I had an idea for the season 2 plot: In this version, Lila would get introduced here. She has a love interedt on Adrien, and like Marinette, she's a stalker and is very obsessive with Adrien (also, the whole Cerise thing and the multiple identities of Lila wouldn't exist here). In the beginning of the season, Lila would do exactly what Marinette do, but quite better and smarter. Marinette would see her as a threat and would trace a plan to kill Lila. Meanwhile, Adrien would start to mess up a bit and leave traces of his real personality to people. I think we could see more screentime of Max too, I mean, he has a lot of potential, specially in this version. He would become friends with Alya, Nino and Marinette. In the middle of the season, Su Han would acidentally lose the bee miraculous, that would eventually be found by Chloé, that wouldn't made great use of this miraculous. In the end of the season, Su Han would get the bee miraculous back, Lila would be killed by Marinette, and Max would see something is off with Marinette and Adrien and he would investigate. The whole season 3 plot would be Max discovering who Marinette and Adrien truly are and he would try to tell Alya and Nino the whole truth.
@@InvisibleProductions-ps8fu omg you’ve put as much thought into this as I have 😭 I haven’t thought so far ahead yet but this is literally the perfect direction to go in. Thanks so much for this 🫶
Also, when making your rewrite, do recall that something has to trigger the akumatization; a contented calm person cannot be akumatized. So, you can actually have the fallout from one akumatization lead to a future akumatization, adding emphasis to the butterfly effect, augmenting the impact of each akumatization, and adding a sense of continuity and consequence that is presently absent from the canon.
So I just watched all your shorts and am posting this here so more people see it lol. I love your take on Adrien as a blend of Felix, mainline Adrien, and his alt-version from the special. As Claw Noir he was a total BAMF, and alt-Adrien was super sexy to look at in the Paris special. I would add Felix's keen intellect in the mix as both civilian and Cat Noir. The thought of scary stalking control-freak Marinette trying to be a Dom to aloof badass Machiavellian goth model Adrien in a horror-hero-action 2d anime is enough to make my thighs tremble and get me real hot and wet. Especially when I imagine how perverse Lila would be in that version.
I always liked this idea: because akumatized villains are similar to demonically-possessed people with super-powers (as the akuma brings to life one's inner demon), it could and should be scarier. Especially considering how eldritch the kwamis actually are. The thought of a terrorist with an eldritch being that brings to life the inner-demons of people; demons with various powers born from those peoples' talents, personalities, and desires; all happening off-screen and with no discernible pattern to predict when or where the next one will appear....holy hell that is scary. Throw in senti-monsters as being tangible tulpas, only as limited as their creator makes them.......the possibilities are vast and frightening. Now, a demented stalker with a vendetta has the butterfly miraculous... all hell might be about to break loose.
I have a question. How does Marinette’s friends feel about her creepy tendencies? I know in the show it’s usually just a joke but I’m guessing in this version it would be taken seriously.
@@TheConstructor-q4r The same sorts of defenses Diaspro's defenders made in Winx Club's fandom: being violently possessive, controlling, and inappropriately lewd towards a beautiful male is acceptable, understandable, and defensible because he is beautiful and male. Basically, according to most other XX's, beautiful males don't really have any real rights. Peacocks are prisoners.
I’m not gonna say who, but one of them is torn between the two. If you remember what happened in season one of the show, you could probably figure out what I mean.
7:45 DAMN, that’s brutal and shocking😮!.. I love it
I am drawing these rewrite versions AND YOU CANT STOP ME. (awesome work btw keep it up!)
