Alien Warrior Women Mocked Earth Until They Saw Earthly Man! | HFY |Sci-Fi Story

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  • Опубликовано: 24 ноя 2024

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  • @MentalJanitor
    @MentalJanitor 2 месяца назад +127

    Bob the interstellar accountant here. I'm stuck on another world, full of beautiful alien women again you know the drill send help when you can or not.😅

    • @danielbenyair300
      @danielbenyair300 2 месяца назад +6

      you reminded me of Sanji being jealous of Luffy

    • @shivam3017
      @shivam3017 2 месяца назад +2

      ​@@danielbenyair300Apt analogy.

    • @stevenr6797
      @stevenr6797 25 дней назад +4

      Did they sentence you to death by snu snu?

    • @MentalJanitor
      @MentalJanitor 24 дня назад

      @stevenr6797 It's an honorable death 💀. Would you turn down the 3 breasted amazon snu snu warriors of Eda3 Prime?

    • @Bad-Karma
      @Bad-Karma 24 дня назад +6

      ​@@stevenr6797 "The Spirit Is Willing, But The Flesh Is Spongy And Bruised."

  • @rdtradecraft
    @rdtradecraft 24 дня назад +19

    Sir Robin to Lancelot: Can't I have just a little peril? --Monty Python and the Holy Grail.

  • @whtbear12
    @whtbear12 19 дней назад +10

    This story definitely needs a part 2. However this was a truly great story. Thank You...

  • @cyberwolf1772
    @cyberwolf1772 Месяц назад +15

    I hope you make a part two of this because this has the potential to be a great story!

  • @maxxcarver5502
    @maxxcarver5502 Месяц назад +14

    Sora challenges her supreme leader Five or Six times! in front of her own people AND in front of people they consider Weak. she would be Sorely Punished if I was her leader! United Front! never under cut your Leader in front of potential Enemies!!!!

  • @jackreisewitz6632
    @jackreisewitz6632 2 месяца назад +23

    Seems like they traveled a long way just to stroke their egos. Seems kinda lame to me.

    • @glennstinsonbookerjr.4824
      @glennstinsonbookerjr.4824 23 дня назад

      Let's see, every New Yorker is hiding an abject terror in their sellers. Except one lonely human he does a little dance after he talks to the commanding warrior of the strike force. And she decides to tell everybody to get back in the ship and when they return home, she tells her leaders the truth?
      Why didn't they lop off her head and then return to 🌎 to kill 99.99 percent of the population then take the rest of the population as trophy's.
      Well let's have another take on this storyline, say David is a training officer in Earth's not so flegling space force and after they leave he reports to his base and after tracking the ships to their home world they travel to the (space Amazon's) planet, with a fleet of space craft that dwarfs the tiny contingent that traveled to
      Earth. Only they have no intention of harming any of them. After they are held in a retraining camp for a year or two. Once they start to believe that Earth's space troops are the dominant force in the universe. These women will make excellent scouts for enlarging Earth's influence.
      Now take that and this tale that I ripped off from a couple of Rod Serlings Twilight Zone stories and maybe you can meet somewhere in the middle.

    • @frankcuoco1501
      @frankcuoco1501 20 дней назад

      Why are they always blue😮👽huh

    • @maximilianoalcaraz7351
      @maximilianoalcaraz7351 18 дней назад

      Kings and Queens have done the same for centuries in our world. When you paek and everything seems trivial, everything is also boring. These encounters are "amusement" as they said. Entertainment. They probably done this in other planets just for fun. Plus "long way" for us might be a 15 min drive for them so...I don't see why the concept of showing pure strength for fun is so alien to you

    • @jackreisewitz6632
      @jackreisewitz6632 17 дней назад

      @maximilianoalcaraz7351 Very insightful comment !!
      But traveling that far for an ego trip is still lame. 😁

    • @TheAlexRhodes
      @TheAlexRhodes 4 дня назад

      @@jackreisewitz6632 It was more than that, you can see it in their approach, the way they paid attention to their surroundings, the descriptions.
      What happened in the story wasn't some random fluke, they were literally testing the local culture in a very direct way (though with a healthy dose of condescension)

  • @tioraytm
    @tioraytm 2 месяца назад +15

    Obviously these alien women have not encountered the human martial art called, the back hand.

  • @Bob.Jenkins
    @Bob.Jenkins 2 месяца назад +31

    They 'hovered over New York' and 'extended the ramp' - really? How long was the ramp? If the ship was at 550m (approx. height of tallest building in NY) and the ramp was set to 30 Degrees then the ramp length would be over 1.1km (3609 ft) long - that's a decent stretch of the legs !

