Copywriting Tutorial: How To Write The Headlines That Don’t SUCK

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  • Опубликовано: 14 апр 2020
  • Copywriting Tips For The 5 Levels of Customer Awareness
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    One of the biggest mistakes a copywriter can make is using the SAME hook and headline for every single audience.
    Think about it: the way you capture the attention of a random scroller-by on Facebook is very different from how you’d present an offer to your most loyal subscribers.
    Today I’m talking about how to write headlines the RIGHT away, based on the 5 Levels of Customer Awareness.
    Stay to the end to look over-my-shoulder as I walk you through my Headline Writing Pyramid & Guide.
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Комментарии • 174

  • @paulchris9031
    @paulchris9031 Год назад +5

    I've been writing for a while & since I started following you on your social media platforms, I can say my copy has become better. I send my copy to a friend whenever I write one to get a feedback and he says my copy has become CLEARER, DESCRIPTIVE and EMPATHETIC.
    Thank you 😊.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Год назад +1

      That's amazing!! Well done 👏

  • @mdirfan-lr5wr
    @mdirfan-lr5wr Год назад +2

    It's a masterpiece. literally !!!!

  • @vishalinarayanan4340
    @vishalinarayanan4340 4 года назад +12

    Just when I was struggling with this... Thank you Alex! You give us such quality content, and I can't thank you enough for all your kind efforts!

  • @matthewsager925
    @matthewsager925 4 года назад +8

    Going through the ad pyramid was VERY helpful!!! Thank you for your in-depth breakdown!

  • @Jonkings07
    @Jonkings07 2 года назад +5

    The ultimate video where you get to understand all the customer journey, sales funnel, customer awareness. It's been years since I had questions about it and thanks to your video, I finally get it

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад

      Awesome! Thanks so much for watching!

  • @chrislc267
    @chrislc267 2 года назад +4

    I’m actually blown away by how informative this video was. Even down to realizing I never knew how to find those ads on Facebook and how easy it is!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад

      Awesome! Thank you for watching :)

  • @snehalkarjodkar934
    @snehalkarjodkar934 4 года назад +1

    Thank you. The example of Larq for the pyramid really cleared the concept.

  • @wallacebankley3384
    @wallacebankley3384 9 месяцев назад +1

    Your comments Alex are such an impression of who you are, what a beautiful study, inspiring us Alex Cattoni with you&others

  • @kathleenmukheibir8205
    @kathleenmukheibir8205 3 года назад +13

    Watched this specific video now for the first time. I really enjoyed that you took everything you'd said in the first part and applied it in a practical way at the end. It just made everything that much more understandable. I'm really loving your videos! I've learnt a lot from them.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  3 года назад +2

      Aw, thank you so much Kathleen!

  • @rozaroz5259
    @rozaroz5259 2 года назад +1

    ALEX, you're second to none. A HUUUUGE THANKS!

  • @gaddafayub8603
    @gaddafayub8603 3 года назад +4

    On point, the pyramid really makes things easier. Thanks.

  • @JayPendragonWatches
    @JayPendragonWatches 3 года назад

    This was AMAZING! Thank you for so much free advice 💚✨

  • @andrinoel3487
    @andrinoel3487 4 года назад +1

    Best way to find the level of people I can target and how the different types of copy should be. Thank you

  • @sagittariansage_2271
    @sagittariansage_2271 2 года назад

    This is gold. Thanks Alex!

  • @taniyashaikh2500
    @taniyashaikh2500 3 года назад +3

    Have been binge watching your content and just wanted to say that I've been a freelance content writer for 3 years completely blind to this whole other world of copy💜 thankyou

  • @brunomushotoku1150
    @brunomushotoku1150 3 года назад +1

    Thank you very much. Ready to receive your guideline.

