Perfect for me. Lyrical. (Adrienette. Confession. Love letters) Miraculous Ladybug Fanfic/Audiofic

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  • Опубликовано: 13 дек 2024

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  • @nuruddinshah684
    @nuruddinshah684 2 года назад +2

    As much as the fandom love Plagg cheese "stuff"
    THIS
    This is the best of Plagg

  • @katherinesaenz455
    @katherinesaenz455 Год назад +1

    I've never read / listened to anything that could describe exactly what I feel, but this is perfect... I mean, I'm crying after watching this for the 10th time bc it's perfect

  • @Will-mk5pj
    @Will-mk5pj 2 года назад +11

    I love how Plagg helped Adrien so much!

  • @Blue-Wolf7
    @Blue-Wolf7 Год назад +4

    This has one of those rare moments where you see that plagg really does care for Adrien and wants to help him. Great story! Enjoyed every moment! Thanks Jhequia and Dawn!

  • @Dire_Database217
    @Dire_Database217 2 года назад +1

    That is most definitely something alya would do, I'm pretty sure you how the characters would actually act dawn awesome story
    Sorry this took me so long to watch it 🥲😅

  • @rebeccaatkins2514
    @rebeccaatkins2514 2 года назад +1

    I absolutely loved this, its such a beautiful story.

  • @arriusarithius4971
    @arriusarithius4971 2 года назад +12

    Dawn Chorus Story Express: Good day! How may I help you?
    Me: A ticket for the emotional angsty roller-coaster please.
    Dawn Chorus Story Express: Here's you ticket ma'am. The ride starts at 3:00 am tomorrow. Pls come back and have a safe ride 😁

  • @laney_bug
    @laney_bug 2 года назад +12

    I’m so excited for this just by looking at the thumbnail!!! It looks so deep!!! I cant 😭😭😖

  • @donanthebarbarian5177
    @donanthebarbarian5177 2 года назад +19

    Awesome story! Loved how well you put us in their heads via the letters. Might I ask for a one story follow up where either they are on a date and accidentally reveal their identities or they are superhero-ing and accidentally reveal that this fight is making them late for their date? I'd especially love if the reveal was something along the lines of
    CN: oh camembert I'm gonna be late for my date with Marinette!
    Simultaneously
    LB: Sugar and cookies I'm gonna be late for my date with Adrian!
    *Pause whilst they process what they just said being too easy of a clue for the other, followed by a second later their internal monologues shifting to processing what the other just said.*
    Together: Wait what do you mean late for a date with me?

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 года назад +5

      I will add it to my sequels list and see what comes up!

  • @Dagoz
    @Dagoz 2 года назад +5

    I cried.
    That's how good this was.
    I never cry for these things and I try to avoid crying for them but I've just been really down lately and this pushed me over the edge.
    Now that I've let it out I feel better so Thank You Ms. Dawn and Jheqia for this amazing experience.

  • @kitabootforever
    @kitabootforever 2 года назад +1

    Now we need an Alya's POV!!! This was fantastic!

  • @talbaratz5696
    @talbaratz5696 2 года назад +4

    This made me cry so hard. This is perfect. Honestly I don't want the reveal to be perfect. I want the rain to be involved. And with alot of cry and emotion. Exactly like this video. This is perfect. Just the way I wanted that to be. Not with them in the boat in some sunny day. With all the colors in the world.
    i love how you made adrian wonder if he still good enogh for marinette and not just take her letter as something obvious. this is amazing.
    You did a perfect job so thank you.

  • @stelerElk
    @stelerElk 2 года назад +5

    (Before watching)
    I love it and I haven't even read/heard it yet.
    (After watching)
    I KNEW I WOULD LOVE IT, great work Dawn.

  • @KGCHOK
    @KGCHOK 2 года назад +2

    Those were such beautiful letters, so heartfelt!

  • @sandicliff1172
    @sandicliff1172 2 года назад +1

    Beautiful! I didn't want it to end!

  • @albertodiaz1969
    @albertodiaz1969 2 года назад +1

    I've been crying this whole story 😭

  • @EmmilyABrown
    @EmmilyABrown Год назад

    Oh. My. Heck. That was AMAZING! I’m so in love!

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 года назад +1

    Marinette had written this with no intention of ever sending it. It was the equivalent of him reading her diary and invasion of her most sacred privacy and yet... omgg he is SUCH a gentle man...tell me I'm not the only one...plslol

  • @gesilleheibner6613
    @gesilleheibner6613 2 года назад +1

    Beautiful I cried thru it all

  • @maryshashaw2895
    @maryshashaw2895 2 года назад +1

    I loved this dawn u had me crying

  • @robertodeleon-gonzalez9844
    @robertodeleon-gonzalez9844 2 года назад +4

    Oh, dear...
    It is a sign of love, of pure love, when you believe your loved one is perfect, yet deep inside you do not feel good enough for him or her. And what are the chances, that your loved one feels the same? Both of you feeling wrong for each other, yet both of you absolutely perfect for one another, what are the chances...?
    Yet there you have it. You feel all broken inside, knowing your loved one is the piece missing from your heart, but your deepest desire is for your loved one to be happy, even if it is with someone else. It makes you miserable, and you wouldn't have it any other way.
    And yet...
    When both of you meet in the middle, and your broken hearts join, the missing pieces mingle, and two imperfect people who are wrong for one another make that last statement a lie, what are the chances? For you are not wrong for one another, you are perfect... Together.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      That is beautifully put! 😊

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 года назад +1

      Lovely thought! Thank you Roberto!❣

    • @robertodeleon-gonzalez9844
      @robertodeleon-gonzalez9844 2 года назад +1

      @@jheqiawrites4985 Actually, I have to thank you.
      Your writing and Dawn Chorus Writes' amazing narration inspired me. Please, keep up your excellent work!

