IELTS Task 1 Writing - Transform Band 6 to Band 8
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- Опубликовано: 8 фев 2025
- IELTS Task 1 Writing is often overlooked by students. In fact, more students fail IELTS Writing because of Task 1 than Task 2.
This video will show you the common mistakes that lead to a Band 6 and then show you the simple changes you can make to improve your Task 1 Academic writing to a Band 8.
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00:00 Welcome
01:15 Task Achievement
12:27 Coherence and Cohesion
19:54 Vocabulary
21:37 Grammar
22:08 Task 1 Introduction
23:07 Task 1 Overview
28:37 Task 1 Details Paragraphs
OMG!!!!!thank you soooooo much!
i watched this video like 5 days before my 2nd round test, and today i got my result came out, i got band 7.5 !!! 1 year ago, i struggled between band 6 and 6.5, but this time around is 7.5 at writing!!! what an inspiring and helpful tutorial!!! 5 STAR recommended! i can't thank you enough!!!
That's amazing! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.
Am writing tomorrow as well
@@tangembi hi! what's your band?
Thank you so much!! I watched your videos about ielts writing one day before the official test, and I've got 7 for my writing. A big surprise to me as I had always struggled with writing skills, but you just made it straightforward and comprehensible. So lucky that I watched your tutorial
Great job!
You're a real one. I got a band 8 and it's my first time taking this exam. Binge-watching most of your videos if not all did a lot, especially with the writing and speaking. God bless you💝
Congratulations!
what is ur first languange bro?
@@muhammadrazikani7951 Igbo
Thank you so much bro, I just studied 3 hours watching your video and got 7 bands overall. Really happy
Amazing news! Congratulations!
rlly😂 I am preparing 5 month nearly for 7 band score but my reading stuck in 6/6.5 even though i solve all cambridge books 2 times
The 'gun to your head' analogy is bang on! (pun intended). This approach really helps in saving time and grasping the overall picture quickly & accurately👍
A simple thank you wouldn't be enough. I watched this particular video literally hours before my test and got 7.5 in writing and 8 overall. Mind you this was my first try. Truly appreciate your videos✨️
Great job!
This was insane! So grateful to get this video, because I need to study more IELTS for my taking test around May in this year, 2024.
Hey Chris, I just wanted to say thank you so so much for all your advice. I gave the IELTS (academic) for the first time and I really had no time to prepare because of school and entrance exam prep. I watched your videos in the last 3 days before the test. I was sceptical about writing, because I really don't like writing. I used to think that in the writing section, you just have to think of lots of ideas and content to put into your essay. But your videos completely changed my views and I followed what you said. Made my writing clear and simple. ANDDD I GOT AN 8 in WRITING!! I got an overall 8, as well. I am 100% sure I couldn't have got an 8 in writing, had I not seen your videos. Once again, thank you so much, Chris! You're an amazing teacher.
Thank you for your gratitude and appreciation. I am happy to know that I could make a positive impact on your IELTS journey. I wish you continued success in all your future endeavors.
How long had you practised for writing???
Omg, now I realize that I've been making pretty much the same mistakes. Thank you for sharing the efficient ways of writing task 1 for free!
You're most welcome!
Teacher Chris, thank you so much for your tips to improve writing.
Thanks so much Chris for ALL of ur tips n tricks. Even tho I only got 6 in my writing but I got an overall of 7.5 with L 7.5 R 8.5 and S 7.0 from only watching your videos. And not to mention it was my first time attempting IELTS! :D
share with a few reading tips please
Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
Thank you, Chris, you nailed it! I've just received the results and finally got 7 on academic writing. I did nothing but strictly follow your suggestions in both writing tasks, and it worked!
Well done!
Thank u so much Chris. I have been stuck on 6.0 in writing but after coming across your videos I just got a 7.5 in writing.
Well done! Keep it up!
Hi, I need 7.5 in writing but stuck at 6.5-7. Can you kindly let me know how you prepared
Thank you so so much. Just 1 hour before my exam I saw your video and your essay writing advice to be strong about opinion was so good . I got 8/9 band in writing n 8.50 in reading overall 7.5 band.
You are a real teacher. None of the channel is as good as you are. I didn’t have much time to prepare . I put hardly overall 24 hours in preparation bcz of my full time job .