    • @kikikintamasangrasshuepfer8954
      @kikikintamasangrasshuepfer8954 2 месяца назад +1

      Sounds legit. 😂😂😂 Whatever aliens like to waste their resources on, hardly dummer than us humans 😂😂😂

    • @paulmoffat9306
      @paulmoffat9306 2 месяца назад

      AND all uphill!

    • @gregchrist5090
      @gregchrist5090 2 месяца назад +1

      Well, you are assuming the shape of the ship to be flat on the bottom. It could be shaped like an inverted water droplet.

    • @NortiusMaximus
      @NortiusMaximus Месяц назад

      They can skip leg day for the next week or two

    • @ozramblue117
      @ozramblue117 2 дня назад

      It was the blackzilla ramp. It even penetrated deep into the dirt from orbit.

  • @senacht
    @senacht 2 месяца назад +7

    I’m stuck on a strange planet populated by nothing other than beautiful women. Please send vitamin pills.

  • @garylint6714
    @garylint6714 Месяц назад +5

    I have always felt that I am the last earthling and when the mother ship comes for the rest of you I will have my planet back.

  • @amaree9732
    @amaree9732 24 дня назад +3

    Okay, okay... We know she had glowing violet eyes.

  • @jimanonymous113
    @jimanonymous113 25 дней назад +6

    He never used his most powerful tool ...

    • @sejah9065
      @sejah9065 12 дней назад

      Nahh💀 bro is down bad

  • @indy5624
    @indy5624 Месяц назад +2

    I was waiting for the story teller to say they just met clark kent, lol

  • @MaxwellMoore-d1u
    @MaxwellMoore-d1u 2 месяца назад +10

    In away it Reminds me of the largest Empire on Earth the British When they up against the Gurkar in Nepal .The British percieved them as primitive Mountain people. But quickly found an high Respect for the Nepalese warriors. And invited them to join the
    British Empire .The Gurker Soldiers have gained the Full Respect of the British People.

    • @johnfenter4729
      @johnfenter4729 2 месяца назад +2

      Gurkha...

    • @MaxwellMoore-d1u
      @MaxwellMoore-d1u 2 месяца назад

      @johnfenter4729 Yes I knew I'd Spelt wrong. Should have stopped. But if I'd Stopped I would have Forgot.

    • @petergaskin1811
      @petergaskin1811 2 месяца назад +2

      Mate of mine, Pete Smith, was a First Lieutenant in one of the Gurkha Regiments. Even after retirement from the Army, he wore his crossed kukri badge with pride.

  • @IsmaelMeech
    @IsmaelMeech 4 дня назад

    Please come out with a part 2 love story between the former seal and general lol

  • @gavinnewton8227
    @gavinnewton8227 Месяц назад +3

    17:22 and that’s when he pulled out the Beretta

  • @RonaldMyers-oz3pk
    @RonaldMyers-oz3pk 2 месяца назад +9

    Question when these Amazon wmen came to NY was it pride day?

  • @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc
    @ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc 2 месяца назад +7

    Earth is in the Milky Way not Andromeda.
    Too much repetition in these stories.

    • @petergaskin1811
      @petergaskin1811 2 месяца назад +1

      That's the problem with the Mills and Boon Chat GPT library of sci-fi plots. Bit repetitive here and there. that's the problem with Mills and Boon (primary source of Romantic Fiction in the UK - look it up).

  • @avmelidor
    @avmelidor 14 дней назад

    There should be more to this one.

  • @oilygr1n
    @oilygr1n 2 месяца назад +28

    I’m not denying that there exists strong determined people on this planet but after discussions with Biden, Starmer, Trudeau etc? They’d blast the f**k out us!

    • @myristicanz
      @myristicanz 2 месяца назад

      😂😂😂

    • @Raz.C
      @Raz.C 2 месяца назад

      Yeah, discussions with ANYONE on the planet would likely lead to them blasting the fuck out of America.
      This is just one of the many situations in which it pays to not be globally despised...

    • @RolandAdams-h4m
      @RolandAdams-h4m 29 дней назад +2

      They'd make a deal first. Traitors would give them all the good stuff before the Earth destruction.

    • @johnskipper2619
      @johnskipper2619 16 дней назад

      If they would have first met and dealt with Biden/Harris, they would have left believeing the only way humans would be friendly with them was if everyone took turns inserting things into each other's rectums.. 😅 They would have left crying and laughing. Discussing how huge the object was that the smallest one could willing insert and live through it.

    • @alexcampbell4297
      @alexcampbell4297 12 дней назад +1

      Bro why did you have to bring politics into this?

  • @Double_D989
    @Double_D989 5 дней назад

    15:11 What is the US military doing, taking naps with Biden?
    >Alien vessel lands on earth.
    >Alien vessel threatens national security.
    >US Military: 😴🛌🏻😪

    • @TheAlexRhodes
      @TheAlexRhodes 4 дня назад

      But they did mention the jets flying around and the soldiers forming a perimiter?
      A small flying city appears out of nowhere, giants come out and mock you in your own language, as if they had already taken the measure of your entire planet...
      For once the US military was doing the smart thing, holding fire.