    • @jheqiawrites4985
      @jheqiawrites4985 2 года назад +1

      @@robertodeleon-gonzalez9844 You bet! And I am incredibly blessed to work with such a talented fellow writer and voice actor as Dawn. She is amazing and really brings my stories to life in such a special way. It is thanks to her that I have gotten to share my stories with you guys. You guys inspire me!

  • @tutkile8808
    @tutkile8808 2 года назад +2

    That's was amazing 🤩🤩😻🤩😻🤩😻🤩😻🤩 you are the best.

  • @alinutza2dia
    @alinutza2dia 2 года назад +1

    So beautiful🥰 so much love and passion. I wish it never ended. The best story ever. So emotional I almost cried. Can’t wait for your next video. ❤️❤️

  • @franzl264
    @franzl264 2 года назад +1

    This was so touching, amazing.❤️

  • @starfirelovesrobi101
    @starfirelovesrobi101 2 года назад +1

    The feels... why... but still love it

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 года назад +2

    Jheqia is soooo gd

  • @jhankinson_music7605
    @jhankinson_music7605 2 года назад +1

    Wow just wow

  • @chatslady7708
    @chatslady7708 2 года назад +2

    I'm in love

  • @maddoxledgerwood8955
    @maddoxledgerwood8955 2 года назад +1

    "Dint bither kid. Just open ut." 3 words plaggs de Fandom

  • @MsEva456
    @MsEva456 2 года назад +1

    ❤❤❤

  • @starfirelovesrobi101
    @starfirelovesrobi101 2 года назад +1

    Suger and Cookies. Sorry it's late. But happy birthday

  • @toxic7nitemare
    @toxic7nitemare 2 года назад +1

    Marinettes sweetness makes me sick lmao if i was adrien i could never lmao!! 🤪 😫😘 i loved it though. 😍

  • @Dances_in_the_kitchen
    @Dances_in_the_kitchen 2 года назад +2

    👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻😍

  • @jmvanzalinge5023
    @jmvanzalinge5023 2 года назад +1

    I love this! I keep rewatching yours and Jheqia's stories. I love them! ❤️
    I was wondering, is there anything you have to do for copywrites for these lyricals? I'm trying to work on a creative project and have no idea what to do when there's something I take inspiration from. I notice you bold the lyrics and you say what song it is from. Do you have to get permission?

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      Hey J M,
      So the creative world is a strange place and a very thin line between inspired by and copyright. Like you used a lyrical for example: the lyrics, if I place them all together and said it was a song including the music then it be seen as copyright. However I use the lyrics to inspire the story and place them into i hope in a seamless way. I'm inspire by the lyrics but I use the words like any other words. I think for words it has to be 80-70% copy of the story, text or lyrics for it to be deemed copyright. If that make sense?
      Music is a better example, you hear a riff and automatically place it with a song you know. There have been many court cases over this issue. However people are able to make their own version of the story, inspired by it. In the background of my lyricals I use other musicians versions of the songs coz if I used a direct copy, then I would get a strike. That is what I mean by thin line, direct copy you can't use, inspired by becomes grey. You also have a loop hole that the copyright only last for 100 years, so if you discuss Shakespeare or classical music you can use more directly unless there is a trust directly associated with it then it becomes hazy.
      I hope that helps but if you are on Instagram DM if you need more advice. 🙂

    • @jmvanzalinge5023
      @jmvanzalinge5023 2 года назад

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous Wow! I didn't realize how complicated it could be. Thank you so much for the advice, I'll definitely reach out if I have any more questions.

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      @@jmvanzalinge5023 Glad I could help J M, and reach out to my email if you want to discuss or need more advice. 🙂

  • @Nivina22
    @Nivina22 2 года назад

    😭😭😭

  • @allieenglish7524
    @allieenglish7524 2 года назад

    Hey the next lyrical you do could you do born ready by dove cameron please

  • @belindamoreno868
    @belindamoreno868 Год назад

    Jajajaja 💙😂😂😂🧁

  • @Dire_Database217
    @Dire_Database217 2 года назад +3

    Hey Dawn I'm glad you are getting better, we will be here for you no matter what all the way though, you're probably one of the best story writers I've ever seen, and honestly you could probably take over Adrian and plagg's voices I be will to bet 😁👍🙂🫂💜

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      Thank you so much 😁 that is very kind of you.

    • @Dire_Database217
      @Dire_Database217 2 года назад +1

      No problem Dawn, so you're creating a ladrian one next

    • @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous
      @dawnchoruswrites-miraculous  2 года назад +1

      @@Dire_Database217 Yes for Ladrien June. It will be a 2 or 3 parter and getting a commissioned art work for it. It will probably go live in two weeks time. 😏

    • @Dire_Database217
      @Dire_Database217 2 года назад

      I see, I'm sure they will be good, but don't rush yourself we're not going anywhere we'll be here when you post it and when you have your breaks, we're not going to leave you 😁😁🫂🤜👍

    • @Dire_Database217
      @Dire_Database217 2 года назад

      @@dawnchoruswrites-miraculous wait, two weeks time? What are you doing on that first week? 🧐 (If you don't mind me asking)
      And sorry about all the comments I'm just curious 😅