Whoa, Giovanni, the businessman is something you don't see in the anime, so it's nice to seen it here. 👍 Plus been a sponsor of Serena's mother for Rhyhorn racing is nice way to type Serena into this story besides her been at the camp with Ash. 🙂 Oh boy, if Giovanni became League Champion, it's just more control for Team Rocket over the Kanto Region, and it builds up Giovanni even more as a threat then canon. 😬 Oh boy, if Koga is a part of Team Rocket, it really makes me wonder if Lt. Surge and Sabrina are a part of Team Rocket, too. 😬 Here's hoping the Baby Kangaskhan can be saved later, maybe by Ash, and it becomes a member of his team later. 👍 I'm curious about how the other kids will tie into this story besides the ones we know already. 🤔 Anyways another really good start to this series, and looking forward to the next part soon.
Not bad, I got a small bit impatient waiting for Ashs Journey to begin, but this revealed several major players for the future, so I'm excited to see how you handle it with how good your journeys rewrite is I can only assume it'll take a similar if not the same direction with how its story will unfold, if I have one critique it's that we didn't get to the start of Ashs Journey but hey the set ups important to lay out before the beginning, can't wait for the next part! (Yes I can I know all of Kantos already done afterall)
I really like this. Everything feels so connected and foreshadowing of what's to come once Ash turns ten. The music editing is as impressive as expected. Please keep it up and even evolve.
A very good and strong start to the story. The setup of everyone is well done. You've done a pretty good start. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens.
I believe that he's sending Koga to the Galar region to acquire intel from Rose and Macro Cosmos. And get the Dynamax band for evil purposes for his mob boss. His ace should have been Golbat.
If only Green appeared in the first Pokémon games in1996 to be the first gender option for the player. She could have appeared in the anime as a mediator between Ash and Gary.
I bet her name would have been Sarah or something. Would she have traveled with the extroverted forever 10 year old boy? Or would Misty still be the companion? 🤔
Giovanni wanting to challenge the Kanto Indigo League and become the champion makes sense as it's in character. He's like the Gustavo Fring of the Pokémon anime series.
You perfectly summarized the main big problem with the Pokémon anime for over 25 years. I'm so glad that I'm not alone who've noticed this. Thank you, Ronin.
Great video Ronin. I'd like to offer you a suggestion: for example if you have Ash capture a Pokemon that gets an evolution in a later generation, catch it there, since it really doesn't make sense to catch it when that generation is discussed i. e. Electabuzz, Magmar, Gligar Sneasel, and Eeveeloutions. Scyther and Zubat I have no issues with, because they get evolutions in the next generation.
The wait was totally worth it, I loved that you introduced Serena, Goh Paul and Reggie much earlier, I hope to see them later at some point in the story, but I think what I liked the most is how team rocket has much more presence and impact before Ash even starts his journey, good job 👍.
I wonder if Koga's daughter Janine knows about her father working for Giovanni/Team Rocket at this point in this timeline? If not, will she ever find out?