  • @raven1462
    @raven1462 Месяц назад +1

    She fell in love with him.

  • @mikecarter8440
    @mikecarter8440 2 месяца назад +6

    Good story

  • @ForeverYoung-g3n
    @ForeverYoung-g3n Месяц назад +2

    We were born to inherit the stars

  • @tcskeels2744
    @tcskeels2744 Месяц назад +1

    After all that, he didn’t ask her out to dinner?

  • @carinabritz806
    @carinabritz806 2 месяца назад +3

    WOW, Amazing!😂😂
    1: Aliens SPEAKING/UNDERSTANDING English when many a nation on earth have a hard time speaking/pronouncing/understanding English !!
    2: And yet AGAIN America are invaded by Aliens!!

    • @darkraiderph4739
      @darkraiderph4739 17 дней назад +1

      My guess they were monerting our communication and use a translation device

  • @WolfgangThammsj
    @WolfgangThammsj 2 месяца назад +3

    As usual the picture bears little relation to the story

  • @stevelau7694
    @stevelau7694 Месяц назад +1

    How likely would convergent evolution lead intelligent alien species to be bipedal and generally close in size and shape? Based on physics, it seems very possible.

  • @Vin-yo3ig
    @Vin-yo3ig 2 месяца назад +2

    Just how many times do you need to repeat the same phrase? How many times can you actually encircle two beings.

  • @mystudent11
    @mystudent11 Месяц назад +1

    The narration of this video is outstanding I'm glad I like listening to this series.

  • @davidnicholson71
    @davidnicholson71 Месяц назад +1

    Great syfy

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis8392 2 месяца назад +2

    Sorry we could have sent another CLONE CHEN, instead of you.

  • @davidbolls4850
    @davidbolls4850 2 месяца назад +5

    You haven’t used the word “palpable” yet.

    • @stephenater9687
      @stephenater9687 2 месяца назад +1

      The lack of the is palpable.

    • @stephenater9687
      @stephenater9687 2 месяца назад

      Word

    • @oilygr1n
      @oilygr1n 2 месяца назад

      The absence of an over used adjective was almost palpable. :)

  • @frederickwentz4729
    @frederickwentz4729 2 месяца назад +4

    the story gets off track like its repeating itself it's almost like the story repeats itself just for filer.

    • @MrJoel9679
      @MrJoel9679 5 часов назад

      I wondered when I’d see a comment like this. Theses language models do that. They default a lot to opening middle end and summary. They look to reinforce the theme to satisfy the client criteria.

  • @Tenright77
    @Tenright77 2 месяца назад +3

    Does General Arena date?

  • @davidbrandenburg8029
    @davidbrandenburg8029 2 месяца назад

    with these adjustable glasses you too can look like a Nerd from the 60's!.

  • @artmiller4481
    @artmiller4481 2 месяца назад

    Please another part to this story 😊😊😊

  • @brian770
    @brian770 2 месяца назад +3

    gleamed like a jewel... yet pic shows a desert wasteland...

  • @jasondrew5768
    @jasondrew5768 2 месяца назад +4

    lol, give your warriors women some muscles, not skinny models!

  • @KalobBurnett
    @KalobBurnett 2 дня назад

    What's the name of their planet they're from?

  • @GunnersRange
    @GunnersRange 2 месяца назад +1

    Too damn many Ads! every two minutes...

  • @randomdoomer8549
    @randomdoomer8549 5 дней назад

    Death by Snu Snu alien edition

  • @wait4dl
    @wait4dl 2 месяца назад

    the first stop have been DC that would rattle GOVT> what we have of it!

  • @flikflak24
    @flikflak24 5 дней назад

    i think the general want's his child. the valkyra's are strong female warriors and value strang mate's to get strong/mighty offsprings above all else. and he defeated her in hand to hand combat profe to her that he's strong. therfore wants his as a mate to have strong offsprings with ( in hope that they are physically compatteble to make offsprings )
    i bet she even wanted to gab him by the arm/caller to drag him on to there ship for that very reason. but didnt out of curtasy/pride or fear of him seeing her as desporate and therefore not be interrested in mating with her

  • @noneyabusiness1701
    @noneyabusiness1701 Месяц назад +2

    He was tall for a human 6ft lol this definitely wasn’t written by a white or black guy

    • @stacycarlton2056
      @stacycarlton2056 Месяц назад

      I mean average human height is 5'6/5'7

    • @AwoudeX
      @AwoudeX Месяц назад +1

      @@stacycarlton2056 average height in the tallest nation on this planet is 6ft1, so a 6ft guy anywhere else is most likely to stand out a bit, given that the USA is 2-3 inch shorter on average... Now imagine they landed in chinatown on top of that xd

    • @noneyabusiness1701
      @noneyabusiness1701 Месяц назад

      @@stacycarlton2056 Yes in countries that don’t matter

    • @maximilianoalcaraz7351
      @maximilianoalcaraz7351 18 дней назад

      @@noneyabusiness1701 lil bro is def 5'9.