  • @manajbanerjee8615
    @manajbanerjee8615 3 года назад +1

    Unexpected hook at the climax...very useful. 💯👍👍👍👍👍

  • @rhofiatulbadriyah4759
    @rhofiatulbadriyah4759 3 года назад +1

    thank you alex ! this is so useful :3

  • @ashleyburks4639
    @ashleyburks4639 3 года назад +2

    Loved this video so gosh darn much. Thankyou so very much strong intelligent lady/woman. Much love.

  • @ptnk-nguyenanhkhoi6652
    @ptnk-nguyenanhkhoi6652 Год назад +1

    I really love the way you share and your energy. Thanks a lot, you've been very helpful

  • @rachelandersen4211
    @rachelandersen4211 3 года назад +2

    This was super helpful Thank you!!

  • @mfaizan2792
    @mfaizan2792 Год назад

    looks like you’ve alex’s been working out!
    boulder shoulders, queen!

  • @dhanashreegadhikar8281
    @dhanashreegadhikar8281 3 года назад

    This is so helpful
    Thankyou so much!❤

  • @renatalewis6499
    @renatalewis6499 4 года назад +1

    Always majoring on giving value ! #contentqueen ! Loved this thanks for the tips❤

  • @duncanmacdonald9320
    @duncanmacdonald9320 Год назад +2

    This is so helpful, clear and direct. I was totally unaware I had a problem with my writing style🙂

  • @sivakumar6657
    @sivakumar6657 4 года назад

    Thank You Alex, Excellent Video

  • @gennylittletreats148
    @gennylittletreats148 4 года назад

    gold nugget! thx so much Alex

  • @farooqazamjee1625
    @farooqazamjee1625 3 года назад

    very informative it will help a lot in doing the copy writing thing.

  • @MisterLuckyLP
    @MisterLuckyLP Год назад

    Yo I love the E-Mail Copy you´ve sent me. Puts a smile on my face and I can hear your voice when I´m reading it, especially with the personalized "Tobi" 3 times. haha Genius.

  • @sherry143ish
    @sherry143ish 3 года назад +15

    This is insane! Thank you, Alex. I have been thinking to switch my career, and fortunately, I have come across your videos. I definitely get high when I write something, and you have really given me a nudge to consider and pursue Copywriting! I became an active follower of your videos just in a day's time. Thankful to you

  • @16-alika2
    @16-alika2 5 месяцев назад

    It's very helpful! Now I'm already get an inspiration, thank you, Alex❤

  • @teoteodora5739
    @teoteodora5739 4 года назад +2

    This makes sooo much sense. Thank you!!

  • @user-we7bm2wp7g
    @user-we7bm2wp7g 8 месяцев назад +1

    Thanks a lot for sharing your idea. Unlike the You Tube ad that interrupted your video - that particular commercial sounded to good to be true

  • @joltofjulia1322
    @joltofjulia1322 4 года назад +5

    Printing, laminating, going on wall. Ty!

  • @loliejudecopy
    @loliejudecopy 11 месяцев назад

    Headlines are the hardest part for me to write. Thanks for sharing this! I've just downloaded the pyramid and can't wait to use it!!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  11 месяцев назад

      Awesome! Let me know how it goes. :)

  • @nourishedattiffanys
    @nourishedattiffanys 3 года назад +1

    Wow, around 4:00 you unlocked something I never understood all these years in working in entrepreneurship. Thank you!

  • @TerryGuzmanMartinez
    @TerryGuzmanMartinez 4 года назад +1

    Thank you. I guess it will be very useful :))

  • @upsurgeagency3593
    @upsurgeagency3593 2 года назад +1

    This was most helpful. You are a Godsend.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад

      I'm glad it was helpful! Thanks for watching :)

  • @gabriellepelkey4428
    @gabriellepelkey4428 Год назад +1

    Not me going to buy a lark water bottle after this video 😅 lol i’ve been binging your content the last couple weeks and you’re amazing! Thank you for all the insight 😊

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Год назад

      Haha love that! Thanks for watching :)

  • @ollitikkanen
    @ollitikkanen 2 года назад +1

    Thanks Alex. Great videos!

