I enjoyed this twist on what you did for Gohan's Arc during the movie with him worried about duties more than spending time with his family the opposite on what he does normally. It was cool that you added in Gohan been the Great Saiyaman since the Great Saiyaman is a superhero. Gamma 2, Gohan, and Hedo doing superhero poses together sound awesome and funny at the same time. Huh? 🤔 So Piccolo becoming a Namekian God I like this idea plus his power up wouldn't be a huge and his design isn't to big of change like Orange Piccolo is (Even though I like it personally.). Ah no Beast Gohan that's fine I understand why. So a newer version of Android 13 instead of Cell Max that's cool I was indifferent towards Cell Max anyway. I thing I would've added to your story is when Gohan was taking on Magenta (Android 13) besides his white aura getting bigger we see white electricity around it too, and maybe near the end of movie of he tells Piccolo he now know there is level beyond Ultimate and has a new goal to reach together now. Yeah definitely need to do more rewrites in the future for sure. 👍 Anyways overall really good rewrite, and looking forward to your next video soon.
I like this rewrite to a certain extent I love all of the dialogue changes and comparisons to gohan and magenta characters and how they contrast having a new Form for piccolo and not relying on a wish is good too Because that was way too fan fiction but because gohan never slacked in this he should still get beast Just in a different way than just randomly achieving it you have pan or video in danger and in response he transforms to save them that way you can still have the hype factor but overall good rewrite
really like the idea (but for yellow Picolo is ju ahhh but I acept your opinoin, just think he didn´t need it but really like the part with his inner dialog, would kinda keep the full potencial awakening but more like at the end of the movie were Picolo gets the powers, memories and co of his fusion parts like possible creation his own dragonball or create demons or like heal (?) and says that even with them would change because he knows who he is (possible inner strugle and fear from losing his identity by awakening his full potential)) buts thats just my idea what the full potential of a fused namekian could be
As cool as your idea of how Piccolo unlocks a new form, i still really like Orange Piccolo since it has a connection to Shenron who was created by Kami before Denda became guardian and the way Shenron speaks to Piccolo with respect since he's fused with kami is cool. I always imagine the Orange form as Shenron's gift of gratitude for Kami giving him life in the first place.
I think your version is pretty good tho i think If i had to point out a minuscle bad thing is that i kinda disliked the Android 13 wanabe as a villain and could be good seeing Orange Piccolo but nonetheless i loved, 9/10 keep going
I love that you had Gohan actually stick to his character arc, and included the great saiyaman. EDIT: Also, having Piccolo's new form actually mean something is epic. EDIT EDIT: Also, Super Magenta 13? Epic!!!
Pretty amazing!
Here's an idea.
How about trying to rewrite some of the older films to either fit into the timeline or reboot it into the story like Broly?
I enjoyed this twist on what you did for Gohan's Arc during the movie with him worried about duties more than spending time with his family the opposite on what he does normally. It was cool that you added in Gohan been the Great Saiyaman since the Great Saiyaman is a superhero. Gamma 2, Gohan, and Hedo doing superhero poses together sound awesome and funny at the same time. Huh? 🤔 So Piccolo becoming a Namekian God I like this idea plus his power up wouldn't be a huge and his design isn't to big of change like Orange Piccolo is (Even though I like it personally.). Ah no Beast Gohan that's fine I understand why. So a newer version of Android 13 instead of Cell Max that's cool I was indifferent towards Cell Max anyway. I thing I would've added to your story is when Gohan was taking on Magenta (Android 13) besides his white aura getting bigger we see white electricity around it too, and maybe near the end of movie of he tells Piccolo he now know there is level beyond Ultimate and has a new goal to reach together now. Yeah definitely need to do more rewrites in the future for sure. 👍 Anyways overall really good rewrite, and looking forward to your next video soon.
Great story man
I like this rewrite to a certain extent I love all of the dialogue changes and comparisons to gohan and magenta characters and how they contrast having a new Form for piccolo and not relying on a wish is good too Because that was way too fan fiction but because gohan never slacked in this he should still get beast Just in a different way than just randomly achieving it you have pan or video in danger and in response he transforms to save them that way you can still have the hype factor but overall good rewrite
this is so much better
this is way better
really like the idea (but for yellow Picolo is ju ahhh but I acept your opinoin, just think he didn´t need it but really like the part with his inner dialog, would kinda keep the full potencial awakening but more like at the end of the movie were Picolo gets the powers, memories and co of his fusion parts like possible creation his own dragonball or create demons or like heal (?) and says that even with them would change because he knows who he is (possible inner strugle and fear from losing his identity by awakening his full potential))
buts thats just my idea what the full potential of a fused namekian could be
Awesome story great to have u back bro 👍🏾
As cool as your idea of how Piccolo unlocks a new form, i still really like Orange Piccolo since it has a connection to Shenron who was created by Kami before Denda became guardian and the way Shenron speaks to Piccolo with respect since he's fused with kami is cool. I always imagine the Orange form as Shenron's gift of gratitude for Kami giving him life in the first place.
W ending
How strong are the characters
It's like
Gohan = Piccolo < Ultimate Gohan < Magenta < Namekian God Piccolo < Transformed Magenta
I think your version is pretty good tho i think If i had to point out a minuscle bad thing is that i kinda disliked the Android 13 wanabe as a villain and could be good seeing Orange Piccolo but nonetheless i loved, 9/10 keep going
I love that you had Gohan actually stick to his character arc, and included the great saiyaman.
EDIT: Also, having Piccolo's new form actually mean something is epic.
EDIT EDIT: Also, Super Magenta 13? Epic!!!
The only probolm i see in the wrerite is that gohan is the main focus for most of the movie, only to all of a sudden picolo become the new main focus.
Would have been better if Piccolo had zero transformations whatsoever
I love this rewrite
Is what if Minato was born in Kirigakure coming back
I liked it 👍