At this point, yours are the only HFY stories I listen to, and that's because you're the only living person doing this, as far as I can tell. The rest are all AI.
Yet another CG. These are the little things that make you unique amongst your peers. Keep doing it right! Ladies... this is a good man that is going places.
Basically, this is a good reminder to not forget where you came from, and to understand the strengths and weaknesses of technology, and of course to be adaptable to changing situations.
Can you make an HFY story where humans are hyper advanced, one day they found a galaxy with a weird energy resonance pulsating in it. However, this energy is naturally repellant against iron or humans. Then in this galaxy they found several planets, one in particular is a world inhabited by "Elves". For the elves the ships look like black voids because their magic cannot detect it. Once they sent out probes to the planets the elves reacted negatively and thought it was demons from a dark god or something. Yeah, and when humans try interact with them they can't harm the humans with magic because they're immune. I've read some stories like this in HFY where iron is anti-magic, i hope you do something like this in the future
I've been listening to a few of these, they do have me wondering. Just the way they are laid out and the flow, which AI system do you use? Not knocking the stories, just curious.
Wooden handle and stock, early 20th century, visible hammer. IDK, it sounds more like late 19th century likes M1887, or in sidearm case, M1911, TT33. I think we should go with AKM as it's a symbol of peace and conflict, used by both good and bad guy, and besides, it's classic.
M1 fits for long arms. Early 1911s and Mausers also seem to be correct. An eccentric commander might have a pair of pearl-handled revolvers - I'm blanking on Patton's choice: 44 or 45. or merely inspired by history and chambered in 454 or 500 or future small artillery. Nature almost never produces straight lines, deep blacks, or blued steel. A wooden body is a bit more useful for painting to either blend in or break up a shape. I'd really like to see a sniper v sniper HFY. Good times. Y'all (yes, I'm still all hyped after Failed At Primary Orders Day "you're a soldier. It is not your job to d# for your country. It's yours to make the other guy d# for his" Or something like that
I'm blanking also on the guy who brought a damn claymore to Normandy and leisurely went along, getting pointy with the turrets and others using said sword.
One of your better ones. I can tell when you read it out loud verses when you use an audio narration program. Write, edit, review. Remove repeats and correct AI writing errors. If you are going to use those tools then you need to do the work to correct mistakes that the tools make. It isn't easy to make well written, well narrated stories. Fewer stories with quality over quantity. You may need an editor to listen and point out errors.
The author is so caught up in the overuse of descriptive adverbs and adjectives that he/she experienced another faux pas in the "arena erupted in stunned silence" . A truly momentous event, erupting in stunned silence. Possibly an alternative would be 'shocked into a stunned silence", but hey, if you can erupt into stunned silence in your mind, go with it, it would make more sense with in all in your mind.....The Terrans and Thoraxians faced each other across a ravine, the targeted mineral was "on the other side"...the other side of what, a another ravine, a hill, cliff, mountain? Oops, dang details that are needed for the story to make sense, missed opportunity. The entire premise of Terrans using "primitive" weapons so as to not show off their good stuff and create problems was completely nullified by beating the crap out of the competition using the old weapons. What species wouldn't ask, "If they beat us that badly with antique weaponry, what would they do with their modern, advanced weaponry?" The story's entire point is now moot. I made it halfway through to past the 13:00 minute mark before giving up on it getting better. Keep up with the narration skills, hopefully qualified authors will seek you out.
Overall a good and interesting idea/story. But not really good writen, could be done better. But I have not stopped early, so I have listened to the complete story.
and here we go again: a boring, raw and unrefined AI-vomit *without even a try* to smooth the wording and phrasing… Hey Starbound: Don't read such raw AI-BS. It destroys your reputation and *mocks **_your_** narrating skills!*
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Ha ha, logic abounds. "The 2 teams facing each other across a narrow ravine, the mineral deposit glittering tantalising on the other side"
Its AI generated bud
@@ahis-lp7gc Surprisingly efective, I must say.
At this point, yours are the only HFY stories I listen to, and that's because you're the only living person doing this, as far as I can tell. The rest are all AI.
dude fr, im so glad he actually puts effort into reading these aswell and not sitting with a monotone voice as if they dont wanna read it at all
Agro squirrel, and net narrator are 2 other human voiced channels, net does several ongoing series as well
Agro Squirrel Narrates, is another live narrator. He led me here 🙂
There's another guy as well, but I can't recall his channel name atm
Yet another CG.
These are the little things that make you unique amongst your peers.
Keep doing it right!
Ladies... this is a good man that is going places.
Humans kicking butt. Love it.
Basically, this is a good reminder to not forget where you came from, and to understand the strengths and weaknesses of technology, and of course to be adaptable to changing situations.