  • @maximusmeridius3380
    @maximusmeridius3380 2 месяца назад +1

    My name is Caine. I'm here to help....

  • @glennbrymer4065
    @glennbrymer4065 13 дней назад

    So, who are you writers? Are you a small group of young writers?
    Are you an AI?
    The story is ok, it is interesting.
    I'm just curious.

  • @B3thym0nst3r
    @B3thym0nst3r 2 месяца назад +1

    There is no way punk as gang bangers in New York wouldn't be firing handguns at a ship. And most ppl would be more curious than afraid. This story is dumb.

    • @TheAlexRhodes
      @TheAlexRhodes 4 дня назад

      No, no...
      (me watching the bang and the gang drain from their faces as the flying city casts a shadow over their sagging pants, instilling an instinctual dread that completely overrides any cultural notion of badassery)

  • @lesperez1989
    @lesperez1989 2 месяца назад

    Mmmmmm all the possibilities are now in play.

  • @unni6230
    @unni6230 Месяц назад

    Haa everything happened to America 😂😂😂😂

  • @pineapplestudios8309
    @pineapplestudios8309 4 дня назад

    Story kinda sucks ngl. Like they arrive on earth to "remind" humanity that they are insignificant in the grand scheme of the universe, but at the same time I am 90% sure humans already know that.
    Not to mention even the story says the aliens are only limited to a "sector" without mention as to how large a sector is, so it is very likely that they too are also insignificant to the grand scheme of things.

  • @brianvannorman1465
    @brianvannorman1465 2 месяца назад

    Valkyries?

  • @ozramblue117
    @ozramblue117 2 дня назад

    It’s been just under 8 minutes and I’m already bored. This 100% ai or was there some editing involved? Interesting times.

  • @Dave-un4oe
    @Dave-un4oe Месяц назад

    I love SciFi stories. The problem with most stories that are published on RUclips is that they are entirely produced by AI, and they all sound the same. Uninspired, boring, bland with the same style and vocabulary.

  • @frank88ster
    @frank88ster Месяц назад

    So?? No mamas? Test tube babies huh?

  • @Sarah-gw3ng
    @Sarah-gw3ng 2 месяца назад

    Looks like an array with a Calvin Klein underwear model with a Calvin and Philips authority center in the source...maybe a gay ~Philippino Tin Man type.

  • @remingtontucker9364
    @remingtontucker9364 2 месяца назад +1

    Sensible a woman warrior race would behave as any warrior would see the value power hungry and tyranny would ignore them being women from a different culture would not have the same psychological and behavioral aspects as human women

    • @jackreisewitz6632
      @jackreisewitz6632 20 дней назад

      @remingtontucker9364 heard ever you punctuation ?? sentence of structure and

  • @MonroeAlva-f7r
    @MonroeAlva-f7r 2 месяца назад +1

    Walker Charles Jackson Nancy Taylor Barbara

  • @jonathanbartron3658
    @jonathanbartron3658 11 дней назад

    Is it required that you use the word "palpable" in every story? Sure seems like it. Anyway, you've WAY over-used it. It's thesaurus time boys.

  • @RCTPatriot75
    @RCTPatriot75 Месяц назад +1

    These are all so repetitive.

  • @u.w.sunitedwestand2117
    @u.w.sunitedwestand2117 2 месяца назад

    When doctor Miami started to get famous down here. Imagine how we felt! And then came the cubans!

  • @jacobytes8720
    @jacobytes8720 15 часов назад

    15 min in and it’s just yapping nonsense

  • @antsquirly7654
    @antsquirly7654 2 месяца назад +2

    Not difficult to visualize what the author was doing while thinking up this plot. Talk about early adolescent fantasies.

  • @davidandrew1078
    @davidandrew1078 26 дней назад

    Snu Snu.

  • @andrewham1397
    @andrewham1397 Месяц назад +1

    This is absolutely garbage. Incredibly uncompelling

  • @scottphillips2870
    @scottphillips2870 Месяц назад +1

    Just bad.

  • @stevenfranklin7060
    @stevenfranklin7060 2 месяца назад +1

    Trash

  • @odinfireful
    @odinfireful 14 дней назад

    good story

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis8392 2 месяца назад

    Sorry we could have sent another CLONE CHEN, instead of you.

  • @kennethabagis8392
    @kennethabagis8392 2 месяца назад

    Sorry we could have sent another CLONE CHEN, instead of you.