@@teamfmreborn7045 Sorry I replied wrong. I meant to reply to your other comment "I miss Ash as anyone else would but honestly Liko and Roy have been really good protagonists so far Whilst the most recent episode (episode 41) was more focused on their friend Dot it was still a really enjoyable episode "
@KalosQueenSERENA personally, the only episode I've hated so far was the episode Roy's Ancient pokeball opened We finally got Liko in a proper pokemon battle against another trainer....and the entire battle is off screen, only cutting back to it to show that Liko won 😑 Roy, though, is a disaster: He was the first out of him, Liko and Dot to catch a second pokemon (Wattrel) and Wattrels lucky to even make background cameos most episodes we don't even see him outside of the intro and outro Not to mention Feucoco has learned several Moves already: Ember Stomping tantrum Flamethrower And Disarming voice YET ROYS SOMEHOW NEVER WON A SINGLE BATTLE ON SCREEN The closest he's had was: An inconclusive against Zir and Connia And Assist win against Likos grandmother and her Arcanine Even Dots won more times then Roy winning 2 out of 3 battles she's had so far The writers desperately need to fix Roy's track record and give Wattrel more screen time
I miss Ash as anyone else would but honestly Liko and Roy have been really good protagonists so far Whilst the most recent episode (episode 41) was more focused on their friend Dot it was still a really enjoyable episode Anyone who hasn't seen Horizions yet are missing out
Interesting seeing all the later characters making an appearance early! It’s especially interesting seeing Paul visiting Pallet Town, and on the same group as Gary during Summer Camp. I always felt it was a missed opportunity not having the two characters meet in the anime. I already have the feeling Paul will have quite the lasting impression on Gary, and that Gary’s experiences with him in the camp pave the way for Gary’s path and approach as a trainer moving forward, both in the beginning, and even later on. Unlike Gary, who spent his childhood in Pallet Town, Paul not only has his own Pokémon already, but he also must have some worldly experience from travelling with Reggie. I wouldn’t be surprised if Paul was the same kind of pillar for Gary that Gary was for Ash at the time of their journey. Gary even chooses Squirtle as his starter. Something tells me that might’ve been at least partly inspired by Paul’s Turtwig. I wouldn’t be surprised if Paul said something similar to Gary that he always said to Ash, but in a more serious tone. Even if Paul is only in Pallet Town for a day, any kind of experience with Paul tends to stick with you. Just from this introduction alone, I’m excited to see more on your version on the Pokémon story! Even if it takes some time before certain characters return, I’m excited to see where it all goes from here. You always have interesting takes on the Pokémon anime for what could’ve been!
Howdy I am new to the channel I am not keen on the idea of Pokémon not existing in a region until a couple hundred years ago I prefer to think that they have been around for as long as life has existed on our planet, or even longer ago in the case of legendaries This is supprted by the existence of fossils in the Pokémon world
Ronin, do you have any plans to introduce Silver in your What If You Write The Pokemon Anime? Yes or No. I'm not talking about the Silver that Richie met, no, rather, I'm talking about the Silver that is Giovanni's son. While Giovanni is going to challenge the Indigo League and possibly battle Lance, what does Silver think of it.
Like pretty much every fan-fiction “rewrite” this fails to take into account that many story elements, characters and Pokemon weren’t even conceptualised when the anime first started.
I will never understand why people hate on goh,I feel like it's just jealousy that goh's doing better and catching more pokemon than what has done over 25 years,cause all of the answers I've seen never made any sense to me
That Poliwag that Ash was chasing is a nice nod towards Ash being based on Red. Always liked that.
Whoa, Giovanni, the businessman is something you don't see in the anime, so it's nice to seen it here. 👍 Plus been a sponsor of Serena's mother for Rhyhorn racing is nice way to type Serena into this story besides her been at the camp with Ash. 🙂 Oh boy, if Giovanni became League Champion, it's just more control for Team Rocket over the Kanto Region, and it builds up Giovanni even more as a threat then canon. 😬 Oh boy, if Koga is a part of Team Rocket, it really makes me wonder if Lt. Surge and Sabrina are a part of Team Rocket, too. 😬 Here's hoping the Baby Kangaskhan can be saved later, maybe by Ash, and it becomes a member of his team later. 👍 I'm curious about how the other kids will tie into this story besides the ones we know already. 🤔 Anyways another really good start to this series, and looking forward to the next part soon.
I hope Goh and Gary get humbled early in their journeys lol.
I can't wait for part 2
This is just someone telling Ash's story with Modern pokemon, and im all here for it
If there are more parts coming, I'm all for it!
Yeah I really like the direction he when with this giving me pkmn journeys vibes 🔥💪🏿
Lowkey I’m super excited to see how this turns out, keep up the great work!
Not bad, I got a small bit impatient waiting for Ashs Journey to begin, but this revealed several major players for the future, so I'm excited to see how you handle it with how good your journeys rewrite is I can only assume it'll take a similar if not the same direction with how its story will unfold, if I have one critique it's that we didn't get to the start of Ashs Journey but hey the set ups important to lay out before the beginning, can't wait for the next part! (Yes I can I know all of Kantos already done afterall)
I really like this. Everything feels so connected and foreshadowing of what's to come once Ash turns ten. The music editing is as impressive as expected. Please keep it up and even evolve.
A very good and strong start to the story. The setup of everyone is well done. You've done a pretty good start. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what happens.
