I agree most of these stories could tell the same story with equal detail in half the time. They use three paragraphs to give you one paragraph of story. It was cold outside so cold that water froze, when they stepped outside their breath shown due to the chill that had fallen outside. Having stepped outside, they braced themselves against the overwhelming chill. Now that they were outside, they struggled to stay warm due to the temperature outside.
They got xcomed basically
This might be a good story but I’d never know because there are so many unnecessary words that it’s really hard to listen to.
I agree most of these stories could tell the same story with equal detail in half the time. They use three paragraphs to give you one paragraph of story. It was cold outside so cold that water froze, when they stepped outside their breath shown due to the chill that had fallen outside. Having stepped outside, they braced themselves against the overwhelming chill. Now that they were outside, they struggled to stay warm due to the temperature outside.