Can you make an HFY story where humans are hyper advanced, one day they found a galaxy with a weird energy resonance pulsating in it. However, this energy is naturally repellant against iron or humans. Then in this galaxy they found several planets, one in particular is a world inhabited by "Elves". For the elves the ships look like black voids because their magic cannot detect it. Once they sent out probes to the planets the elves reacted negatively and thought it was demons from a dark god or something. Yeah, and when humans try interact with them they can't harm the humans with magic because they're immune.
I've read some stories like this in HFY where iron is anti-magic, i hope you do something like this in the future
sounds like a cool idea!
Start writing the story Rust5427!
good story and great use of voice usage-well done
A simple reminder that it is not the size of the dog in the fight, but the size of the fight in the dog.
I love all of the accents. Makes me giggle every time
The arena erupted in stunned silence...🤔🤔🤔🤔🤣
oops!
@@StarboundHFY I actually liked the line! It's like the song "The Sound of Silence"
@@StarboundHFY,
😆 lol
Erupting can also simply be a mass reaction without sound. Another example would be "A mass of bubbles erupted for the submarine?
Thank you for this story 😁😁😁
I hope your vocal chords are okay after doing the voices 😊
I'm halfway through. Curious how many more times will the basic human weapons prove to be successful in close quarters combat xD
Do your toys do this? Ours do!
pew pew pew!
I've been listening to a few of these, they do have me wondering. Just the way they are laid out and the flow, which AI system do you use?
Not knocking the stories, just curious.
"We are superior"
Here comes the sun do do do do
Wooden handle and stock, early 20th century, visible hammer. IDK, it sounds more like late 19th century likes M1887, or in sidearm case, M1911, TT33. I think we should go with AKM as it's a symbol of peace and conflict, used by both good and bad guy, and besides, it's classic.
Space Marines need the AK50, also.
@@Saanonymous80 Remove the stock and saw the barrel off, and we'll have another classic weapon.
@@Saanonymous80Only if Brandon Herrera has managed to get it back from the folks at Demo Ranch.
M1 fits for long arms. Early 1911s and Mausers also seem to be correct. An eccentric commander might have a pair of pearl-handled revolvers - I'm blanking on Patton's choice: 44 or 45. or merely inspired by history and chambered in 454 or 500 or future small artillery.
Nature almost never produces straight lines, deep blacks, or blued steel. A wooden body is a bit more useful for painting to either blend in or break up a shape. I'd really like to see a sniper v sniper HFY. Good times. Y'all
(yes, I'm still all hyped after Failed At Primary Orders Day "you're a soldier. It is not your job to d# for your country. It's yours to make the other guy d# for his" Or something like that
I'm blanking also on the guy who brought a damn claymore to Normandy and leisurely went along, getting pointy with the turrets and others using said sword.
One of your better ones. I can tell when you read it out loud verses when you use an audio narration program. Write, edit, review. Remove repeats and correct AI writing errors. If you are going to use those tools then you need to do the work to correct mistakes that the tools make. It isn't easy to make well written, well narrated stories. Fewer stories with quality over quantity. You may need an editor to listen and point out errors.
round 2 feels like vietnam fr
The author is so caught up in the overuse of descriptive adverbs and adjectives that he/she experienced another faux pas in the "arena erupted in stunned silence" . A truly momentous event, erupting in stunned silence. Possibly an alternative would be 'shocked into a stunned silence", but hey, if you can erupt into stunned silence in your mind, go with it, it would make more sense with in all in your mind.....The Terrans and Thoraxians faced each other across a ravine, the targeted mineral was "on the other side"...the other side of what, a another ravine, a hill, cliff, mountain? Oops, dang details that are needed for the story to make sense, missed opportunity. The entire premise of Terrans using "primitive" weapons so as to not show off their good stuff and create problems was completely nullified by beating the crap out of the competition using the old weapons. What species wouldn't ask, "If they beat us that badly with antique weaponry, what would they do with their modern, advanced weaponry?" The story's entire point is now moot. I made it halfway through to past the 13:00 minute mark before giving up on it getting better. Keep up with the narration skills, hopefully qualified authors will seek you out.
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I thought we were going to get a story without "indomitable" in it. Nope, very last sentence. Maybe next time
Overall a good and interesting idea/story. But not really good writen, could be done better. But I have not stopped early, so I have listened to the complete story.
Mmmmmm Vietnam 8:51
You use advanced weapons? Just that?
This one mid and generic, i guess they all can't be good.
I hate it he asks for a subscription before showing content and the unremovable subtitle. reasons for me not to subscribe!
Petty much?
and here we go again: a boring, raw and unrefined AI-vomit *without even a try* to smooth the wording and phrasing… Hey Starbound: Don't read such raw AI-BS. It destroys your reputation and *mocks **_your_** narrating skills!*