You are the best man. Keep on doing this good work .
Excellent! Congratulations!
OMG! i really want you to know that your hard work, dedication, and passion for teaching are truly appreciated. Wish you all the best
OMG I cannot thank you enough for your advice. I have never been taught this at school before I saw your video.
i know , here is also never teach as usual.
Thank you!! I was writing every single detail and was struggling to finish it within 20 mins
Hello IELTS advantage! I want to thank you because with your videos and tips, I was able to get an 8 with 1,5 months of preparation. I like your way of presenting the material and advice. Good luck to everyone who prepares!
This is amazing news! Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
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Finally I'm done with my IELTS, I followed your advice for the writing section & I got 7 in it
Thank you so much
Writing was my weakest area of all the 4 modules, I'm just glad I stumbled upon your channel
Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
I am writing my ilets exams tomorrow and so lucky to storm on this master's peace video to crown my preparations and increased my confidence in writing more. Can you all wish me good luck please. I will definitely come back here to testify because his videos has been my only source of study material. Thank you Chris 🙏
Hi there, please read this article from our website 'IELTS Advantage- My IELTS exam is tomorrow, what should I do?" for some last minute tips. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test.
With your teachings, I've learnt to take everything into my account logically ...
Thanks a tonne for giving me a better approach to deal with things around...
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I used to include conclusion in my earlier days in exam preparation, because I use them as a filler contact. Later I read the IDP website they don't mention to add conclusion in task 1. Now I ease of these mistakes. You are great teacher. These information cannot obtain from So-called IELTS teachers.
Glad you find this lesson helpful.
Dear IELTS Advantage team, I would like to express my gratitude for your valuable learning resources. Within a span of 10 days, I exclusively relied on your video lessons to prepare for my IELTS Academic test. The outcome was astonishing as I was able to achieve an overall band score of 7.5, with a band score of 9 in the Reading section. Your instructional content was instrumental in my success. I look forward to enrolling in your program in the near future to further enhance my language proficiency.
This is great news! Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
Tomorrow is my test and I was worried about task 1. Thank you for this video.
Good luck!
Bro let me know if you recd one word type questions or two word or three words please
Awesome how your english is so clear.
got my results yesterday. i got an 8 overall with an 8 on writing thanks to your guides Chris. got unlucky with a tough examiner who gave me a 7 on my speaking even though i am extremely confident about my performance that day (i know they are supposed to be as objective as possible but whaaaat)
Still a great score! Keep it up!
amazing tutorial......grateful to u sir..I was completely lost in the graphs...finding my way ..thanks to u
You are a legend. Very grateful to you. I have presented the content in the exam exactly in this way. Received 7.5 in W and 7.5 in overall due to your other guides on each of the 4 modules.
Well done!
@@Ieltsadvantage Thank you so much !!
Sincerely thanks for useful videos, Chris. You saved me when I struggled with my writing. I just received my result this morning and I got band 7.5 overall with R 8.5 L 7.5 W 7. S 6. for my first try 🤗
Fantastic!
Thanks for sharing those valuable tips on how to transform from band 6 to band 8! I believe the most significant difference is what key features you select to present and how to summarize it the most logical ways😊
I had never dreamt of writing band 8 essay, until I knew your channel. I am eternally grateful.
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Thanks so much for your valuable tips, I managed to get my desired score from a 6 to a 7 within a week thanks to your channel. Even if you have less time or resources, anyone can watch this channel and sit confidently for the exam.
Well done! If you ever need our help in the future, you know where to contact us.
Thank you Chris for your tips . scored 8 band in writing and overall 8 band in my first attempt without even practicing once . Your tips proved to be too good . Thanks a lot once again
Congratulations!
I struggled with Academic writing and my friend Linda Mtare shared Chris Pell 's ielts advantage link she specifically instructed me to follow all the steps he teaches on Academic writing, Chris thank you so much l finally got into band 7 was so tired of being stuck at 6.5 guys Chris is the real deal 👏
Thanks for sharing!! Congratulations!
I just had my IELTS exam today, I had almost no preparation for it, unfortunately.
However, your videos helped me tremendously to learn in such a short time and I did quite good in my exam today.