I believe that he's sending Koga to the Galar region to acquire intel from Rose and Macro Cosmos. And get the Dynamax band for evil purposes for his mob boss. His ace should have been Golbat.
If only Green appeared in the first Pokémon games in1996 to be the first gender option for the player. She could have appeared in the anime as a mediator between Ash and Gary.
I bet her name would have been Sarah or something. Would she have traveled with the extroverted forever 10 year old boy? Or would Misty still be the companion? 🤔
@@UnwantedGhost1-anz25 Never liked Misty tbh, she gave was more trouble than helper
@UnwantedGhost1-anz25 my name is Sarah:3
Pretty sure giovanni is trying to get a piece on the board in galar or learn about that power that is in the galar region
Giovanni wanting to challenge the Kanto Indigo League and become the champion makes sense as it's in character. He's like the Gustavo Fring of the Pokémon anime series.
Not a Patron member. But man is such a fire storyteller, Il gladly wait for it. Keep up the good work Ronin
You perfectly summarized the main big problem with the Pokémon anime for over 25 years. I'm so glad that I'm not alone who've noticed this. Thank you, Ronin.
Hopefully, all of that will finally end in Horizons at the end of the season next year or in 2026.
Actually Pokemon horizons so far seems a lot like the original anime lots of filler right now it like dp season 3 tons of filler story dragging out
@@tvsizedanimechannel7288 Well, that stinks. Will the slice of life fillers end soon or much later?
I’m sorry I missed it. What was that?
Bro you are the best pokemon story teller. I wish this could turn into an anime one haha
Let's pay some animators than
Great video Ronin.
I'd like to offer you a suggestion: for example if you have Ash capture a Pokemon that gets an evolution in a later generation, catch it there, since it really doesn't make sense to catch it when that generation is discussed i. e. Electabuzz, Magmar, Gligar Sneasel, and Eeveeloutions.
Scyther and Zubat I have no issues with, because they get evolutions in the next generation.
it was very fun nice flow and pacing
8:20 Do I detect some aspects of Pokémon Adventures sneaking their way into the plot here?
13:24 Yep, yep I do. :)
The wait was totally worth it, I loved that you introduced Serena, Goh Paul and Reggie much earlier, I hope to see them later at some point in the story, but I think what I liked the most is how team rocket has much more presence and impact before Ash even starts his journey, good job 👍.
Also this is fused with the manga how interesting
finally i've been waiting for so long for this to come out XD
Nice. I'm starting to get some what if Giovanni sponsored ash vibes. Which tells me this is going to be really good.😊😊😊😊😊
Starting a fresh story once again.
I actually can't believe that Janine's father committed an attempted murder towards Goh. I wonder if this revelation will come to fruition later on?
this was so good
Looking forward to more episodes of this one.
Yoo roni bro the latest two series are promising ❤🎉 hope u drop more video of them ❤❤❤❤❤
The plot is really interesting so keep it up.
Damn I remember when you only had 600 subs
I wonder if Koga's daughter Janine knows about her father working for Giovanni/Team Rocket at this point in this timeline? If not, will she ever find out?
It is like Pokemon Adventures where Koga works for Giovanni.
@@michaelsarmiento3362 Perhaps that's the idea from Ronin. Taking inspirations with the power of hindsight.
7:53 I see you took the radical red route with wild pokemon 😂
Had to say it because of the 2 background Cottonee 😂
The start was amazing. But Now I am getting bored. It does have potential seriously.