  • @donnanovander7868
    @donnanovander7868 4 года назад +1

    This is a great exercise. Thank you so much.

  • @christiansanchez1578
    @christiansanchez1578 Год назад +1

    This is very helpful! I should use this headline formula for sure ! Thank you Alex !

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Год назад +1

      Thanks for watching :)

    • @christiansanchez1578
      @christiansanchez1578 Год назад

      No!! THANK YOU!!!!!!! Right now I’m running ads but I do see now I know why copywriting skills are so important!!!! That’s why my goal is develop this skill!!

  • @superoverdrive8628
    @superoverdrive8628 4 года назад +5

    Very very helpful video Alex! I would love to see more of this type of over the shoulder videos 😀 One thing I cant seem to find is a good video on how to do a copywriting customer interview call, the actual call recorded to show how it works

  • @thegemstonegallerytgg
    @thegemstonegallerytgg 4 года назад +1

    Great Video ... keep it up ...your videos are so valuable for us..

  • @2ksy462
    @2ksy462 3 года назад

    Thank you so much Alex!

  • @maryannegwuchukwu3285
    @maryannegwuchukwu3285 2 года назад +1

    Thank you very much Alex. I loved your ❤️❤️tutorials from the first time I came across them. You have really increased my desire for copywriting. My actual career is to be an economist but I believe that it wouldn't hurt anyone to learn both, am I right?😅😅

  • @farazmubeen2739
    @farazmubeen2739 3 года назад +1

    Awesome 👍

  • @shakhzodmatyozov6190
    @shakhzodmatyozov6190 3 года назад

    Woww.... thanks for all-the info you share for FREE ; brilliant info that i really need

  • @manojkumarawasare3572
    @manojkumarawasare3572 2 года назад

    Hi Alex. Nice video. "You are a great guns"

  • @thefitmoves
    @thefitmoves 2 года назад

    Wow!! So helpful!!!!

  • @stupidpopsicle
    @stupidpopsicle 3 года назад +31

    *5 Level of Customer Awareness*
    01 Totally Unaware - Stories, Secrets & Education
    [ What is that you want them to know? ]
    02 Problem Aware - Pain, Solution, Benefits
    [ What's the problem you want them address? ]
    03 Solution Aware - Social Proof, USP
    [ How are you different/ the best/ trustworthy? ]
    04 Product Aware - Scarcity, Incentive
    [ Why should they act now? ]
    05 Very Aware - Offer
    [ What do you want them to do? ]

  • @93JMN
    @93JMN 2 года назад +5

    Alex, you are so helpful! I'm just dipping my toe into copywriting and I'm so glad my friend told me about you. I suppose I'm a solution-aware member of your copy posse so wondering if any viewers can speak to whether or not Alex's RUclips videos alone are enough to build a strong copywriting client portfolio or whether we need more education and training? Thanks from a future copywriter :)

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад +2

      Well I'm not a viewer, but I can certainly give you my thoughts! ;) I receive tons of messages from my RUclips community members telling me about the success stories they've had from watching these videos ALONE. So you absolutely can start and build a successful business from just watching these free tutorials.
      My paid content and courses are for 2 type of people:
      A.) people who need and/or desire a bit more guidance, direction & coaching as they get started.
      B.) people who want to receive feedback & critique on their work and join my community for it's other perks (such as job board access, credibility, access to high-level entrepreneurs, etc.)
      Hope that helps! :) GOOD LUCK

    • @93JMN
      @93JMN 2 года назад +1

      @Alex Cattoni Ahh you responded! I can't imagine how busy you are so thank you so much for responding to a comment I left on a year old video! 😄 This is super helpful! You seem genuinely here to help us newbies shift into an exciting career and I, like so many others are so grateful to you 🥰❤ I also read you're a fellow Canadian so hello from Vancouver! ☺️

  • @tuskerdaily3161
    @tuskerdaily3161 3 года назад

    Thanks for the videos. While I believe I write well, the one thing I absolutely suck at is writing a headline. Luckily, I found your videos and they're helping me understand that my mindset must be a wee bit different than it is when writing a 1,000-word article.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  3 года назад

      Yes! So glad it's been helpful for you!

