Ok so a few pointers for the future, 0:00 sometimes the main melody goes off key sometimes so it sounds really weird, but the rhythm is really solid 0:09 really solid bass line you got here, this is super good you could use this to adjust your melodies if you need to 0:17 again another off key pitch in the melody that could use some work, but I really like the drums here The bass line is pretty killer 0:32 this is a pretty sick lead instrument time, 0:41 from here there’s a little thing we need to address, again the melody from earlier but enough about that, there’s a thing about parallel 5ths that don’t really work in music theory so try to make it 4ths or 3rds (4 half steps and 5 half steps) to spice it up. But besides that Music is really an art form of the heart, if you think any of my feedback is not what you were going for, then be my guest and keep it, I’m just here to leave my feedback so you can hopefully use it to learn it better
Hey Felipe I saw the cancelled reversed video and I wanted to say I'm sorry that you have had a hard time with people that don't know how to wait so I wanted to tell u this now I will support you all the way keep up the good music dude also I like this song
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Ok so a few pointers for the future,
0:00 sometimes the main melody goes off key sometimes so it sounds really weird, but the rhythm is really solid
0:09 really solid bass line you got here, this is super good you could use this to adjust your melodies if you need to
0:17 again another off key pitch in the melody that could use some work, but I really like the drums here
The bass line is pretty killer
0:32 this is a pretty sick lead instrument time,
0:41 from here there’s a little thing we need to address, again the melody from earlier but enough about that, there’s a thing about parallel 5ths that don’t really work in music theory so try to make it 4ths or 3rds (4 half steps and 5 half steps) to spice it up.
But besides that Music is really an art form of the heart, if you think any of my feedback is not what you were going for, then be my guest and keep it, I’m just here to leave my feedback so you can hopefully use it to learn it better
Felipe became a secret boss in Undertale-
That moment when you love MEGALOVANIA that much
In a way,yeah
Hey Felipe I saw the cancelled reversed video and I wanted to say I'm sorry that you have had a hard time with people that don't know how to wait so I wanted to tell u this now I will support you all the way keep up the good music dude also I like this song
Cool dude
Fire
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Way past cool 👍