Thank you so much.🙏
Glad it helped! Best of luck with your scores.
Thank you. Line graph seems much more easier from now ❤
Watched this applied the tips scored exactly 8. Thank you for such quality content.
That's great!
Tomorrow is my exam
Good luck with it.
Mine too
Me too
@@202_Channel all the best guys
Me too
Exclusive style of explaining, man! You gave good examples for addressing my mind-set which is detail-oriented in writing....1- Start with task 2
2- Imagine someone putting a gun on ur head and asking u to address 4-5 points from this data.
I am going to keep this in my head for task 1
wow, thanks a lot for all the plain, simple and very very effective tips.
Glad it was helpful! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
You'r the only person who is teaching in that way❤❤❤❤❤❤.
Writing just follow this man's strategy it works wonders.... Struggled in writing got my score 7.0 thanks a ton ❤
Well done! Congratulations!
Glad to come to know such an informative channel so grateful to you and your entire team Sir. You are so genuine and trying your best to make ielts easy for students . I have to appear in ielts exams in the end of this month. Taking guidance from your videos. Remember me in your prayers.
I"m glad you find it informative! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
38 minutes well-spent.👍
Best guru of IELTS ❤
I don’t have much competition, but thanks anyway :)
I know you hear this a lot but, you're very good.
You're like the GOAT of RUclips IELTS
25:01
Greatest tip of all time.
Chris is the best.
I have learnt a lot knowledge about task 2 ..from your video which I did not get from my classes..thre is something amazing special teaching ways.which student's basic need..thx..✌️✨i appreciate your teaching ways..👍🥀
You are absolutely right. Our education system prioritise memory over concept and intelligence. ☹️
It's perfect I hope that I can memorize everything for my exam tomorrow
Best of luck with your test!
I learnt a lot from Chris. IELTS Advantage has been really helpful and I follow all the tips given and taught by Chris. I managed to improve my score in writing and speaking from 6 to 6.5 in my 2nd attempt with overall band score increased from 6.5 to 7.5. However, it's still not fulfill my requirement. I hope I can achieve band 7 for all components in my 3rd attempt soon. Thanks Chris.
Great job on improving your scores! If you need our help in preparing for your next attempt, please feel free to reach out.
You really provide priceless information for the students, catching the root cause and guiding us to improve our thinking.I hearlty appreciate your effort❤️
Hello
Thank you very much for this review. I hope to achieve over 7.5 bands in writing.
You are most welcome! We'd be delighted to help you achieve a Band 7.5 in Writing. We have a range of paid and free courses to suit your needs. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
16:39 I don’t think it’s mostly about educational backgrounds as I went to a British private school, however, I was planning to write extra details about statistical testing on my exam due to the fact that I misunderstood the purpose of this section. When you’re a sort of math brained person it’s hard to look at this section of IELTS as an English test. Your vids put me back on track though so it was chill.
Hi chris,I just followed ur videos for 3daya before my exam.I got 7.Thanks to my Almighty and u
Great job!
My exam 24th of june and I couldn’t watch ur videos before today!?🤔
How excellent teacher u r Mr.Christopher! Allah bless u🤍
Best of luck with your test! You got this!
How was your exam?
Hello there. I must say that this was the most comprehensive video on this specific topic that I have found on RUclips. You are doing a great job. I have just started to prepare for the writing module but I don't how to get my reports evaluated to understand where I am currently standing and what's lacking in my writing. Can you kindly give some suggestions to me on how I can do it?
Hi there, we can offer you our Writing Correction Service. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
It's very useful for me, because I listened what I shouldn't do and what types of mistakes students tend to do.
Thanks!
Glad it was helpful!
really like this vid ^^ , i hope that it'll improve my Wri band
U are such a great teacher
Today is my exam...within 2 hours...I'm getting really nervous about writing 😅
This video is way to good to be free on youtube. You are great, thank you!
You're very welcome! If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
Today is my exam,just watching your informative videos before sitting ❤️☺️
Hi
Would i know about ur exam experience...!!!
This really helps me a lot as my ielts exams will be conducted tomorrow
Again Thanks a lot sir!!
You're very welcome. Best of luck with your test!