@@KalosQueenSERENA did you mean to say that as a reply to my comment 😂
@@teamfmreborn7045 Sorry I replied wrong. I meant to reply to your other comment "I miss Ash as anyone else would but honestly Liko and Roy have been really good protagonists so far
Whilst the most recent episode (episode 41) was more focused on their friend Dot it was still a really enjoyable episode "
@KalosQueenSERENA ah that makes more sense 😂
@KalosQueenSERENA personally, the only episode I've hated so far was the episode Roy's Ancient pokeball opened
We finally got Liko in a proper pokemon battle against another trainer....and the entire battle is off screen, only cutting back to it to show that Liko won 😑
Roy, though, is a disaster:
He was the first out of him, Liko and Dot to catch a second pokemon (Wattrel) and Wattrels lucky to even make background cameos most episodes we don't even see him outside of the intro and outro
Not to mention Feucoco has learned several Moves already:
Ember
Stomping tantrum
Flamethrower
And Disarming voice
YET ROYS SOMEHOW NEVER WON A SINGLE BATTLE ON SCREEN
The closest he's had was:
An inconclusive against Zir and Connia
And
Assist win against Likos grandmother and her Arcanine
Even Dots won more times then Roy winning 2 out of 3 battles she's had so far
The writers desperately need to fix Roy's track record and give Wattrel more screen time
We need more parts
I miss Ash as anyone else would but honestly Liko and Roy have been really good protagonists so far
Whilst the most recent episode (episode 41) was more focused on their friend Dot it was still a really enjoyable episode
Anyone who hasn't seen Horizions yet are missing out
I wonder if they'll bring back the World Tournament to see if the new strongest trainer will be announced? 🤔
Interesting seeing all the later characters making an appearance early! It’s especially interesting seeing Paul visiting Pallet Town, and on the same group as Gary during Summer Camp.
I always felt it was a missed opportunity not having the two characters meet in the anime.
I already have the feeling Paul will have quite the lasting impression on Gary, and that Gary’s experiences with him in the camp pave the way for Gary’s path and approach as a trainer moving forward, both in the beginning, and even later on.
Unlike Gary, who spent his childhood in Pallet Town, Paul not only has his own Pokémon already, but he also must have some worldly experience from travelling with Reggie. I wouldn’t be surprised if Paul was the same kind of pillar for Gary that Gary was for Ash at the time of their journey. Gary even chooses Squirtle as his starter. Something tells me that might’ve been at least partly inspired by Paul’s Turtwig.
I wouldn’t be surprised if Paul said something similar to Gary that he always said to Ash, but in a more serious tone. Even if Paul is only in Pallet Town for a day, any kind of experience with Paul tends to stick with you.
Just from this introduction alone, I’m excited to see more on your version on the Pokémon story! Even if it takes some time before certain characters return, I’m excited to see where it all goes from here.
You always have interesting takes on the Pokémon anime for what could’ve been!
Serana travel together in kanto now
Been here since day one keep it coming ✊🏿🤝🏿
Same here
Let this man cook 🔥
Howdy I am new to the channel
I am not keen on the idea of Pokémon not existing in a region until a couple hundred years ago
I prefer to think that they have been around for as long as life has existed on our planet, or even longer ago in the case of legendaries
This is supprted by the existence of fossils in the Pokémon world
You cooked 🔥🔥
It pretty good!
He going after the regis I’m calling it
Ronin, do you have any plans to introduce Silver in your What If You Write The Pokemon Anime? Yes or No. I'm not talking about the Silver that Richie met, no, rather, I'm talking about the Silver that is Giovanni's son. While Giovanni is going to challenge the Indigo League and possibly battle Lance, what does Silver think of it.
Wait and see
@@RoninRedEyes YAY! 😄
PLEASE DO SOMETHING WITH THE GS BALL
the GS ball deserved more than getting scrapped :( so I'm hoping he has ideas for the GS ball for his what if story ♥
Oh yeeesss❤❤
When will part two be available
This is new
algo fuel algo fuel
Oh this looks promosing
This is Ronin Charizard, of course it looks promising
@@kierankfz
Indeed
Where did we see raticate
Algorithm ⛽️
I wonder, What If Ronin wrote the Pokemon Anime?
Algorithm fuel ⛽
Like pretty much every fan-fiction “rewrite” this fails to take into account that many story elements, characters and Pokemon weren’t even conceptualised when the anime first started.
Both at once? Well then. ŌwO
I really dont like Goh, i was hoping you wouldnt put him in the story lol
I will never understand why people hate on goh,I feel like it's just jealousy that goh's doing better and catching more pokemon than what has done over 25 years,cause all of the answers I've seen never made any sense to me
@@eeveefennecfox I dont like him cuz he caught a legendary with a poké ball like it was nothing and hes cocky asf lol
gold SSJ6 goku vs gold SSJ6 vegeta