  • @bibipop3190
    @bibipop3190 3 года назад

    Thanks you for your content 😃

  • @paulbacchus1015
    @paulbacchus1015 4 года назад +1

    Great, this is 100% helpful.
    Paul Bacchus esq

  • @rajkawel
    @rajkawel 4 года назад +1

    The Pyramid really good

  • @nolifenoboxing
    @nolifenoboxing 2 года назад +1

    Brilliant

  • @compassionatepeercounseling
    @compassionatepeercounseling 5 месяцев назад +2

    Thank you Alex! The breakdown helped me understand how important it is for me to know exactly who I'm writing to and their stage they're in.

  • @georgepaul7173
    @georgepaul7173 4 года назад +4

    Great visualization! It's been some since I read Breakthrough Advertising, after watching your video I want to pick it up one more time! Although a bit advance, this is one of the best books on copywriting. Eugene Schwartz also speaks about five different degrees of market sophistication and how to adapt your headline and copy accordingly. Could that be a future video someday? ;) I would love to see a similar visualization about it!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  4 года назад +1

      I have done a video on it here! ruclips.net/video/wiOKBMjDugM/видео.html

    • @georgepaul7173
      @georgepaul7173 4 года назад

      @@AlexCattoni Awesome, thank you!

  • @abdullahnaveed4834
    @abdullahnaveed4834 4 года назад

    V helpful TYSM

  • @hindu98220
    @hindu98220 4 года назад +3

    Thank you Alex ... I really need it.
    Don't disturb me i am watching your smiling important video

    • @hindu98220
      @hindu98220 4 года назад

      And its also for you ❤️

  • @wallacebankley3384
    @wallacebankley3384 2 месяца назад

    In case you missed it..Aside from this outstanding video Alex is the best copywriting ..2022 Digital MARKETING OF THE YEAR and most recent being awarded named Alex Cattoni GAME CHANGER INSPIRATION AWARD 2024

  • @michaelle5722
    @michaelle5722 4 года назад +1

    I wonder how you can get nice hair colour like that when quarantine...
    But awesome video like aways. I like the sneak peek from Monday

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  4 года назад

      hehehe right? Thank you!!! As for my hair, luckily it's stayed like this. lol.

  • @mistpillar27
    @mistpillar27 4 года назад

    Beautiful, charming and successful .. You're a hidden gem. I hope I will get to meet you one day :)

  • @MozammilMozammil-zq2wt
    @MozammilMozammil-zq2wt 3 года назад

    Soooo informational video great

  • @ketevannatsvlichvili5408
    @ketevannatsvlichvili5408 4 года назад +1

    This is an amazing video and I loved the over-the-shoulder part. It 100% made me question my water bottle and I may or may not be buying it. THANk YOU!

  • @praiseayomide2697
    @praiseayomide2697 3 года назад

    AWESOME

  • @chiamaka_M
    @chiamaka_M 3 года назад

    Thanks so much Alex for the video, I know I have a flair for writing but don't really know how to go about it.....I really need help

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  3 года назад

      Awesome! Well you're in the right place to learn :)

  • @sidekick3rida
    @sidekick3rida 7 месяцев назад +1

    USP = unique selling point

  • @jakefrosher
    @jakefrosher 4 месяца назад +1

    Thanks❤

  • @anthony..1801
    @anthony..1801 4 года назад +1

    Good content

  • @happysoul8281
    @happysoul8281 3 года назад

    Alex, I love you, lady! :))))))))) You are taking me close to my fullest happiness:)

  • @thecopymap4605
    @thecopymap4605 3 года назад +1

    Hey beautiful! amazing video! can it be a mix between problem and solution aware?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  3 года назад

      Hmmm, there may be a transition. But you'll find that if you really break it down, you'll land in one or the other!

