well as encourage you to murder people
@@ThatGuyRNA we love him because he's terrible
@@RelicQuadrangle I love him because he's cute and I can empathize with his backstory.
The frozen Spamton at the end literally gave me Chills😨
haha, chills
You can see the fear in his face, it’s so horrifying, especially considering how he was actually trying to save everyone by stoping Kris at sealing the fountain
(ba-dum-tssst)
Holy shit, seeing Spamton's screaming frozen body made my heart sink
It's more of him trying to get my soul before freezing to death... Not death eternal purgatory
imagine being blue, hearing that a friend you abandoned has taken over the world, and now everyone is suddenly turning into the stone. You went to check of the friend was doing well, and you see him being frozen to death
The being blue part is important, because if you're red it's diferent
I can only imagine the thoughts going through Mags's head when seeing that Spamton, someone they looked down upon and despised, tried to save them.
*"You left them behind,* didn't you. *Just as you left us."*
"Begone"
bright’s stuff is so good, their version of the addisons is probably my favorite
every time at the end of this comic I get chills bc I can only imagine what blue is thinking, bc like
that’s obviously his old friend, but somethings gone terribly wrong
The deal, went terribly wrong.
*deal gone wrong.*
Dang. Making me feel emotions I didn't even know were possible with that heart-wrenching reveal of Spamton. I'll just be crying in a corner, don't mind me.
ill join
The thing about games is that most of the time [at least when I play], you don't really think about what you might be leaving behind. Sure, it might just be a game, but if you take that aspect out and look as the NPCs as actual beings... The devastation you might leave is kinda...
Oh my god
This was drawn and voiced so well! The emotions conveyed pretty dang perfectly!
I have no words for how incredibly done this is. Brava. Everyone did a stellar job !
For some reason, Swatch reminds me of Seam. He accepts the end, but doesn't do anything about it. On the other hand, he tries to make the end as best as he can for everyone, giving them food and shelter in their last moments. Perhaps a bit more like Seam before he realized nothing he did mattered. After all, choices don't seem to matter here, hm?
swatch and seam both use they/them pronouns btw!
@@vinnyart92 Huh, I did not know that! Neat.
They would be best friends. I actually want to see a comic about that.
@Nobody confirmed by toby fox
@@vinnyart92 where tho
In its own twisted way in snowgrave spamton is the hero trying too stop you.....the VILLIAN.
Edit: I mean by the npcs/"enemy's" perspective,like the Addisons
Yeah, no spamton wasn’t the hero.
@@charismaentertainer1657 further saying that, spamton, during the fight, even mentions that he sold you the ring for evil
there's no Hero in snowgrave, it's villain vs villain
@@Ashuri_Vodka Yep, that's another difference between Snowgrave and UT Genocide. Genocide had you as the villain, and the ones who stood up to you as the heroes. Snowgrave only has villains and victims. You continue down a dark path which essentially drains the world of any relevant good influence...
@@Ashuri_Vodka I don't think anyone would argue spamton isn't a villain for sure, but i'd certainly say "lesser of two evils" fits better...
Toby: Your actions don't matter. The ending will be the same.
*The Actions:*
The feeling one would get when the last hope for survival is a psychotic spam salesman… and that last hope spam salesman is frozen dead in front of you in a position of opposition and fear. Damn.
I like this. Like some concept after a snowgrave, yeah. Like this, with minor characters.
Although if the fountain was successfully re-opened, Kris and everyone else would return too because the room became a Dark World again... assuming they didn't leave in time.
One thing I have to ask, what about Sweet, Cap'n and K-K? Or the Cyber Field? Surely at least the musical trio should be here.
Actually I am pretty sure the musical trio follows you to castletown no matter what since you can't kill them
@@ben_fifi420 oh, alright
They are still at castle town after snowgrave
Take them with you or leave them to die
It doesn't matter what you did if you didn't do pacifist then whoever you fight is stuck there until their demise.
I mean they had memories before the fountain so they probably stay alive in some manner, but if you just attack one they're all alone (but nubert makes them company so do they need anything else?)
THE ENDING GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS. The Deal Gone Wrong was SUCH a good placement. Thats exactly how I imagined it when I saw the comic on Twitter. What a fantastic job, when I heard the song fading in I instantly knew and I gasped and my eyes widened, I was amazed!!! OH MY GOD I just can't, this is too perfect
I...I haven't through of this.Just to think that every other person we meet other the the Queen, are just stuck there, basically on there final hours.Just the idea that the addisons are just going to lose everything they done, and see an old friend dead, is just gratifying
oh my goodness, this is horrifying, now I'm glad i did the true pacifist route and saved everyone
I fear to whats to come as Toby has said Deltarune has one ending...
Same.
well lucky me because mY SNOWGRAVE ROUTE KEEPS GLITCHING AND BREAKING
yes i own the old version i can big shot spam
@@bart199you still can big shot spam, BUT it triggers enraged spamton, which is just overpowered him
HOLY CRAP I HAVE NO WORDS!!!