U are good supportive teacher
Thank you very much, the best teacher!👍👍👍👍
As usual perfect teacher thank you very much
How do you know if the video was released 27 seconds ago? :)
@@Ieltsadvantage couse all the time l see your video therefore l can say this point with strong confident🥰🤗😎
:)
@@Ieltsadvantage :) sorry what is this
I couldnʼt understand🤔🤔🤔🤔
my test is tommorow thankyou for this video
Good luck tomorrow.
Good luck bro
Thank you very much for sharing video. Hope you well and continue to share with everyone.
Very useful video and clear to understand . Thanks a lot!
You're very welcome!
Please Chris make a video for how to structure writing task 2 correctly, in the internet there are many and I am lost completely. Please , please......
Hi there, thank you for your suggestion. I will look into it. In the meantime, please refer to this article on our website 'IELTS Advantage - IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay Structures'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. We also have a range of paid and free courses to help you in Writing. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
Thank u so much u help me a lot because I will pass the exam in few days
Thank you so much mate, you did great work!
Glad it helped!
Highly appreciate your efforts. Please make videos like this
Thank you, I will.
Tomorrow is my exam. Pray for me 🥲
Hi there, thank you for letting us know. You should check this article on our website titled 'My IELTS exam is tomorrow, what should I do?'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact us. Best of luck with your test!
That day I had not any time to watch this video, so I couldn't. And I have literally 6 band score in my writing section 😂
I did
U will get 9
This video is really meaningful for us. Thank you so much ❤.
Thank you so much Sir, I followed ur tips in speaking test and it help alot 😊
Glad to hear that! Best of luck with your scores.
Thanks for this video sir. you are great teacher
You are most welcome, Kamal.
Superb sir
It was a really wonderful session!!!
Fabulous piece of information!!! ❤
Thanks a lot , alot .....
Thank you very much
I am grateful , No one told me these before. Much much thanks again to you🎉
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thank you so much for this video :) it help me a lots in writing
You are really a great teacher ❤️
Thanks!
You are a real genius. Love from Bangladesh 🫶❤️
I just love your videos ❤
Thank you for your videos. They help me to improve my listing and hearing,
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Thank you so much for wonderful instructions.
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I got exactly same kind of graph was so happy...❤❤😂😂 your vid. are amazing 🥰🥰 got 7 overall.
Well done!
Im so thankful..you are amazing teacher😇😇
Great instructions for teachers.
that was Extremely helpful
This video is marvelous! Thank you so much!
Nice information that's really helps me in my preparation 😊
you explained so simple and it seemed to me quite easy and when i started to write task 1 my brain stocked. what should i do Chris. Should i do more practice but you know it took me a long time
Hi there, we'd be delighted to help you improve in Writing Task 1. We have a range of paid and free courses to suit your needs. If you'd like to hear more about it, simply send our team an email so we can further assist you. You can check the description box for our contact details. We look forward to working with you!
Thanks alot sir
Your information is very valuable and useful. ❤
You are a very fantastic tutor ✨️🌹
However I think this graph is very complicated and difficult for anyone to comment on it for the first time 🤣🤣 so i feel sorry for examines 😮💨
Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad to hear that you find the information valuable and useful. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
On my way to my exam! Wish me luck🤞🏾
You got this! Best of luck!
@@Ieltsadvantage I got a band 8 overall😭😭😭😭😭 . 8.5 listening, 7.5 reading, 6.5 writing and 8.5 speaking. I had one week to prepare and was also busy during that week, found your videos literally a day to my exam and BINGED cuz I had already ingested a lot information from other RUclipsrs and I needed to unlearn fast. I was given a table in my writing and I’d never practiced that before which made me super nervous but I’m glad with the overall result. This was also my first time writing IELTS.
Thank you so much for spending so much of your time and effort !!
I just have a question though. I do understand that Estonia did in fact decrease IN 2022, but is it incorrect to say that: Overall Estonia did increase throughout the period.
Obviously as a statement not an overview :P
Best teacher 😍😍
Chris you are the best ever
Hi dear, it's really useful video, i'm your new subscriber.💜💜
I've learned a lot. I didn't used to like writing part. But after watching this videos and infos I'm starting loving it 😃. Thank u 😍
That's great! If you need help with your IELTS test preparation, send us an email and we'll be happy to help.
I love it