  • @jaydubriya8149
    @jaydubriya8149 4 года назад +3

    Can you make video on powerfull words and psychology behind it

  • @MontasserAH
    @MontasserAH 2 года назад

    Hi Alex, and thank you for this great video.
    Question: what do I do when I want to address multiple levels of audience?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад +2

      A few options. You could run separate Ads and have different landing pages, etc. that you would segment different audiences (recommended). Or you can address both levels in your copy - just be aware that it might be more difficult to really hone in.

  • @glitterjutsu9291
    @glitterjutsu9291 3 года назад +1

    Great video! How do you know the customer’s’ awareness level about a brand or a product. Are there research tools that you use in your work?

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  3 года назад +2

      This generally just takes practice and study!

  • @user-wn9hl7qo9r
    @user-wn9hl7qo9r Год назад

    thank you so much alex but can you direct me on how to access your tutorials for complete begginners like i dont even know which tools to download and where to practice my writing skills

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  Год назад

      Hey! This playlist is a great place to start!
      ruclips.net/p/PL56Rdybt5tTTiC3ZLIqAPIn_xtnnD243y

  • @user-ie3mg8mc9u
    @user-ie3mg8mc9u 6 месяцев назад +1

    Hey Alex!
    Could you make a vid how to write a winning Ebook? Actually in what order? Thank you!

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  6 месяцев назад

      Unfortunately writing E-books is not my area of expertise!

  • @user-di9fm3fj6t
    @user-di9fm3fj6t 3 года назад +1

    Give transcribe version of your video in description with link would be better

  • @kimyattasatchel213
    @kimyattasatchel213 3 года назад +1

    I can not Express just how amazing you are!!! I thank THE LORD for you😊

  • @vladislavvladimirov1002
    @vladislavvladimirov1002 4 года назад +4

    When you realize, that you already doing it without knowing! :D

  • @jaceyashcraft
    @jaceyashcraft 4 года назад +1

    Hey Alex! I love this. Super informative. I’m looking to be a copywriter because I love writing and marketing and find this to be a way to marry the two. I actually have a question. I’m looking to get started now! Is a website required to get clients or do you think just a LinkedIn profile would be enough? Tons of people say different things and I’d love your take on this.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  4 года назад

      Hey Jacey! I don't think it's needed. I didn't have a website when I started :) Use your social profiles to showcase as much authority as you can and get super specific on how you can help brands! I recommend you watch this playlist: ruclips.net/video/J-DrYTgZ56k/видео.html Good luck girl!

    • @jaceyashcraft
      @jaceyashcraft 4 года назад +1

      Alex Cattoni Thank you so much for the quick response and free resources. It means a lot to me! Keep doing what you’re doing! This channel is awesome and extremely helpful.

  • @bodenecruickshank5855
    @bodenecruickshank5855 2 года назад +1

    God you're a gem. Thank you for a lack of a better phrase.
    How would you manage content to a mix of an audience? You may have some new followers/ email subscribers that are totally unaware as well as existing product aware customers....

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад +1

      Definitely! I like to follow a rotation when it comes to content to make sure I'm frequently bringing up my offers (but not too much). You can check out this video for my strategies: ruclips.net/video/F17W3e04fY0/видео.html

    • @bodenecruickshank5855
      @bodenecruickshank5855 2 года назад

      @@AlexCattoni Thanks Queen!!!!!!

  • @insertmusichere
    @insertmusichere 3 года назад

    I’m interested to learn how to segment and target audiences into those levels. What measures do you use? For a Facebook ad, a Facebook pixel could help you determine whether someone is level 1-3 vs 3-5 but how to drill down further?

    • @thecopyposse5375
      @thecopyposse5375 3 года назад

      Great question! The type of product you're offering will definitely help you distinguish between a 1-3 or a 3-5 level. Chances are slim that you'll be writing for someone in the 1-2 level unless your product is a relatively new or breakthrough concept!