Thanks 😁 I would love to see these drawings somehow
@@TheConstructor-q4r ill probably upload a speedpaint soon :D
@@TheConstructor-q4r ITS DONE AND ON MY CHANNEL ASA A SHORT
@@TheConstructor-q4r tis done
I had an idea for the season 2 plot:
In this version, Lila would get introduced here. She has a love interedt on Adrien, and like Marinette, she's a stalker and is very obsessive with Adrien (also, the whole Cerise thing and the multiple identities of Lila wouldn't exist here). In the beginning of the season, Lila would do exactly what Marinette do, but quite better and smarter. Marinette would see her as a threat and would trace a plan to kill Lila. Meanwhile, Adrien would start to mess up a bit and leave traces of his real personality to people. I think we could see more screentime of Max too, I mean, he has a lot of potential, specially in this version. He would become friends with Alya, Nino and Marinette. In the middle of the season, Su Han would acidentally lose the bee miraculous, that would eventually be found by Chloé, that wouldn't made great use of this miraculous. In the end of the season, Su Han would get the bee miraculous back, Lila would be killed by Marinette, and Max would see something is off with Marinette and Adrien and he would investigate. The whole season 3 plot would be Max discovering who Marinette and Adrien truly are and he would try to tell Alya and Nino the whole truth.
@@InvisibleProductions-ps8fu omg you’ve put as much thought into this as I have 😭 I haven’t thought so far ahead yet but this is literally the perfect direction to go in. Thanks so much for this 🫶
@@TheConstructor-q4r anytime 👍🏻
Also, when making your rewrite, do recall that something has to trigger the akumatization; a contented calm person cannot be akumatized. So, you can actually have the fallout from one akumatization lead to a future akumatization, adding emphasis to the butterfly effect, augmenting the impact of each akumatization, and adding a sense of continuity and consequence that is presently absent from the canon.
Thanks for bringing this to my attention. I think I have actually written like this partially…let’s just see how it turns out
So I just watched all your shorts and am posting this here so more people see it lol. I love your take on Adrien as a blend of Felix, mainline Adrien, and his alt-version from the special. As Claw Noir he was a total BAMF, and alt-Adrien was super sexy to look at in the Paris special. I would add Felix's keen intellect in the mix as both civilian and Cat Noir. The thought of scary stalking control-freak Marinette trying to be a Dom to aloof badass Machiavellian goth model Adrien in a horror-hero-action 2d anime is enough to make my thighs tremble and get me real hot and wet. Especially when I imagine how perverse Lila would be in that version.
I always liked this idea: because akumatized villains are similar to demonically-possessed people with super-powers (as the akuma brings to life one's inner demon), it could and should be scarier. Especially considering how eldritch the kwamis actually are. The thought of a terrorist with an eldritch being that brings to life the inner-demons of people; demons with various powers born from those peoples' talents, personalities, and desires; all happening off-screen and with no discernible pattern to predict when or where the next one will appear....holy hell that is scary. Throw in senti-monsters as being tangible tulpas, only as limited as their creator makes them.......the possibilities are vast and frightening. Now, a demented stalker with a vendetta has the butterfly miraculous... all hell might be about to break loose.
Love this. Will be using this as inspiration
@@TheConstructor-q4r Make sure to use the demon in the vid I linked earlier as well lol XD WOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRR
Interesting video…I can see why u would compare him to a demon 😭
Can I actually quote your comment in a video?
@@TheConstructor-q4r Yes you can
I have a question. How does Marinette’s friends feel about her creepy tendencies? I know in the show it’s usually just a joke but I’m guessing in this version it would be taken seriously.
I’ll make sure to talk about this in the next video, since I will make a point in talking about Marinette in general.
WHERE'S HE AT?! WHERE'S HE AT?! WHERE'S MY MAN?! LET HIM GO WITH ME!
@@TheConstructor-q4r The same sorts of defenses Diaspro's defenders made in Winx Club's fandom: being violently possessive, controlling, and inappropriately lewd towards a beautiful male is acceptable, understandable, and defensible because he is beautiful and male. Basically, according to most other XX's, beautiful males don't really have any real rights. Peacocks are prisoners.
Master fu dies bc he is every old and of old age btw if it saw my version 😅
r u going to do a new genre after seasons 1 or after it ends
My goal is to do the whole show
This is a clip of a real-life akumatized villain: ruclips.net/video/JDoJqnbG2fg/видео.html
What's the Love Triangle?
I’m not gonna say who, but one of them is torn between the two. If you remember what happened in season one of the show, you could probably figure out what I mean.