The fact that none of the Darkners are actually survivors, but they have just one more hour to live is SIMPLY TERRIFYING!! Seeing Swatch so depressive and indifferent with the situation and Yellow Addison just going crazy, trying to laugh through the whole situation is SO SAD!! I was already shocked, but when Magson saw frozen Spamton I went NOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
AND I ALMOST FORGOT TO MENTION THE PHENOMENAL VOICE ACTING!! THE COMIC IS AWESOME AND YOU GUYS JUST MADE IT BETTER!! 💖💖💖💖💖
The Colorful Butler was incredibly calm. Maybe because he knew he would be one of the very few souls spared in a Geno Run since he's a shop owner. (The one kind of monster a Geno Route character CAN'T murder. Look at Gerson and Burgerpants from Undertale) The Addisons could go either way since only like ONE survives making it to Castle Town in the end game.
Ambyu-Lance and Virovirokun? They're screwed and they know it. Not just because their fellow monsters are frozen to death, but because there is no possible way to bring them to Castle Town. The only thing that kept them alive and filled with personality...was the Dark Fountain.
Also interesting is the use of THOSE two monsters specifically. Since the only time we see them together, it's implied they have a rivalry. They've put it aside to do something pointless than is bigger than themselves.
I like how most people say "Oh noelle is suffering because of us" "Berdly died so sad"
AND COMPLETELY FORGOT THAT WE DESTROYED A CITY
THIS DUB!! I SWOON!! Oh my gosh the voice acting in this is absolutely amazing! It really made me feel for all these poor guys. Thank you for making this awesome dub for us all!!
BRO YOU DID SUCH A GOOD JOB DUBBING THIS AND THE MUSIC GOING WITH IT ITS JUST AMAZING
omg its the comic with the big frozen spamton neo that blue addison (forgor name) notices at the end
why the actual fuck did this comment get 21 likes it's not even funny
@@teraspeXt idk i kinda just liked by default
aaaaand this is EXACTLY why i’m not doing snowgrave!
amazing voices by the way they fit really well!
Edit 2/16/22: so I changed my mind and did the route…
Oh hey I thought I was alone here. Nice to know someone else doesn't wanna see this hell unfold.
@@goldenfoxy5788 I'm the true Pacific guy. The only time I've chosen the genocide route was in Deltatravelers.
I was really waiting for someone to dub this, it's one of my favorite comics. It's so freaking good, and your voices fit so well.
I like how they decided to show the snowgrave route from the point of view of the darkners
Damn, I just love when fandubs have ambient sounds. This feels so profesional!
I’m not entirely sure but I’m pretty sure that the background noise at the beginning is from a game called Destiny 2
I honestly wish that there would be a part two, I really wanna see what would happen next.
Anyhow, this was amazing to watch, and the voices and comic were awesome
Seeing Spamton Frozen was very damn sad but it was so well drawn.. this comic deserves an award and I hope a part 2 comes out. You did a great job voicing it!
this adds a lot more weight to the concept of “lost recruits”, and the body count for snowgrave goes up by much
i think this comic is one of the most realistic portrayals of the snowgrave route. a cynical, scary ending. leaving everyone to die.
we need more comics like this.
I was wondering why I recognized the background music, but I quickly recognized it.
Destiny 2 Soundtrack Track 37: Voyage
It's the character select screen background ambience. I absolutely did not expect to hear it in a Deltarune comic dub, but a good choice anyway.
You guys successfully made this comic much more sad than when I saw it the first time. Very well done 👏👏👏
This idea, that Spamton tried to save everyone, but failed...It just blow up my mind! I started to looing at Spamton from another perspective! And I love this perspective!
He still is responsible for this
You know how it is with giant corpses? You're less scared of the size and more of what could've killed something this big.
A thing I just remembered is the difference in Susie’s dialogue between the normal run and Snowgrave. In the normal run, since all the Darkners head to the castle town when the fountain is sealed, you’ve both saved the light world and the Darkners from dying due to the fountain being closed. But if you do Snowgrave, Susie will instead say that it doesn’t feel like you saved the world. Which makes sense considering although you did save the light world, you’ve also left all the Darkners in the cyber world to die.
The fact that Spamton started this, gave to Kris the thorn ring. Then he become NEO. And in the end he try to protect everything. His fountain, his city. In the end, he didn’t know but he almost save the cyber world. And he was the only hope to save it. Now the hope is gone.
This comic it’s just great it show us, what our (the player) decisions can do. You’r dub fits perfect and the music that you choose for the Spamton scene was perfect, it felt that all the hope to be save is gone. I liked it .Great job.
That’s what Toby wanted, to make us see that there are consequences when you play god.
He wasn’t trying to protect the city, he just didn’t want Kris to seal the fountain the moment before his victory. He was trying to stop Kris from stopping him.