  • @blakeclowser9987
    @blakeclowser9987 4 года назад +1

    Hey Alex Could you possibly made a more developed video on writing formula (for example G Halbert as you know would often write about one problem and rewrite it multiple times over to create a huge problem ie. his famous water add he converted not having filter water to cancer ... genius

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  4 года назад

      Hmm cool idea! I’ll noodle on this! Thanks!!

  • @luisalinaas7840
    @luisalinaas7840 4 года назад

    Hi, I'm new in tech copywriting, can you tell me what do you think about this copy:
    GoTouch Basic 3.0
    Whether you have a business conference and want to be more passionate about your presentation, or a class and want to interact more with your students, or even a lunch with investors and want to show them clearly your ideas, that could be the product just for you. GoTouch Basic 3.0 is a device that makes you feel comfortable with your ideas.

  • @hris9214
    @hris9214 3 года назад

    Hi Alex! New subscriber here. Would you recommend using this pyramid to cold sell / email clients my copywriting skills? I know a lot of brands (in my country anyway) that aren't aware that there are people like us who do copywriting for them :)

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  3 года назад

      Welcome! Yes you absolutely could do that

  • @__.rawat.ankit.__6637
    @__.rawat.ankit.__6637 4 года назад +3

    💛Learning from a beautiful girl...
    Makes learning more interesting.😄😄

  • @Bot-ct1oz
    @Bot-ct1oz 3 года назад

    Can u please recommend a book for being a professional copywriter..
    Btw love your content🔥💐

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  3 года назад +1

      Hey! I have a couple of book recommendation videos on my channel :) check out this one - ruclips.net/video/vQkzcEGhGUg/видео.html

  • @jibrilobodoeze6095
    @jibrilobodoeze6095 3 года назад

    There is something am trying to understand Alexa
    I already understand that these are different headline formulas for different levels of market awareness.
    My question is, can we apply these formulas in writing a sales page/letter by flowing down from totally unaware down to very aware?
    Does it work that way too?

  • @Innerfulfillment1111
    @Innerfulfillment1111 4 года назад +1

    How do I gain a greater understanding of my audience?

  • @nanayvirtues9761
    @nanayvirtues9761 2 года назад

    Hi Alex! thanks for this, but I entered my email to get the copy of Headline Writing Pyramid & Guide but I didn't receive it.

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад

      Oh no! I'm so sorry about that. Please send my support team an email: hello@alexcattoni.com
      And they will make sure you get a copy!

  • @guchi1550
    @guchi1550 2 года назад

    I didn't understand what are you most? Beautiful honey or copywriter professor I'm confused 😕 because it is distracted me 😑 & I want to be a good copywriter. 🙄

  • @LonleyCopy
    @LonleyCopy 2 года назад +1

    Interested in your course when availble are u on Facebook

    • @AlexCattoni
      @AlexCattoni  2 года назад

      I am on Facebook! You can get my 8-week copywriting coaching course here: copyposse.com/launchfiles/

  • @ieattunaeveryday
    @ieattunaeveryday 2 года назад +1

    Crap. Now I want that water bottle.

  • @aryavratsingh3835
    @aryavratsingh3835 3 года назад

    Is it with me or ad library option has vanished from Facebook...

  • @ahmedwaleed6054
    @ahmedwaleed6054 4 года назад +1

    i am the first who commented here and the fourth viewer

  • @foofooblenda734
    @foofooblenda734 3 года назад

    do you have the new baffled baby 2.0

  • @blazeblaze666
    @blazeblaze666 4 года назад

    Open body language. Now i know what they are teaching

  • @satviksharma4104
    @satviksharma4104 4 года назад

    Hi Alex, I'm from India and never ever writed for non indians.
    I'm planning to have a client base from us and European countries, I'm sending cold emails every day but, haven't receive any reply.
    Please reply and give a light to my situation.