@@everyonegetselfears1444 true but the soul us we started everything we forced noelle to do this but when spamton neo came in mind he had everything but he didn't know when he took the soul everything would've been saved and now he's a big shot again
@@Space_geep True. Accidental hero. You know what, Imma go search for an AU where he got the SOUL and let’s see what happened to our favorite blue enby. If I don’t find it I’ll FUCKING MAKE IT MYSELF.
@@everyonegetselfears1444 i want a au where kris(actually you) agrees with spamton and joins them,
Everything about this is amazing! Every tiny detail adds on significantly, whether people notice them or not. Everything about it conveys the emotions of the scene perfectly- a sense of pure dread and hopelessness, yet somehow beautiful at the same time. The dialogue is perfectly fitting, VAs say their lines as if they were actually feeling the same emotions as their characters, the background's dull greys combined with the character's bright highlights, the music perfectly conveying everything... It's amazing. I don't think I could find something better put together if I tried.
Loved this comic when I first saw it, your dub was amazing!
the frozen Spamton NEO part really made me feel uncomfortable, and kind of sad too, it's like he just tried to stop a greater evil, but he ended up unfairly frozen, you can see his agony in that static frozen face.
Well we had to do what we had to do, Seal fountain. The thing Is that we Are evil only if we let people there die.
Also idk about spamton being "infairly frozen" He was thé one who gave us that ring after all. Plus i think He knew well to much what we were about to do with it
@@krysert4552 Ik, I'm just a big Spamton fan. :/
@@krysert4552 but didn't click (pink addison) gave us the freezeRing?
@@emitrioff ehhhh no....we kinda......také it......And most likely Killed him in process.....
@@krysert4552 yeah i should have been more careful with words i meant he "offered" them it so...
2:10 this is so perfect, the screams of defeat, the Spamton theme, and the look of broken panic and confidence on HIS face.
For those wondering it is a modified version of " deal gone wrong "
That "deal gone wrong" version playing when Spamton's frozen corpse was o screen DESTROYED ME
THIS IS A MASTER PIECE! Your voices hit very well. The despair, the hopeless, it's just awesome!
That frozen Spamton... it really hurt a lot, the Snowgrave route it's really dark like this. Incredible job! 💖
And then there's mouswheel, vibing in castle town as one of the few monsters you can spare in a snowgrave route.
god imagine what was going through Mag's head, Spamton, the friend he and the others abandoned out of envy and jealousy filled the mansion with traps (pipis), ventured into the basement of the mansion, got the old robot body out, and stood in the way of kris, all as a last ditch attempt to save the dark world and its people. Imagine the guilt he must feel.
Imagine Spamton NEO breaks the ice leaving a cloud of dust and behind pulls an old Mettaton "oh [YES]" and returns as small Spamton
Chaos king:
*...talk to you? Hah.
*You left them behind , didn't you?
*Just as you left us...
In this route spamton is both a hero and a villain
This is a terrifying look into the aftermath of snowgrave.
I love it.
THAT SPAMTON NEO IN ICE [[seems]] COOL AND [[depressing]] AND THE SAME [[time]]
Coming to a conclusion...they actually had a glimpse chance to save themselves...since Berdly has been in the city this whole time...
man, thank god this is not how dark worlds work
i think
cool comic
Wow, this is horrifyingly amazing
Godddd the music and ice sfx really made the end hit much much harder. Ever since I saw this comic on tumblr I’ve been enamored with how grim it feels, and this dub made it pop even more!!
2:13 they would’ve probably opened it by now because anyone with determination can make a portal
Well darkners cant. That ability is exclusive to Lightners so.....yeah they were pretty screwed ngl
Damn, the website froze. That is the whole joke about snowgrave, Toby you sly dog.
We need a part 2 for this
Agree.
Yup
Love the Destiny 2 background song
One of the survivors yelling “this can’t be the end” desperately while the horrifying imagery of Spamton’s final lunge at kris looms over Mags, and the music kicks in. This is quality shit right here.
This is absolutely CHILLING. Good job.
Finally, a good comic with the shopkeepers!
Took a while
the second-to-last made me shudder a little the first time i saw it but just. the desperate wail before he’s revealed while deal gone wrong plays low in the background? genuinely chilling. not to mention all the voices are just perfect. good job
Can you imagine how horrifying it would be to see the corpse of your dead friend with such a look on his face? I can only imagine what all's going through the blue guy's head.
Brightgoat. The same guy who brought you Casino cups. Absolutely brilliant work.
This is probably my favourite deltarune comic dub tho not enough nubert
The rest of the darkners would look to spamton as a fallen hero who had a desperate attempt to stop kris and noelle. Using an ancient power, yet he failed.
Ah, I remember another dub of this. Your take is beautiful, but just as horrifying. I'm subscribing.
Edit: The instrumental Deal Gone Wrong is amazing.
YOOOO this is actually so good, my favourite comic yet by far!
"didn't you hear what they said"
mags: do i look like i care?
The silence trough the entire thing to just hear a deal gone wrong burst in with spamton frozen it sends shivers down my spine just how perfect it is
Masterful. This one definitely feels like it accomplishes everything it set out to do.